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03-20-2008, 11:43 PM
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#126 (permalink)
| A bit confused
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Maura Felicia Silvermoon Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Silvermoon Magical Creatures | Seems he just did that...
Susi says she might make the next chapter from Luna's point of view. I don't know if she'll actually do it, we don't read one another's chapters until after they're posted.... |
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03-20-2008, 11:45 PM
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#127 (permalink)
| | Nogtail
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year | well me and hrmy were thinking of throwing in a few chappies from Luna's POV how does that sound? And BTW the next chap will be up tomarrow |
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03-20-2008, 11:49 PM
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#128 (permalink)
| | Nogtail
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year | dang, i just repeated what hrmy said lol, always read the post before yours! |
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03-21-2008, 12:20 AM
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#129 (permalink)
| | Dugbog
Location: lost....where am I?? Join Date: Sep 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ella DeParra Second Year | teehee  I liked that chapter!!!! and the chapter before that... OH I LIKE THE WHOLE THING!!!!!!!!......OK i'm done shouting now  |
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03-21-2008, 04:38 AM
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#130 (permalink)
| | Kappa
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Leah Dorn | that would be cool to have it in Luna's point of view |
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03-21-2008, 08:36 PM
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#131 (permalink)
| A bit confused
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Maura Felicia Silvermoon Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Silvermoon Magical Creatures | It is now tomorrow, where's the chappie?  J/K take all the time you need...I sound more like a reader than one of the authors right now, that's how impatient i am for it! I really need something to do. |
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03-22-2008, 01:36 PM
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#132 (permalink)
| | Nogtail
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year | Ok, this is in LUNA'S POV enjoy "Hello?" I called softly, surprised at how weak my voice sounded as it
echoed(?) back towards me...
"Yes?" and old voice said to my left, I stiled a yelp, "Who's there?"
"Are you a death eater? Or... merlin forbid... a pink-nosed tilted toed
dexterium?"
"Luna, is that you?"
"Great uncle Charles?" (a/n refer to my fic Astrum)
"Oh, Luna so sad that you were captured, I hope you are well?"
"Yes there are no nargles here..." I said to my great uncle Charles Ollivander.
"Drated humans, deciving morons..." I heard to my right.
"Oh, do be quiet Griphook!" my uncle said.
"Um, Uncle? Where are we?" I asked, slightly afraid of the answer.
"Well Luna we are in the basement of Malfoy Manor.
Neville help me! Wow, short..... but it give Hrmy something to do....
Last edited by dark_emeralds : 03-22-2008 at 01:39 PM.
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03-22-2008, 09:59 PM
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#133 (permalink)
| A bit confused
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Maura Felicia Silvermoon Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Silvermoon Magical Creatures | Kay. I'm going to assume you made up Mr. Ollivander is Luna's uncle...
Wow I need to get going here! The next chapter will be up in a few days. |
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03-23-2008, 05:23 PM
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#134 (permalink)
| | Kappa
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Leah Dorn |
ok... |
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03-29-2008, 11:58 PM
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#135 (permalink)
| A bit confused
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Maura Felicia Silvermoon Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Silvermoon Magical Creatures | Here's the next one. sorry it took so long, most of it is in Neville's POV because I couldn't think of a continuation of Susi's last one, Luna's POV. So anyway, here it is:
Christmas Eve. I sat at the dinner table with one of my arms propping up my
head. I had been slightly depressed since Luna had been dragged off the train
against her will. I made stripes in my mashed potatoes with my fork and tried
to seem as though I was happy. I hadn't told Grandma about what happened
yet. She would never believe me, anyway. So I tried to eat my potatoes
instead of mutilating them.
After dinner, Grandma and I sat in the parlor. Grandma was knitting a
Christmas sweater for my cousin Eunice. It was a horrid shade of puke-green,
with little brown and orange puff balls all over it. It was just about the ugliest
thing I'd ever seen, except for the time I accidentally stumbled upon a gnome
having a baby. As Grandma knitted, she talked. "...and Neville don't forget to
wash behind your ears before your great-uncle Algie arrives tomorrow, you
know he doesn't like you, and oh yes, make sure you have clean underwear,
you know he likes to hang you by it, we don't want him to have to touch dirty
underwear, and..." I stared into the fire, pretending to listen, but really
ignoring grandma with her bright red skirt and shrill, monotonous voice and
claw-like hands and stupid vulture hat.
Fifteen whole minutes passed. I wouldn't be able to take much more of
Grandma's boring yakky-yakky. I sighed to myself and renewed my efforts to
block out her voice.
"...with ham and maybe prune juice, wouldn't that be lovely, and of course
the squirrel-eye pudding for dessert. Wouldn't that be just charming, Neville?"
I stood up. "Yes, Grandma, it sounds wonderful. Er, I have to go and, um,
er....wash my ears. Will you excuse me?" I left without bothering for an
answer, and headed, not for the bathroom to wash behind my ears, but to my
bedroom. I opened the door and went straight to the side table. I picked up
the portrait of Luna I had on it. It had been taken the day we went into
Hogsmeade. Luna smiled up at me from the frame, in that calm, serene way of
hers. 'It will be all right, Neville,' her smile seemed to say. I sighed and
pressed the picture frame to my heart. "Oh, Luna. Where are you?" I
breathed. "I'll always be with you, Luna. We'll see each other again."
*** Not even a hundred miles away from where I knew Neville was,
and there was no way to get to him. I hoped he hadn't been attacked by a
Purple-bellied Whoop-spanker. That would be horrible.
'I'll always be with you, Luna. We'll see each other again.'
I sat up. Neville's voice, so clear in my head. How was that possible? I felt my
jaw drop slowly. My eyes widened in the dark as I realized that he was saying
that to himself. And by some amazing power, I could hear him. Maybe there
was a Mulkering Micro-Sticko-Blibber in here.
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03-30-2008, 09:52 PM
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#136 (permalink)
| | Nogtail
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year | ok.. hrmy... were you on a sugar high by any chance? well it made me laugh |
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03-31-2008, 12:04 AM
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#137 (permalink)
| A bit confused
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Maura Felicia Silvermoon Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Silvermoon Magical Creatures | Nope, just exceedingly bored.
I think i will do part of each of my chapters Neville's POV, and part Luna's. Just letting you know ahead of time. |
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03-31-2008, 02:43 PM
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#138 (permalink)
| | Nogtail
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year | yeah that's probably best.. |
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03-31-2008, 11:41 PM
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#139 (permalink)
| | Kappa
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Leah Dorn | It made me laugh too, Don't pictures move in the wizarding world?? |
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04-01-2008, 12:55 AM
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#140 (permalink)
| A bit confused
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Maura Felicia Silvermoon Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Silvermoon Magical Creatures | Yes, that's why I said she was smiling calmly and serenely, and her smile seemed to say something. That would be nearly impossible to capture on a still photo. |
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04-01-2008, 08:26 PM
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#141 (permalink)
| | Nogtail
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year | A Mulkering Micro-Sticko-Blibber?!? |
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04-01-2008, 09:12 PM
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#142 (permalink)
| A bit confused
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Maura Felicia Silvermoon Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Silvermoon Magical Creatures | I don't know. Why not? I was bored. (Not like you can do better. A pink nosed tilted toed dexterium?)
PAMS, Susi, PAMS |
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04-02-2008, 08:43 PM
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#143 (permalink)
| | Nogtail
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year | oh alright but next thing you know it will be a Pink-nosed Mulkering Dexterium Blibber! |
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04-04-2008, 11:50 AM
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#144 (permalink)
| A bit confused
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Maura Felicia Silvermoon Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Silvermoon Magical Creatures | Yeah, sure, whatever.
PAMS?  |
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04-05-2008, 08:02 AM
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#145 (permalink)
|  SBFC Activity Offic. LPFC Event Officer Neville's Patronus Faerie
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Elizabeth Peterson Diagon Alley | New Reader Alert!!! This story is brilliantly spectacularly wonderfully great!!!
Please PAMS soon because I want to find out what happens to everyone. What's happened to Dean? Just wondering and sorry if you have already answered it.
PAMS!!!
Jemmz
xxx |
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04-05-2008, 06:12 PM
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#146 (permalink)
| A bit confused
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Maura Felicia Silvermoon Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Silvermoon Magical Creatures | Nobody asked that yet. Remember, in the seventh book he was with Ted Tonks and the goblins, and then he was with the Snatchers when they found Harry, Ron and Hermione and brought them to Malfoy Manor. So that's where he is.  |
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04-06-2008, 12:29 AM
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#147 (permalink)
| | Nogtail
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Melina "Mel" Abraham Second Year | right now in the story though he is eating cake with the mad hatter in wonderland lol! |
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04-06-2008, 04:22 AM
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#148 (permalink)
| | Kappa
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Leah Dorn | I was talking about the picture of Luna, can't Neiville and her talk to each other or something throgh the picture?? Like Dumbledore and Snape did in the Deathly Hallows?? |
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04-06-2008, 08:20 PM
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#149 (permalink)
| A bit confused
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Maura Felicia Silvermoon Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Silvermoon Magical Creatures | Well I think you have to have a certain spell put on it to do that, and let's face it, Neville might not be able to perform it unless someone personally taught it to him. It's just the way he learns. |
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04-07-2008, 02:56 AM
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#150 (permalink)
| | Kappa
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Leah Dorn | O.... I get it |
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