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Old 06-27-2007, 01:33 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hey everyone! This is Tara, back with another one-shot! This is my 17th FF here on SS! Woot! When I heard the song this FF is based off, I fell in love with it. And for some reason, it reminded me of Draco. So this FF will be in Draco’s Point of View. I hope you all like it. Enjoy!
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This FF is based around the song “Cry” by Rihanna. I had to change up the lyrics because they say “girl”, and Draco isn’t a girl, so do the math.

Cry



I flung myself against the wall as she walked away. I don’t think I’ve ever been so mad! It hurts like crazy now that she’s gone. Usually I was the one to break hearts. But this time was different. I felt like a victim of some horrible crime. But I wasn’t the type to cry. I have been like that my whole life. So why start crying now?

Suddenly lyrics to one of Hermione’s favorite songs popped into my head. I had heard the song so much I, too, knew the words. I looked up, thinking of Hermione and how she had left me as I let the song play in my head.

I'm not the type to get my heart broken,
I'm not the type to get upset and cry.
'Cause I never leave my heart open.
It never hurts me to say goodbye.
Relationships don’t get deep to me.
I never got the whole ‘in love’ thing.
And someone can say they loved me truly,
But at the time it didn’t mean a thing.

My mind is gone,
I’m spinning ‘round.
And deep inside
My tears I’ll drown.
I’m loosing grip.
What’s happening?
I stray from love.
This is how I feel…

This time was different,
Felt like I was just a victim.
And it cut me like a knife,
When you walked out of my life.
Now I’m in this condition,
And I got all the symptoms
Of a boy with a broken heart.
But no matter what,
You’ll never see me cry.

Did it happen when we first kissed?
’Cause it’s hurting me to let it go.
Maybe cause we spent so much time,
And I know that its no more.
I should have never let you hold me baby.
That may be why I’m sad to see us apart.
I didn’t give it to you on purpose,
Can't figure out how you stole my heart?

My mind is gone,
I’m spinning ‘round.
And deep inside
My tears I’ll drown.
I’m loosing grip.
What’s happening?
I stray from love,
This is how I feel…

This time was different,
Felt like I was just a victim.
And it cut me like a knife,
When you walked out of my life.
Now I’m in this condition,
And I got all the symptoms,
Of a boy with a broken heart.
But no matter what,
You’ll never see me cry…

How did I get here with you?
I’ll never know.
I never meant to let it get so personal.
And after all I tried to do,
To stay away from loving you.
I’m broken-hearted.,
I can’t let you know,
And I won’t let it show.
You won’t see me cry…

This time was different,
Felt like I was just a victim.
And it cut me like a knife,
When you walked out of my life.
Now I’m in this condition,
And I got all the symptoms,
Of a boy with a broken heart.
But no matter what,
You’ll never see me cry…

This time was different,
Felt like I was just a victim.
And it cut me like a knife,
When you walked out of my life.
Now I’m in this condition,
And I got all the symptoms,
Of a boy with a broken heart.
But no matter what,
You’ll never see me cry…

All my life…


And that song was right. Even though Hermione had broken up with me for some stupid reason, she couldn’t change me. She couldn’t make me cry. I only fell in love once, and it wasn’t going to change me. I nodded in agreement to my thoughts as I stood up and walked out of the castle and down to the lake. I looked out at it, grasping all its beauty. I had been the same old Draco Malfoy all my life. I wasn’t going to change now, and cry because I missed her so much. Yeah, this time was different. She left we feeling like I was a victim. And of course it cut me like a knife when she walked out of my life. Yes I’m in this condition. And I’ve got all the symptoms of a boy with a broken heart. But no matter what, no one, not even Hermione Granger, would ever see me cry.
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Old 06-29-2007, 04:52 AM   #2 (permalink)
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And here's me thinking of Cry by James Blunt (when I saw the title and nothing else).
FIRST READER! (finally for your F.Fs too!).

Aww... cute.
Draco shall never cry b/c of a broken heart
Great story
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thanx Sarah!
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GAH! Tara! I found this! Why didn't you tell me about this! GGRRRR! But it's so sad! Hermione doesn't know what she's talking about!

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lol thanx Katie. Go read my other new One-Shot in the Restricted section called "Hate That I Love You".
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I loved the story an as always when some one uses a song i havent heard i search for it and listen to it.Great story

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thanx Heather!
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A very sad one-shot...I'll see if I can downloadthe song. Great as usual, though, and never stop writing!
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