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HarryPotter=<3 · 02-19-2008, 09:29 PM

Im dying 4 the next chapter!!!

hrmy_lvr_4evr · 02-20-2008, 04:11 PM

Yeah. As I've said, we're both really busy. And Susi says that her word processor is kind of not working. But she will try to get it up soon.

dark_emeralds · 02-29-2008, 11:23 PM

Yup took me forever. Well hrmy wrote the part in BLUE and I wrote the part in RED

I walked down to Hagrid's hut on the 21st of

November. I was relieved my punishment wouldn't

would be carried out by him, who had been wrongly

expelled from Hogwarts at the age of thirteen, and

therefore could not use magic against me (but then, he

never would anyway.) Plus, he was kindhearted, even if

he was a bit intimidating. However, I did have a black

eye, because Alecto Carrow could pack quite a punch.

Luna had a slit caused by a knife across her pretty face,

and Ginny's nose had been broken. I met them at

Hagrid's pumpkin patch, gave Luna a quick hug and

kiss, and patted Ginny on the back.

" 'Lo there!" Hagrid said. "I'll be righ' with yeh." He

put down his gloves and the dead ferret he had been

feeding the hippogriff, Buckbeak--I mean Witherwings.

"We'll be goin' inter the forest today, I need some

help with a couple o' things."

"Th-the forest?" I gulped. The Forbidden Forest was

utterly terrifying. It was full of furry creatures and evil

whatnots.

"O' course! The forest won' hurt yeh!"

"I"m not worried about the forest hurting me." I

muttered under by breath. "It's what's in it I'm worried

about."
Hagrid seemed not to hear. "All righ', time to go!" he

said loudly. He led us into the forest behind his small

hut. The minute we passed about three trees, we were in

darkness. "Neville?" came a voice. Luna's. I remembered

that she had never been in the forest but once, two

years ago, but it was daytime then. I took her hand and

we walked on.

Soon we came to a claring. We could now see into the

trees. Something moved behind us. I spun around

quickly.

The strangest thing i'd ever seen came waddling

towards us. It had tiny purple hippo's ears, an enormous

orange nose, buck teeth, (strangely white) a pink horn

right between its eyes, a huge green belly that touched

the ground, and fat, short legs. It looked kind of like

what Slughorn would look like if you turned him into

an animal. Beside me, Luna gave an excited squeak.

"It's a Crumple-Horned Snorkack!" she exclaimed.

Hagrid frowned, "What're yeh on about?" he asked,

clearly confused. Luna actually giggled. "Daddy and I

have been looking for one of these for years, wait until I

tell him, he'll be so pleased!"

And so ended our detention.

dark_emeralds · 02-29-2008, 11:24 PM

Oh BTW mt formating is messed up

hrmy_lvr_4evr · 02-29-2008, 11:29 PM

Yay! It's finally up! You know I already have the next chapter written.

heh heh this looks even funnier in print! didn't read the part at the top till after I read the chapter so I was like "what are the colors for?" But I get it now.

Hufflepuffyness · 03-01-2008, 07:00 PM

*New Reader*, I really like it, I support neville and Luna Ships. A Crumple-Horned Snorkack?? woooow...

hrmy_lvr_4evr · 03-01-2008, 09:31 PM

Yeah. That was her idea. she just made me put it to life. haha lol

I haven't started with the chapter for this yet because I'm busy with the Hogwarts four one, but I will get right to it. Promise!

Hufflepuffyness · 03-02-2008, 08:34 PM

pamspamspamspamspamspams

dark_emeralds · 03-03-2008, 12:44 AM

you don't know how hard it is to type Hagrid speak *clears throat* uh... I mean Yeh donno 'ow 'ard tis to type 'Argid speak. (no' i am not making fun of him...)

eric_2007al_2006 · 03-03-2008, 01:41 AM

if its hard to speak Hagrid you didn't show it. You did a marvoulus job...both of you.

HarryPotter=<3 · 03-03-2008, 01:52 PM

That was amazing..
Love the Crumple-Horned Snorkack!! Yay

dark_emeralds · 03-03-2008, 08:08 PM

since we each wrote half of that I presume it's hrmy's turn but she needs to tell me.

Hufflepuffyness · 03-03-2008, 09:27 PM

Well, either way, Can't wait!!

hrmy_lvr_4evr · 03-03-2008, 09:37 PM

Yes yes, it's my turn, I am almost done, keep your socks on all of you

Hufflepuffyness · 03-05-2008, 11:46 PM

I don't mean to rush you or anything but, well...... HURRY!!!

hrmy_lvr_4evr · 03-06-2008, 09:15 PM

I can't believe my luck. I took about half an hour typing up the chapter and I copied and pasted it onto this ting, and I forgot to save it, and I don't have it written down by hand, and my stupid computer crashed. I don't have time to re type it because i have to go to a chorus concert tonight, but I will get it up sometime tomorrow, promise.

Hufflepuffyness · 03-07-2008, 10:18 PM

Its ok....

hrmy_lvr_4evr · 03-07-2008, 11:33 PM

I got it typed! It's really long though. Here's the first part:

It was finally here. The day before Christmas break. I made my way into the

Great Hall for breakfast and sat down next to Ginny.

“Hey, Neville!” she said brightly.

“Hi Ginny,” I replied. “What are you doing over Christmas break? Are you

going anywhere?”

She shook her head. “Nope. I’m just going to go home and be with my family.

You?”

Before I could reply, someone came and sat down on my other side. I turned to

see who it was.

“Hey, Luna!” said Ginny.

“Hi Ginny! Hello, Neville!” said Luna brightly.

“Oh, no! I still have to pack!” said Ginny, alarmed. She jumped up and ran out

of the Great Hall.

“I can’t believe it’s almost Christmas!” said Luna. I could tell she was excited.

I wasn’t, though. I was going to miss Luna very much. I looked down at my

porridge. (I had been making a smiley face in it with the cinnamon.) I looked

back up at Luna. “Walk with me,” I suggested. We stood up and left the Great

Hall. (The porridge sat forgotten.)

“What are you going to do over vacation?” I asked Luna.

She shrugged. “Oh you know…I’ll be at home and visit with Daddy. I haven’t

told him about the Crumple-Horned Snorkack yet; he’s going to be so

excited!” Her large misty eyes shone. We were alone in the corridor. I think

everyone else was at breakfast.

The light in Luna’s eyes went out. She looked down. “But I expect it will be

very lonely. Daddy will be away most of the time at a press conference for

the Quibbler. So I’ll be all my myself…Maybe I’ll go and visit the

Weasleys…” She looked up at me. “I’m going to miss you, Neville.” She took a

step towards me, her face close to mine. I drew in my breath and her eyes

closed.

Just then, a bunch of giggling third-year Hufflepuff girls came around the

corner. Luna pulled away, embarrassed, and turned and fled down the

corridor. “See you on the train, Neville!”

Next part coming really soon!

hrmy_lvr_4evr · 03-08-2008, 03:13 PM

Here's the next part, also by me.

Later, on the train, I sat in an empty compartment, waiting for Ginny and

Luna. They came in together, laughing about some joke. (I never found out

what it was though.) They sat down, and the train began to move.

About an hour later, the train came to a sudden screeching halt. Ginny and I

looked at each other. Was it a dementor again? I had no wish to relive what

had happened when I was thirteen.

There was a loud commotion outside. I got up and poked my head out to see

what was going on. My eyes widened and I quickly sat down again.

Two large men pushed their way into out compartment. They both had their

wands out. I could see a tattoo of a skull with a snake sticking out of its

mouth on the forearm of the one nearest me.

Death Eaters.

Ginny screamed; Luna’s eyes widened too. I have no idea what I looked like

but I’m prepared to bet a million Galleons that it wasn’t pretty. I felt all the

color drain from my face.

Ginny whipped out her own wand. “What do you want?” she cried. The bigger

of the two men, Rowle, glared at her. “We want Loony Lovegood,” he

growled.

Luna let out a terrified squeak. I took out my own wand. The other man

narrowed his eyes at Luna. “So that would be you, I presume, pretty?” He

grabbed her arm. “Your father’s becoming too outspoken in his stupid

magazine. So you’re coming with us.” They dragged her out, each holding an

arm. She was struggling and screaming and trying to hex them the whole

time. Ginny and I tried too; believe me, but it just wasn’t enough. Ginny’s

spells all missed the Death Eaters by a hair. I missed them too, but one of my

spells hit Zacharias Smith and turned him into an enormous Jelly Slug.

“No!” I cried desperately. “Luna!”

hrmy_lvr_4evr · 03-09-2008, 05:54 PM

Next chapter should be up soon. I think.

Hufflepuffyness · 03-10-2008, 12:53 AM

Ginnie Weasley · 03-11-2008, 01:41 PM

Thats a good 1! sorry ive been away for such a long time....but im back!

Bravo!PAMS!

dark_emeralds · 03-17-2008, 01:26 PM

whoa uber long... does this mean i can make the next one really short? no? ok... i have a new story in other stories hrmy can join me in that one but it may be a bit to dark for her liking....

hrmy_lvr_4evr · 03-17-2008, 03:09 PM

Don't know what you're talking about but I'll go check it out...

Do any of you readers out there have any suggestions for the next chapter for this?

Hufflepuffyness · 03-20-2008, 11:37 PM

Ummm.... Neville could freak out or something, idk...

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