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05-31-2007, 04:52 PM
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| | Erumpent
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|  Invisible - Sa13+
hey everyone! This is my 12th FF here on SS and its my 4th One Shot. So sit back, relax and enjoy!
XOXO,
Tara
This FF includes lyrics to the song Invisible by Clay Aiken.
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“Draco Malfoy,” Dumbledore called before thousands of people.
Today just so happens to be graduation day. It also is probably the last day I will ever see her again.
To her, I’m probably just invisible. I’ve been in love with her ever since I laid eyes on the brunette beauty. But of course she probably didn’t love me. Because to her, I’m invisible.
I walked up onto the stage and received my diploma, shook Dumbledore’s hand and went to sit back down in my seat which happens to be next to my love, Hermione Granger.
As all the other names are called, I think back to the past seven years. School has really been horrible, not being able to be with her. I used to have to be mean to her and call her names just to hide my true feelings for her. God, life is hard as a Malfoy.
It’s hard. I’m forbidden to even befriend anyone outside the pureblood line. I’d rather be invisible than be a Malfoy. Oh wait, to Hermione, I already am. And she’s the only person that matters.
Whatcha’ doin’ tonight
I wish I could be a fly on your wall
Are you really alone
Who's stealin' your dreams
Why can't I bring you into my life
What would it take to make you see that I'm alive
If I was invisible
Then I could just watch you in your room
If I was invincible
I'd make you mine tonight
If hearts were unbreakable
Then I could just tell you where I stand
I would be the smartest man
If I was invisible
(Wait..I already am)
Saw your face in the crowd
I call out your name
You don't hear a sound
I keep tracing your steps
Each move that you make
Wish I could read what goes through your mind
Wish you could touch me with the colors of your life
If I was invisible
Then I could just watch you in your room
If I was invincible
I'd make you mine tonight
If hearts were unbreakable
Then I can just tell you where I stand
I would be the smartest man
If I was invisible
(Wait..I already am)
I reach out
But you don't even see me
Even when I scream out
Baby, you don't hear me
I am nothing without you
Just a shadow passing through...
If I was invisible...
If I was invisible...
If I was invisible...
If I was invisible...
If I was invisible...
If I was invisible...
If I was invisible
Then I could just watch you in your room
If I was invincible
I'd make you mine tonight
If hearts were unbreakable
Then I could just tell you where I stand
I would be the smartest man
If I was invisible
(Wait..I already am)
That muggle song is practically my theme song. I sat there repeating that song over and over in my head until my mother came and awoke me from my sadness, letting me know it was time to leave and that graduation had ended. I looked around and no one was there but mother and I. Everyone else had already left. Including Hermione. I was on the verge of tears. But I sucked it up and realized that to Hermione Jane Granger, all I’d ever be was invisible.
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Last edited by DanIsMyMan : 06-01-2007 at 12:28 PM.
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05-31-2007, 08:16 PM
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|  Tom: did I mention hott?Crup
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EDIT: Oh yeah and I WAS FIRST TO POST!!! YEAH!!
THAT WAS SO SAD!!!!
YET SO GOOD!!!!!!
You should make a sequel!! lol!! I know you cant cause it is a one shot but you should!! lol!! I hate sad endings!!
Great job!!!! I loved it!!
PS This is your 12 FANFIC?!?!?!?! OMG!!! Where have i been?? this summer i have got to read all of them!! lol!! I promise!!
EDIT: Oh yeah and just to tell ya I WAS FIRST TO POST IN YOUR ONE SHOT!!! YEAH!! LOL!
Last edited by dracosmine** : 05-31-2007 at 08:19 PM.
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05-31-2007, 08:27 PM
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| | Erumpent
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lol thanx! glad ya liked it  | |
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05-31-2007, 08:50 PM
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OMG! I loved it *dies* That was really, really good Tara!  | |
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05-31-2007, 09:03 PM
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| Formerly: DracosTheBest HSFC Games Officer
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Snape is my man!Faerie
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*tear* Aww! That was sad! But I loved it! Awesome job Tara!  | |
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05-31-2007, 10:27 PM
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| Fan Fiction Elf Crup
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Aw, that was so sad! 
Awesome story, and a great story! I LOVED it!
Who sings that song? (Invisible) | |
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05-31-2007, 10:31 PM
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|  I'm back! Kappa
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Quote:
Originally Posted by MalfoyzBeloved 
Who sings that song? (Invisible)
| Clay Aiken.
Grammatically speaking though it should be if I were invincible. | |
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05-31-2007, 11:43 PM
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Snape is my man!Troll
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That's an awesome one-shot! But sad, too. Very sad. Not being to hold the one you love. | |
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06-01-2007, 12:20 AM
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| | Erumpent
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thanx everyone!
oops! forgot to say who sings the song! | |
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06-01-2007, 01:45 AM
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aww that was soo sad but it was really good 
good job!
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06-01-2007, 10:57 AM
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Aww Draco is so loveable!
A Masterpiece yet again Mah Tara!
PAMS! 
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06-01-2007, 12:27 PM
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| | Erumpent
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thanx mah Bells and mah Hollie! | |
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06-01-2007, 09:05 PM
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| DA News Officer Bicorn
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awww....poor Dracikins....you're not invisib;e to ME! I love you! Beautiful one-shot Tara!
Katie | |
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06-02-2007, 12:03 AM
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I think my heart just broke! Poor Draco! This makes me want to hug him! | |
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06-02-2007, 01:08 PM
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| | Erumpent
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thanx yall! | |
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06-03-2007, 09:51 AM
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good beging .PAMS
~Heather~ | |
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06-04-2007, 12:48 PM
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| | Erumpent
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thanx, but its not a begining, its the story ;] | |
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