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04-19-2008, 03:31 AM
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#51 (permalink)
| | Hippocampus
Location: In my mind Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 276
Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | i hope so
poor poor rose
please post soon i dying to find out what happends
I hate that lord vulture woman i am going to kill her soon
love voldyXOXOXOXOX |
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04-19-2008, 04:14 PM
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#52 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Location: where the stage is Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 156
Hogwarts RPG Name: Charlotte Tonks First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Beth Wends Magical Transportation | oh my goodness! i love this story!!! poor rose! and ron!! and albus! AND hermoine!! keep writing!!  |
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04-19-2008, 05:11 PM
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#53 (permalink)
| | Hinkypunk
Location: England Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 856
Hogwarts RPG Name: Tinkerbell(Bell) Sabrina Evens Second Year | Im bored, Im really bored. I can't be borthered to do my homework so im going to post for all you wonderful people reading.
Im actully sad enough i've written this whole speach down. Help! Im going mad.
Ok guys before i post the next chapter i'd like to say a few things first. 1: that i will be able to post mre this wekend as my brother is away(He owns this computer(the one im using)) But my sister was going to sleep at her friends but the car brokedown so thats going to hold me up. Not!!! Nothing will. 2:Is that i really wanted to link this story to my profile so when itz finished(I really don't know why im on about it being finished, I am really going mad. Hehehe) then you dont have to look in all the pages og fiished fan fics to find mine.
One amazing thing is that i've had sooo much fun writing this story(still writing) so far that i've actually started writting my own character story(Before i've finished this one)Lol!!!(Im noting giving anything away). Itz called:
Tinkerbell Evens....her life diary....
OHMYGOD!!! you all must be very bored by now too, me ramberling on when i promised a chapter. ok scroll down fro the next chapter.
CHAPTER 7
Lord Vulture went mad with rage
“How dare you,” she screamed, “Cruico” Rose screamed in pain. Lord Vulture let out a high-pitched laugh.
“This is what happens to anyone that disobeys me” She said after Rose had stopped screaming. Rose fell to the floor in a heap, to weak to move.
“Get up” Lord vulture snarled
Rose slowly and weakly got of the floor. She stood facing Lord Vulture.
“Now Rose do you know who I am?” She asked calmly
“N…No” Rose stammered in reply
“When you speak to me you must call me master. Now I’m Lord Vulture (Preferring Lord then Lady)” Lord Vulture looked at Rose with sharp eyes. Rose just nodded.
“How do you know my name….”Rose asked without saying master
“Master, call me master. I know your name because you are Harry Potter’s child and you are bait”
Rose looked at Lord Vulture trying not to laugh
“I’m not Harry Potter’s child; my parents are Ron and Hermione Weasley… ma…”
“What?” Lord Vulture screamed before Rose could finish what she was going to say. “Yaxley, Malfoy (I don’t own these names, they belong to J.K Rowling)” She screamed. The next second two men ran in, one tall, blond hair with an ugly looking face(Yaxley) and the other slightly shorter, with dark greasy (as If he hadn’t washed it in weeks) and a handsome looking face(Malfoy). Rose recognized the taller one as her kidnapper.
“Yes master” they both said knelling, Rose could see they were trammelling as if they were scared of Lord Vulture, like she was.
“Yaxley you idiot. This is not the potter’s child; this is one of the blood traitors, Weasley.” She said the name Weasley with hatred. Yaxley looked up, with horror in his face.
“Go get a member his family NOW! And Malfoy throw this thing (Pointing at Rose) in the dungeon” She flicked her hand and they both jumped up.
“Yes master” They said
Yaxley ran out the room as fast as his legs could go and Malfoy took hold of Rose’s shoulders and pulled her out of the room.
‘This one seems nicer then the other one’ Rose thought.
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Harry was holding Ginny’s and Lily’s hand, a couple of hours after Hermione had woken up, on their way to there car. When they arrived at there car he let go of their hands and opened the driver’s door. Ginny opened the back passenger door to help lily get in. Once they were all strapped in they made there long journey to there country house (It happens to be the same house Harry lived in as a baby), miles and miles from London.
Hours later Harry pulled the car up, by their front gate, and looked up at the house in horror. He quickly jumped out of the car, Ginny doing the same also helping Lily out. Together they walked up to the house. The front door was hanging on its hinges, their garden was destroyed (Flowers trampled on and the grass pulled from the ground). All three were dreading what the inside would look like.
“Stay behind me.” Harry said standing in front of them and pulling out his wand, Ginny pulled out her wand too. Lily took her mother and father’s hand.
“Harry slowly moved the door, so they could get inside. Inside the house was a tip, Furniture ruined, ornaments broken, pictures on the floor, pages raped from the book that were on the floor. They just couldn’t stop looking at the mess
“My doll” Lily shouted running to the middle of the living room where her doll was, with its head pulled off.
“Annabelle” She said addressing the doll, she started to cry. Ginny moved away from Harry and walked over to Lily to try and calm her down.
“It’s alright Lily, it can be fixed. Look,” Ginny lifted her wand and pointed it at the doll, “Repario, there good as new” Lily smiled and hugged the doll tightly.
“You stay here, I’m going to look upstairs” Harry said from the doorway. They watched him go. Harry looked in Lily’s room, which was ruined. Next he looked into his and Ginny’s room, which was the same state as Lily’s. All the rooms were the same. Just as he was coming out of James’s room. He heard a scream, It was Ginny.
“Harry”
Then the screaming stopped. Harry teared himself down the stairs to the living room shouting Ginny and Lily’s names. It was empty. He looked in the other room but found them nowhere. Harry fell on the sofa, crying.
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Last edited by Evangeline Hermione : 04-22-2008 at 02:48 PM.
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04-19-2008, 09:16 PM
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#54 (permalink)
| | Skrewt
Location: on SS Join Date: Jul 2005
Posts: 1,312
Ministry RPG Name:
Liliana Hayman Magical Transportation | GRRR, Why does this Lord Vulture girl have to ruin everything?
PAMS!!! |
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04-20-2008, 02:19 PM
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#55 (permalink)
| Wandering Regulus Hippogriff
Location: in nothingness Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 3,539
Hogwarts RPG Name: srimathi srivatsan | grrr*pokes lady vulture  * 
awesome chapter!!PAMS!!PAMS!!
and i think its good to be a bit mad!all great people have a touch of madness 
*runs off to read your character story* |
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04-21-2008, 12:49 AM
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#56 (permalink)
| | Hippocampus
Location: In my mind Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 276
Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | this fan fic is so depressing
what is harry going to do????
i swear i kill that lady/lord person
please post soon
love voldyXOXOXOXOX |
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04-21-2008, 04:13 PM
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#57 (permalink)
| | Faerie
Location: Revision Land Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 3,821
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ariana Dumbledore Department of Mysteries | Sabrina has just gone off to kill Lord Vulture with Voldemort88 and get Lily, Ginny and Rose back!!! And also give her cousin (Malfoy) a slap around the face!!!
I swear I will kill Lord Vulture!
Evangelilne this is really really good, but really really sad.
Love,
Jemmz
xxx |
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04-21-2008, 05:22 PM
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#58 (permalink)
| | Hinkypunk
Location: England Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 856
Hogwarts RPG Name: Tinkerbell(Bell) Sabrina Evens Second Year | Just to let you know the Malfoy im writting in this story is not the same Malfoy you know, you'll find out why later...
luv ya guys for stiking to the story
xXEvangelineXx |
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04-22-2008, 02:32 AM
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#59 (permalink)
| | Hippocampus
Location: In my mind Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 276
Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | When When will we find out
i want a post now
sorry
love voldyXOXOXOXO |
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04-22-2008, 05:58 AM
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#60 (permalink)
| Wandering Regulus Hippogriff
Location: in nothingness Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 3,539
Hogwarts RPG Name: srimathi srivatsan | What!!
*takes out the thinking cap*waiting for the next post! |
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04-22-2008, 07:25 AM
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#61 (permalink)
| | Hinkypunk
Location: England Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 856
Hogwarts RPG Name: Tinkerbell(Bell) Sabrina Evens Second Year | I'll post near the end of this week, i think. Anywho have troble getting on the computer during the week. soz but i promise so,etime this week it will be up
luv ya all
xXEvangelineXx |
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04-22-2008, 11:23 AM
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#62 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Location: where the stage is Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 156
Hogwarts RPG Name: Charlotte Tonks First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Beth Wends Magical Transportation | grrrrrrr! this lord vulture just wants to ruin everything doesn't she?! (keep writing!!)  |
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04-22-2008, 06:18 PM
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#63 (permalink)
| | Faerie
Location: Revision Land Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 3,821
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ariana Dumbledore Department of Mysteries | Great! Now Sabrina has to go and apologise to Malfoy for slapping him! *grr* Oh well!
Can't wait for the next post hunni!! xxx Keep it going!
Anyone else think that Lord Vulture is going to die at the hands of us?? I do!!!
Jemmz
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04-23-2008, 02:11 AM
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| Sgt. Gryffindor Grindylow
Location: *runs far away* Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 910
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alycya "Aly" Weasley Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Edith "Edie" Griffiths Minister's Office | ** NEW READER **
This is soo cool!! Poor Rose, Poor Harry, Poor everyone!!!! PLease tell me it all goes right!!!!
I HATE LORD VULTURE!!!
*pocks her really hard in the eye ... repeatedly*
Love it
Jade
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
P.S. I'm subscribing to this thread!!!!!
Last edited by alyweasley : 04-23-2008 at 04:24 AM.
Reason: love it sooo much lol
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04-23-2008, 03:01 PM
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#65 (permalink)
| | Faerie
Location: Revision Land Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 3,821
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ariana Dumbledore Department of Mysteries | Quote:
Originally Posted by alyweasley ** NEW READER **
This is soo cool!! Poor Rose, Poor Harry, Poor everyone!!!! PLease tell me it all goes right!!!! | But if Evangeline did that, then there would be no more story,  and we like this story!!
Would you like a cookie while we wait for the next post!!
Jemma
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04-24-2008, 02:51 AM
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#66 (permalink)
| | Hippocampus
Location: In my mind Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 276
Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | Yeeeees please
take a cookie
please post soon
love voldyXOXOXOOXOX |
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04-24-2008, 07:21 AM
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#67 (permalink)
| | Hinkypunk
Location: England Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 856
Hogwarts RPG Name: Tinkerbell(Bell) Sabrina Evens Second Year | Everyone hopefully I'll have the post up tomorow. na dafter that I wont be posting till next week sometime because I'm so busy this weekend. Friday have friends over, have a talent show(signing Titanic and saying a peom) then after sleeping over a friends. Saturday shopping all day and sunday im swimming all day but if im lucky i'll be on sunday night.
luv ya all for reading
xXEvangelineXx
P.S. I wnated to quote to your messages but the computers at school wont let me. oh well i'll try again tonight at home |
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04-24-2008, 10:35 PM
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#68 (permalink)
| PAMS PLZ! Imp
Location: on the soccerfield Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 111
Hogwarts RPG Name: nicole kristen todd Ministry RPG Name:
haylie ann lupin Accidents & Catastrophes | keep goin!!!
i want to know wat happens!!! so bad
i will kill lady vulture watever her name is
love it keep goin!!!!! |
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04-25-2008, 03:13 PM
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#69 (permalink)
| | Gnome
Location: punching a werewolf! Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 76
Hogwarts RPG Name: Ange-Aimée Belle Morin | *** New Reader Alert!!! ***
This is amazing!
*hits Lord Vulture repeatedly in the eye*  Why does she ruin everyone's life except for hers??? *pokes harder in eye*
Let all those abducted return safely, plz!!!!!!
PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!
~Ange-Aimée~  |
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04-26-2008, 05:11 PM
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#70 (permalink)
| | Hinkypunk
Location: England Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 856
Hogwarts RPG Name: Tinkerbell(Bell) Sabrina Evens Second Year | Quote:
Originally Posted by H/G4eva GRRR, Why does this Lord Vulture girl have to ruin everything?
PAMS!!! | Well she is just like lord voldemort.Thanks for reading Quote:
Originally Posted by MAthI^_^ grrr*pokes lady vulture  * 
awesome chapter!!PAMS!!PAMS!!
and i think its good to be a bit mad!all great people have a touch of madness 
*runs off to read your character story* | Hey thanks and i hope you liked my charactor story???. Everyone is mad in there own way. I'm just good at writing sad storys but other then that i'm still learning. Lol!!!! thanks for reading. Quote:
Originally Posted by Sabrina_Snape Sabrina has just gone off to kill Lord Vulture with Voldemort88 and get Lily, Ginny and Rose back!!! And also give her cousin (Malfoy) a slap around the face!!!
I swear I will kill Lord Vulture!
Evangelilne this is really really good, but really really sad.
Love,
Jemmz
xxx | Thanks Sabrina i've written that chapter i was on about and there is also a little surprise in store for you when i post it.Lol!!!!!
Thanks for reading. As i said before i'm very good at sad storys but not on any other subject. Lol!!!! To be honest i'll join you in killing Lord Vulture!!!! but i made her up so im in the wrong *Start to cry*
luv ya
xXEvangelineXx Quote:
Originally Posted by alyweasley ** NEW READER **
This is soo cool!! Poor Rose, Poor Harry, Poor everyone!!!! PLease tell me it all goes right!!!!
I HATE LORD VULTURE!!!
*pocks her really hard in the eye ... repeatedly*
Love it
Jade
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
P.S. I'm subscribing to this thread!!!!! | Hey Jade glad you found my story and liked it. Lol!!!!
ok for the bit about hating Lord Vulture, well join the club everyone hates her except for really mad people which may be reading this story, only if there are not eing rude.
Thanks for subscribing to my story, and a little secret, im mad enough to have subscribe to this story too. Lol!!!! Ok to everyone im sorry but i'll not be able to post until monday/ tuesday time. Sorry and i hope youall dont stop reading.
luv ya all
xXEvangelineXx |
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04-28-2008, 08:08 PM
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#71 (permalink)
| | Puffskein
Location: Somewhere, reading Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 166
Hogwarts RPG Name: Crystal Cooper First Year | New reader!  Great ff, PAMS!  I must know what happens! |
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04-29-2008, 07:31 AM
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#72 (permalink)
| | Hinkypunk
Location: England Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 856
Hogwarts RPG Name: Tinkerbell(Bell) Sabrina Evens Second Year | |