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11-21-2003, 03:17 AM
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| | Hippogriff
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ellanore Beatrice Carter First | Try Again: Harry/Ginny Romance - Sa13+ ok I just finished "Getting beyond" which was about Harry's 6th year...him and Ginny got together, and in the end Harry broke up with her in an attempt to save her....but his plan backfired and she ended up unconsious in St Mundgo's....it picks up from there really....if you want to read the details...well...you better find the story....here it is!
Summer had officially started. Ginny was still at St. Mundgo’s, and had yet to wake up. Harry was blaming himself, and not being too quiet about it. But the Weasleys, and Hermione continually told him that it wasn’t his fault. He wouldn’t accept that for an answer though. He had sat by her bed for a week, with just enough food in his system to keep him alive. The healers repeatedly said how afraid they were to let him go to sleep, afraid that he wouldn’t wake up. It was as if he were glued to the chair, his hand firmly holding her lifeless one.
“Harry, will you please go home and have something to eat? I’m getting really worried about you.” Hermione whispered tentatively. She had almost foreseen the harsh glare that Harry shot at her. “Please Harry. I swear I’ll go get you immediately if her condition changes. You’ve been sitting there for a week now. You are starting to smell really bad, you have hardly ate anything. I’ll sit with her until you get back. I swear I won’t leave. Go get some food, take a shower, and change your clothes. Then I’ll leave you alone. ”
Without a word spoken, Harry looked back at Ginny, and kissed her hand softly, in his usual fashion, wishing that she would wake up and save him from his inner torment. A silent tear rolled down his cheek, and he kissed her forehead tenderly.
“I’m so sorry Ginny...I’ll be back...don’t die on me...whatever you do don’t die on me...” Hermione put a hand on his shoulder in an encouraging gesture. “I’ll be right back...won’t even take a half an hour.”
Harry Apparated in Grimuald palace, and a squeaky, high-pitched voice welcomed him.
“Is you my master? Is you Mr. Harry Potter?” Harry turned abruptly to see a small house elf standing in the doorway to his room.
“Uh...yeah I’m Harry...who are you, and why are you in my house?”
“Hello master Harry. I’m Dina the house elf. My family has given me clothes. So I find your house, it’s elf-less. But I can tell there was one here before...where is he?”
“Dina? Uh...well...yeah there was a house elf...but he died recently. Unfortunately it wasn’t too much of a pity. Kind of a relief actually.
“Did old house elf offend master?”
“He’s responsible for the death of his original master...my godfather. He lied to me, and his master ended up coming to save me, which led him to his death. But I have things to do. If you’re going to stay here you must not tell anyone anything you hear in these walls. Will you go get me something to eat? I have to take a shower.”
“Yes sir.” She squeaked, giving a deep curtsey, and scurrying off.
Harry took a quick, ten minute shower, doing his best to wash thoroughly. He knew Hermione was right. He really was beginning to smell funny. In a way that wasn’t the normal every day B.O. Just as he was ordered, Harry changed his clothes, ate a quick sandwich, and headed back to Ginny and Hermione.
Hermione was reluctantly pleased to see that Harry looked, and smelled slightly better. So he convinced her to go get herself some food as well, insisting that he wanted to be alone with Ginny some more.
When she was gone, Harry took hold of Ginny’s frail fingers, and brushed some stray hair off her face. He kept his hand to her face, stroking her pale cheek softly as he exposed his deepest fears for her to, or to not accept.
“I love you. I should have told you that more in the last year, but I was too afraid to admit it. Maybe if I hadn’t broken up with you...you...you wouldn’t have been taken by Bellatrix. You could have been with me. I could have protected you. Even if I did brake up with you....I....I felt horrible. I wanted to tell you for the longest time that I still loved you. But I didn’t. I was a fool. A stupid selfish fool. I don’t believe I did this to you. This was my greatest fear, and now it’s come true. After I did the one thing that I thought could stop it. I broke both of our hearts, and almost killed you. You have to wake up, no one will forgive me if you don’t. You have to wake up Ginny...please...please wake up...” Harry cried. |
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11-21-2003, 09:17 PM
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Location: Maryland Join Date: Sep 2003
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| Yeah it is up, I having been waiting... This is great... Please post more I can't wait to read it, I want to know if Ginny wakes up.... You gotta post now.....  <--See I am happy I am doing the monkey dance.  |
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11-21-2003, 10:18 PM
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Location: Kentucky USA Join Date: Oct 2003
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| She smiles happily while doing a silly little chair dance. WOOOHOO! |
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11-21-2003, 11:09 PM
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| | Hippogriff
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ellanore Beatrice Carter First |  thanks you guys!! i'll post more as soon as i have more typed up!! ok? |
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11-21-2003, 11:16 PM
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Location: Ontario, Canada Join Date: Nov 2003
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| WOW!!! This is really good so far! I haven't read the first part yet, but I'm going to go read it right now so I'll know what's going on when you add more (does that make any sense? lol) I can't wait for more! |
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11-22-2003, 12:22 AM
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| | Hippogriff
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ellanore Beatrice Carter First | lol yeah that made sence....  ...thanks...here's more
“Hey Harry.” A female voice greeted him happily. Harry turned abruptly to see Katie Bell standing in the doorway. She was dressed in a healers uniform. “How are you doing?”
“Not so good.” He mumbled simply.
“Oh, she doesn’t look so good. What happened? I mean I could always check her chart...but I‘d prefer you tell me if you don‘t mind...”
“Uh....it was....it was the...Curciatric curse...” His continuous tears threatened again. “So...uh...what are you doing here? Do you work here?”
“Oh, yeah. They took me on as a trial healer. I’m not completely done with the training yet. How’s Hogwarts? Still in one piece?”
“Barely, students are still tearing it apart trying to take Fred and Georges place. But no one’s quite as good as them.”
“You’re right about that.” Katie replied with a dreamy grin. “Fred’s the brains of the operations though. He’s the truly amazing one. George only does what Fred comes up with.”
“What are you and Fred together or something?”
“Uh...” Her face suddenly grew redder and redder. “...uh....no...but we did go on a date last night. He can actually be serious. I was surprised. But...er...I...I should be going...I’ll see you later Harry. I hope she gets better. All the healers are afraid of what will happen to you if she doesn’t. They asked me to send their love.”
“Thanks Katie. Have a good day. I wish you and Fred the best of luck.”
Not too much happened in the next couple hours. Some healers stopped in to check how Ginny was doing., but none of them talked to Harry. Some of them gave him a look of empathy, but no one seemed likely to talk to him. Late that evening, her family came to visit.
“How is she doing Harry? Have you heard anything new?” Bill demanded franticly.
“The same.” Harry answered quietly. “Has anyone told Percy? He’d want to know.”
“No, we haven’t thought about it actually.” Ron mumbled.
“I’ll go owl him. You guys stay here.” Hermione interjected.
“Thanks dear.” Mrs. Weasley said to Hermione on her way out of the room.
When Hermione had left, a horrible silence had set into the room. Mrs. Weasley was the one to break it. She walked to Ginny’s bedside, and took that hand that Harry wasn’t holding. She sat down next to the youngest Weasley, and stroked her hair fearfully. As if expecting her heart to stop that minute.
“I wanted a girl for so long...” She cried suddenly. Mr. Weasley stepped towards her and put an arm around her trembling shoulders. “If anything happened to her I’d...I’d...” She wasn’t able to finish her sentence, she turned her face into Fr. Weasley’s chest and cried uncontrollably.
“Mom she’ll be fine, we all know Ginny’s a fighter. She’ll pull through this. She can do it. Have a little bit of faith.” Charlie insisted softly.
“I really am so sorry.” Harry mumbled as the silence took hold of them again.
“Harry I already told you that this isn’t your fault. This is exactly what you-know-who tries to do. Hurt people, and make someone else feel responsible. You didn’t do anything! You saved her before they could do anything worse. You have her a chance to fight back.” Bill told Harry heatedly. “And you’ve deprived yourself of food, and sleep for weeks just so we could rest, and get on with our lives. You’ve been a blessing truly.”
Hermione re-entered the room with Percy trailing behind her, tears streaming down his face. |
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11-22-2003, 02:34 AM
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| | Ramora
Location: Imperial Beach, Cali its south of San Diego Join Date: Sep 2003
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| OH My, that was awesome you are truly a great writer, please update soon I want Ginny to wake up NOW oh poor Ginny poor Harry Poir everyone ur gonna make me cry now put somehting happy in please, although I do like Harry's new house elf for some reason.
Cassandra |
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11-22-2003, 01:50 PM
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Location: england Join Date: Oct 2003
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| O my giddy grandma that was amazing |
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11-22-2003, 04:30 PM
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| you're trully talented, this story is even better than the last one. |
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11-22-2003, 05:48 PM
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| | Hippogriff
Location: Stalking you Join Date: Sep 2003
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ellanore Beatrice Carter First | thanks everyone!! I would say more...but I'm way tired...i just got out of bed...*YAWN*
Mrs. Weasley’s head shot up at the appearance of Percy, she let go of Mr. Weasley and ran over to him. Crying hysterically on his shoulder.
“What happened?” Percy asked quite unhappily. “Who’s responsible?”
“I-”Harry tried to explain, but Ron cut him off.
“Harry you did not do this! Now stop it or I’ll make you!” Ron growled, then turned towards Percy resentfully. “Bellatrix Lestrange kidnapped her, and forced her to watch Harry and You-know-who duel. When Harry got hurt she tried to get to him and Bellatrix did the Curciatric curse on her. Unfortunately her body didn’t cope too well.”
“Why didn’t you guys tell me sooner?”
“We were under the impression that you didn’t want to be a part of this family any more.” Charlie insisted aggressively.
“Stop it you guys. Can you just pretend to like each other until Ginny wakes up. Maybe Percy did act like a complete git, but now he’s worried about his little sister. Leave him alone will you?”
It had never occurred to anyone there that a tragedy like that would make Percy forgive them. But it had. Percy and Harry had an argument, Percy wanted some time alone with Ginny, but Harry refused to leave. When they drew their wands, some healers came in and put a stop to it. Katie among them.
When Katie saw Fred she blushed furiously, and tried not to make eye contact. But he just grinned and greeted her happily.
“Hey Katie! How’s it goin?”
“Uh...stressful...we have too many patients and not enough beds...it’s getting awfully hectic. Then there are family's like yours that keep on fighting. Can you guys cool it? Ginny will be just fine. She will wake up, but it just may take a while. These patients usually do. But many of them lose their sanity. We’ll just have to wait patiently and see. Now I’m going to go and see to my other patients, PLEASE don’t fight any more.” When she tried to walk past Fred, he grabbed her arm, and pulled her closer to him and whispered in her ear so only she could hear,
“Are you busy tonight?” She turned to him smiling.
“No not after seven. That’s when my shift ends. Why?”
“Would you want to go get dinner with me?”
“I’d love to!” She insisted with a grin from ear to ear. “Pick me up at seven thirty at my house ok?”
“Will do.”
The next morning, an extremely angry voice woke Harry up.
“What do you think you’re doing in here? I heard yesterday and came to see if my girlfriend was okay! Didn’t you guys break up?” Dean roared. |
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11-22-2003, 06:34 PM
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Location: england Join Date: Oct 2003
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| *speachless* bl**dy hell that was gd
post more when ur not tired
(P.S. i found it thanks) |
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11-22-2003, 08:33 PM
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Location: Utah, USA Join Date: Jul 2003
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| uhoh, Dean's not very happy. Poor Ginny, she has to wake up soon, and you better explain what's going on with Harry scaring Voldy in the last story and what happened by the end of this one or you'll have some irate readers on your hands. Post more!! |
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11-22-2003, 08:38 PM
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| The Fork. Fear me. Snidget
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| what the? What the heck is Dean doing there? the stupid cow. |
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11-23-2003, 01:46 AM
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| | Hippogriff
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ellanore Beatrice Carter First | lol i agree completely...but we couldn't just forget him!! They needed more visitors....someone to stir things up...haha
Harry bolted upright and attempted to stifle a yawn.
“Dean? Uh....yeah we did...but...I was worried about her. Her family needed some sleep and I offered to stay with her, incase her condition changed. Shouldn’t you be at home asleep? It is Saturday after all...during the summer too!”
“Don’t act all chummy with me! What the heck are you doing here with my girlfriend? I think her family would prefer to sit here with her, rather than let you...he-who-attracts-trouble.”
“Back of Dean.” Harry growled, standing up, and advancing on him aggressively. “You have no idea what’s going on here! Don’t even pretend to.”
“Did I say I was? All I do know is that something’s going on with you and Ginny. And I want to know what it is!”
“Leave it alone. This has NOTHING to do with you. I’m just sitting with my best friends unconscious sister. There is nothing romantic about it.”
“Your best friends sister who just to happens to be your ex-”
“Harry-?” Ginny moaned in a strained voice. Both inhabitance of the room turned to look at her abruptly.
“Nothing romantic eh? If she really doesn’t like you...why is she calling for you?” Dean growled before leaving Harry and Ginny alone.
Harry felt his face slowly grow warmer, and could feel the color rising. Dean thought that....
“Harry?” Ginny asked again, this time more terrified. “No...no Harry!” She screamed, and Harry ran over to her taking her hands into his.
“Ginny! Wake up...I’m right here....” Harry said softly, and her eyes shot open.
Tears quickly crept into her eyes, and she flung herself onto Harry’s neck.
“You’re okay.” She sobbed. “I was so scared that you...that you....I...I’ve been having this nightmare of that night....and you...you where....you were....” She stammered. “Oh you’re okay.”
“Of course I am...it’s you everyone’s worried about. You’ve been unconscious for about two weeks. I was so scared....” he said as his voice cracked.
“But I...I wasn’t entirely out of it. I could hear people talking once in a while.” She leaned her head back to look at him. “I heard you most...” Harry began to wonder what exactly she had heard him say. “They would have forgave you Harry. They know you didn’t do it. Hermione felt awful. She was really worried about you. Were you really sitting right there the whole time?”
“Uh...yeah...Percy and I got in a fight...he wanted some time alone with you...but I wouldn't leave. Hermione got me too though. She convinced me to go take a shower a few days ago. But...I...I uh...really should go owl your family....they will want to know that you’re awake. You just rest and I’ll send in a healer. Ok?” She nodded and lied back on her pillow. |
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11-23-2003, 05:00 AM
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| The Fork. Fear me. Snidget
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| Well, I hope dean takes a hint! lol!  |
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11-23-2003, 12:47 PM
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Location: england Join Date: Oct 2003
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| yeah get lost Dean u weiner |
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11-23-2003, 01:07 PM
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Location: GRounded Join Date: Jul 2003
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| this is great!!! i have left the fanfic world, but i think i will read this one! |
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11-23-2003, 03:07 PM
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| yay!!!! You never let us down ty this is a great fic. |
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11-23-2003, 05:49 PM
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| | Ramora
Location: Imperial Beach, Cali its south of San Diego Join Date: Sep 2003
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| YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY thats great I love it your the best, stupid Dean BUMP |
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11-23-2003, 07:08 PM
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| | Hippogriff
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ellanore Beatrice Carter First | oh thanks everyone!!!
Harry returned to her room without so much as looking at an owl. He had sent in a healer, and wandered the halls for a few hours. When he returned he saw Dean sitting on the edge of Ginny’s bed, holding her hand. He decided against interrupting them. But when he checked again an hour later, Ginny was lying alone in her room crying. Harry rushed in, to see what was the matter. He sat next to her where Dean had been previously, and put a hand to her face to wipe away at her tears. She put a hand over his and held it there.
“What happened? You were just fine when I left. Was it Dean?”
“He....he...he broke up with me.” Ginny whimpered. “He said I still liked you, and was getting sick of it. So...he broke up with me. He could have at least waited until I was out of the hospital.” A long deadly silence followed her statement.
“Do you?” Harry asked quietly.
“Do I what?”
“Do you still love me? Is that why you are so upset about this?” Ginny didn’t answer him immediately, She turned her reddening face away from his as if giving herself some time to think about it. “Ginny?” Harry asked, turning her face to his.
“I do....” She admitted serenely, not taking her eyes from Harry’s. Eventually fear crept into her eyes, and she looked away again.
When no words seemed to be right for what Harry was feeling, he reached behind her neck, and undid the chain. He carefully removed the ring that was there, and took her hand, sliding it back onto her finger. Tears leaked out of her eyes, and trailed down her face.
“I’m so sorry.” Harry murmured, as he pulled Ginny into his arms.
“It’s okay Harry. I think I understand. You were only doing it for me.”
“I know it probably wasn’t the best way to go about things, but when I did it I really did think it was the best thing to do for us.”
“Well maybe it was the best thing to do.” Harry pulled back and looked at her in question. “Well I think we were getting a little bit too....familiar with each other. You know? Now we can start over.”
“Start over completely?”
“Well...I guess not. We can just slow things down a little bit. I think that will make my dad happy. He wasn’t too pleased with us last summer I don't think. My brothers either.” |
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11-23-2003, 08:14 PM
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11-23-2003, 08:59 PM
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| The Fork. Fear me. Snidget
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| HAHA!! Dean's outta the picture! THIS IS GREAT! |
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11-24-2003, 08:44 PM
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| amazinggggggggg
that was so good i aplaude you Aphrodite *clap clap |
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11-25-2003, 03:52 AM
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| | Ramora
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| BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP |
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11-25-2003, 07:53 AM
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| this is fantastic!! post more soon!!! |
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