sitemap
Visit The Official WB Shop!

Members

Members in Chat:
BertieBot, Gildebot_LockHart


If this is your first visit, be sure to check out the FAQ by clicking the link above. You may have to register before you can post: click the register link above to proceed. To start viewing messages, select the forum that you want to visit from the selection below.

  Register Rules and FAQ Search
Go Back   SnitchSeeker.com > Forums > Diagon Alley > Gringotts Wizarding Bank (FanWorks) > The Gringotts Vaults > Finished Fan Fics
Finished Fan Fics Want to read a story but don't want to wait around for updates? Look no further than the Finished Fan Fics section. Here you will find completed stories rated pSa to Sa13+, from our talented SS authors.

Vote for SS!

View Poll Results: Which Character Do You Like Most??
Reese 4 28.57%
Derek 2 14.29%
Alex 3 21.43%
Sabrina 5 35.71%
Voters: 14. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
Thread Tools
Old 05-16-2008, 12:35 AM   #1 (permalink)
formerly: PhelpsLover101
Slytherin
Spectacular! Spectacular!
No biting!
Perfect Pickle Performer
Shrake
 
Sneakeh Cat's Avatar
 
Location: chillin' with Becca
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 12,811

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Reese Selena Northway
Third Year
heart Another Year At Hogwarts - Sa13+

Hey Guys,I'm Cat and this is my first FF and I hope you guys enjoy it...


I would LOVE to thanks Khat(*JoshMoonson*) for my AWESOME banner.Here's the link to her shop:Clicky


NOTICE-I DON'T own any charries used in this FF,except Reese.I would like to thank all my friends who let me use there charries for this FF.And J.K. Rowling is the owner of some charries used in this.All I own is the plot and Reese Northway.

************************************************** *******************


Reese walked onto Platform 9 3/4 and saw the Hogwarts Express in front of her. She was finally home and ready for her 3rd year at Hogwarts with her friends.

"Reese!!" Somebody yelled.

Reese turned around and saw Alex and Derek running towards her.

"We've been looking everywhere for you?" Derek said. "We got a seat on the train, we better hurry before somebody takes it."

"Okay," Reese said. Alex took Reese's hand and they ran onto the train and got into a comaprtment that was in the back.They all sat down and looked at each other.

"So..." Alex said. "How was your summer 'sister'?"

"It was wonderful," Reese said. "How about yours?"

"It was good," Alex said. "Derek and I stayed with Talen and James at James's cabin."

"That sounds so fun," Reese said sarcastically. "I was with Jeremy all summer."

"You two make such a perfect couple," Alex said.

"Can you two stop talking about mushy things?!" Derek said.

Alex and Reese looked at him. Reese laughed, "Okay."

Somebody opened the compartment door and all three of them looked up and saw Sabrina Dumbledore walked into the compartment.

"Hey guys," Sabrina said. "Whats up?" She sat down next to Reese and looked at them.

"Nothing much," Derek said. "How about you?"

"Nothing much,either," Sabrina said.She looked at Alex. "Hey girl."

"Hey,Sabrina,"Alex said.

Derek looked around and sighed. How come he always gets stuck wiht girls?How come he didn't have any guy friends? "I'm going to get something to eat," he said. He stood up and opened the door.

"I'll come too," Alex said.

They both left the comparmtent and Reese looked at Sabrina.

"I'm so excited to start school," Reese said.

"Me too," Sabrina said."Know what? I'm hungry, too. Want to go get something to eat, too?"

"Sure," Reese said. She stood up and Sabrina and her followed Derek and Alex to the food trolley...

Tell me if you like it

Last edited by Sneakeh Cat : 07-15-2008 at 08:58 PM.
Sneakeh Cat is offline  
Old 05-16-2008, 02:04 AM   #2 (permalink)
Slytherin

In Love with the 80's
Niffler
 
J.Rigdon's Avatar
 
Location: here or HPRA
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,799

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Willow Chanel Greenwood
Second Year

Ministry RPG Name:
James Randall
Magical Creatures
Send a message via AIM to J.Rigdon Send a message via MSN to J.Rigdon Send a message via Yahoo to J.Rigdon
Default

First to comment yay!!!

hey my school charries is part of your fic awesome... zfunny how he's bummed hanging out with all girls * V8 juice slaps him in the head * Dude ...Girls... Hello wheres the problem?
J.Rigdon is offline  
Old 05-16-2008, 02:12 AM   #3 (permalink)
Slytherin
Jump Around!
Faerie
 
moonchic07's Avatar
 
Location: on a bus to ME
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 4,223

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Alexandra (Alex) Leann Morgan
Third Year

Ministry RPG Name:
Cassandra (Cassie) Serena Carter
Magical Law Enforcement
Send a message via AIM to moonchic07 Send a message via MSN to moonchic07 Send a message via Yahoo to moonchic07
Default

lol, you would think that he wouldn't have a problem hanging with girls all the time. *sigh* poor Derek, lol.

Great start Reese, I can't wait for more to come PAMS!
moonchic07 is offline  
Old 05-16-2008, 06:40 AM   #4 (permalink)
Ravenclaw
Tonks' Mood
Crup
 
hermione03's Avatar
 
Location: Neverland <3
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,100

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Siobhan Bridget Elisabeth Murphy
Third Year

Ministry RPG Name:
Siobhan Eileen Gates
Send a message via AIM to hermione03 Send a message via Yahoo to hermione03
Default

very good so far can't wait to read more
PAMS! Siobhan O'Toole
hermione03 is offline  
Old 05-16-2008, 06:40 AM   #5 (permalink)
Gryffindor

SBFC Activity Offic.
LPFC Event Officer
Neville's Patronus
Faerie
 
Sabrina_Snape's Avatar
 
Location: At home.... duh
Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 4,101

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sabrina Dumbledore
Second Year

Ministry RPG Name:
Elizabeth Peterson
Diagon Alley
Send a message via MSN to Sabrina_Snape
Default

Reese!!!

Rina's in your fic

I loved it, I really really really really really really did!!!

Please write more!!!

Jemma
xxx
Sabrina_Snape is offline  
Old 05-16-2008, 06:57 AM   #6 (permalink)
Gryffindor
Bowtruckle
 
Ginnie Weasley's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Posts: 273

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Yvonne Ginevra Potter
First
Send a message via MSN to Ginnie Weasley
Default

New reader!!!

ME lovvie your fictie!!LOL

PAMS PAMS!!!Post ASAP!!


Yvonne
Ginnie Weasley is offline  
Old 05-16-2008, 05:29 PM   #7 (permalink)
Hufflepuff
Like cheese, cheese, cheese
Hippogriff
 
eric_2007al_2006's Avatar
 
Location: SS, duh
Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 3,451

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Carolyn Weasley
Fourth Year

Ministry RPG Name:
Isabella Longbottom
Magical Games & Sports
Default

Aweome posr Reese. This story is really good. Can't wait to read more.
eric_2007al_2006 is offline  
Old 05-17-2008, 12:54 AM   #8 (permalink)
formerly: PhelpsLover101
Slytherin
Spectacular! Spectacular!
No biting!
Perfect Pickle Performer
Shrake
 
Sneakeh Cat's Avatar
 
Location: chillin' with Becca
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 12,811

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Reese Selena Northway
Third Year
Default

Thanks Everybody!!!
And here's what you waited for...


Reese and Sabrina walked to the food trolley and stopped.

"W-what are you d-doing?"Reese laugh at Alex and Derek.

Derek pulled a piece of sticky candy of his forhead and threw it at Reese."Alex started chunking food at me."He glared at Alex.

"I didn't do anything,"Alex snickered.She put a pice of licorice wand in her mouth and looked at everybody.

Derek shook his head."Do you really believe her?"He looked at Reese and Sabrina.

"Not really,"Reese said.She pulled the candy off her shirt and threw it back to Derek.

Sabrina rolled her eyes."Oh come on,Alex didn't so anything wrong."

Reese laughed."I get what your saying.She didn't do anything wrong,Derek deserved to have candy thrown(sp?) at him."She looked at Derek.

"HEY!!!"Derek said."I haven't done anything to Alex.At least not yet."He smiled.

Reese pushed Derek into the food trolley and back away.The food trolley tipped over and food went everywhere."Opps."

Derek pulled Reese down onto the food trolley and smiled."That wasn't very nice."

"I'm not a nice person,"Reese said.She pulled herself up and helped Derek up."We better go before that woman comes back and sees this trolley tipped over."

Sabrina and Alex nodded and ran back to the compartment with Reese and Derek following right behind them...

Tell me if you like itSo this is so short,but I'm not that kind of person who writes a lot at one time

Last edited by Sneakeh Cat : 06-21-2008 at 10:06 PM.
Sneakeh Cat is offline  
Old 05-17-2008, 03:23 AM   #9 (permalink)
Slytherin
Jump Around!
Faerie
 
moonchic07's Avatar
 
Location: on a bus to ME
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 4,223

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Alexandra (Alex) Leann Morgan
Third Year

Ministry RPG Name:
Cassandra (Cassie) Serena Carter
Magical Law Enforcement
Send a message via AIM to moonchic07 Send a message via MSN to moonchic07 Send a message via Yahoo to moonchic07
Default

great post, but why did Alex throw candy at Derek?? What happened??
*turns to Jay*
What would Derek do that would have Alex do such act?

PAMS!!!
moonchic07 is offline  
Old 05-17-2008, 06:38 AM   #10 (permalink)
Gryffindor

SBFC Activity Offic.
LPFC Event Officer
Neville's Patronus
Faerie
 
Sabrina_Snape's Avatar
 
Location: At home.... duh
Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 4,101

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sabrina Dumbledore
Second Year

Ministry RPG Name:
Elizabeth Peterson
Diagon Alley
Send a message via MSN to Sabrina_Snape
Default

Reese it was awesomeness!

Goodpoint, what's Jay done now? At least it wasn't Sabrina, that's always a good thing!

I want more!!

Jemma
xxx
Sabrina_Snape is offline  
Old 05-17-2008, 03:04 PM   #11 (permalink)
formerly: PhelpsLover101
Slytherin
Spectacular! Spectacular!
No biting!
Perfect Pickle Performer
Shrake
 
Sneakeh Cat's Avatar
 
Location: chillin' with Becca
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 12,811

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Reese Selena Northway
Third Year
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by moonchic07 View Post
great post, but why did Alex throw candy at Derek?? What happened??
*turns to Jay*
What would Derek do that would have Alex do such act?

PAMS!!!
Sorry I didn't make that clear for you. Derek did do anything,yet.lol. Alex and Derek were just playing around,you know how friends can get
Sneakeh Cat is offline  
Old 05-17-2008, 03:08 PM   #12 (permalink)
Gryffindor

SBFC Activity Offic.
LPFC Event Officer
Neville's Patronus
Faerie
 
Sabrina_Snape's Avatar
 
Location: At home.... duh
Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 4,101

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sabrina Dumbledore
Second Year

Ministry RPG Name:
Elizabeth Peterson
Diagon Alley
Send a message via MSN to Sabrina_Snape
Default

Reese, Alex has gone . I want Alex!

Oh well, I'll have to make deal with you! YAY Reese! (I feel so sorry for you!) I'm sort of hyper at the moment.. too much candy!

Jemma
xxxx
P.S. PAMS!!!
Sabrina_Snape is offline  
Old 05-17-2008, 03:12 PM   #13 (permalink)
formerly: PhelpsLover101
Slytherin
Spectacular! Spectacular!
No biting!
Perfect Pickle Performer
Shrake
 
Sneakeh Cat's Avatar
 
Location: chillin' with Becca
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 12,811

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Reese Selena Northway
Third Year
Default

Deal with me?I'm not that bad,am I?
I miss Alex,too
I just woke up so I'm not hyper just yet.lol.BUT I WILL BE!!!
Sneakeh Cat is offline  
Old 05-17-2008, 03:18 PM   #14 (permalink)
Gryffindor

SBFC Activity Offic.
LPFC Event Officer
Neville's Patronus
Faerie
 
Sabrina_Snape's Avatar
 
Location: At home.... duh
Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 4,101

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sabrina Dumbledore
Second Year

Ministry RPG Name:
Elizabeth Peterson
Diagon Alley
Send a message via MSN to Sabrina_Snape
Default

There is nothing wrong with you! I promise that! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!

I think I'm too hyper!

Jemma
xxx


P.S. I've voted for Sabrina, because well she's me and I'm her!

Last edited by Sabrina_Snape : 05-17-2008 at 03:36 PM.
Sabrina_Snape is offline  
Old 05-17-2008, 04:07 PM   #15 (permalink)
formerly: PhelpsLover101
Slytherin
Spectacular! Spectacular!
No biting!
Perfect Pickle Performer
Shrake
 
Sneakeh Cat's Avatar
 
Location: chillin' with Becca
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 12,811

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Reese Selena Northway
Third Year
Default

I think your too hyper,too
It's okay,I voted for Reese
Okay since I"m bored here's more...


"Jeremy?!"Reese said.She walked into the compartment and saw her boyfriend sitting next to her owl cage.

"Hey,girl,"Jeremy said."Where have you been?"

"To the...ummm...food trolley,"Reese said."Where have you been?"

"With Dustin,"Jeremy said.

"Dustin?"Reese said."H-"Before she could say anything somewhere came into the compartment and Reese turned around.

"Have you forgot who I am,already?"Dustin said.

"No,"Reese said."I was just...Never mind."She smiled.

"That's what I thought,"Dustin laughed."Hey can I sit in here?"

"Sure,"Alex said.She scooted closer to Derek,so Dustin could sit down.

"Thanks,"Dustin said."So,how has your summer been,guys."

"I stayed with George and everybody all summer,"Sabrina said."It was fun."

"I stayed with Derek and Alex,"Reese said.

Derek looked at Dustin and said,"I was with Alex and Reese."

"Well,it sounds like you guys had fun,"Dustin said."Well,are you ready for another year at Hogwarts?"

"I can't wait!!"Reese said.

"What year are you in,again?"Dustin asked.

"Third,along with Alex.Derek is in his 2nd and Jeremy is in his 7th.Which you should already know what year Jeremy is in,"Reese said.She laughed.

"Well,"Dustin said."I'm ready for my O.W.Ls this year.I'm going to study."

"Have fun with studying,"Reese said."Im going to try to ditch some classes this year."

"No your not!"Alex said."You need to be ready for your O.W.Ls and N.E.W.Ts."

Reese rolled her eyes."I will be ready.But come on,Alex.We still have 2 more years before we have to do our O.W.Ls.Live a little bit."

Alex looked at Derek."Can you belive she is going to ditch classes?"

Derek nodded."I can,because I'm the one ditching them with her."

Last edited by Sneakeh Cat : 06-21-2008 at 10:05 PM.
Sneakeh Cat is offline  
Old 05-17-2008, 10:21 PM   #16 (permalink)
Gryffindor

SBFC Activity Offic.
LPFC Event Officer
Neville's Patronus
Faerie
 
Sabrina_Snape's Avatar
 
Location: At home.... duh
Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 4,101

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sabrina Dumbledore
Second Year

Ministry RPG Name:
Elizabeth Peterson
Diagon Alley
Send a message via MSN to Sabrina_Snape
Default

Reese Love you! It was really really really really (I could go on) good!

I love how you're portraying Sabrina's character! It's brilliant! Honestly I swear you know her better than me!

Jemma
xxx
Sabrina_Snape is offline  
Old 05-17-2008, 10:23 PM   #17 (permalink)
formerly: PhelpsLover101
Slytherin
Spectacular! Spectacular!
No biting!
Perfect Pickle Performer
Shrake
 
Sneakeh Cat's Avatar
 
Location: chillin' with Becca
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 12,811

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Reese Selena Northway
Third Year
Default

Well...I just knew Sabrina wanted to live with George and the rest of the Weasley's

Last edited by Sneakeh Cat : 06-21-2008 at 10:06 PM.
Sneakeh Cat is offline  
Old 05-18-2008, 03:23 AM   #18 (permalink)
Hufflepuff
Jobberknoll
 
Zack Shelters's Avatar
 
Location: Under the couch, Neb
Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 495

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Dustin Taylors
Fourth Year
Send a message via MSN to Zack Shelters
Default

GREAT JOB!!! Very nce and I just LOVE how you portray me..kinda cool funny guy lol
Zack Shelters is offline  
Old 05-18-2008, 03:24 AM   #19 (permalink)
formerly: PhelpsLover101
Slytherin
Spectacular! Spectacular!
No biting!
Perfect Pickle Performer
Shrake
 
Sneakeh Cat's Avatar
 
Location: chillin' with Becca
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 12,811

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Reese Selena Northway
Third Year
Default

Thanks.I'll post more of the story tomorrowI'm too lazy right now to write more
Sneakeh Cat is offline  
Old 05-18-2008, 03:13 PM   #20 (permalink)
formerly: PhelpsLover101
Slytherin
Spectacular! Spectacular!
No biting!
Perfect Pickle Performer
Shrake
 
Sneakeh Cat's Avatar
 
Location: chillin' with Becca
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 12,811

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Reese Selena Northway
Third Year
Default

Alex's mouth dropped open."Y-you?"

Derek nodded."Ditching sounds like a...adventure.Let's keep it as that."

"NO!!!"Alex yelled."Ditching is not good."

Dustin stood up and said,"You know what?I think I'm just going to go."He turned towards the door,but Alex pulled him back down."What was that for?!"

"Stay,"Alex said."Now,tell Reese that ditching is a very bad idea."

Dustin looked at Reese and smiled."I can't do that Alex."

"And why not?"Alex said.

"Because..."Dustin said.He smiled.

Alex looked at Dustin and said,"Because why?"

"You really don't want to know,"Dustin said.

'DUSTIN!!!"Alex said.

"okay okay,"Dustin said."I'm also ditching them with her.Gosh."

"Is everybody ditching classes this year?"Alex asked.

"Not me,"Sabrina said.

Alex signed."That's good."

"I don't like the word ditching very much,"Sabrina said."I like using the term not showing up."She smiled.

"Sabrina,"Alex said.

"I'm sorry,"Sabrina told her."It's just Reese and Dustin and Derek..."

"And Jeremy,"Jeremy said."Don't forget about me."

"I was getting to you,"Sabrina said.She looked at Alex."Come on,Alex.Why aren't you going to-"She stopped.Alex held up a finger to make her be quiet.

"I'm not as stupid as all of you,"Alex said."I want to make good grades and suceed and be an auror at the ministry."

"Alex,"Reese said.

"No,Reese,"Alex told her."I'm not going to ditch classes.And that is final."

Hope you guys liked it
Sneakeh Cat is offline  
Old 05-18-2008, 03:24 PM   #21 (permalink)
Gryffindor

SBFC Activity Offic.
LPFC Event Officer
Neville's Patronus
Faerie
 
Sabrina_Snape's Avatar
 
Location: At home.... duh
Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 4,101

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Sabrina Dumbledore
Second Year

Ministry RPG Name:
Elizabeth Peterson
Diagon Alley
Send a message via MSN to Sabrina_Snape
Default

Sabrina you are not skipping class!

Sabrina: Well, Reese says I can and you can't stop me!

See what you've done! lol! I loved the post! Poor Alex, I'm going to hex her, to make her skip classes!

PAMS!
Jemma
xxx
Sabrina_Snape is offline  
Old 05-18-2008, 03:26 PM   #22 (permalink)
formerly: PhelpsLover101
Slytherin
Spectacular! Spectacular!
No biting!
Perfect Pickle Performer
Shrake
 
Sneakeh Cat's Avatar
 
Location: chillin' with Becca
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 12,811

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Reese Selena Northway
Third Year
Default

Reese:Ya,Jemma,Sabrina can do whatever she want*sticks tongue out*

I see what I've done and I like what I see.lol.