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10-30-2007, 02:42 PM
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|  Hebrew Lang. Mod FanFic Enthusiast Bicorn
Location: Moving on to Hollywo Join Date: Apr 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jake Hatich First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | Hmm... Can you tell me which part is it you were lost because, you didn't know where you were up to or because...? Please tell me so I know to improve.
Thanks sooo much for reading, Heather! I will try to post tomorrow or Thursday cause my life is sooooooo crazy right now! |
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11-01-2007, 08:18 PM
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| | Bundimun
Location: Finland, Jämsä Join Date: Nov 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: unsorted | Hello! I´m not sure, did you get my e-mail, but i put it here too (sorry, if i do something wrong) Quote:
I would like to translate your Fan Fiction story in Finnish. I´m pretty new in these things, but i like your writing and i like fanfics and english and..
So if you give me your consent i´ll translate it and link back to original story and credit you.
Lets give an opportunity to Finnish people to read your fanfic in Finnish. 
-Ansqu
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11-01-2007, 08:58 PM
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#153 (permalink)
|  Hebrew Lang. Mod FanFic Enthusiast Bicorn
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jake Hatich First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | Thanks! I sent a PM to you. 
-*~ Shirel ~*- |
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11-03-2007, 02:23 AM
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| | Hippogriff
Location: Is With Sackboy :D Join Date: May 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Naomi Eleanor Buxton First Year | PAMS!
Please!
I beg of you to post soon!
..:Lisa:.. |
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11-03-2007, 12:48 PM
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| | Bicorn
Location: Cumbria,Uk Join Date: Jun 2004
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| going to turkey on holdiay for a week 2moz so i wont be able to get on so ill see u's in a week love ya x |
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11-03-2007, 04:41 PM
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#156 (permalink)
|  Hebrew Lang. Mod FanFic Enthusiast Bicorn
Location: Moving on to Hollywo Join Date: Apr 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jake Hatich First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | Lisa- I know! And I'm sooo sooorry! I am soooo busy, now we have what you call in english, I think, "ready month".... or something like that. So anyway it's got to do with a youth group on saturdays and Tuesdays that I participate in and once a year we have a whole big thing. We make up a dance and song and everything and we present it infront of the rest of the groups... So abssicly I have tons of practice days and with school... I am really sorry and I will try to post as sooon as I can! 
Helen- Ohhhh!!! Have fun! You're soooo lucky! Tell me about it when you get back.  |
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11-05-2007, 04:17 PM
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| | Mooncalf
Location: Colorado Join Date: Aug 2005
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Rilen Taylie Green Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Gayle Night Magical Education | New Reader. I have read you ff and I love it. It is really starting to get good. I can't wait to see where you go from her. I like that things are progressing slowly. It really builds up the tension. |
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11-06-2007, 10:51 AM
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| | Hippogriff
Location: Is With Sackboy :D Join Date: May 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Naomi Eleanor Buxton First Year | Quote: |
Lisa- I know! And I'm sooo sooorry! I am soooo busy, now we have what you call in english, I think, "ready month".... or something like that. So anyway it's got to do with a youth group on saturdays and Tuesdays that I participate in and once a year we have a whole big thing. We make up a dance and song and everything and we present it infront of the rest of the groups... So abssicly I have tons of practice days and with school... I am really sorry and I will try to post as sooon as I can!
| Oh ok. I understand... but I can't want any longer.Your FF is so good that you have to post another chapter! |
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11-08-2007, 06:18 PM
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|  Hebrew Lang. Mod FanFic Enthusiast Bicorn
Location: Moving on to Hollywo Join Date: Apr 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jake Hatich First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | A new chapter!!! -Finally! Hey all! How are ya? I'm really sorry for the late update, it's been really busy...
A special welcome to my two new readers Ansqu and nytingale!!! Thanks sooo much for reading, it means sooo much to me! 
And now, I give you- *blows the horn* Chapter 10 ~ A Day At The Lake ~
Saturday morning Ginny told Hermione that their crush and schools hottest guy, Zack Moradison, is going to practice for a swimming competition down at the lake in his trunks, with a bare chest! So, they –and all the other girls at Hogwarts- wore their sexiest bikinis with a little dress on them and headed down to the lake. They removed the dress and dipped they’re feet in the cold water. They got a lot of stairs from boys but ignored them and watched Zack and his friends swim laps.
“Look at those muscles!” Ginny exclaimed.
“Yeah, he is so hot…” said Hermione dreamingly.
“Earth to Hermione who is dreaming about our Zack!” said Ginny, waving her hand in front of Hermione’s pink face. They laughed and Ginny almost fell into the water.
“When Zack asks me out, you won’t be jealous, will you?” Hermione asked with a smile playing at her lips.
“Of course not, I’d kill you and win Zack forever!” Ginny said, waving her hands in the air, swishing her hair and laying down making a group of passing boys gag at her stupidly.
“If you dare-” began Hermione but Ginny cut her off.
“Oh my gosh! He looked at me!” Ginny squealed, jumping up and down.
“No he didn’t, you were probably just imagining it,” said Hermione, rolling her eyes.
“I was not, he really looked at me!” Ginny yelled at her and before Hermione could argue back, the group of boys that were gagging at them earlier came up to them and began flirting. Two of the boys picked Ginny up and dragged her out of sight. The other two picked Hermione up and were about to through her in the water. They thought they were being funny but Hermione was terrified of water ever since childhood. She panicked and pinched, kicked and hit trying desperately to get they’re hands off her body. Too late, they had thrown her into the freezing cold water and had run away to hide, as if it was a game of “Hide and Seek.”
She surfaced the water and fought to stay on top, for she had never learnt to swim. She gasped for air as the water dragged her down…down…down. She was starting to lose consciousness and with the last strength she had, she pulled up desperately but it was no use; she sank still deeper and almost reached the lakes bottom when she felt a pair of rough hands seize her and pull her up. The figure pulled her out of the water onto dry land. It turned her over so that she was lying on her stomach and punched her back. Hermione woke up shaking all over and coughed out the water as the figure punched. When the last bit of water was out and the banging stopped, Hermione turned around ready to thank her hero and give him a kiss for his bravery, for she could’ve died, but all she saw was Ginny running towards her, fear and terror written all over her face and her bikini even a little ripped. Hermione felt a rush of disappointment run through her.
Ginny’s face relaxed when she saw that Hermione was alright.
“Hermione, are you okay?” she asked, throwing herself down, beside her.
“Yeah, I’m fine…. Someone saved me….” said Hermione, still shaking and her teeth were chattering like a monkey.
“Someone saved you?” said Ginny with a quizzical look on her face. “Who?” she asked.
Hermione thought for a moment then frowned. “I don’t know, I didn’t see its face,” she said.
“Ooh! Someone’s got a secret rescuer!” Ginny teased and they burst out laughing which made Hermione feel slightly better. Hope you liked! 
-*~ Shirel ~*- |
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11-08-2007, 09:40 PM
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| | Troll
Join Date: Feb 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Hayden Hicks First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kahylee Ashford Magical Games & Sports | I think i know who it was i know who it is i think i know who it is.Oka im done.That was so awesome.I cant wait for the next post. take your time on posting.
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11-08-2007, 10:28 PM
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| | Hippogriff
Location: Is With Sackboy :D Join Date: May 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Naomi Eleanor Buxton First Year | OoO sexy Zack. I'd like to that action!Lmao.
Great chapter!
I think I know who rescued Hermy! 
..:Lisa:.. |
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11-09-2007, 10:12 AM
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|  Hebrew Lang. Mod FanFic Enthusiast Bicorn
Location: Moving on to Hollywo Join Date: Apr 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jake Hatich First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | lol! Thanks so much for reading! I am feeling really nice today so I will post another chapter sometime today!!!!
-*~ Shirel ~*- |
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11-09-2007, 11:07 AM
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|  Hebrew Lang. Mod FanFic Enthusiast Bicorn
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jake Hatich First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | Chapter 11: ~ A Night in the Jocose ~ Chapter 11: ~ A Night in the Jocose ~
Hermione walked into the common room soaking wet and worse, she was only wearing a bikini so she felt very uncomfortable walking around half naked. She prayed that Malfoy wouldn’t be there, because no way she wanted him to see her like this. When she walked through the hall to the common room, she saw Malfoy reading a book on the couch. When he heard her enter, he looked up and stared at her. Hermione took her jacket that was lying on the couch and threw it over her. She ran past him to the bathroom decided to use the jocose for the first time. She turned on the faucets and watched it fill up with hot water and bubbles.
She didn’t bother taking off her bikini, she just slipped into the jocose and sighed with relief, feeling the water wash over her. She laid her head back and before she knew it, fell asleep.
It was late at night and Malfoy returned from dinner and wanted to take a shower but Hermione was still in there. How long does it take someone in the bathroom?’ He asked himself. He knocked on the door several times but he got no answer. He knocked harder but nothing. He banged on it and kicked it but when there was still no answer, he took out his wand and magically opened the door.
He saw in the end of the room, Hermione, asleep in the jocose. He went over to make sure she really was sleeping. He watched her stomach move up and down and sighed. He looked up down at her and realized how pretty and sexy she was in a bikini. He didn’t want to wake her up so he got his trunks on and went to take a shower.
Hermione steered awake, hearing the noisy shower running. She sat up and rubbed her eyes. She stared at the jocose and everything came back to her. But she wondered why the shower was on. She stepped out of the jocose and opened the shower door. To her amazement she saw Malfoy in there, washing his blond hair. She yelled in surprise and Malfoy tried to hush her.
“What are you doing in here? The door was locked!” she yelled at him.
“Do you know what time it is?” Malfoy asked her. “I waited and you never came out and I needed to shower!” he pointed at himself and Hermione’s eyes fixed on his chest which was quite muscle.
“But I was in here! If I was undressed-?” she screamed, trying not to imagine Malfoy coming in and seeing her with no clothes on.
“Ok, it won’t happen again,” he said trying not to smile. He took her hand and Hermione pulled back.
“Get your filthy hands off me!” she yelled at him.
“I can’t help it,” he said. “You’re so…”
“I’m so what?” she asked with interest.
“Sexy,” said Malfoy, grinning. He rapped his arms around her waist and swept her into a kiss.
Hermione fell for it. The fire works were happening and she felt shivers like electricity spring down every vain in her body. It wasn’t a deep kiss and Hermione came to her senses and threw him off her with such force that he hit the shower wall and slipped through the side door straight down into the jocose.
Hermione slapped herself hard, not meaning to hurt him badly and ran to see if he was alright. When her head appeared beside the door, Malfoy lunged for her hand and pulled her in. She landed in his arms and shrieked.
“What are you do-” she tried to say but was cut off when he pushed her under the water. She came up coughing and choking. Malfoy banged her on the back.
“Does this remind you of something?” he asked, smiling evilly.
“What?” she asked, realization floating into her brain which was functioning slowly because of the water. “Wait, you were the one that saved me?” she asked, slightly confused.
“Yes, it was I!” he said proudly, pretending to be a prince. Hermione didn’t say anything, out of embarrassment. She sat away from Malfoy, at the other end of the jocose.
“I believe you own me an apology?” he asked slowly returning to his old self.
“Listen,” she started, “if I had known it was you…Wait a second, why did you run away like that?” she asked giving him a hard look. Malfoy looked at her and gave her a, isn’t-that-obvious kind of look.
“Imagine this,” he said to her, “Draco Malfoy having rescued a mudblood out of the lake! What an insult to my house and family…”
“Well anyway, thanks for saving my life…” she said, biting her lip. Never in her life, up until now, had she ever said thank you to a Malfoy.
“Now, for repayment, I ask for one simple thing,” said Malfoy.
“And what’s that?” Hermione asked Colley.
“What I want is a kiss from you,” said Malfoy with a hungry look in his eyes. Hermione moved further away from Malfoy, trying to think of a way out of this mess.
“In your dreams, Malfoy!” she replied.
“You owe me,” Malfoy said, with raised eyebrows.
“You kissed me before with your filthy lips in the shower. That should be enough for you!” she said quickly.
“That was just a little kiss. Now I ask for a sweet, passionate kiss,” he said and Hermione thought he was going insane. She didn’t like that look on his face and she wanted out!
“I-if I kiss you o-once,” she said, her voice trembling, “Will you let me go?”
“Yes, now all I ask for is one little kiss,” he said moving towards Hermione. His lips moved closer…and closer…almost touching hers…three inches away…one inch…Boom!
His lips met hers. He rapt his arms around her like a snake and pushed her closer. She was beginning to enjoy it but when she felt his fingers move down her back to the tie of her bikini, she backed away and broke the kiss.
“I better go to sleep,” she whispered to him.
“Yeah, me to,” Malfoy said.
She climbed out of the jocose and raped a towel around herself. She opened the bathroom door and turned back around. Malfoy was watching her.
“Good night,” she said and closed the door behind her. Ok, so now things are starting to happen...
I hope these two chapters make up for my very late update.
I had tons of fun writing this chapter so I really want to know what you guys think! 
-*~ Shirel ~*- |
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11-09-2007, 10:53 PM
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| | Troll
Join Date: Feb 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Hayden Hicks First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kahylee Ashford Magical Games & Sports | OMG i had such a 'i think ive read that before' moment.I loved it.Draco is so shmexy.Post when you can.
~*<3*~
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11-09-2007, 11:09 PM
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| | Hippogriff
Location: Is With Sackboy :D Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 3,769
Hogwarts RPG Name: Naomi Eleanor Buxton First Year | Bwah i loved it so much!
It was so.. BWAHHH!!! lmao.
PAMS very soon!!
..:Lisa:.. |
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11-11-2007, 12:53 PM
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| | Imp
Location: hogwarts??????!!!!!!!!! Join Date: Apr 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Stella First | it was amn AWESOME post!!!!!!!!!
PAMS! |
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11-11-2007, 05:57 PM
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| | Bowtruckle
Location: Home, sleeping with the enemy♥... Join Date: Aug 2005
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Seventh | *new reader alert*
I so loved your posts :X oh my gosh, draco is naughty....  go,go dracoooo  loved it, pose more soooon please
Alda xoxo |
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11-12-2007, 02:43 AM
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| !!!!Awesome!!!! Hippogriff
Location: in Howarts offcourse Join Date: May 2004
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Mari Elizabeth Allen Fourth Year | ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh It's beeen soooo long since I last check the story and it's awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love Draco!!! ahhhh |
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11-12-2007, 01:06 PM
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| ECFC & LLFC Games Off. Snape is my man! Troll
Location: Hogwarts School of W Join Date: Nov 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Mindy Song | Wow, these are really fun! Want more! Want more! This is so good that I can't even say something bad to you. 
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11-12-2007, 05:13 PM
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| | Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Janie Smith | Abby13** Hey!
I'm a new reader, and I love ur story soo~ much! Its amazing! I just joined here yesterday, read ur entire story just write now and I continue to crave more! I hope u write soon and if I must say J.K. couldn't have done it better herself! Bye!
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11-12-2007, 08:46 PM
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#171 (permalink)
| | Bundimun
Location: Finland, Jämsä Join Date: Nov 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: unsorted | Those 2 chapters were soooo great ;D I can´t wait the moment I´m starting to translate those..  D Just something so awesome. |
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