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Old 08-22-2007, 03:10 AM   #76 (permalink)
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aww well it's ok just make it worth the wait lol n i'm sure it will b by the way u write can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I am so sorry about not posting again for so long. I deserve to be hit in the face with a large trout (okay, my bff's phrase, not mine). I got my computer back a few days ago and I've just been going through a lot like my parent's just got divorced and all of this stuff. But I'm ready to try and write some more, so I'll post another chapter soon.
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Chapter 13, I Need You
I was confused, what was he talking about? Were they finally coming for us? How I hoped so, I wanted to get out of here as soon as possible. I picked up Cecelia and walked toward the corner of the room and dropped to my knees, sitting Indian style. I just held the sleeping baby to my chest, being thankful that she is okay. Thats when I heard it.

The noise of incoming footsteps, sounding more hurried than usual. I heard a muttered spell and my heart was beating so fast that i thought it would burst. Then i saw the door be blown off it's hinges. I was so happy and i rushed over to him, giving him a hug. Cecelia's eyes shined in happiness and she lifted her arms up to be picked up by her daddy. He picked up her squrming body and hugged her close. I smiled at his eyes glazed with happiness at seeing us again.

"Hermione, you and Cecelia need to get out of here! Ginny is waiting outside to lead you into the forest to apparate. You need to go!" he said, handing CeeCee back to me. But i wasn't moving.

"I don't want to leave you again! What if something happens, I've already thought you were dead once!" he took my face in his hands, and spoke to me in a gently, commanding voice.

"Its too dangerous here and I'll be fine, I'm Harry Potter." he said confidently. i smiled at that and we ran out into the battle. Harry hit anybody who was a Death Eater that came anywhere near us. He lead us toward the forest where i saw Ginny and then turned around and went right back to fighting. i ran and embraced her, feeling her dark red hair on my shoulder.

"I've missed you so much, Gin!" I said, tears pouring from my eyes. I was so glad to be out of that prison and away from the battle.

"I'm so glad your both okay! I've really needed you lately since when i found out..." and i grinned as Ginny took CeeCee from my arms and kissed her nose.

"Ah, yes, congrats on the new baby. I just want you to know, that you helped me with CeeCee so much. that i will be there for you every step of the way for the next nine months." she smiled slightly,

"Eight months you mean.I'm already a month preganant." she said and we walked until we apprated back to Grimmauld's Place.We slowly walked up the stairs into CeeCee's room, opening the door gently.

"Its so strange how we both got preganant at around the same age." she said as we put down CeeCee for a nap.She grinned up at us and snuggled down in her crib. We walked back down the same stairs and into the kitchen to drink some relaxing tea.

"There must be something in the water or something." i joked, looking into my tea and she laughed, while the pieces of a once broken life was put back together again.
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I was so happy when i saw him come through the door. I jumped and kissed him, not wanting to let him go ever again. we laid on the our bed, just looking into each other's eyes. I touched his face gently and grinned at him.

"I've missed you so much, Harry. I had a lot of time to think about you and I missed the way I felt when I was with you. I needed you so bad." I whispered , laying my head on his chest, listening to the steady beat of his heart.

He smiled down at me and kissed me lightly on the lips,

"I love you and I'll always need you."

- Like a needle needs a vein
Like my uncle Joe in Oklahoma needs the rain
I need you like a lighthouse on the coast
Like the father and the son need the holy ghost
I need you

I wanna get lost in some corner booth
Cantina Mexico
I wanna dance to the static of an AM radio
I wanna wrap the moon around us and lay beside you skin on skin
Make love 'til the sun comes up 'til the sun goes down again
‘Cause I need you

Like a needle needs a vein
Like my uncle Joe in Oklahoma needs the rain
I need you
Like a lighthouse on the coast
Like the father and the son need the holy ghost
I need you
oooohhhhh I need you-*
*Tim McGraw and Faith Hill-I Need You


I AM SOOOOO SORRY FOR NEGLECTING THIS FF! I have been muy ocupada, or very busy! I'll post as soon as possible!
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Old 10-30-2007, 12:45 AM   #82 (permalink)
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Sorry, I'm pretty slow...but I'm just very stressed and I'm working hard on the last two chapters (yeah, there's only two more!).
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New reader...great story i really like it.
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its okay i should say sorry to schools keeping me busy i get on rp then leave.Great post.
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Chapter 14, In My Daughter's Eyes

I remember Ginny's wedding very well. It's kinda hard not to remember such a beautiful and romantic wedding. She was in a simple white, strapeless dress. It fit her like a glove and she had her hair curled with pearl hair pins to keep it out of her face. As a bridesmaid, I wore an off the shoulder purple dress and baby CeCe wore a deep green dress that matched her eyes beautifully.

I stood off to the side, watching and listening to Ginny and Draco's vows and grinning as they kissed for the first time as husband and wife. It was a beautiful, perfect wedding and I was so happy for them. For the next months, it was strange seeing a small, thin women like Ginny get bigger every day. It reminded me so much of when i was pregnant with Cecelia except I wasn't the one experiencing it. When the big day came, everyone was in a bit of a panic especially the mom to be...

Me and Ginny apparated to St. Mungo's as soon as the contractions had started. Harry got her bags and apprated to Draco to bring him to the hospital and the rest of the family came within minutes. Ginny was put into a room, big enough for all of us to fit in. Ginny was rambling with worries,

"What if something goes wrong? What if...?" I put my hand on her hand and looked her in the eye.

"Nothing is going to go wrong. This baby is going to be perfect because its your baby. Your going to be an amazing mother, so stop worrying." I said smiling and she smiled back.When the contractions started up again though, I was afraid to be in that room. I remembered the pain so I couldn't blame her. When it was time to have the baby, everybody including me had to leave. Draco and Mrs.Weasley were the only two allowed in the delivery room. We sat for hours, finding strange things to occupy ourselves with including truth or dare.But it didn't matter because we were all preoccupied about one thing. Everybody jumped up when Draco ran out of the hospital with a big grin. His hair was messy but he had bright, pink cheeks from happiness.

"Its a boy! He's perfect!" he said loudly. We all followed him to Ginny's room where she was holding a beautiful baby boy. She looked so happy with her new baby that she had tears in her eyes.

"His name is Erik Arthur Malfoy. Isn't he so precious?" He had bright blonde hair just like his daddy and hazel eyes. I walked toward him and Ginny let me hold him.

"He's so small!" I exclaimed and she laughed and I gently gave him back to her."I want you and Harry to be the godparent because you were there for us whenever we needed you. We couldn't ask for a better friend." I smiled and accepted and we hugged. It was a perfect day for all of us. Harry, Cecelia and I went back home for some well-needed sleep. I walked into Cecelia's nursery and sat in the wooden rocking chair. I sat with my beautiful baby girl, with her bright green eyes shining happily. I rocked her slowly and gently while singing her a lullaby.


"In my daughter's eyes I am a hero
I am strong and wise and I know no fear
But the truth is plain to see
She was sent to rescue me
I see who I wanna be
In my daughter's eyes

In my daughter's eyes everyone is equal
Darkness turns to light and the
world is at peace
This miracle God gave to me gives me
strength when I am weak
I find reason to believe
In my daughter's eyes

And when she wraps her hand
around my finger
Oh it puts a smile in my heart
Everything becomes a little clearer
I realize what life is all about

It's hangin' on when your heart
has had enough
It's giving more when you feel like giving up
I've seen the light
It's in my daugter's eyes

In my daughter's eyes I can see the future
A reflection of who I am and what will be
Though she'll grow and someday leave
Maybe raise a family
When I'm gone I hope you see how happy
she made me
For I'll be there
In my daughter's eyes"*

She fell softly asleep in my arms and I put her gently into her crib. Harry walked up behind me and stood next to me, just watching Cecelia sleep. He put his arm around my waist and led me out of the nursery. I smiled at him and we went to bed, without a care or a worry, suprisingly.

Its so strange how my life had turned out. I wonder how my 11 year old self would react to how my life ended up. I became a witch, a friend, a wife and a mother in my seven years at Hogwarts and now being out of school, it makes me realize that our little choices change everything including your fate.I have had an impossible love,an everlasting love and even a shattered love in the last few years.

But it has shaped who I have become and who stands here, next to one of my best friends, with her bright eyes and red cheeks, is the happiest person in the world with her new child. Even though she has only been a mother for a few days, I strongly believe that she will be a fantastic mother because she cares so much about the people around her. I picked up Cecelia and brought her closer to the new baby, Erik Arthur Malfoy, and she smiled her cute little baby smile. She stretched her arms out toward Erik and he opened his little eyes and smiled his first smile. Its very odd for such a young baby to smile but he did. Ginny looked curiously at me with the same thought.I spoke the quesion with a grin on my face.

"Could it be future puppy love?" I asked.Ginny chuckled and shook her head,

"It wouldn't suprise me, not at all."


THE END...OR IS IT?????

* In My Daughter's Eyes by Martina McBride

I just really want to thank all of my devoted readers for reading Impossible Love, Everlasting Love and Shattered Love! You guys are amazing! There is a possibility that I will make a fourth one titled Puppy Love with my two youngest characters (Cecelia and Erik). I'm just keeping the opprotunity open! But sadly, the three part story of Hermione Jane Granger-Potter and Harry James Potter is over. Hope you enjoyed it!
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Yeah, most newborns don't smile unless it's gas-related (that's what my mom told me when I was at work with her in the maternity ward at the local hospital). You should said he smiled, and suddenly he let out a large rip after Hermione said 'could it be future puppy love?' That would've been funny...
But it's possible, just rare. I saw a newborn smile, but about 5 minutes later he coughed, so that might've been it. Dunno.

That was cute I hope you do make Puppy Love; that would be another great F.F!
Awesome job with the ending b.t.w. And the entire f.f in general.

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Thanks so much Sarah! I thought about putting something about the smile being related to gas but I ended up not doing it. I really want to do Puppy Love but I'm still thinking of a good plot.

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It was such a lovley last post.I can't wait for Puppu Love that would be really good.Yeah I agree with Sarah on the 'when a baby smiles its just gas thing'.Awesome story.
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awwww it's over ='[ but i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!
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Absolutely perfect. This is a great story. I really enjoyed this. Thanks so much, Danielle.
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