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03-05-2008, 12:18 AM
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| | Skrewt
Location: on SS Join Date: Jul 2005
Posts: 1,312
Ministry RPG Name:
Liliana Hayman Magical Transportation | Till It's Over - Sa13+ Hii
My name is Jenn and this is my second FF on SS. I'm going to apolgize now, but I don't think this one will be very long. I played with the idea of making it a one shot, but then I decided that it can't be that short. For now I'm not going to tell you who it is going to be about, but feel free to guess if you want, just dont expect an answer...yet.
As always, I do not own any of JKR's characters. All the brilliance behind her characters goes to her.
Let me know what you think! And I hope you enjoy it. Till It's Over sa+13 Ever since I was little the field is the most peaceful place that I can remember. It is my sanctuary away from home; it is a place that I can remember having to go to when I had had all I could tolerate from my brothers.
It is not a place that I liked to share with others. I had never brought anyone out here with me, not even my mother who I know would appreciate it. Trees surround it, which makes it secluded from the world around it. The trees block out the noise making all that I can hear is the gentle breeze of the wind rustling through the trees. In the spring, there are flowers everywhere, each year I pick a different kind and plant it everywhere. In the middle of the field, there is a big willow tree, attached to that is a swing that has been there for as long as I can remember. Around the trunk of the tree, there are flowers, but at the very front, there is a spot with no flowers so that in the summer I can sit under the tree in the shade.
Up until yesterday, it was impossible to come here and think about anything that was not positive. The spot used to radiate with happiness and sunshine but since I have returned from school this summer it lacks that spark. My brothers have been trying to cheer me up, but it just seems to make me feel even worse. |
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03-05-2008, 09:09 PM
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| Yeehaw! Bicorn
Location: Barns and Nobles <3 Join Date: Nov 2007
Posts: 1,972
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sahrina Marie Potter (Rian) Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Jessica Emily Miller Magical Creatures | Ooh yay! I'm Your first REader!
I didnt know you were writing another one! Why didnt you say? lol
that is a really good start, I wonder who it is.......
Please PAMS! i love it so far!
~Sydnie |
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03-05-2008, 09:16 PM
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| | Skrewt
Location: on SS Join Date: Jul 2005
Posts: 1,312
Ministry RPG Name:
Liliana Hayman Magical Transportation | Like yours, the other one will come first! But I can't post again till the end of march break!
Oh, and I'd just like to mention that it's not really my second. I have a Finished FF that's called Spinning in Slow Motion. |
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03-06-2008, 06:43 AM
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| | Faerie
Location: turn around.... Join Date: Jan 2008
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexandra (Alex) Leann Morgan Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cassandra (Cassie) Serena Carter Magical Law Enforcement | Jenn your next FF is up *hugs you* It's great so far and I think I might know who it is about...Anyway I can't wait for more. Have fun on your March Break! |
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03-06-2008, 02:15 PM
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| Where's my tag?!?! Kneazle
Location: w/ da WDRTSTDTWOWWMD Join Date: Feb 2008
Posts: 3,039
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexandra (Allie) Johnson First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Becca Malison Accidents & Catastrophes | GREAT JOBB!!! cant wait to find out who its about...but i have an idea!!! HOPE YOU HAVE A GREAT TIME ON YOUR BREAK!!!
~Becca~ |
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03-06-2008, 03:23 PM
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| Like cheese, cheese, cheese Hippogriff
Location: SS, duh Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 3,451
Hogwarts RPG Name: Carolyn Weasley Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Isabella Longbottom Magical Games & Sports | Awesome story, can't wait to see who its about but like some of the others I have a pretty good idea. Hope you have a awesome March break. And can't wait till you get back.
~Michelle~ |
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03-06-2008, 09:07 PM
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| DRFC Co-Pressie K.O. Harry's Smile Guard of Dan’s Curiosity b> Griffin
Location: In a world with Dan Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 9,024
Hogwarts RPG Name: Lilly Young Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Keylee May Magical Games & Sports | Great start. Have fun on March Break and so can't wait for more. Still trying to figure out who it could be a bout.  |
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03-15-2008, 12:10 AM
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| | Skrewt
Location: on SS Join Date: Jul 2005
Posts: 1,312
Ministry RPG Name:
Liliana Hayman Magical Transportation | Thanks everyone. I'm glad you like it, I don't have a new post for you yet, but I will hopefully have one up by the end of the weekend. I'll reply to all your posts then.
<3Jenn |
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03-15-2008, 02:11 AM
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| | Hippocampus
Location: In my mind Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 276
Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | Wow Weldone that was a great start
Can not wait for more
PAMs PAMs PAMs PAMs PAMs PAMs PAMs PAMs PAMsPAMs
Love VoldyXOXOXOX |
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03-15-2008, 09:35 AM
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| Private Lion Faerie
Location: Enlgand Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 3,928
Hogwarts RPG Name: Keira Davenport Fifth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Evelyn Vixon Walker Magical Education | Wow....Thats really powerful!!! Its brilliant
PAMS
Tash xx |
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03-21-2008, 01:50 PM
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| | Skrewt
Location: on SS Join Date: Jul 2005
Posts: 1,312
Ministry RPG Name:
Liliana Hayman Magical Transportation | Quote:
Originally Posted by iheartdan Ooh yay! I'm Your first REader!
I didnt know you were writing another one! Why didnt you say? lol
that is a really good start, I wonder who it is.......
Please PAMS! i love it so far!
~Sydnie | Sorry that I didn't mention it  and sorry I took so long with another post, but here's another one. I'm just gunna write up a little bit about the story after I've commented on everyones posts so I dont have to say it over and over again, but I will say one thing, if this post doesn't give away who it is I dont know what will Quote:
Originally Posted by moonchic07 Jenn your next FF is up *hugs you* It's great so far and I think I might know who it is about...Anyway I can't wait for more. Have fun on your March Break! | I'm really glad you like it  More coming up! Quote:
Originally Posted by HPobsession33 GREAT JOBB!!! cant wait to find out who its about...but i have an idea!!! HOPE YOU HAVE A GREAT TIME ON YOUR BREAK!!!
~Becca~ | Thanks  If you had a break last week too I hope you had a good time too Quote:
Originally Posted by eric_2007al_2006 Awesome story, can't wait to see who its about but like some of the others I have a pretty good idea. Hope you have a awesome March break. And can't wait till you get back.
~Michelle~ | Thanks  Sorry you had to wait so long, I have another post, but it's short  You'll see why though.. Quote:
Originally Posted by Little Trooper Great start. Have fun on March Break and so can't wait for more. Still trying to figure out who it could be a bout.  | Thanks  How are the hotdogs coming? Have you ever heard of banana boats? Here's an other post then Quote:
Originally Posted by x-HermioneGranger-x Wow....Thats really powerful!!! Its brilliant
PAMS
Tash xx | Thanks __________________________________________________ ___________
So I'm back with a new post. Sorry its so short, but theres a reason for that, at first I didn't know where I was going to go with this FF but for now all I'll be doing is short posts. Sorta like memories and then after I get through those it wont be so sad...or maybe I'll link the two together, somehow..
Anyways, I hope you like it, let me know what you think!!
<3 Jenn |
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03-21-2008, 01:52 PM
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| | Skrewt
Location: on SS Join Date: Jul 2005
Posts: 1,312
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Liliana Hayman Magical Transportation | New Post! That was how I felt two years ago, and only a year ago I was faced with a similar feeling only this time I was not surrounded by comfort. That time people screaming, shouting and crying surrounded me. People were running past me, some so fast I did not know who they were, and some slowly telling me I should not be out here and to get back inside. However, the one that caught my attention the most was the one I could not see. I knew he was there even before he brushed past me; it has always been that way with me I have a keen sense when it comes to him, no one else, just him. Part of me wished that he had stopped and tell me it was all going to be okay, but at that time as I comforted a girl laying injured on the ground all I could think about was that it really wasn’t going to be ok, and even him stopping to tell me that it would be wouldn’t change my mind. Not this time, because I thought that all my friends were going to die, I was afraid of what might happen to my family and most of all what would happen to him. Everyone knew that he would stop at nothing to end this war even if it meant he himself was going to have to give up his life. Now all I can remember clearly of that night is that I was thinking, begging him in my mind to stop and tell me that he loved me. |
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03-21-2008, 02:08 PM
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| Where's my tag?!?! Kneazle
Location: w/ da WDRTSTDTWOWWMD Join Date: Feb 2008
Posts: 3,039
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexandra (Allie) Johnson First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Becca Malison Accidents & Catastrophes | i LUVED that post!!! now im completly sure its Ginny...mostly cause i just read that part in DH...
CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!
actually i dont have my break untill april!!! but thanx anyway!!!
~Becca~
Last edited by HPobsession33 : 03-21-2008 at 02:14 PM.
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03-21-2008, 05:04 PM
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| | Bowtruckle
Location: texas(: Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 259
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Originally Posted by HPobsession33 i LUVED that post!!! now im completly sure its Ginny | i agree(:
love it!  |
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03-22-2008, 12:43 AM
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| | Hippocampus
Location: In my mind Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 276
Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | Quote:
Originally Posted by HPobsession33 i LUVED that post!!! now im completly sure its Ginny | I agree with both of you
I love it
Pams
LOve VoldyXOXOXOXOXOX |
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03-22-2008, 02:22 AM
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| | Faerie
Location: turn around.... Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 3,927
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexandra (Alex) Leann Morgan Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cassandra (Cassie) Serena Carter Magical Law Enforcement | I triple agree! It must be Ginny, it couldn't be anyone else!
Great post, as always, you're an amazing writer!
Can't wait for more, PAMS! |
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03-23-2008, 05:45 PM
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| | Skrewt
Location: on SS Join Date: Jul 2005
Posts: 1,312
Ministry RPG Name:
Liliana Hayman Magical Transportation | HAPPY EASTER EVERYONE!!
I'll have a new post for you all as soon as I can |
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03-24-2008, 10:36 PM
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| Where's my tag?!?! Kneazle
Location: w/ da WDRTSTDTWOWWMD Join Date: Feb 2008
Posts: 3,039
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexandra (Allie) Johnson First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Becca Malison Accidents & Catastrophes | ooo.....i feel very special right now cause every one agreed with me 
HAPPY EASTER to you too!
~Becca~ |
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03-26-2008, 01:47 AM
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| | Hippocampus
Location: my caged mind Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 304
Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurora Jullian Marks | new reader i think i know who it is
is it ynnig? |
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03-27-2008, 09:05 PM
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| | Skrewt
Location: on SS Join Date: Jul 2005
Posts: 1,312
Ministry RPG Name:
Liliana Hayman Magical Transportation | Quote:
Originally Posted by HPobsession33 i LUVED that post!!! now im completly sure its Ginny...mostly cause i just read that part in DH...
CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!
actually i dont have my break untill april!!! but thanx anyway!!!
~Becca~ | Yes it is Ginny. My goal for this FF was to go through the entire thing without mentioning any names, I've tried that before but never really been able to do it.
Well then, have fun on your break in April. Quote:
Originally Posted by HPobsession33 ooo.....i feel very special right now cause every one agreed with me 
HAPPY EASTER to you too!
~Becca~ | Quote:
Originally Posted by kidpotter i agree(:
love it!  | Thanks Quote:
Originally Posted by voldemort&88
I agree with both of you
I love it
Pams
LOve VoldyXOXOXOXOXOX | You were right to agree with them Quote:
Originally Posted by moonchic07 I triple agree! It must be Ginny, it couldn't be anyone else!
Great post, as always, you're an amazing writer!
Can't wait for more, PAMS! | Thanks, that means A LOT to me Quote:
Originally Posted by TriwizardChamp12 i think i know who it is
is it ynnig? | Yes, it is Ginny _____________________________________
Hey everyone,
Yes it is Ginny
This is going to be the last post for this FF, I said at the begining it was originally supposed to be a one shot, but I decided to spilt it up. Sorry it's so short!!
Here's a list of my FF's that I have right now; Till It's Over sa-13+
-You know what this one is about! After All We've Been Through sa-13+
-This one is about the stuggles (only at the begining) after the war. It's H/G and R/HR. Fred is in this one as a ghost at the begining. I'm Only Me When I'm With You
-This is a one shot based on the song I'm Only Me When I'm With You by Taylor Swift. Curiousity
-This is my newest FF, and it's dedicated to moonchic07 (Khristina) It is about the second generation, it starts off with them getting sorted and then it is going to skip to the 6th or 7th year. Spinning In Slow Motion
-This is finished. I wrote it a over a year ago, so it's about the Potters children before we knew their names. ___________________________________________
So here's the last part of this story. I hope you all like it, and let me know what you think 
<3 Jenn |
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03-27-2008, 09:06 PM
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| | Skrewt
Location: on SS Join Date: Jul 2005
Posts: 1,312
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Liliana Hayman Magical Transportation | People ask me now if I could have changed any of it, but I don’t think I would have. Looking back, I wouldn’t have wanted to change anything. There was times that I wished things were different, times that I wished we could be together, even times I wished I’d been born at a different time just so we could be together.
Tomorrow is my wedding; my wish that I have held onto since I was 11 years old has finally come true. Through my family and friends, I have been able to get through everything that has come my way. The loss of a brother and a loss of friends still affects me deeply but, I’ve learned with every bad thing comes something good. I have niece now and a nephew on the way. Even when darkness is seeming to take over everything, happiness can be found in the weirdest of places, you just have to be patient and wait for them to come to you. |
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03-27-2008, 10:34 PM
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| Where's my tag?!?! Kneazle
Location: w/ da WDRTSTDTWOWWMD Join Date: Feb 2008
Posts: 3,039
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexandra (Allie) Johnson First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Becca Malison Accidents & Catastrophes | imm sad that this is the last chapter but i really loved how you ended it♥
your such a good writer!!
~Becca~ |
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03-27-2008, 10:38 PM
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| | Faerie
Location: turn around.... Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 3,927
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexandra (Alex) Leann Morgan Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cassandra (Cassie) Serena Carter Magical Law Enforcement | Awww, great amazing post, I can't believe it's over, but I can understand why it is. Sigh, Ginny is awesome, I absolutely love her.
Sorry I can't think of anything funny to say right now, and if I try it will be absolute rubbish, hehe love that word, rubbish, lol.
Anyway again great post, now we just have to wait for more posts on your other fan fics. |
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03-28-2008, 03:54 PM
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| | Hippocampus
Location: my caged mind Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 304
Hogwarts RPG Name: Aurora Jullian Marks | i hate the end of things 
but y would she want to change wat happened
she got him in the end |
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03-29-2008, 01:46 AM
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| | Hippocampus
Location: In my mind Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 276
Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | I will keep on readeing ur other fan fics because u are one of the best fan fac writers ever!!!!
Love u lots it was a perfect ending by the way
VoldyXOXOXOXO |
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