sitemap
Visit The Official WB Shop!

Members

There are 480 users online including...
Crystal Ball , Samia , EquestrianGal88 , amy_b , Waddles , Gryffindoll , Tomasina Riddle , Boys Like Ama , pgspickles , the.time.is.now

76 members
404 guests.

Members in Chat:
BertieBot, Gildebot_LockHart


If this is your first visit, be sure to check out the FAQ by clicking the link above. You may have to register before you can post: click the register link above to proceed. To start viewing messages, select the forum that you want to visit from the selection below.

  Register Rules and FAQ Search
Go Back   SnitchSeeker.com > Forums > Diagon Alley > Gringotts Wizarding Bank (FanWorks) > The Gringotts Vaults > Finished Fan Fics
Finished Fan Fics Want to read a story but don't want to wait around for updates? Look no further than the Finished Fan Fics section. Here you will find completed stories rated pSa to Sa13+, from our talented SS authors.

Vote for SS!

 
 
Thread Tools
Old 11-16-2003, 05:11 PM   #1 (permalink)
Slytherin
 
Mysti's Avatar
 
Location: Now why do you wanna know that?
Join Date: Dec 2002
Posts: 684
Send a message via AIM to Mysti
Default Losing Him - Sa13+

From her seat Hermione watched Harry peering out of the window pane,squinting through the rain to see if he could see-
"Harry,stop it!He's not there!You and your paranoia."Ron's last statement drifted into a whisper.Hermione could tell he was scared,too.
Everyone was.It had been two years since the incident in the Deparment of Mysteries.In those two years,Voldemort had risen farther than he ever had in the old terror days,with nothing to prevent him.The Order of the Phoenix was too busy trying to hide Harry.When they finally realized that Hogwarts was the only safe place left,they moved him back here.This was the first time Hermione had seen him in nine months.
I've missed him so much,Hermione thought as she walked over to Harry.
"Harry?"She said softly.Harry lifted his head,and Hermione gasped softly at his tear-streaked face.
"Oh,Hermione,"His voice was little more than a murmur,"He is coming.I can feel it."
"Harry,shhh."Hermione sat beside him,heart turning to lead as she realized that Harry knew what his fate would be.He would defeat Voldemort.But he would never be able to bask in the glory.His loss was too much.
Hermione jumped as a noticible weight fell onto her lap.She looked down,surprised at the sight of Harry's head.
"Hermione,we're gonna win.But why don't I feel like I'll survive?"
Mysti is offline  
Old 11-22-2003, 04:19 AM   #2 (permalink)
Slytherin
 
Mysti's Avatar
 
Location: Now why do you wanna know that?
Join Date: Dec 2002
Posts: 684
Send a message via AIM to Mysti
Default

For the umpteenth time that day,Ron did a double take as he glanced at Harry.Everyone but the boy in question had noticed his scar glowing steadily brighter every day;today was a pulsing red.
Ron's attention strayed away from the scar,he was finding it hard to look at.He instead turned his gaze over Hermione.A surprising surge of jealousy blinded him as he caught her staring at Harry.
She's worried,Ron thought sensibly,We all are.Every day Harry drifts farther away,ever since...
Ron cringed as he remember that awful night.
"Ron"Harry's harsh voice rang clear through his head.He turned to the boy,proud of the strong light convulsing in the bright green eyes that bore holes into his own.
"Yessir"Ron said,then winced at the shudder that racked his body.He watched the cracked lips twitch downward;he could expect a scolding from Hermione later.
The laughter that echoed through the hall was loud,certainly unexpected.
"You-you just called me SIR!"Harry laughed again,and for once he did not gain stares.People smiled in wonder.Many had never heard Harry utter a word since his return.
Ron mouth curved upward as Hermione cried,"How silly of you,Ron!"
Soon the hall was ringing with laughter,but only one notice that the laughs did not escape Harry's lips.



Really not the best I've ever doen,but I promise it'll get better.
Mysti is offline  
Old 11-22-2003, 04:27 AM   #3 (permalink)
Gryffindor
 
HarryPotterFreak119's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2003
Posts: 595
Send a message via AIM to HarryPotterFreak119
Default

OMG!! OMG!!! OMG!!!! this is sOoOoOoOoOoOo GOOD!!!! post more soon!!!!!!! pleaz i need more!!! WOW!! this is so good!!
HarryPotterFreak119 is offline  
Old 11-22-2003, 04:30 AM   #4 (permalink)
Banned
 
HarryPotterfreak82's Avatar
 
Location: in the twilight zone doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Join Date: Oct 2003
Posts: 10,265
Send a message via AIM to HarryPotterfreak82 Send a message via MSN to HarryPotterfreak82 Send a message via Yahoo to HarryPotterfreak82
Default

Has Harry gone mad?

Great story
HarryPotterfreak82 is offline  
Old 11-22-2003, 04:37 AM   #5 (permalink)
Gryffindor
 
Zettie's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2003
Posts: 527
Send a message via AIM to Zettie Send a message via MSN to Zettie
Default

Oooh...I like it. Not saying much for two years has to be hard. Keep up the good work by posting.
Zettie is offline  
Old 11-22-2003, 04:52 AM   #6 (permalink)
Hufflepuff
 
Location: San Antonio,Texas
Join Date: Aug 2003
Posts: 246
Send a message via AIM to lilo-n-stitch
Default

PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS pAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!!!!Your story is great write more!!!! :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:
lilo-n-stitch is offline  
Old 11-22-2003, 04:53 AM   #7 (permalink)
Banned
 
HarryPotterfreak82's Avatar
 
Location: in the twilight zone doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Join Date: Oct 2003
Posts: 10,265
Send a message via AIM to HarryPotterfreak82 Send a message via MSN to HarryPotterfreak82 Send a message via Yahoo to HarryPotterfreak82
Default

okay okay this may sund stupid but what does pams and bump mean exactly? Please don't laugh
HarryPotterfreak82 is offline  
Old 11-22-2003, 04:54 AM   #8 (permalink)
Slytherin
 
Mysti's Avatar
 
Location: Now why do you wanna know that?
Join Date: Dec 2002
Posts: 684
Send a message via AIM to Mysti
Default

wow!
Mysti is offline  
Old 11-22-2003, 04:57 AM   #9 (permalink)
Gryffindor
 
HarryPotterFreak119's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2003
Posts: 595
Send a message via AIM to HarryPotterFreak119
Default

PAMS meanz plz add more soon but i*m not sure exactly wat BUMPS meanz but it meanz sumthin bout add more soon. BTW add more soon mysti!!
HarryPotterFreak119 is offline  
Old 11-22-2003, 04:59 AM   #10 (permalink)
Slytherin
 
nsyncrockerchic's Avatar
 
Location: Minneapolis, Minnesota
Join Date: Jun 2003
Posts: 3,819
Default

Bump!
nsyncrockerchic is offline  
Old 11-22-2003, 04:59 AM   #11 (permalink)
Banned
 
HarryPotterfreak82's Avatar
 
Location: in the twilight zone doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Join Date: Oct 2003
Posts: 10,265
Send a message via AIM to HarryPotterfreak82 Send a message via MSN to HarryPotterfreak82 Send a message via Yahoo to HarryPotterfreak82
Default

thankies!!!
HarryPotterfreak82 is offline  
Old 11-22-2003, 05:00 AM   #12 (permalink)
Banned
 
HarryPotterfreak82's Avatar
 
Location: in the twilight zone doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Join Date: Oct 2003
Posts: 10,265
Send a message via AIM to HarryPotterfreak82 Send a message via MSN to HarryPotterfreak82 Send a message via Yahoo to HarryPotterfreak82
Default

Quote:
Originally posted by nsyncrockerchic@Nov 21 2003, 11:39 PM
Bump!
what does bump mean? oh plz plz write soon
HarryPotterfreak82 is offline  
Old 11-22-2003, 05:43 AM   #13 (permalink)
Slytherin
 
Mysti's Avatar
 
Location: Now why do you wanna know that?
Join Date: Dec 2002
Posts: 684
Send a message via AIM to Mysti
Default

geez,you people are amazing.I updated this tonight and I've got like six responses.so thanx guys.here's more.(btw:Harry isn't crazy,just..detatched.)



Draco Malfoy leaned against a wall,the laughter ripping into his mind given no heed as he stared at Harry Potter.Though Weasley hadn't noticed,or anybody else for that matter,Harry had stopped laughing.Confusion was thickly wrapped around him,Harry was staring about with wide eyes.Draco's brow crinkled even as Dumbledore called for silence.
He straightened as the hall quieted.He could understand Harry's horror and confusion.The teens,his friends,all that surrounded him,their laughter was high and unnatural,strained with grief.
Draco's face twisted sharply as his right arm shook.He glanced at the stump it ended in,sending a thousand curses at Harry.
It was then that Harry swerved to look at Draco.There lied the pain and sorrow that Draco had to finally face.It was there.It was real.
And how did he respond?Like any well-bred Malfoy.With so much anger in his glare that the lightning scar on his foe's head glowed a bright orange,the flared out,losing all color.
Draco felt his emotions tumble as he let it go and looked away.It was getting to be too much.That he never helped.Anyone.He felt so useless,what was the point.There was only one thing that anchored him to this earth.
Harry.
In the end,Draco knew he would follow Harry.To his glory.To his doom.It didn't matter.It wasn't about him.It was about Harry.
It was always about Harry.And Draco hated the world for that.We're all 17,his mind screamed.No matter how high we are held in esteem,we don't know how to deal.
And Draco was left to battle his insecurities.But not alone.The Boy Who Lived was right there with him,coaching him on.
"You can do it,Malfoy."
Yeah,I can do it,Potter.
Mysti is offline  
Old 11-22-2003, 05:47 AM   #14 (permalink)
Slytherin
 
Mysti's Avatar
 
Location: Now why do you wanna know that?
Join Date: Dec 2002
Posts: 684
Send a message via AIM to Mysti
Default

i'm off for tonight,so see y'all tomm.
Mysti is offline  
Old 11-22-2003, 05:51 AM   #15 (permalink)
Banned
 
HarryPotterfreak82's Avatar
 
Location: in the twilight zone doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Join Date: Oct 2003
Posts: 10,265
Send a message via AIM to HarryPotterfreak82 Send a message via MSN to HarryPotterfreak82 Send a message via Yahoo to HarryPotterfreak82
Default

What happened to Draco's arm? good job pams (now that I learned what it meens)
HarryPotterfreak82 is offline  
Old 11-22-2003, 05:52 AM   #16 (permalink)
Slytherin
 
nsyncrockerchic's Avatar
 
Location: Minneapolis, Minnesota
Join Date: Jun 2003
Posts: 3,819
Default

Bump!
nsyncrockerchic is offline  
Old 11-22-2003, 08:22 PM   #17 (permalink)
Ravenclaw
 
Join Date: Sep 2003
Posts: 475
Send a message via AIM to clrgrdHPfan713
Default

This is really good so far. Keep it up!!

you've already gotten more replies with your ff than mine did!!....of course...they stopped reading mine....
clrgrdHPfan713 is offline  
Old 11-22-2003, 08:41 PM   #18 (permalink)
Slytherin
 
Mysti's Avatar
 
Location: Now why do you wanna know that?
Join Date: Dec 2002
Posts: 684
Send a message via AIM to Mysti
Default

hey i'm on a tight schedule.this is gonna be short.



Hermione sighed as she lay down on her bed.
"It's a bit strange,"she heard a sob.
"Lavender?"she pulled back her curtains on the crying girl.Lavender looked up,covering her puffed eyes with her hands.
"Are you alright?'Hermione asked as she took a seat beside the girl.Lavender furiously shook her head.
"No.For the first time in nine months a heard Harry talk.But it was wrong.Wrong,wrong,wrong!"she cried angrily,mashing her forehead with tightly-balled fists.
"Lavender,"Hermione cooed,stroking her arm sympatheticlly(s/p?),"Lavender,what's wrong?Weren't you happy?"
"Hermione!You're his best friend.Didn't you see it?!"Lavender's babbling was starting to make some kind of terrible sense,but Hermione felt the need to hear it voiced,so she probed further.
"What?"
Lavender blubbering stopped so suddenly Hermione thought she had fainted.She gave her a shake,jumping with a start when Lavender pulled away and stood up.
"I don't believe it.You didn't see it."
Hermione's mouth twisted in horror as Lavender walked away.She closed her eyes briefly,then opened them.
"No,you're wrong,Lavender.Harry does not know that he is going to die!"
Mysti is offline  
Old 11-22-2003, 08:46 PM   #19 (permalink)
Banned
 
HarryPotterfreak82's Avatar
 
Location: in the twilight zone doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
Join Date: Oct 2003
Posts: 10,265
Send a message via AIM to HarryPotterfreak82 Send a message via MSN to HarryPotterfreak82 Send a message via Yahoo to HarryPotterfreak82
Default

What? I'm confused! Harry die!!!!!!!!!!! nooooooooo this is good super good no super super super good read my ff's

There goes my hero
Truth is true until discovered
Unnoticed
The lost girl
Sail away into your dreams!
HarryPotterfreak82 is offline  
Old 11-23-2003, 01:30 AM   #20 (permalink)
Hufflepuff
 
Location: San Antonio,Texas
Join Date: Aug 2003
Posts: 246
Send a message via AIM to lilo-n-stitch
Default

Quote:
Originally posted by HarryPotterfreak82+Nov 21 2003, 11:40 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (HarryPotterfreak82 @ Nov 21 2003, 11:40 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nsyncrockerchic@Nov 21 2003, 11:39 PM
Bump!
what does bump mean? oh plz plz write soon [/b][/quote]
b-? I forgot wat the b meant :flowersmile:
u-update
m-more
p-pleaz
lilo-n-stitch is offline  
Old 11-23-2003, 01:35 AM   #21 (permalink)
Gryffindor
 
TrickC's Avatar
 
Location: at home dreaming about tom felton!!
Join Date: Oct 2003
Posts: 1,269
Send a message via AIM to TrickC Send a message via MSN to TrickC
Default

i thought bump ment

b-but
u- u
m- must
p- post
TrickC is offline  
Old 11-25-2003, 02:21 AM   #22 (permalink)
Ravenclaw
 
Join Date: Sep 2003
Posts: 475
Send a message via AIM to clrgrdHPfan713
Default

wow.
clrgrdHPfan713 is offline  
Old 11-26-2003, 02:52 AM   #23 (permalink)
Gryffindor
 
HarryPotterFreak119's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2003
Posts: 595
Send a message via AIM to HarryPotterFreak119
Default

OMG SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!! post more soon!!!!!!
HarryPotterFreak119 is offline  
Old 11-26-2003, 03:55 AM   #24 (permalink)
Hufflepuff
 
Location: San Antonio,Texas
Join Date: Aug 2003
Posts: 246
Send a message via AIM to lilo-n-stitch
Default

Quote:
Originally posted by TrickC@Nov 22 2003, 08:15 PM
i thought bump ment

b-but
u- u
m- must
p- post
no it doesn't mean that(I hope that didn't sound mean)
lilo-n-stitch is offline  
Old 11-26-2003, 03:56 AM   #25 (permalink)
Hufflepuff
 
Location: San Antonio,Texas
Join Date: Aug 2003
Posts: 246
Send a message via AIM to lilo-n-stitch
Default

but you can make it watever you want!
lilo-n-stitch is offline  
 


Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are Off


All times are GMT. The time now is 01:07 AM.


This Harry Potter fans website is not endorsed by Hogwarts, Harry Potter, J.K. Rowling, Warner Bros, Dan Radcliffe, Emma Watson, Rupert Grint, Quidditch, Wizards, Muggles, Video Games, X-Box, Half-Blood Princes, Orders of the Phoenix, Goblets of Fire, Philosophers Stones, Chambers of Secret, DVD's or any other official Harry Potter source.

All content is copyright ©2002 - 2006, SnitchSeeker.com unless stated otherwise.

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.6.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
LinkBacks Enabled by vBSEO 3.0.1 © 2007, Crawlability, Inc.
Site designed by Richard Harris Design

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35