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Reese 4 28.57%
Derek 2 14.29%
Alex 3 21.43%
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Old 05-19-2008, 07:15 AM   #26 (permalink)
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Jay's back!!! YAY!!!

You really need to talk to Derek! We can't deal with an upset Alex!

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Whoo!! Your back,Jay!!!

I'll post more soon,I, promise
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Old 05-20-2008, 02:02 AM   #28 (permalink)
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"Happy,Derek,"Reese said.She looked at Derek who was stuffing his mouth with food."I take that as a yes."

"Zat iz a yez,"Derek said wiht a mouth full of food.

"East with you mouth closed,boy,"Reese said.She looked at Sabrina."Are you ready for your second year?"

"Overly excited,"Sabrina said.She took a piece of chicken and put it on her plate."Hey,Res,Is what you whispered to me on the carriage true?"

"Umm..."Reese said.She looked at Derek and Alex."I don't know.I took a guess."

Sabrina shook her head."They would make a cute couple.If only I could find someone."

"You'll find someone,Sabrina.Trust me,"Reese said.

"I trust you,"Sabrina said.

Alex sat down next to Reese and looked at her."Why didn't you wait for me?"

"Because Derek was going to have a heart attack if he didn't get anything to eat,"Reese said."And anyways,you're too slow."

Alex smiled."You've been slower."

"Ya right,"Reese said.SHe put some corn in her mouth and started to chew.

"Guys,"Dustin said."Aren't the first years so little?They look like midgets."He laughed.

"HEY!! I use to be a first year,"Reese said.

"True,but you never were that short,"Dustin said.

Reese smiled."Amen to that.I'm glad I was tall."

"Not as tall as me,though,"Jeremy said.

"Nobody can be as tall as you,"Reese said.

"Is that a complement?"Jeremy asked.

"It can be,"Reese said.

"I would take it as a complement,Jeremy,"Dustin said.

Jeremy smiled."I think I will."

"Okay,I'm full,"Derek said.

"Good,"Reese muttered.She finishe dher last piece of cake and stood up."Ready to go to the common room,guys?"

Dustin stood up."I guess this is where I go to te Huffie common room."He smiled and walked off.

"I'll see you around,"Sabrina said."Gotta go to the seventh floor."She hugged Reese and left.

Reese looked at Jeremy,Derek,and Alex."Let's go to the dugeons."

Tell me if you like it and Jay bring Derek back!!!
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LOL derek was pretty hungry huh? I like it so far and Don't worrry tomuch on derek I had a serious talk with him. he won't be an idiot anymore..as far as I can control any how.
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Old 05-20-2008, 02:48 AM   #30 (permalink)
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Lol.

I have a feeling Derek won't be listening to Jay,that muchDerek is still going to be the idiot he knows he isLol.
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well in that case its out ofmy hands now JEMZ!!! any issue with derekbeing an idiot out of my control now. wait.... derek isnt an idiot at least my school derek aint ... I thnk i should take offense of that LOL im kidding
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Old 05-20-2008, 03:05 AM   #32 (permalink)
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Your school RPG Derek maybe an idiot and you just don't know it?Have you ever thought of that??

You can take it as an offense, I really don't care.I don't see you doing nothing about it.*raises eyebrows*
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lol its possible I mean his is a firstie after all.
LOL no offense really I dont get irratated that easy unless the internet messes up. I know better than argue with a girl. LOL so you probablywont seem medo much about it other than sulk LOL
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Don't look at me Jay, it's not my fault Derek's an idiot!

Welll done Reese! Can't wait to read more!

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Old 05-20-2008, 04:33 PM   #35 (permalink)
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Great Job! You have an act for this, so keep going.
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Old 05-20-2008, 06:27 PM   #36 (permalink)
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NEW READER
love the story can't wait for more
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lol its possible I mean his is a firstie after all.
LOL no offense really I dont get irratated that easy unless the internet messes up. I know better than argue with a girl. LOL so you probablywont seem medo much about it other than sulk LOL
Technically we're not argueing,we're having a dicussion about Derek being more of an idiot than Sabrina.Opps...Sorry,Jemma,I was going to tell you the truth about Sabrina,but I guess it just spilled out.Lol.JK!!!


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The Slytherin Common Room was crowed with first year.

"Move,"Reese said.She pushed her way throught the crowd and finally made it to an empty area in the corner of the room.

"Derek,"Reese said.Derek was talking to a first year and it was pretty funny.She laughed.

Jeremy grabbed Derek and pulled him over to Reese.

"Do you like to torment firsties?"Reese said.

"I've been known to do that,"Derek said.

Reese shook her head."Well,do it later.Okay?"

"Okay,"Derek said."Where's Alex?"He turned around and spotted Alex sitting on the sofa writing in a book.He walked over to her and sat down next to her."Whatcha doing?"

"Writing,"Alex said.

"Writing what?"Derek said.

"It's called a diary,"Alex said.

"Really?"Derek said.He yanked th book from Alex and began to read it."This is funny."

"Derek give that back!!!"Alex said.

Derek shook his head.He threw the book to Reese,but Reese wasn't paying attention.

"AHHHH!!!"Reese said when she saw the book coming her way.She ducked down and the book went into the fire.Reese turned to the fire.

"DEREK!!!!"Alex yelled.

"I-I'm sorry,"Derek said."Reese was suppose to catch it."He eyes Reese.

"It's not my fault,"Reese said."I didn't know you were going to throw a book at me head."

"That book had years and years of writing in it,Derek,"Alex said.Tears started running down her cheek."How could you?"

"Don't cry,"Derek said.

Alex shook her head and got up and ran up to the girls dorm.

"Smooth,"Jeremy said.

"Shut up,"Derek said.He went to the boys dorm and never came back out.

"I'll go check on Alex,you check on Derek,"Reese said.SHe kissed JEremy and headed tot he girls dorm.

Okay...Just to clear this up...

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NOOOOOO! Derek you IDIOT!!!! your on mylist just below malfoy and Travis. Alex is gonna hex him into oblivion.Ooooo. way to go reese cant wait for more crosss fingers that derek will eventually get over being an idiot.
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I am not an idiot!!!! Derek is more of an idiot. I wouldn't steal a girl's diary and throw it into a fire!!!

Okay thanks Sabrina.
Welcome. *sticks tounge out at Derek and Reese*
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This story's really good
I think I liked all of the characters but Reese was my fave


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NOOOOOO! Derek you IDIOT!!!! your on mylist just below malfoy and Travis. Alex is gonna hex him into oblivion.Ooooo. way to go reese cant wait for more crosss fingers that derek will eventually get over being an idiot.
Keep crossing your finger,Ja*smiles*

Alex will doind soemthing to Derek(payback),but you have to wait

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Old 05-22-2008, 01:44 AM   #43 (permalink)
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You should put up a poll with JERemy, Dustin and anyone else in it

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Old 05-22-2008, 01:49 AM   #44 (permalink)
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I would if I could

Jeremy and Dustin were added after I put in the poll and it won't let me put another one in.I'm sorry

But I would so vote for Dustin...Shhhh...don't tell Jeremy I said that.lol.
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THATS CAUSE DUSTIN IS THE CHILLEST!!!


who would vote for dustin???? Hands raised!!
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Old 05-22-2008, 02:02 AM   #46 (permalink)
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*laughs*

I'm pretty sure Jeremy wouldn't raise his hand.lol.
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Brandon so totoally would! thats my best friend yo!!! lol

but then again he would probably raise his own hand for his own self lol
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