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Old 02-25-2004, 10:32 PM   #76 (permalink)

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Clinging to the work surface, she smiled at Cossette, as she tried to hold herself up. Breathing deeply, she placed a hand on her stomach and tried to control herself. Within seconds, she was on the floor, having fainted.
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(OOC: okay having switched places....and sexes....Darrin's in)


"Marce!", yelled Darrin, as he and Cossette rushed over to her, "Cossette, go get the Professor....and Alyssa," he instructed as she left, "Marce dear," he put his hand on her forehead, she was clamy and losing color, He placed one hand under her neck for support and the other under her knees and lifted her over to the couch and looked around for a blanket.
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She felt someone lift her and vaguely recognised a male voice floating her head, but she were unable to open her eyes and felt sick to the stomach.
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Snape heard the frantic voices before the blonde girl came to fetch him. He was on his feet and sweeping down the staircase with his wand out when she found him. Finding out that it was merely that Marcella had fainted, Snape pocketed his wand and went to Marcella's side. "What is it?" he asked.
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Darrin was fixing a blanket over Marcella when he heard Snape and the girls returning to room where she lay, he checked here head once more, and noticed that the color in her face was still very ashen...
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Hearing snide remarks, she twisted in her position, tears falling from her eyes even though she were unconscious.
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Darrin looked up at the considerably taller Snape and answered, "I don't kow sir, she was getting to the bottom of the steps when her eyes rolled back in her head and she lost all the color in her cheeks, she fell to the floor, I couldn't revive her so I sent Cosette for you and then I carried her here"
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Snape nodded and went to fetch a potion he had in the other room. This was perfect; just dandy. As if he didn't have enough to deal with, now the girl has fallen ill.
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feeling a clammy hand upon her head, she stirred and her eyes fluttered open, briefly and rolled toward the back of her head. They then shut again, and her breathing became fast and erratic.
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*Cosette ran back to the kitchen and grabbed the cleanest cloth she could find and dampened it slightly under the faucet. She ran back to Marcella's side and dabbed her forehead with it lightly*

"Oh Marcella...Please wake up love..."

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Breathing, her chest rose higher and the pace picked up a little. Her eyes continued to roll and her body started to shake, causing her sleeves to droop slightly, revealing brutal marks slashed across the veins on her tiny wrist.
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Snape came back with a restorative draft. It should bring her around to conciousness so at least they could determine her symptoms. But, if she didn't come around soon, Snape would be forced to call Dumbledore.
But, before he could administer the potion, he saw the marks on her arms and swung on her friends. "What is this?" he demanded.
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Breathing, her chest rose higher and the pace picked up a little. Her eyes continued to roll and her body started to shake, causing her sleeves to droop slightly, revealing brutal marks slashed across the veins on her tiny wrist.

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*moving quickly Cosette quickly covered her wrists and turned on the tall creepy man*

Help her now! Give her the draft! Don't just stand there you baboon!
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Snape pushed the hysterical girl out of his way and leaned over Marcella. Sitting her up, he tilted back her head and placed a drop of the potion on her tongue before laying her back down. As he waited for the potion to take effect, he turned back to the girl. "Don't ever presume to order me around, again," he sneered, waggling a finger in her face.
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Marce could hear them discussing her wrists and move awkwardly. She didn't want to have to explain her trauma, but she knew now she would have no choice. Feeling her stomach clench again, her body flung upwards and she vomited on the floor.
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*Cosette stepped away from his finger with her jaw clinched*

"I...but you...oh...fine...yes sir."

*Cosette was fuming, but Marcella's condition was more important right now. She moved Marce's hair away from her clammy face and dabbed her face again with the cloth*
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The bottoms of Snape's pants were soiled, but he paid no heed to that at the moment. "Go fetch a bowl from the kitchen," he ordered noone in particular. Turning back to Marcella, he saw her holding her stomach and summoned a different potion. Administering it to her, he hoped that this would work better by calming her stomach.
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The clenching ceased and her breath slowed down. Gasping through her mouth, she gulped and tried to sit up, resulting in a dull ache from her stomach. Eyes opening, she saw Snape, holding her up and her friends stood all around her, with worried expressions on their faces.
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Snape slowly slipped away from Marcella as he saw her recovering. He gestured for one of her friends to take over. He didn't want her to get the wrong impression and think for a moment that he might actually be enjoying himself. He'd rather be back at Hogwarts caring for his own daughter, than here tending to a sick girl and her friends. "What happened?" he asked MArcella, hoping to figure out why she had collapsed.
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*Cosette pulled out her wand and said:
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and the bowl came flying to her gently. She would of went and got it herself, but she was not about to leave the side of her very ill friend. She whispered, *

"Marce?"
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Knowing it was her own fault, she kept quiet and turned away from him, muttering, almost silently, "It's my own fault..." her eyes glassing over with tears. Spotting her wirsts, she pulled her sleeves over them and hid them from anyone's sight.
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Snape surveyed Marcella carefully before attempting his next questions, which was sure to result in an outburst of fury. "What exactly was you fault?"
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Indicating with her arms, weakly, she wavered at herself. "This.." she said, indicating the state she were in, but not mentioning the cuts on her arms. "Dont try lecturing me because it wont work. You dont want to understand you cant ever undertsnand either." she declared getting up and trying to walk away. Before she had even moved a step, her body had collapsed as she was too weak to walk.
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Snape looked down at the girl, still confused. What on earth was she thinking? His feeling that this would be a long summer was being reafirmed with every passing moment. He didn't htink he could take this much longer. Kristi was no where near this needy. "I'll make you something for the weakness," he muttered and turned to the kitchen table.

With a wave of his wand, a cauldron appeared and he began to fiddle with a magical fire.
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