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03-25-2008, 11:27 PM
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| | Skrewt
Location: on SS Join Date: Jul 2005
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Liliana Hayman Magical Transportation | New Reader!! I love this so far!
Dont you dare hurt Rose!!! (Not you, the Lord Vulture guy)
Take your time!! Pams!! |
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04-02-2008, 07:35 PM
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| | Chizpurfle
Location: England Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 744
Hogwarts RPG Name: Tinkerbell(Bell) Sabrina Evens Second Year | Yey! Finally--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Everyone in the dorm looked at the door to see professor Martin walk in, followed by Colin. The professor quickly walked over to the bed and put the back of her hand onto Albus's forehead. She frowned.
"You have a fever, nothing serious. Your going to have to come with me to the hospital wing," she said helping him get out of bed, " you'll better after a good night sleep.” She finished at the look of Albus's face.
She helped him out of bed and towards the door. Professor Martin stopped just before the door and turned around
"The rest of you, Bed now!" She walked out the door with Albus.
She guided Albus the deserted common room and along the deserted corridors. A couple of floors down they walked into Peeves, who was putting green slime all over the walls. When he heard them approce he turned to look at them.
"It's little potty’s kid. He don't look good" he chuckled
"Peeves would you please take that disgusting slime off the walls" professor Martin asked
"You want ant little potty’s kid?" peeves asked ignoring the professor.
Albus looked at the slime then suddenly threw up beside himself. Peeves gave another laugh.
"PEEVES! GO NOW!" professor Martin shouted.
Peeves did a backflip and glided away.
"Ok lets get you to the hospital wing"
5 minutes later they entered the wind with the matron. The matron ran ahead to one of the beds at the other side of the ward
"In this one please," she said, "we'll get you better in no time"
The matron walked off to her office and Professor Martin helped Albus into the bed.
"You’ll be ok now. I’ll see you when you’re up and out of the hospital."
she smiled at the matron, who had come back, and strolled out of the wind.
They watched her go.
"Right, drink all this up and get some sleep" The matron handed him a glass of a green bubberly liquid, similar to the slime peeves had. It gave his stomach a jolt.
"What is it?" he asked looking at the liquid
"Not pumpkin juice, i can tell you. It's to help your fever break faster" She answered
Albus had no choice but to drink the drink. He took one gulp and nearly spat it out
"It's disgusting...." he said before falling asleep.
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Hermione nearly fainted when she heard Harry's answer.
"Ron, Ronnald" she said with tears falling down her all ready swollen cheeks. She started to cry again.
Hugo, who had been standing nest to Hermione the whole time, looked like he was going to cry but instead he asked tremberly
"Mummy, can we go see him please?"
Harry looked taken aback, 'Hugo is taking this rather well' he thought.
"Hermione,....." he began but she interrupted him
"Harry... sob I will...sob go see...sob him" she managed to say. Hugo's face lit up a bit.
Harry stepped forward and helped Hermione up from the floor.
"Ok... Lets go" Hermione said after a while.
The journey to St Mungos was along one and when they finally got there visiting hours were nearly over. They stumbled over to the front desk, Hermione holding Hugo's hand and Harry in the front, and joined the Que. When the que died down they moved to the front.
"We are here to see Mr Ronnald Weasley” Harry annocened to the receptionist.
The receptionist looked at the long list of patients next to her,
“Um… Fourth floor, ward 52,” She said looking up, “Next” she added
They moved away from the desk and up the stairs, on the right, to the fourth floor. When they made it to the fourth floor they were taken aback.
“There are loads of healers here.” Hermione said amazed. Harry looked at her strangely.
“Hermione you’re a Healer here, I thought you would be used to it by now?”
“I haven’t been on this floor before; I’m only on the third floor, potion and plant poisoning and it’s different.” Hermione nodded her head. A nearby healer took that as a sign of help. He walked over
“Can I help you in any way?” He asked
“Were looking for ward 52” Harry said
“Oh… straight down the end, last door on the right” He suddenly looked very sad. They said there thanks and walked on down the hallway. They finally got down the hallway, after a few minutes of walking. Harry turned the door handle and slowly walked in followed by Hermione and Hugo.
The ward was small containing one bed, a bedside table and a few chairs. The walls were bare except for one picture of a landscape. On the bedside table there were some flowers and some cards. ‘It looks like someone’s been here already’ Hermione thought. She looked round the room once before casting her eyes at the bed. There was a person lying there, still as a statue, his body was so badly injured it would hurt you to look at him. Hermione took one look and screamed.
“Ron” She screamed
“Daddy” Hugo shouted
Harry let his tears; he was holding, roll down his cheek.
Rose was lying on the floor of a cold, damp and dark cell crying again. Her robes in threads.
With in a couple of days she and her kidnapper arrived at an old shack in the middle of nowhere, Rose not in one peace. Her kidnapper was true to his word when he said he hurt her if she keeps crying. Ever since she had arrived at the old smelly shack she had been taken into the cell she was in and she had been there since. Rose drifted off to sleep. She dreamt of being back home with her family and friends, where she was happy and safe. She dreamt of her home, her new school. Her wish was soon gone when she woke with a start.
The door of her cell was being opened.
Rose moved to the back wall of the cell, away from the intruder. She sat there watching a black shape moving towards her. A hand came forward and griped her robes.
“My master wants to see you” He snarled at her
He dragged her off, through the dark hallways and up flights of stairs.
After about 5 minutes of walking (or in Rose’s case being dragged) they came to large double doors. The mysterious person lightly knocked on the doors and waited.
“Come in” A female voice said. It brought shivers up Rose’s spine. He opened the door and pushed Rose in and stepped in after her.
The room was large and circular.
The room was bare except for a single chair by the fireplace
“Here she is master” He tremberly bowed
“Leave” The voice said again
He bowed again and walked out closing the door behind him. The room went pitch black.
The female voice chuckled.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Well here we are. Thanks for the wait guys
Last edited by Evangeline Hermione : 04-17-2008 at 02:39 PM.
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04-02-2008, 07:53 PM
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| | Hippogriff
Location: turn around.... Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 3,725
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexandra (Alex) Leann Morgan Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cassandra (Cassie) Serena Carter Magical Law Enforcement | Yay you posted you posted!
Porr Albus, he best be okay, and Ron, what happened to Ron???? On and Rose, my poor poor Rose, she needs to be safe, she needs to escape, I'll help her!!!
Great post, PAMS!! |
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04-02-2008, 09:21 PM
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#29 (permalink)
| | Skrewt
Location: on SS Join Date: Jul 2005
Posts: 1,311
Ministry RPG Name:
Liliana Hayman Magical Transportation | Please let Rose be ok. And who hurt Ron?? And the Lord Vulture is a woman??
Pams please! |
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04-04-2008, 07:53 PM
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| | Hippogriff
Location: Revision Land Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 3,377
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ariana Dumbledore Department of Mysteries | Oh my gosh you've posted!!! yay!!!!
Who has harmed Ron cause i will personally rip them apart with my bare hands!!!
Poor Rose, she is being so brave, and i would probably be as bad as she is when it comes to crying. I wouldnt be able to stop.
Please PAMS!!!
Jemmz
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04-04-2008, 10:12 PM
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| | Horklump
Join Date: Mar 2008
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| *NEW READER* Oh my gosh, what happened to Ron ???! Poor Hermione . Her daughter is missing, her husband more dead than alive, and she still has to watch out for Hugo. If any thing happened to him she'd probably just up and die. And Al must be in total despair. One thing that bugs me though is that that Vulture person is a woman!!!! Sorry, I forgot to say this earlier but incase you haven't noticed I LOVE THIS FAN-FIC!!! Please post more soon. |
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04-05-2008, 02:19 AM
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| | Hippocampus
Location: In my mind Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 275
Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | I am really scared
what is going to happen to Rose?????
Please post soon
Love VoldyXOXOXOX
Last edited by voldemort&88 : 04-05-2008 at 02:19 AM.
Reason: spelling
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04-05-2008, 11:04 AM
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| | Chizpurfle
Location: England Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 744
Hogwarts RPG Name: Tinkerbell(Bell) Sabrina Evens Second Year | Quote:
Originally Posted by moonchic07 Yay you posted you posted!
Porr Albus, he best be okay, and Ron, what happened to Ron???? On and Rose, my poor poor Rose, she needs to be safe, she needs to escape, I'll help her!!!
Great post, PAMS!! | Thanks for reading and thanks for not leaving this (short) story when i did not post. Thanks. Quote:
Originally Posted by H/G4eva Please let Rose be ok. And who hurt Ron?? And the Lord Vulture is a woman??
Pams please! | Yep Lord voulture is a women and later on in the story you'll find out why she's turned out like Lord voldemort(sorry for spelling mastake) Quote:
Originally Posted by Sabrina_Snape Oh my gosh you've posted!!! yay!!!!
Who has harmed Ron cause i will personally rip them apart with my bare hands!!!
Poor Rose, she is being so brave, and i would probably be as bad as she is when it comes to crying. I wouldnt be able to stop.
Please PAMS!!!
Jemmz
xxx | Dont worry everything dosn't go bad all the time. It may change later(Not saying anything). Personaly i havn't really decided who has hurt Ron but i have a few Ideas, find out in the story. thanks for reading Quote:
Originally Posted by bookworm007 *NEW READER* Oh my gosh, what happened to Ron ???! Poor Hermione . Her daughter is missing, her husband more dead than alive, and she still has to watch out for Hugo. If any thing happened to him she'd probably just up and die. And Al must be in total despair. One thing that bugs me though is that that Vulture person is a woman!!!! Sorry, I forgot to say this earlier but incase you haven't noticed I LOVE THIS FAN-FIC!!! Please post more soon. | Thanks. Lord voulture is a women for a reason like all women are. Hermione is really scared(all i'm saying) but thanks for reading Quote:
Originally Posted by voldemort&88 I am really scared
what is going to happen to Rose?????
Please post soon
Love VoldyXOXOXOX | At the moment i've written chapter 5,6 and 7 on paper but trying to find the time to type it up is a nightmare. I promise to write more soon and its school next week(Help!!) which means i'll be able to write more quick. Thanks fro reading And to everyone else that read my story. Thanks i would not be this far without you. Thanks and i promise i will post more soon |
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04-06-2008, 02:45 AM
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#34 (permalink)
| | Hippocampus
Location: In my mind Join Date: Jan 2008
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Billy-Jean Bennet First Year | Thank you u
you are the best |
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04-07-2008, 12:48 AM
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| | Bicorn
Location: The Cullen's house.. Join Date: Nov 2007
Posts: 1,700
Hogwarts RPG Name: Sahrina Marie Potter (Rian) Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Jessica Emily Miller Magical Creatures | Sorry it's taken me so long...
I do not like the sound of Ron....I hope he's okay!!!
Poor Rose, I do not like Lord Vulture... |
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04-08-2008, 12:26 PM
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| | Bowtruckle
Join Date: Nov 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Yvonne Ginevra Potter First | Wow...sorry for not being here for so long....i had problems going on these few weeks...
Anyway,good chappies!!!keep it up!
Yvonne |
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04-08-2008, 02:25 PM
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| Wandering Regulus Hippogriff
Location: in nothingness Join Date: Dec 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: srimathi srivatsan | wow!it was great!from the next time i'll know i can expect an amazing chapter when yoy take your time!  |
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04-08-2008, 09:47 PM
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| | Imp
Location: on the soccerfield Join Date: Oct 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: nicole kristen todd Ministry RPG Name:
haylie ann lupin Accidents & Catastrophes | yay suspense i love it  so keep going it is so great serously I LOVE THIS FAN FIC!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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04-15-2008, 07:30 AM
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#39 (permalink)
| | Chizpurfle
Location: England Join Date: Dec 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tinkerbell(Bell) Sabrina Evens Second Year | Hey everyone, my next post is going to be posted very soon, i've nearly finished typing it up. so in the mean time i'd though i would sing you all a little song......
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO MEEEEEEEEEEEE HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME.
yey itz my birthday.
well tell me what you think and remember my next post is going to be posted very sooooooooon |
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04-15-2008, 02:42 PM
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| Wandering Regulus Hippogriff
Location: in nothingness Join Date: Dec 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: srimathi srivatsan | *sing*Happy Birthday!!!! 
*waiting for the next post*  |
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04-15-2008, 06:24 PM
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| | Hippogriff
Location: turn around.... Join Date: Jan 2008
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Alexandra (Alex) Leann Morgan Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cassandra (Cassie) Serena Carter Magical Law Enforcement | Aw Happy Birthday!!  Take your time to finish the post, I'm sure we can all wait, right everyone? At least I hope so anyway, lol. |
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04-15-2008, 07:25 PM
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| | Hippogriff
Location: Revision Land Join Date: Mar 2008
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ariana Dumbledore Department of Mysteries | Happy Birthday!!!
Tell you what, you can see two new posts up in my fanfic called 'I'm not who you think I am' in the character stories section. I posted two bits up today, and I'm going to dedicate them to you, as its your birthday!
Can't wait until next post!!!
Jemmz
xxx
P.S. The cake and balloons are from Sabrina  |
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04-16-2008, 08:24 PM
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#43 (permalink)
| | Hippogriff
Location: Revision Land Join Date: Mar 2008
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ariana Dumbledore Department of Mysteries | Glad you had a great day Evangeline
Sabrina was going to send you a present, but I said she couldn't because knowing her, it would've been poisonous. (She is doing really well in Herbology at the moment)
PAMS please! I need to find out whether I'm going to have to kill Lord Vulture! *Loads a sniper gun and radios for swat team*
Ron had better be alright!!
Jemmz
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04-17-2008, 07:33 AM
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#44 (permalink)
| | Chizpurfle
Location: England Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 744
Hogwarts RPG Name: Tinkerbell(Bell) Sabrina Evens Second Year | Here you are
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Albus was is the hospital wing for several days and surprisingly got quite a few visitors, he got so many that Madam Profrey had to put a charm around his bed only letting herself and the teachers through.
When he finally got out of the hospital wing, on Wednesday of the first week, he was so behind of homework he nearly had a nervous breakdown finishing it all.
“Yes, I’ve finished, finally” he said to himself after finishing the last sentence of his Defence against the Dark Arts homework D.A.D.A.).
“What’s that you just said?” His friend Colin, who was sitting next to him, asked.
“Wha….Oh I’ve finished all my homework”Albus replied
“Cool, you want to play some wizards chess?”
“I don’t feel in the mood”
Colin looked at him sympathetically
“You still think of Rose?” He asked
Albus nodded his head and looked away. He didn’t wont Colin to see the tears in his eyes.
“I…I just miss her so much”
“Well…Um we all miss her Albus but…”
“But What??? She’s gone, she’s dead. But what Colin?” He nearly shouted, Interrupting Colin
Albus turned to look at Colin
“…But we will see her again someday, just don’t be so negative about it” He finished. Colin stood up from the table and walked over to his friends by the fire. Albus turned back to the window and whispered
“Rose, Rose”
The portrait hole opened somewhere behind him and a young girl in his year walked in. She scanned the room for something, and when her eyes fell on Albus she ran over.
“Albus…,” she started tapping his shoulder, “I was told to give this to you” she showed him a letter addressed to him.
Albus removed his gaze from the window to look at the girl ‘Lily-Anne looks sooo beautiful’ he thought to himself
“Tha…Thank yo… you” he stammered taking the letter from her. She smiled at him and walked over to her friends. Albus found himself losing his breath at her smile, he sat there for a while starring after her.
He came back to earth.
“Snap out of it Albus, she’ll never go out with you” he whispered to himself. Albus looked back at the letter; he didn’t recognize the handwriting on it
‘I wonder who’s it from’ he thought
He opened the letter and read through it:
Albus,
I know your still upset about what happened with rose(we all are) but you really need to talk to someone so…
Please meet me at the entrance hall in 5 minutes
Hagrid
He read it through again
“Great!,” he said. Everyone looked in his direction, “someone who’s going to make me speak, just what I need right now.” He finished to himself.
He packed his homework things up and made his way to the entrance hall.
5 minutes later he found himself walking down the main stairs.
“Albus you’re ‘ere” Hagrid said spotting him
“Yes I’m here” He replied sarcastically, Hagrid didn’t seem to notices
“Come down to my cabin and we’ll talk”
“No thanks” Albus turned around and started to walk back to the common room, but someone grapped him from behind.
“Your coming” Hagrid said walking out the castle door with him over his shoulder.
“So Rose, what do you think?” Lord Vulture asked. She chuckled again.
Lord Vulture didn’t bother for an answer she carried on,
“Come here and kneel in front of me”
Rose stayed where she was for a second, to scared to move but in the end she walked forward slowly and stood facing Lord Vulture. But she didn’t kneel.
“Kneel Rose” She pointed at the floor.
“N…No!” Rose replied nervously
Lord Vulture suddenly looked like her head was going to explode. She was so mad, nobody says no to her.
“Rose kneel before me, NOW!” Lord Vulture tried to keep her temper to a minimum
Rose noticed her temper ad started to tremble slightly. She new she was going to regret her next answer but it just slipped out.
“NO!”
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04-17-2008, 07:42 AM
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| Wandering Regulus Hippogriff
Location: in nothingness Join Date: Dec 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: srimathi srivatsan | *sniff*Rose is soo brave!!!*huggles rose*
Albus nees councilling!!!great chapter though |
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04-17-2008, 06:22 PM
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#46 (permalink)
| | Skrewt
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