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01-06-2004, 03:00 AM
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| When the Angels Cry - Sa13+ Hello everybody!
I've just finished my fanfiction called His Little Healer, a D/G as well, and now i'm starting this one...
This is a small summary: Ginny's on her 6th year, and her brother Ron, Harry and Hermione are on 7th. Ginny has an Angel she loves, but that Angel loves Draco as well...
What happens when you love two persons at the same time? You bring them together!
That's what this Angel is going to do, so watch out for your hearts, because you really don't want to see an Angel cry!
I know i suck in summaries, but i promise the story won't be that bad!
I hope anyone's interested, and tomorrow i'll post the first chapter!
Bye
*I know i'm evil, and that you all wanted to read something right away, but just wait some more!*  |
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01-06-2004, 11:39 AM
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| | Bowtruckle
Location: Portugal Join Date: Sep 2003
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| No one replied to my new topic, but i'm still posting.
Here is the first chapter of my new ff! Hope you enjoy it...
*/*/*/*/*/*/ When the Angels Cry Chapter 1 – Ginny gets an Angel
‘Mom, is it true? You’ll give me a present?’ Ginny asked, her eyes shining with hope, while she walked through Diagon Alley with her parents, Ron, Harry and Hermione.
‘That’s right, Ginny! Now that we are only four at home, I think we can afford a new present for you and for you brother… So, what do you want?’ Mrs. Weasley asked, smiling happily.
‘I want a friend, Mom!’ Ginny asked, blushing all over, when the five persons around her stared in shock and surprise.
‘What do you mean? You have a lot of friends at school, Ginny! And you can’t buy a friend! You know that!’ Mr. Weasley said gently, hugging his daughter. ‘Are you ok?’
‘Oh, Daddy! I don’t have any friends besides Suzie and Cathy… They have their boyfriends and I stay alone, most of the times! Can I get a pet?’ she asked with a sad face.
‘Of course you can, Darling! Let’s go to the pets shop…’ Mr. Weasley agreed, guiding his daughter among the crowds.
‘Ronald Weasley, have you been ignoring your little sister? You know she’s shy and she need company… she needs friends! You better start taking care of her, or I will take care of you! Do you get it little mister?!’ Mrs. Weasley yelled in the middle of the street, making Ron wish he could Apparate right then.
‘Yes, Mom…’ he agreed, lowering his head, until his chin touched his chest. ‘I’m sorry!’
‘Good… Let’s get your present!’ the lady said, kissing her son as if nothing had just happened.
‘Mrs. Weasley is fantastic! She can’t even stay angry at her children!’ Harry said, while he and Hermione followed Ron and his mother down the street.
‘Yes, I agree! But she’s right… We have been neglecting Ginny! I’ll try to become closer with her…’ Hermione said, holding her boyfriends hand in hers, and placing her head on his shoulder.
‘Oh! You’re the cutest thing I’ve ever seen!’ Ginny said happily, while she opened a white cage.
She had been searching the entire shop for a pet she liked, but she couldn’t find one. There were toads, owls, rats, parrots, and some others, but none she liked. Until she laid her eyes on a small cage, in a corner of the room. Inside, there was a small white kitty, with pink little eyes, and a cute little face. Taking it from the cage, Ginny held the kitty against her chest, caressing the cat behind its ears.
‘Do you want to go home with me, kitty?’ Ginny whispered with a smile on her face, listening to the cat purr. The kitty opened its pink eyes, and licked her jaw with a harsh tongue. Ginny giggled, and went back to her father’s side. ‘Daddy, I’ve chosen my new friend!’
‘That’s a beautiful kitty, Ginny! I’m sure you’ll be good friends!’ her father smiled sweetly. ‘How much is the cat, sir?’
‘That’s not a common cat, Mr. Weasley? That cat is one of a rare kind… But people don’t like to buy them…’ the man said, looking at the small animal with a sad face. ‘These cats die very easily…’
‘They die easily? Why?’ Ginny asked worried, while she stroked the kitty’s fur.
‘They create strong bonds with their owners, and when they are not loved like they wanted to be loved, they die of sadness. This specie’s death is known as the Cry Of The Angels.’ The man said. ‘If you think you’re up to the job of making it live happily, then I’ll give it to you!’
‘Yes, I’ll make sure I make her happy…’ Ginny promised, her eyes shining with joy and love towards the little cat.
‘Very well! Take good care of her, then! You may take her!’ the man said, smiling softly.
‘I can hardly believe this! This is the first time I got something I can call my own! I always had to use hand me down robes, worn shoes, old cauldrons… But now, I have my own pet… But, you’re not a pet, Angel! You are my friend… My best friend, and I promise I’ll take good care of you, and ensure you have everything you need at all times!’ Ginny talked with the kitty, while they walked along the streets of Diagon Alley, to meet her mother, and the famous trio in front of the robe’s store.
‘Ginny! That’s a cute little cat you’ve got there! What’s his name?’ Hermione said, trying to hold the cat, but Angel started to get nervous and show her nails, making Hermione forget about what she was about to do. ‘He’s a little wild, isn’t he?’
‘It’s a she! Her name is Angel, and I think she’s a little nervous, that’s all!’ Ginny explained, smiling when Angel started licking her face tenderly.
‘I think she already likes you…’ Harry smiled, winking at Ginny, making her blush.
‘At least someone does…’ she whispered, following her mother down the street, not looking where she was going, always keeping her brown eyes on the kitty’s pink ones.
‘Hey! Watch where you’re going!’ someone complained, when Ginny bumped against his chest.
‘I’m sorry… I was distracted… MALFOY?’ she said in shock, when she looked at the boy in front of her. ‘Great! With all the persons walking down this street, I had to bump against you!’
‘I’m sure you are feeling very pleased, but can I at least know who the hell are you?’ he asked confused, running a hand over his smooth blond hair. ‘I don’t think I know you…’
‘I’m happy you don’t!’ she spat back, sneering. Gosh, he was cute! The summer had worked wonders with Draco Malfoy. His hair was no longer gelled back… it was now loose around his angelic face, bringing out his blue-grey eyes and his porcelain like skin. His lips were full, but not too full, just how she liked them, and she couldn’t stop the thought of what they would feel like on a kiss… He was taller than her, and his body seemed like a Greek god. He must have taken a potion or something to be so good looking!
‘I’m sure you’re liking what you see, but can you please tell me who you are?’ he insisted, watching her as well. He was sure, that if he knew her, he would never forget her. The girl in front of him was gorgeous… Sure, she had freckles, but they looked great on her, shining under the summer sun, looking like star dust. She had a thin but curvy body of a young woman, and nested on her chest was a white kitty that caught his attention. ‘That’s a nice kitty you’ve got!’
‘I really advice you not to touch her! She doesn’t like other people touching her!’ Ginny advised, covering Angel with her cloak.
‘I’m sure she won’t mind being touched by me… Every girl likes my touch!’ he said, sneering.
‘Oh Malfoy! You think so highly of your self, that it makes me want to vomit!’ Ginny sighed. ‘Go ahead, try to touch her, but then don’t say I didn’t warn you!’
Ginny offered him the kitty, and he took Angel in his soft hands, stroking her fur and watching her pink eyes. Angel only meowed softly, and rubbed her face against Malfoy’s jaw.
‘That’s incredible… She was all nervous when Hermione and Harry tried to hold her…’ Ginny said, looking at Malfoy with a confused face.
‘Hermione and Harry?’ he almost yelled, furious. ‘Don’t tell me you’re a stupid Gryffindor!’
‘What else could I be? A know-it-all Ravenclaw isn’t my type! I’m not dumb enough to be a Hufflepuff, and I certainly am not a Slytherin piece of stuff! I’m a Gryffindor, and a very proud one at that!’ Ginny said, bored. ‘Have you already recognized the red hair?’
‘Oh Merlin! A Weasley?!’ he sighed, furiously. He had spent so much time watching her body, that he didn’t pay attention to her long curly red hair.
‘That’s correct! Someone give a candy to the boy?’ Ginny replied sarcastically. ‘Give me my cat, and move out of my way!’
‘I think I’ll keep the cat… She seems to like me!’ he replied, with a evil grin.
‘Don’t you dare, Malfoy, or you’ll regret it for the rest of your life!’ she yelled, feeling her face glowing red with anger.
‘Oh yeah? What will a little Weasel do to make me regret something?’ he sneered, looking straight into her light brown eyes.
‘I’ll make sure the Malfoy family tree ends with the name Draco Malfoy! I’ll make sure you’re incapable of having an heir!’ she menaced, smiling evilly. ‘Now, give me my cat!’
‘Oh… I’m so scared, Weasel! Merlin, what they say about the redheads temper is true, but add the Weasley blood to a red head and you get a completely crazy piece of scum.’ He laughed, when he saw her rolling her fists on each side of her body. ‘Here, take your little kitty! I hate Weasley’s, and I hate anything related to them… including pets!’
‘Don’t talk about her like that! She’s sensitive!’ Ginny yelled, angry. ‘Come on, Angel, let’s go home! This stupid git just doesn’t know how sweet you are, does he?’
Draco Malfoy stood there, in the middle of the street, watching the young Weasley girl, running to reach her red headed family, up the street. Her hair reflected all the sun light in every direction, making him hold his breath without realising it.
“She’s beautiful…” he thought, with a small smile on his lips. ‘Too bad she’s a Weasley scum!’
So, that's the first chappie!
Hope you liked it, and please, come back soon for more! |
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01-06-2004, 08:21 PM
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| it's very good..........
keep writing !!!!!!!! BUMPsssssssssssss |
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01-06-2004, 10:44 PM
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|  It was good cant really say anything esle till u post more ( thats a hint)...... Write more |
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01-07-2004, 04:52 AM
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| Great! I can't wait to see where it leads to next. Sorry it took so long for me to reply about it. I forgot. |
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01-07-2004, 02:11 PM
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| | Bowtruckle
Location: Portugal Join Date: Sep 2003
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| Here is the second chapter!
Thank you for the replies!
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Chapter 2 – Unexpected
Soon, came the day when Ginny, Ron, Harry and Hermione had to go back to Hogwarts. In fact, Ginny could hardly wait to get there. She had spent the worst summer ever, having to watch Harry and Hermione flirting and kissing all the time. No, she was no longer head over heels for Harry, she had over come that… But it still made her jealous to see them together, looking so happy. Ginny truly wished some day she would have someone to love her.
‘In fact, I already have someone! I have you, Angel…’ the girl said, kissing the kitty’s head.
‘Ginny, drop Angel and push your luggage car! I’m not your employee!’ Ron said, looking furious, while he pushed both their luggage cars towards Platform 9 and ¾.
‘Oh, fine! Angel, stay still ok? And don’t disappear!’ Ginny warned the kitty, placing her on top of her trunk, and took control of the car, going through the barrier. ‘Angel, this is the Hogwarts Express… Isn’t it beautiful?’
Ginny stopped in front of the engine, to admire it. It was of a wonderful scarlet colour, and was releasing steam, getting ready to leave. It looked like the engine was as ansious as Ginny to go back home: to Hogwarts. Starting to walk again, Ginny gathered with her family in the middle of the crowd, getting ready to say their goodbyes.
‘Ginny, please stay out of troubles, and make sure your brother behaves himself… Don’t forget to feed Angel and give her the love she needs… And, most of all, write me a lot, because I’m going to miss you so much!’ Mrs. Weasley warned, hugging her only daughter as if her life depended on it.
‘Ok, mommy! Make sure you send me some cookies, ok? I need to eat out of hours, sometimes!’ Ginny agreed, kissing her mother’s cheek, and then hugging her father. ‘Bye, Daddy!’
‘Goodbye, Ginny… I want to tell you to be strong and face everything with your head high! Don’t let your self go down… Always fight to become stronger, ok, sweetie?’
‘Ok… I guess! You’re sounding weird, Daddy!’ she said, suspicious of something going on.
‘I know I am, Ginny! Now, go on! Go to the train!’ he said, pushing her towards the engine.
‘Wait a minute! Where’s Angel? Angel? ANGEL?’ Ginny called, starting to get desperate. Her kitty was nowhere in sight, and the crowd was too compact! They could even smash her with the cars wheels… Oh Merlin, she had to find Angel.
Going on fours, Ginny crawled through the maze of legs, calling for Angel, but the kitty was nowhere in sight. When Ginny was about to stand up, a pair of polished black shoes appeared in front of her.
‘Trying to get as filthy as your Mudblood friend, Weasley?’ a male voice said, with sarcasm. “Malfoy!” Ginny recognized the owner of the voice. ‘Please, leave me alone!’
‘Why should I?’ he asked, laughing coldly. ‘You are no one to tell me what to do!’
Ginny stood up, and looked him right in his grey eyes.
‘My cat ran away, and I’m trying to find her before the train leaves! So, get out of my way, you stupid blond ferret!’ she yelled, getting furious.
‘Well, Weasley, I’ve got news for you! I know where your kitty is, but I won’t tell you!’ he sneered, watching her clench and unclench her fists.
‘Where is Angel, you basket?!’ she said, menacingly.
‘You see, Weasel, I won’t tell you until you start showing some respect to the Head Boy! You have to say: “Oh greatest Hogwarts’ Head Boy of all time, can you please, please tell me where my kitty is? I would be most thankful if you helped me!” Say it and I’ll tell you!’ Malfoy said, his eyes shining with laughter.
‘Angel? Here kitty! Come to me, sweetie!’ Ginny called, looking all around her, trying to find the kitty.
‘That won’t work!’ he said, with a know-it-all voice. ‘Say it!’
‘I would rather die right here, right now, than say all those lies to you! Now, please, tell me where Angel is! The train is starting to move!’ she ordered, going red all over her face with the effort of yelling to him.
‘Fine… You have two options: one, you tell me what I told you to say; two, you will do something for me…’ he said, watching her with attention.
‘What do you want?’ she asked, suspicious.
‘I’ll tell you soon! Here, take you darn cat and keep an eye on her! This is not a good place for little kitties!’ he sneered, taking the cat from under his cloak, and handing her to Ginny.
‘Why, you stupid *******! You had her and you still blackmailed me?’ she yelled, running to get into the train, following him. ‘No wonder you’re soon of your father! The two of you are made of the same death-eater stuff!’
The two students were now in the middle of a corridor of the moving train, fighting like two cats.
‘I’m not a Death-Eater, so shut your mouth before you even say those things to me! You don’t know me and I don’t want you to… Keep yourself away from me, Weasel, or you’ll wish you had never met me!’ he menaced, going down the corridor with his black robes dancing behind him, due to the wind.
‘Looks like I’ve hit a soft spot, don’t you agree Angel? Please, don’t you ever run away, again!’ she said, smiling softly to her little friend, before going to the last compartment, where her brother, Harry and Hermione used to travel.
‘Hello Ginny! Where were you? You disappeared at the platform! Is everything ok? You are so red…’ Hermione asked, curious, looking at her friend.
‘I’m fine… So, what are you guys doing?’ she asked, sitting next to her brother, and in front of Harry and Hermione.
‘Exploding Snap… That’s all they can do, unfortunately…’ Hermione complained, rolling her eyes with boredom.
And, boy, was she right?! Ginny and Hermione spent two hours watching both boys playing the game without even looking at the people who came to greet them… Having had enough, Ginny decided to take a walk with Angel in her robe’s pocket.
‘Well, well, well… What have we got here? I conclude that she’s a Weasley, because of the red hair, but, Merlin, isn’t she looking good?’ a male voice, said behind her, scaring her to death. Turning around, Ginny found the greatest Slytherin git, after Malfoy, of course.
‘What do you want, Zabini?’ she asked, preparing herself for his insults about her family.
‘Nothing, Weasley, just wanted to take a good look at you… Uh, uh, you really improved this summer, didn’t you?’ he said, eyeing her body from head to toes, making her feel naked and disgusted. ‘I wouldn’t mind having a piece of that…’
‘Zabini, go back to your compartment, now!’ a voice said, behind Ginny.
‘Oh, come one, Malfoy! I just want to have some fun! Don’t you agree with me? The little Weasley really looks good… Sexier than Pansy, uh?’ Zabini said, grinning evilly. ‘What do you think about sharing her? It would be fun!’
‘I’m not a piece of meat to be shared, you git! If you are so hungry, I’m sure Pansy Parkinson has her legs open all day and night…’ she said, disgusted, before she turned to walk on the direction she was heading before being interrupted. Now, in front of her, was Draco Malfoy, again… And boy, did he look furious.
‘Zabini! Go to your compartment, or I’ll take points from Slytherin!’ he menaced, watching the other boy take another lusty look at Ginny, before he obeyed.
‘Thank you, Malfoy!’ Ginny said, smiling weakly.
‘I want you to go to your compartment as well!’ he ordered coldly, not giving a darn to her apologizes.
‘I don’t want to… It’s really boring over there, and I want to take a walk, before my butt becomes flat of being sit for so long!’ she complained.
‘I’m sure your cute butt will stay as it is… Now, go to your compartment!’ he said, smiling softly.
“WOW! What a change! He looks really good when he smiles… When he really truly smiles! Nice teeth… Nice lips… Nice face… Nice body… Awful temper!” Ginny thought, looking at him from head to toes, like Zabini had done to her a few minutes before.
‘Ok… I’m going, Mr. Head Boy! Thank you for saving me from Zabini, the Womaniser!’ she joked, standing on her toes, and grabbing his neck, lowering his face to hers. ‘You were a darling…’ she said, before touching his lips with hers for a brief soft kiss.
Breaking the short kiss, Ginny turned around and went back to her compartment, leaving a stunned Malfoy behind her.
“Oh, my! I can’t believe I did that! A few hours ago I was yelling with him, and now I kiss him and think of him as if he was a Greek God? Am I going nuts? I must be…” she thought, petting Angel’s head, that was coming out of her robe’s pocket. ‘Oh, Angel, I think I really did it, this time… Mommy told me to stay away from troubles two hours ago, and I’m already getting on Malfoy’s black list!’
‘Mrow…’ the kitty responded, licking her hand.
‘Yes, love, I’m glad you’re here with me… Let’s go back to the Exploding Snap game, shall we?!’ Ginny laughed, trying to calm her red face, before facing her brother and his two friends.
Hope you like it!
Bu-bye :scarejulie: |
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01-07-2004, 04:44 PM
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| ooooooook... careful there Ginny and just wish your brother doesn't see you
lol that's really good .... keep on posting |
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01-07-2004, 09:44 PM
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| really good... keep on posting DAILY please so i have somthing to look foreward to  |
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01-07-2004, 10:59 PM
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01-08-2004, 05:09 PM
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01-08-2004, 11:00 PM
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| Chapter 3 – Weird events
The first week back at school was pure hell… At least for Ginny!
She still felt confuse about the reasons why she had kissed Malfoy, her brother’s enemy of all times, she avoided walking on the same corridors as Malfoy, the teachers were giving them millions of assignments to do, and Angel followed Ginny everywhere… including classes.
Right now, Ginny was on her last class of the day and of the week: Potions… Placing Angel inside her robes pocket, Ginny started to work on her Engorgio Potion with Cathy, one of her best friends. About half way of the class, Angel got out of Ginny’s pocket and started sniffing the potion bubbling in her cauldron.
‘Angel, get out of the table! Please, hide, or Snape will get you!’ Ginny begged, trying to reach the cat, but she jumped from the table, and ran to the teacher’s desk, sitting next to it on the floor, looking up at the cold man. ‘Oh Merlin! He’s going to kill her as soon as he sees her!’
And, in fact, Snape did see Angel, sitting on the floor watching him. His face was serious, but there were no signs of fury… At least that was a good sign!
‘Hello, Kitty! Enjoying a Potions class, are you?’ he said in a strangely soft voice, picking up the cat in his arms.
Blushing, Ginny rose from her sit, and went to the teacher’s desk.
‘Um… Professor, I’m sorry about Angel! I know I shouldn’t bring her to classes…’ she said in a low voice, looking at her shoes.
‘Miss Weasley, have you finished your potion?’ he yelled.
‘No…’ she whispered, looking into his sparkling eyes. But there was no anger in them… Weird!
‘Then I suggest you go finish it! Come to me in the end of class!’ he ordered, starting to pet Angel, again.
“Traitor!” Ginny thought, watching as the kitty enjoyed the caress, and went to her cauldron, to finish the stupid potion, always keeping an eye on her teacher and cat.
As soon as the class ended, and the class left, Ginny approached Snape’s desk, and reached for Angel, but Snape held the kitty against his chest, stopping her from doing so.
‘Professor, can I have Angel back?’ Ginny asked softly.
‘Where did you get a Pulga, Miss Weasley?’ Snape asked, looking suspicious.
‘My father wanted to give me a present, and I chose Angel… The owner of the pet shop gave her to me, in return I promised to take good care of her!’ she explained. ‘I know I shouldn’t bring her with me, but if I don’t bring her to classes, she comes after me!’
‘I understand…’ he said, smiling to the kitty, with his yellow teeth.
‘You do?’ Ginny replied, confused with his behaviour. Snape never ever smiled! Not even to his Slytherin gits!
‘Don’t you know anything about Pulgas, Miss Weasley? I suggest you do some research…’ he stated, going back to his old self, and handing her the kitty. ‘Goodbye, Miss Weasley!’
Ginny held the kitty and her bag, going out the classroom as fast as she could. Seeing Snape smile was truly weird, and she couldn’t understand why Angel let him hold her. She didn’t seem to like anyone besides her, Malfoy, Suzie, and now, Snape!
Still trying to understand, Ginny went to the Great Hall, for dinner, and sat between Suzie and Harry, at the Gryffindor table.
‘Hey Ginny! What did he say? Are you in detention?’ Suzie asked, worried with her best friend.
‘Oh Suzie! You’ll never believe what happened!’ Ginny sighed, starting to explain what had happened at the classroom, and at the same time she fed Angel with the food from her plate.
‘NO WAY!’ Suzie yelled, astonished. Everyone in the Great Hall turned to look at her, and Suzie blushed violently, looking down at her plate. Looking at the other house tables, Ginny locked eyes with none other than Draco Malfoy. His face was blank, staring back at her, without smiling, sneering, or looking furious. Just simply blank! Ginny had been watching him for a while, with him staring back, until Harry broke the connection by waving a hand in front of her eyes.
‘Earth to Ginny! Hello? Is anyone home?’ Harry joked, trying to bring her from her hypnotic state.
‘What is it Harry?’ she asked, looking away from Malfoy.
‘Why were you staring at him?’ he asked curious, while he ate his piece of chocolate cake.
‘I was looking into the space… I wasn’t looking at anyone in particular!’ she lied, drinking her Pumpkin Juice, and petting Angel.
‘Oh… ok…’ he said, turning back to Hermione, kissing her softly on the lips.
‘Oh Merlin! Some one gives those two a room? I’m sick of this kissy kissy stuff!’ Ginny whispered in Suzie’s ear, making her friend laugh.
‘Don’t worry Gin; someday you’ll do that as well! And you’ll love it!’ Suzie replied, watching Angel jump on top of the table.
‘Angel… Come back to my lap! I don’t want you on the table!’ Ginny said, trying to grab the kitty, but she jumped from the Gryffindor table to the Slytherin table, landing steadily in front of Draco Malfoy, who smiled softly, and reached for Angel, petting her lovingly. ‘That cat is going to get me killed with an heart attack!’
‘Maybe you’re right… But before that, she’ll make you loose your heart!’ Suzie smiled knowingly.
‘What do you mean?’ she asked, confused.
‘Soon you’ll know! Malfoy has gotten really cute, hasn’t he?’ Suzie replied, watching the Slytherin feed Angel with his pudding.
‘Yeah… Uh, I mean no! He’s still the same old stupid ferret…’ Ginny said quickly, blushing all over.
‘Virginia Weasley! I thought you were taught not to lie!’ Suzie laughed, patting Ginny’s arm. ‘Don’t worry, I won’t tell anyone you think he’s gorgeous!’
‘Hey! You were the one who said he’s cute! I never said he was gorgeous!’ Ginny complained.
‘Whom are you two talking about?’ Cathy, who sat in front of them, asked curious.
‘Probably about Harry! My sister always had a crush on him!’ Ron said, smiling at Cathy, but when he saw the look on his sister’s face, he became worried. ‘Uh, Oh!’
‘Ronald Weasley, you the hell do you think you are, to know what’s in my heart? You are talking about a little girl, and I’m not a little girl anymore! Don’t you dare say I like Harry, because I don’t! Not that way! He is a friend I once fancied, that’s all! So, if you don’t want to suffer the consequences of making me furious, shut up about my feelings!’ Ginny said angrily, trying to keep her voice to a minimum, but it was still loud enough for some tables to hear.
‘Ok… I got it! You don’t have to be so jumpy about it! It was an innocent comment!’ Ron complained, going really red.
‘Fine, Ron! But please, don’t forget that I’m not your baby sister anymore! I can take care of my self, so please, abstain from commenting my decisions and feelings!’ she said softly, raising from her sit, and kissing her brother’s forehead. ‘I love ya!’
‘I love you too, Ginny! But sometimes you are just like Mom, exploding because of the littlest things! You scare me!’ he said, smiling.
Ginny smiled back and went to the Slytherin table, standing behind Draco Malfoy.
‘Can I have my cat back, please?’ she asked, reaching out her hands.
Quietly, Draco handed her the kitty, and turned back to his plate.
‘Thank you, Draco!’ she whispered close to his ear, feeling him shiver to her closeness.
When he gathered the strength to turn around, she was gone…
That Weasley girl was really getting to his head… and worse… to his heart! So, here is another chapter!
I'm sorry if i don't post more often, but i have college projects to do and i'm starting my end of semester exams really soon, and i have to study!
Meanwhile, i write long chapters to make you happy.
Hope you liked this chapter, and i'll post another one as soon as possible, ok?
´Bye and thank you for reading and replying... |
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| hehe!! I love your story!! You made me a fan of Ginny and Draco... |
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01-09-2004, 02:01 AM
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| It was really good....SNAPE BEING NICE ( gasp ) |
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01-09-2004, 02:31 AM
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| snape being nice? thats odd  oh well hehe ginny is so smart man..... :whisle: |
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01-09-2004, 04:45 PM
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| lol.......... BUMPssssssssssssss |
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01-09-2004, 10:54 PM
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| Thank you for your great replies, and i promise i'll update as soon as possible, ok?
Love ya all, and i'm glad i converted someone to Draco and Ginny ff's!
Bubye |
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01-10-2004, 12:53 AM
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| Very good! I'll be waiting! |
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01-10-2004, 05:08 AM
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| post more ppppllllleeeaaassseeee!! it's so good i just love it.  |
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01-11-2004, 07:55 AM
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| WICKED!!! i love your stories... you are a heaps good writer!!!
post more as soon as you can!! |
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01-11-2004, 07:26 PM
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| Chapter 4 – Wrong feelings
‘What was that all about, Draco?’ Pansy Parkinson complained, as soon as Ginny left the Great Hall. ‘Why was that weasel talking with you? What did she whisper on your ear?’
‘Will you please shut it? Your voice is giving me a headache…’ he replied, bored.
‘Draco Malfoy, I will not have you talking with me in that tone!’ Pansy shrieked. ‘What did she say to you?’
‘Pansy, you are no one to demand explanations from me! Now, go back to your little pink world, and leave me alone!’ he menaced, standing and leaving the Great Hall. He needed to think, and Pansy Parkinson wasn’t the best company to do that… Seriously, that girl could talk for hours about clothes, make up, diets, and other non-important stuff…
The breeze coming from the lake was chilly, but it felt good against his body, making his hair fly around his face, tickling his cheeks. For the first time in a long time, Draco felt somewhat alive… Right now, no one could make him feel bad about anything!
As he closed his eyes, to smell the thick air that menaced rain, an image popped up in his mind… A pale face, adorned with honey eyes, opened wide with fury and amusement, full rosy lips, saying horrible things to him, but smiling as well… That cute little nose with stardust, a.k.a. freckles, those blushed cheeks… And finally, a large mane of red hair, full of large curls, making him wish to run his fingers along them!
‘Oh boy… I’m doomed…’ he said to himself. ‘There’s no way I’m letting myself go this low!’
Turning around, he went back to his bedroom, trying to keep a certain redheaded girl out of his mind.
‘Hey, Angel, listen to this… The Pulgas seem to get strongly attached to their caretakers, and they show that affection by being around, all the time. They do this to show their love and in hope they will receive the same feelings from their caretakers. So, if your Pulga follows you everywhere, do not worry, because this is perfectly normal. Just give him/her all your love, and your little friend will give it back to you. Be careful, if you don’t show the so needed affection, the Pulga will die… Some refer to this process as the Cry of the Angels… Why? Because the Pulga will be involved in a white light, and tears will come down from its eyes, while they float in the air. When he/she finally dies, the body vanishes. Not good sights, so please, take good care of your little friend… They may show some powers, but it differs from animal to animal. Some possess telepathic powers, some possess the ability of speech, and some seem to be able to perform some magic!’ Ginny read from one of the library books about Pulgas. Then, she looked at Angel and smiled. ‘What power do you have, sweetie? Please, don’t let yourself die, ok? I love you lots, and I know you love me back! I want you close to me all the time, ok?’
‘Meow…’ the kitty replied, as if understanding what Ginny said.
‘You’re such a smart kitten, Angel!’ Ginny smiled, shutting the book, and holding her Pulga in her arms.
‘Ooww… How endearing… A little weasel holding a little kitty! Don’t you have anything better to do with your time?’ a voice drawled behind her.
‘Go away, Malfoy…’ Ginny replied, freeing Angel, who was struggling to get out from her embrace. As soon as she was free, the kitty jumped to Draco’s arms, and started licking his hands. ‘I just don’t get it! How can she like you so much? Are you always carrying cookies in your robes to give her, or something?’
‘Why? Are you jealous, Weasley? Angel knows better! She likes me because I’m charming, and gorgeous… Isn’t it, Love?’ he joked, playing with the kitty, forgetting to whom he was talking.
‘Oh, wait a minute… Did you just call her “Love”? That’s the second shock I’ve received in the last 24 hours… A Malfoy saying the L word! Amazing!’ Ginny laughed, watching him become furious.
‘Miss Weasley, I suggest you laugh outside of the library… And please, take that filthy cat out of here! I don’t want my books ruined!’ Madame Pince complained, as she approached and left.
‘Sorry…’ Ginny said in a low voice. ‘Give me Angel… I have to leave!’
‘No… I want her to stay with me a little longer!’ he said, sitting next to Ginny’s chair, and taking out his books from his bag.
Ginny just stood there, looking at him with suspicion. How could he like Angel so much? She had never seen him being so friendly towards other people pets… And, how could he call her love? Was he out of his mind? Oh… this was getting really confusing!
‘Are you going to stay there, burning a hole in my head?’ he sneered, scribbling on his parchment with one hand, and playing with Angel, with the other one.
‘If it was that easy to destroy you, you would have been dead a long time ago!’ she spat back, picking up her things.
‘What’s that?’ he asked, grabbing the book about Pulgas. ‘”Get to know your Pulga”? Why are you reading this stuff?’
‘Because Angel is a Pulga, that’s why! Now, give me that!’ she said, angrily, taking the book from his hands, and placing it inside her school bag. ‘Sweetie, are you coming with me, or are you staying with the slimy git?’
Angel looked up at Ginny, meowed, and lay on Draco’s lap, closing her little pink eyes.
‘I guess she gave you her answer! Have a nice day, Weasley!’ he sneered, watching her leave the Library with fury all over her face. ‘If I can’t have feelings for her, I’ll make her life a living hell! That’s the way it must be… You understand my reasons. Don’t you, Love? Yes, I think you do… As she said, you’re a smart little kitten!’
All the Gryffindors in the common room jumped in surprise when the portrait door closed violently, and a furious Ginny Weasley threw her book bag to a corner of the room.
‘Ginny… What happened? You look furious!’ Cathy asked, trying to sit Ginny in an armchair, next to the warm fire.
‘That’s because I am furious!’ Ginny replied coldly, pacing the small space in front of the fireplace. ‘Slimy git… Who does he think he is? Take her from me like that… If he’s using her to hurt me, he’ll pay! Oh, he will pay!’
‘Ginny? I’m sorry, but, WHO THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?’ Cathy yelled, trying to understand her friend’s behaviour. A few heads looked at them with angry stares, and curious stares, as well.
‘I think I have an idea of whom it is!’ Suzie said, with an evil smile. ‘What did the Slytherin Prince do to you, this time?’
‘He’s trying to take Angel from me! HE even calls her Love! I almost had an heart attack when he called her that way! HE holds her and pets her all the time, and she prefers to stay with him in the Library, rather than stay with me!’ Ginny said, still pacing, her fury going away, being replaced with sadness. ‘I don’t want to lose Angel!’
‘Oh Ginny… Angel loves you! You know she does… But she loves him, as well! Let her love both of you!’ Cathy advised, hugging Ginny in a sweet embrace.
‘And Ginny… Maybe she’s trying to tell you something about Malfoy…’ Suzie said with a knowing look. ‘Maybe she’s trying to tell you that he’s trust worthy! Why don’t you try to follow her example and come closer to him?’
‘And what? Rub myself against his legs, until he grabs me in his arms, so I can lick his face?’ Ginny replied, with sarcasm.
‘Well… That would be a start!’ Suzie said, jokingly. ‘Try to talk with him, without accusations and without loosing your temper!’
‘Fine… I’ll try! But only because I don’t want to lose Angel…’ Ginny replied, saying only half the truth.
Actually, Ginny was a little jealous of the Pulga, because Malfoy liked her, and enjoyed her company. Ginny would give anything to be the one in his arms, making him smile and become soft… But Angel was the one responsible for that, and Ginny still loved her.
I'm sorry i take so long to update, but i have a busy life with exams and college works... I hope you enjoy this new chappie, and see you soon! |
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01-12-2004, 03:35 AM
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| It was good like always...post more soon...angel is sooo cute!!!!! |
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01-12-2004, 06:12 AM
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| you are an awsome writer...
keep it up cause you are great!! |
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01-12-2004, 03:27 PM
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| ha ha
lol........ post more PAMS!!!!!!!!!! |
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01-13-2004, 12:03 AM
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