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Old 01-29-2007, 02:57 AM   #1 (permalink)

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Im Cai, and this is my fourth Fan Fiction on SS. My first three Fan Fics are: What the Girls Think, My Best Memory, and An Obsession. However, this Fan Fic is a one-shot. Its about someone expressing their feelings for someone else whom they love. While I was writing this, I had someone in mind lets see if you can figure it out!

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Ive told myself that I wouldnt cry. That I would stay strong for you. Yet every time I utter those words, the droplets of my soul would pour down my cheeks. Feeling the cold stone of your grave under my fingertips would bring back those awful memories of that day in Godrics Hollow. And every day, I would ask myself why it had to be you. Why you? Why did you have to disappear from this world? Why did you have to leave me to fend for myself? Those questions will never be answered now.

There have been days where I would just run into an open field and scream at the top of my lungs. Just to let out my sadness and my sorrow. Id scream how much I love you. How much I miss you. And how much I need you. Yet youd never hear me. For the Heavens above are too far away. And youll never know how much youve affected me.

And out of the two of us, I bet youre the happy one. For you have all your friends and family up there. While down here, I have no one. No one to talk to. No one to cry with. No one at all. Just me, my thoughts, and my broken heart.

Ill never forget you. Ill never stop loving you. For youre the one who had changed my life. And when Im at home, looking out the window, youre the one Im thinking about. And Ill never betray you. Ill never leave you! Its still hard to believe that Im never going to see you again. Your hair, your eyes, your smile. I miss it all. I miss you.

So every year, on this anniversary of your death, I would come and see your name engraved onto stone. And I would swear that I could hear your voice. Smell your scent. Feel your warmth surround me. And all of that would just bring those memories of us together back as well. But I would force myself to stop. I need to get over those memories. I need to stop the pain. And with one final tear, I would ask you: Will you wait for me?
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That was so good. but i just making a guess but i'm probaly wrong. Harry about Ginny> not sure so don't all hate me if i'm wrong just a guess
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That was so sad. So sad. So frikin sad. So so so so sad <#3


*ish totarly in love with it* <333333333



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Oww It Was Brilliant .. Hoo Could It Be .. I Think It Could Be Ginny About Harry .. but i dono are you going to tell us or keep us gessing?
lol .. loved it ..

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Sob... that was so..so..beautifully sad. It was really poetic. sigh. I'm thinking its James talkign about lily..wait. they are both dead. i have no idea...
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Cai, you are way too good at writing. Seriously. I love this one!! even if it is very sad....
I want to say James on Lily, but it's like what lena lovegood said; they're both dead. So maybe Ginny with Harry? Except Harry doesn't belong with Godric's Hollow....
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Old 01-31-2007, 03:09 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Aww that was so pretty! But very sad too ,
I was thinking Lily & James too but of course it isnt ,
Ummm I'll say *like everyone else* Ginny & Harry? .
Please tell us who it was Cai!! .
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That was so good. but i just making a guess but i'm probaly wrong. Harry about Ginny> not sure so don't all hate me if i'm wrong just a guess
LOL! I don't hate you. And it's a very good guess... but I'll let you know if you're right or not later on.

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Sob... that was so..so..beautifully sad. It was really poetic. sigh. I'm thinking its James talkign about lily..wait. they are both dead. i have no idea...
LOL! James and Lily is a good guess, actually. And who knows, maybe it is them... But thanks for the comment!

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Cai, you are way too good at writing. Seriously. I love this one!! even if it is very sad....
I want to say James on Lily, but it's like what lena lovegood said; they're both dead. So maybe Ginny with Harry? Except Harry doesn't belong with Godric's Hollow....
You going to tell us?



How am I not surprised? *giggles and hugs Niky*
Hee hee! Thanks Kal! I'm glad you like it! And I'll let you know who it is... later!

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Aww that was so pretty! But very sad too ,
I was thinking Lily & James too but of course it isnt ,
Ummm I'll say *like everyone else* Ginny & Harry? .
Please tell us who it was Cai!! .
LOL! Aww... thanks Grace! I liked your comment. And I'll tell you eventually... but it would spoil the surprise if I told you now! Hee hee...
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Evil. I can't wait. Need to know. But if your going to make us wait I guesse I can. I'll just check back. But it was really good. Hope you do more.
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I really enjoyed this it was beautifuly written and if i had to guess i would say Harry and Hermoine hope you tell us soon
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Umm I'll take another guess and say is it Mione & Ron?
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Seriously, I love your stories. I'm still reading, "An Obsession" and "What the Girls Think". I've read "My Best Memory", and it's surprising how a short story can be so great~
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This was great, Cai. Very sad, but extremely great! Keep up the great work!
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^^ Who is it?

It can't be Lily or James, because they died together. I don't think it could be Ginny about Harry, because she's got her entire family. So I think it's Harry about Ginny. Am I right?

Anyway, that was beautifully written Cai; you did an awesome job!
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The couple I'm talking about here is...


Hermione to Ron...
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*cheers* The Suspense ends *giggles*

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I don't know why, but I think a lot of one-shot fics are sad.
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Okay, I just happened to LOVEEEEEEE this.It's just so sad.
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