oh geez that was harsh

PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!! you left a cliffe again!!

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Welcome, all new readers!

OMG next chapter. Ok evil and morbid. Beware! Pretty long.

I sat at lunch with my friends talking animatidly. We had been at hogwarts for

four days now. I had just come from herbology, which had cheered me up quite a

bit and was dreading Defence Against the Dark Arts or, as my friend now called

it, Dark Arts.

"It's horrible." Lavender said, shivering.

"The whole point of the class... it's so disgusting." Seamus grumbled.

I gulped.

"Whopee, my next class." I said, my voice dripping with sarcasm, and let me tell

you, I am not a very sarcastic person. The bell rang and I got up. The walk to

the DADA classroom took what seemed to be ages. I slid in just before the bell

and took a seat.

"Order!" Amycus called, he was a unkempt man with a rough voice. The class

immediaty fell silent.

"Today we will be praticing the Cruciatus Cruse." He said, a hideous grin on his

face. There were several gasps in the crowd.

"These people," he said indicating the three thrid years stand in a corner, "have

been accused of misdeeds and resistance against the new regime. It's your job-

no, privalge to punish them." Amycus said. I hated him already, and hate is such a

strong word, but I can use it here.

"Who wants to go first?" He asked scanning the room before focusing on me.

"Longbottom, is it? Of course, you look so much like your mother, but your

father too. I remember them, they fought well but not well enough, eh

Longbottom?" he said. I clenched my teeth, there were murmurs of confusion.

"Now, you try. Let's see you can have Burke." he said grabbing the smallest boy

and pushing him roughly towars me, fear showing in the boys eyes.

"No." I said calmly. A few gaped at me.

"No? No, you little blood traitor? Ok then, I'll demenstrate on you. CRUCIO!"

I fell on the floor, shouting. My parent's faces swam before my eyes, once

young and full now dead and hollow. Pain spread through my body.

"Now," Amycus said as I got to my feet slowly, "IMPERIO!" The spell hit me

squarly in the chest.

"JUMP!" Amycus roared, I felt myself jump.

"The cruciatus cruse! Now!" I felt my wand fly up. It was pointed

at the frightened little boy's chest.

"NO!" I yelled. I shot the cruse but it missed.

"Detention!" Amycus screamed. "How dare you defy the

Dark Lord and his orders!"

"OUT! Now! All you blood traitor scum and half blood freaks! OUT!" he

bellowed. I got out of there as quick as I could and ran down the hall.

"Omp." I said as I collided with someone. "Sorry." I said and help them to their

feet.

"It's OK, are you all right?" she asked her dreamy voice reaching my ears.

"Luna!" I exclaimed.

And ther you have it SA+13

heehee poor poor neville i was trying for him not to be such a mary-sue oh well

This is great!!!!! I love that Neville loves Luna. I hope the end up together!!!!
Poor Neville, those horrible teachers. Hope you post again soon.

yay it's up! not i have to get writing i swear i have slight ADHD oh look a pony! what was i saying...?

this story is totally awesome. it's also the first N/L story I've seen. good job to both of you. Oh right also I'm a new reader. Post more as soon as you can please. thanks

it's alright *sniffles* i can wait.

Ow that hurt! (haha) ok well this is really short, the humor is from calvin and hobbes so don't sue me and blame the holidays for it shortness

I dragged my feet to Arithmacy. I hated Arithmacy. I was terrible at it

but Grandma made me take it. Stupid Grandma. I sat down at my

desk.. The bell rang and the porfessor started talking. I stared a

conversation with myself. Hi Neville. Hello Neville. Whats your

favorite color? You know it's red. I've always like red. Yeah because

it's my favorite color. So? So, I'm you. Whatever. You like Luna don't

you? Yes so do you. I know, should we be fighting over her? No you

idiot were one person. I knew that! I know it's odd but it keeps me

entertained.

"Mr. Longbottom? What's the answer?" the professor asked me. I

panicked. What question? Random number Neville, think!

"Uh...37." I said 37. why 37?

"Very good Neville, I didn't think you were paying attention!"

The bell rang and I ran to the common room. There, in big flashing

yellow letters, announced the next hogsmeade vist. This Saturday.

Hogsmeade ohh Hrmy is better and writing fluff then me, like I am better at writing Neville torture heehee my mind is warped

Very good!!!!!! I laughed about neville haveing a conversation with himself. way to surprise.

ok i don't care, he take it now, thats why it's a fanfition, at least we don't have him be a hot player (i have seen fanfics like that)

Ooooohhh!!! I love this!!! Keep Writing!!!

First to post. Awesome. I love it, I love it, I love it, keep going. cant wait for the next post.

Just so you know, I wasn't making fun of neville talking to himself, I just thought that it was sweet.

I didn't think that. I don't think you'd say that even if you thought so.

Aww, adorable sappyness (in a good way)