The Day I Died…


It hurts. It hurts physically as bad as emotionally. It hurts. I can’t stand it. I want you so bad. But you belong to somebody else. Always and forever. You were meant for each other. Always and forever.

Being friends when I had no one was the greatest thing you could ever do for me. It brought me hope for the future. Maybe I could be like you someday. Maybe it could actually happen between us, even though we come from two totally different worlds. Maybe I can change for the better.

I want you. I need you. I can’t live with out you.

Everyday I would wake up just because I knew I would see your radiant face in potions. Everyday I would get out of bed just so I could see your gleaming smile. Everyday your laugh would get me through the day.

The day you came to me, happier than a blooming flower, was the day you broke my heart. You told me that you two were finally a couple. I don’t think the grin on your face could’ve gotten any bigger. Little did you know the patience inside me was growing slimmer.

I wish things could be different. I wish you could look at me with those bright green, enticing eyes like you do to him. I wish I could hold you in my arms, every morning, every day, every night. I wish I could look at your smile and know without words that you love me. I wish things could be different.

The day I tried to kiss you was the day you broke my heart. You told me you were with him and that you loved him. Little did you know, I loved you.

But you choose him. After everything we have been through; the confusion and hurt he put you through and the crap he used to pull on me through my years. But you chose him.

The day you came to me saying you were engaged was the day you broke my heart. You told me you were the luckiest girl in the world. Little did you know you were killing me in the inside.

If only it was me and you getting married. I would’ve made you happier than you would ever be. If only we were together, you would be making me the happiest man in the world.

The day you got married was the day you broke my heart. You were the most beautiful person in the would. It was like an angel had breathed on you. Little did you know I was growing uglier inside.

I swear I saw an actual glow radiating from your smile. I swear I saw a halo forming around your lovely head. I swear I saw the angels kissing your face.

The day you told me you were with child was the day you broke my heart. You told me you were scared, but you couldn’t hide the smile from you eyes. Little did you know I was more scared than ever.

You were finally going to be a mother. A girl’s wildest dream, come true. To be able to answer to mommy. To be able to hold the bundle of joy in your arms at night. To be able to see a life grow before your eyes. To be able to say it was you, who made this miracle.

The day the baby was born was the day you broke my heart. You were a mother. Finally! He was here. Finally! You could hold him. Finally! Little did you know a grudge was born with him.

He looked like him. He had his father’s hair. He had his father’s jaw. He had his father’s hands. But he had your eyes.

The day of your murder was the day I died…




Ok this was a One Shot. I hope you all liked it! Please tell me what you think

Banner=Emily (Pigwidgeon Took)


*Steph*

That was really good
i had to read the replies to tell who was talking
not my fault
im blond

that was great

HOLYSNAPSICKLES.

ZOMGGG.

FUDGESICKLES.

GAHHHHHH.

If I could continue, I would include more flaming due to my new-sworn love for your writing!

You're uh-ma-zing! Seriouslyyy. A complete mushface, but we're all girls and we---> ADORE SEVANS!

That was amazing. Have I mentioned that already? Get your tush to writing moreee!

Please? Pweeety Pweety Pweez? With a Cherry on Top?

<3

Thank you Shan~Shan! You thought it was amazing Your too kind to me I do have another one coming up (It wont be SeVans ) But like I said before, I dont like as much. I think this one came out better Thanx again

Heeheeee!! I thought you would of guessed on MSN when I wouldnt tell you
Thank you so much Mah Lil Elephant shaped like an owl
And Im not really a Snape lover either. But stories for him just float in my head and I just have to write them down.
Well Im glad you liked it still even thought it wasnt the J/L one I promised

Thanx Monish!!
And yes Gracie Grace has to ruin it doesnt she
(Just kidding Mah Long Lost Cousin!! )
When I wrote it, I didnt really have any intention to make it clear that it was SeVans. (It is SeVans, but yeah )
So if you didnt get that it was, its ok. I didnt really mean for you to figure it out
But if you figure it out great

Yes, it was SeVans. But like I told Moni above, I didnt really have any intention to write SeVans, but it came out SeVans. So when I dont mean to start out writing it, I tend to not make it clear who it is, but drop small hints to what it is
Its ok, if you didnt understand it was SeVans right away
Read it a couple more times and maybe you will get it
Thank you for readin!!

Thank you. Im glad you liked it
Yesh the Oneshot was a little deep, so I didnt make it real clear on who it was. I did drop hints though. And I know its not because your blond that you didnt get it I know your really smart

Why thank you *Beams*
Im glad you enjoyed it

Thanx Mah Lil Nikki!
Yeah I guess a couple of people were having trouble figuring out it was SeVans
But you are the only one (besides Gracie Grace that is, or Shan~Shan probably ) who got the eyes thing.
That was one of the main hints I threw in there to show it was SeVans
Im glad you got it
So glad you liked it


Thank you Sabs
Im glad you liked it!
And I dont know about a "wonderful" writer...
Ahhh you made me blush
Thanx again!! *Ish smiling so big her face hurts*


Thanx!! Im glad you liked it.
Heeeheee!! And the funny thing was, when this story came to mind, it wasnt SeVans. But as I kept writing it, I changed a couple of things and made it SeVans.
Ive wrote another SeVans before (the link in my siggie "Why?" )
I will so write again, just because you put a cherry on top!
I love cherrys!!

OMG!!!! This story was just wonderful and i loved it. would you write some more storys please. your a wonderful writer and i couldent moved my eyes from the screen until i finished teh story.



Evangeline

Excellent. Amazing. Touching. Can't find any more words to descaribe it.

Thanx Tara.
Im glad you got the hint that I dropped that it was a SeVans
Im happy that you liked it

Haha!!
I should of know you would of found this Oneshot!
I did say I would write another one one day
Well here it is Kate!!
Heehee!!
The more I write these, the more I begin to like the SeVans ship
And if that day comes, I can say it was all you who did it


Shirel ish here!!

Im sorry! I always seem to make you cry!
Im glad you liked it!
Yeah I didnt mean to make it really confusing, but I never made it really clear.
I did put some hints in there. Like Lily's eyes
Thanx again Shirel!

Libbi!!!!
Im glad you are here!!
And thank you!!
And I missed you lots too!!

Thank you Evangeline
I do have a FF and another Oneshot (the links are in my siggie )
Im overjoyed that you all like it so much
Thanx!!

Thank you!!
Well I guess you did find words to describe it
Heeeheee!!
Thanx again!!