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Believe 01-29-2007 02:57 AM

Heartbreak - Sa9+
 
Hey!

I’m Cai, and this is my fourth Fan Fiction on SS. My first three Fan Fics are: What the Girls Think, My Best Memory, and An Obsession. However, this Fan Fic is a one-shot. It’s about someone expressing their feelings for someone else whom they love. While I was writing this, I had someone in mind… let’s see if you can figure it out!

Enjoy!
<3 Cai

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I’ve told myself that I wouldn’t cry. That I would stay strong for you. Yet every time I utter those words, the droplets of my soul would pour down my cheeks. Feeling the cold stone of your grave under my fingertips would bring back those awful memories of that day in Godric’s Hollow. And every day, I would ask myself why it had to be you. Why you? Why did you have to disappear from this world? Why did you have to leave me to fend for myself? Those questions will never be answered now.

There have been days where I would just run into an open field and scream at the top of my lungs. Just to let out my sadness and my sorrow. I’d scream how much I love you. How much I miss you. And how much I need you. Yet you’d never hear me. For the Heavens above are too far away. And you’ll never know how much you’ve affected me.

And out of the two of us, I bet you’re the happy one. For you have all your friends and family up there. While down here, I have no one. No one to talk to. No one to cry with. No one at all. Just me, my thoughts, and my broken heart.

I’ll never forget you. I’ll never stop loving you. For you’re the one who had changed my life. And when I’m at home, looking out the window, you’re the one I’m thinking about. And I’ll never betray you. I’ll never leave you! It’s still hard to believe that I’m never going to see you again. Your hair, your eyes, your smile. I miss it all. I miss you.

So every year, on this anniversary of your death, I would come and see your name engraved onto stone. And I would swear that I could hear your voice. Smell your scent. Feel your warmth surround me. And all of that would just bring those memories of us together back as well. But I would force myself to stop. I need to get over those memories. I need to stop the pain. And with one final tear, I would ask you: Will you wait for me?

Little Trooper 01-29-2007 08:48 PM

That was so good. but i just making a guess but i'm probaly wrong. Harry about Ginny> not sure so don't all hate me if i'm wrong just a guess :) :blush:

argentinaz_angel 01-29-2007 09:01 PM

That was so sad. So sad. So frikin sad. So so so so sad <#3


*ish totarly in love with it* <333333333



*runs off to spread the word

Xron<3hermioneX fan 01-29-2007 09:57 PM

Oww It Was Brilliant .. Hoo Could It Be .. I Think It Could Be Ginny About Harry .. but i dono are you going to tell us or keep us gessing?
lol .. loved it ..

Rachael X

lena lovegood 01-29-2007 10:56 PM

Sob... that was so..so..beautifully sad. It was really poetic. sigh. I'm thinking its James talkign about lily..wait. they are both dead. i have no idea...

gem 01-30-2007 04:58 AM

Cai, you are way too good at writing. Seriously. I love this one!! even if it is very sad....
I want to say James on Lily, but it's like what lena lovegood said; they're both dead. So maybe Ginny with Harry? Except Harry doesn't belong with Godric's Hollow.... :erm:
You going to tell us? :shifty:

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Originally Posted by cookiemonster
*ish totarly in love with it* <333333333

How am I not surprised? *giggles and hugs Niky*

D.A Forever 01-31-2007 03:09 AM

Aww that was so pretty! But very sad too :cry:,
I was thinking Lily & James too but of course it isnt :lol:,
Ummm I'll say *like everyone else* Ginny & Harry? ^_^.
Please tell us who it was Cai!! :flowers:.

Believe 01-31-2007 06:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Little Trooper (Post 4537310)
That was so good. but i just making a guess but i'm probaly wrong. Harry about Ginny> not sure so don't all hate me if i'm wrong just a guess :) :blush:

LOL! I don't hate you. And it's a very good guess... but I'll let you know if you're right or not later on. ;)

Quote:

Originally Posted by argentinaz_angel (Post 4537372)
That was so sad. So sad. So frikin sad. So so so so sad <#3


*ish totarly in love with it* <333333333



*runs off to spread the word

LOL! I love you Niky! And sorry to make you sad!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Xron<3hermioneX fan (Post 4537704)
Oww It Was Brilliant .. Hoo Could It Be .. I Think It Could Be Ginny About Harry .. but i dono are you going to tell us or keep us gessing?
lol .. loved it ..

Rachael X

Thanks Rachael! I'm glad you liked it! And I will tell you... but I'm going to let other people guess first. :D

Quote:

Originally Posted by lena lovegood (Post 4537992)
Sob... that was so..so..beautifully sad. It was really poetic. sigh. I'm thinking its James talkign about lily..wait. they are both dead. i have no idea...

LOL! James and Lily is a good guess, actually. And who knows, maybe it is them... :shifty: But thanks for the comment!

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Originally Posted by gem (Post 4540233)
Cai, you are way too good at writing. Seriously. I love this one!! even if it is very sad....
I want to say James on Lily, but it's like what lena lovegood said; they're both dead. So maybe Ginny with Harry? Except Harry doesn't belong with Godric's Hollow.... :erm:
You going to tell us? :shifty:



How am I not surprised? *giggles and hugs Niky*

Hee hee! Thanks Kal! I'm glad you like it! And I'll let you know who it is... later! :evil:

Quote:

Originally Posted by D.A Forever (Post 4543732)
Aww that was so pretty! But very sad too :cry:,
I was thinking Lily & James too but of course it isnt :lol:,
Ummm I'll say *like everyone else* Ginny & Harry? ^_^.
Please tell us who it was Cai!! :flowers:.

LOL! Aww... thanks Grace! I liked your comment. And I'll tell you eventually... but it would spoil the surprise if I told you now! Hee hee...

Little Trooper 01-31-2007 10:00 PM

Evil. I can't wait. Need to know. But if your going to make us wait I guesse I can. I'll just check back. But it was really good. Hope you do more.

RonLover87 02-01-2007 04:13 AM

I really enjoyed this it was beautifuly written and if i had to guess i would say Harry and Hermoine hope you tell us soon :)

D.A Forever 02-01-2007 06:34 AM

Ok... I'll wait *pouts* :lol:
Umm I'll take another guess and say is it Mione & Ron?

Xron<3hermioneX fan 02-01-2007 06:42 PM

Yer Yer ... Take Grace's Answer .. Ron & 'Mione ..

D.A Forever 02-07-2007 08:25 PM

Will you tell us now?
Please Cai :flowers: ^_^

jkrsong96 02-11-2007 06:43 AM

Great!! Keep on the good work~
Seriously, I love your stories. I'm still reading, "An Obsession" and "What the Girls Think". I've read "My Best Memory", and it's surprising how a short story can be so great~
-Mindy

Believe 02-13-2007 07:12 PM

:lol: I know who it is... I know who it is...


This was great, Cai. Very sad, but extremely great! Keep up the great work!

Weasleygurl 02-18-2007 08:48 PM

^^ Who is it?

It can't be Lily or James, because they died together. I don't think it could be Ginny about Harry, because she's got her entire family. So I think it's Harry about Ginny. Am I right?

Anyway, that was beautifully written Cai; you did an awesome job!

Believe 02-20-2007 10:57 AM

Okay... Okay... I'll tell everyone who it is!!


The couple I'm talking about here is...


Hermione to Ron... ;)

gem 02-21-2007 02:15 AM

*cheers* The Suspense ends *giggles*

Aww, that's sad... and you did a great job with not letting onto who it was. Even if you might not have planned it that way :lol:

Weasleygurl 02-21-2007 11:02 PM

Hermione to Ron!?! What happened to Hermione's parents?

HOPEendures 02-22-2007 10:10 PM

Aww that soooo sweet loved it PAMS

jkrsong96 03-02-2007 05:11 AM

So sad...I didn't know who it was...but Hermione and Ron...so sad.
I don't know why, but I think a lot of one-shot fics are sad.

GinnyRocks713 03-04-2007 04:40 AM

Omg that was so sad *sniffles*. Plz tell us who it is Cai.
~Cheyenne~

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Agos* 06-17-2007 06:08 PM

Okay, I just happened to LOVEEEEEEE this.It's just so sad.


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