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Floo14 · 07-28-2006, 04:00 PM

Hello everyone. My name is Nick Longdo. This is my second FanFic. As you can see, it is called "Invisible Boy, At Hogwarts". I hope that you all will enjoy it.

Prologue

Exactly fifty-three years ago, a boy went missing. This boy was John Bristol. John, was a sixth year Gryffindor. He was the Gryffindor Quidditch Captain, Seeker, and Prefect.
One stormy night, he was on duty on the second floor. He was thinking of telling Professor Dippet somthing. Something involving the Heir of Slytherin, who opened the Chamber of Secrets, who caused the death of the Muggleborn, and who set the beast, in the Chamber, after the other Muggleborns, who were now un-Petrified. He knew who really did it. It was, Tom Riddle, a Slytherin.
He had desided to tell Professor Dippet. But on the way, he felt sick. So, he walked into the boys bathroom and looked into the mirror, by the sink. He was disappearing.
"I see," said a voice behind him. "That you won't keep your mouth shut."
"Tom?" John asked.
"Of course it's me!" Tom relpied. "Who else would it be? That stupid and dead Mudblood girl, Myrtle."
"How did you know that I was going to tell Professor Dippet, about who really opened the Chamber?"
"I read your mind. I can do that, you know. I had to keep a close eye on you!" said Tom with pride.
"Are you making me disappear?" asked John.
"Yes. I am," said Tom with even more pride.
"How are you doing it, though?"
"You mean, you don't know? For a Pureblood, you're quite stupid," said Tom. "I'm using the Mirror of Slytherin, to make you disappear. Just say a name to it and they're gone in a few hours. Just like you are."
"But why are you doing this to me?" asked John.
"I have to. You know, that I'm the real Heir of Slytherin," he said. "You know, that I opened the Chamber of Secrets. You know, to much about me, that you aren't even supposed to know about."
There were a few moments of silence. Tom just watched John slowly disappear, with a smirk on his face. John was almost invisible. Tom started to laugh and said, "Amazing. Isn't it? How a Mirror can do such power. Well, I better go. Have fun, not being known never again. You will be lost forever!"
Tom chuckled and left John, to live his new life ... invisible.

AutumnSun · 07-28-2006, 05:11 PM

Yeah!! *tacklegiggleglomp* Me loves it already!!! *dances* Its toterly amazing andd I so can not wait until you post more!!!!

PS... *pokes* Your 3 months older then me and 7 1/2 inches taller then me!! *pouts* Why does everyone have to be taller then me??

Floo14 · 07-28-2006, 05:18 PM

Thanks! I'm glad that you like it.

HPlover_09 · 07-28-2006, 06:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by harrypottersummer

*pouts* Why does everyone have to be taller then me??

Blame your parents! That's always fun!

Anyway, that was a very interesting start. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Floo14 · 07-28-2006, 07:14 PM

Thank-you!

OCC:

Quote:

Originally Posted by harrypottersummer

PS... *pokes* Your 3 months older then me and 7 1/2 inches taller then me!! *pouts* Why does everyone have to be taller then me??

Yeah! Blame it on your parents. And thier parents and so on. Or you could just blame genetics!

AutumnSun · 07-28-2006, 07:39 PM

Er.. Yeah It's my mothers fault. I take after her. I look exactly like her. I'm short like her... The oly differences in appearance between her and me. I've got long,curly hair and hazel-blue eyes. So... When are you going to post some more, Nick? And I agree with Katie. Very interesting.

Floo14 · 07-28-2006, 08:22 PM

After I post something, I'm going to wait 2 days. I need time to write more of the story. I'm going to go by chapters.

carmu · 07-28-2006, 09:03 PM

hey i found ur new ff!!! go me!
this is a really great start!!!
keep up th good work!
PAMS!

Mrs Felton · 07-29-2006, 10:53 AM

Awesome start!! And thanks for the PM. PAMS!!

Floo14 · 07-29-2006, 03:27 PM

I'm glad that you like it.

secretlover101 · 07-31-2006, 11:02 AM

Wow...its really good story..I like it Alot!

miss weasley · 07-31-2006, 11:07 AM

it's brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!it's very very goood!

Floo14 · 07-31-2006, 03:18 PM

I'm glad that you like it.

OCC: I'm going to need more time to write the first chapter. I was a naughty boy and forgot to write it over the weekend. You should see more of "Invisible Boy, At Hogwarts" in a few days.

Floo14 · 08-02-2006, 02:38 PM

Harry Potter lay in his four-poster bed while Ron Weasley, Neville Longbottom, Dean Thomas, and Seamus Finnagan were fast asleep. Harry, was looking at the Marauder's Map. He saw that Dumbledore was pacing in his office, Snape was patrolling the second floor, and Filch was in his office with Mrs. Norris.
"I can't believe it," Harry thought. "That in a few weeks, the year will be over."
Yes, the year was nearly over. Students were studying for their up coming exams, teachers started pilling up the homework, and the days seemed like they would never end.
Harry looked out of the dormitory window. It was it was still raining outside. It had been for the past week. Harry had this gut feeling that something full of mystery and adventure was just around the corner, waiting for him.
Well, Harry was right. When he looked back at the Map, a name, that he had never seen before, showed up. John Bristol, was the name. "John Bristol?" Harry thought. "He isn't a teacher ... or a Prefect. The Prefects are off duty now."
Harry watched as the name, John Bristol, moved quickly through the corridors, in and out spare classrooms, and into rooms, in the third floor, that Harry never knew existed. "I better tell this ... John fellow, to get back into his House dormitory before he gets into some serious trouble."
That's what Harry did. He made his way down to the third floor, without being caught by a teacher. Harry looked at the Map, as the tip of his wand shown brightly. "According to the Map," he thought. "John should be right around this corner."
Harry quickly turned the corner. He was standing about five feet away from John,but Harry couldn't see a thing.
"Hello?" Harry whispered. "Is anyone here?"
There was no answer. Harry looked at the Map. John was no longer in the third floor. But, that wasn't the worst thing about to happen to Harry. "At least the boy was probably heading back to his dormitory," Harry thought, as he slowly walked out of the third floor, to the staircases.
"I better watch it. Snape could be anywhere by now," thought Harry. Then, he tapped the Map and said, "Mischief managed! Nox!"
Harry walked as fast and quietly as he could up to the seventh floor. But, when he reached the sixth floor, Snape jumped out from behind a corner.
"Ahh. Mr. Potter. Strutting around the school, just like your father, in the middle of the night, again? Are we now?" said a cheerful Snape.
Harry didn't reply. "So, we don't feel like talking tonight? Do we, Mr. Potter?" said Snape. "Well, I guess I'll have to take some points away from Gryffindor. Let's see, fiftey points, for strutting around the school. Another fiftey, for not answering me. And, fortey points, for not staying in your dormitory, like you're supposed to."
Harry coldn't believe it. Well, actually he could. Snape was a vile, cruel, and selfless git. But, one-hundred and fortey points! At least Snape didn't give Harry a detention. "Oh, Mr. Potter," said Snape. "I'm giving you a detention, as well. For calling me a vile, cruel, and selfless git. I see that those Occlumency lesson didn't help you at all."
Harry still said nothing. He acted like Snape wasn't there and started to leave. "Friday night. Five o'clock sharp and don't be late. You will regret it if you do."
That, was that. Harry quickly went back to his dormitory, before he got into any more trouble. He crawled back into his bed and thought, "Who's John Bristol? Why couldn't I see him? Were my eyes playing tricks on me? I'll tell Ron and Hermione in the morning."
After that, Harry fell fast asleep.

Floo14 · 08-02-2006, 02:42 PM

I'm sorry that it took so long. Enjoy!

AutumnSun · 08-02-2006, 04:35 PM

We have survived!!! Gosh poor Harry. *sporks Snape* 140 points in one night for not doing a single thing. Snape really hated James... PAMS!!!! Hey look I'm The only one!!!! T-I-Double Ga-Er.... Thats not me... oops... *runs and hides*

Mrs Felton · 08-02-2006, 04:40 PM

Haha, 140 points and detention. Snapey's brilliant. PAMS!!

Floo14 · 08-02-2006, 06:41 PM

Thanks for reading! I'll post more in a few days.

miss weasley · 08-02-2006, 06:45 PM

good but bad snape*waggles finger*

carmu · 08-02-2006, 07:07 PM

140 points n a detention?!!?
hasnt happened since 1st yr!!
bad snape!
gr8t post!
PAMS!

Floo14 · 08-02-2006, 08:24 PM

Thanks! I'm glad that you like it!

AutumnSun · 08-05-2006, 09:23 PM

*jumps up and down on her computer chair* Post!!!!!!!!! *dies* Ha!! You don't have the all mighty power of the edit button!!! *laughs* Although... you do control when you post.... Why does everything have to be against me? Yeah, yeah. Call me weird, abnormal. I don't care.... I am me and me I shall be...

Call me impatient too... Go ahead... *pouts* the days are going by slowly... only one month til school starts... I'm dying here!!! Pwease post!!! *runs away*

Post?

*evil*

*grins and runs away*

Floo14 · 08-07-2006, 02:21 PM

The next morning, Harry told Ron and Hermione everything that had happened the past night. "Then, Snape caught me. He took away one-hundred and fortey points from Gryffindor and gave me a detention."
"Harry," said Hermione. "I know that you were trying to do something good, but you shouldn't have left your Dormitory."
"Yeah," Ron agreed. "But, what I don't get, is why you couldn't see him."
"I know. For a while, he was only a few feet aw ..."
"He could've been under the Disillusionment Charm. Or ... under an Invisibility Cloak."
"Yeah. This bloke must be a Slytherin!" said Ron. "Trying to get Gryffindor into trouble."
Harry, was about to say something, but the bell rang. They had Herbology, Divination (Arithmancy for Hermione), Transfiguration, Charms, History of Magic, and Care of Magical Creatures. Harry's least favorite class, was the last class of the day. Potions!
Harry, Ron, and Hermione quickly entered the Potions room and sat down, before Snape could take away points. Snape was late for class. But, when he entered the room, the students could see why he was late.
Snape's hair was green, his robes were orange, and his nose was over three feet long. Everyone couldn't help but stare.
"What are you all looking at? Think it's funny?"
"No, Sir!"
"Oh, really? Let's see!" Snape said, as he walked over too each student in the room and read their minds.
"Miss Abbott, thinks that I look really stupid, but, too her I always did. Fiftey points from Hufflepuff! Miss Brocklehurst, thinks that I'm looking like a carrot with a very large nose. Fourty points! Mr. Malfoy, thinks that I'm under a type of curse. He hopes that I will be back to normal soon. Ahh, Mr. Longbottom. Let's see what you're thinking," said Snape. "You think, that I'm a very ugly git with green hair and that I look very foolish in orange robes. But, the nose, to him doesn't look different at all. One-hundred and eighty points and a detention!"
The whole class went on like this. Ravenclaw, lost one-hundred and sixty points. Hufflepuff, lost one-hundred and eighty points. Gryffindor, lost two-hundred and seventy points. Slytherin, of course, lost none.
"Now, for your homework, you all have to do an essay about the Moonstone. Use two rolls of parchment. I want it on my desk tomorrow for Potions class. Anyone that doesn't finish it, will loose one-hundred points from their House and will be given detentions for a week! Dismissed!"
Everyone quickly packed up their things and left. Snape, rushed off too his office, immediatley.
"Blimey! At this rate, no one but the Slytherins will be the only ones having House points," said Ron.
"I'm just surprised, that he didn't blame everything on me," said Harry. amazed.
"Snape, reminds me of Pinocchio!" said Hermione, with a giggle.
"Who's Pinocchio?" asked Ron.

carmu · 08-07-2006, 02:41 PM

pinocchio!!! lmao! yea!
snape deserved that!!
great post!
PAMS!

Floo14 · 08-07-2006, 03:15 PM

I'm glad that you liked it. Later on, you'll find out who did that too Snivellus!

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