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04-19-2008, 06:31 PM
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| | Hinkypunk
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tinkerbell(Bell) Sabrina Evens Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Lily-Anne Evans Magical Maintenance | Tinkerbell Evens.... Her life Diary - Sa13+ Hey everyone this is my second fanfic. Im still writing my frist one though. If you want to read it then itz in Epic/Adventure, and called The New Nightmare. 
I give credit to Nicola for this wonderful banner. Thanks nicola. CHAPTER 1 Friday
Hi, I'm Tinkerbell and this is my diary. I write everything that happens in my life. I mean everything. Ok where to start??? I know. My name is Tinkerbell Sabrina Evens, Im 11 years old. My parents are Lily-Anne and James Evens. They both are lawers(sorry if wrong spelling). I have a twin sister called Saffron Lily Evens and a 3 year old brother called Jake. Oh i must not forget Spooty and Bubbles(My goldfish). My home town is Bridport but we moved to London when me and Saffron were 3. we have lived here since. I attend a school called symonsbury. well thats really all about me. Wait i have one last thing. I have a cousin who is mine( and Saffron's) age. His name is.....
Oh sorry got to go, Mum's calling me fro tea
"Coming Mother"
I'll write more soon
Tinkerbell
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I'm evil a cliffy. Can you guess who Tinkerbell's cousin is???
Plz tell me what you think. Im sorry if this first bit of my Diary is boring but you have to introduce ourself. Thankz for reading
Tinkerbell
xXxXxXxX Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7 Chapter 8 Chapter 9 Chapter 10 Chapter 11 Chapter 12 Chapter 13 Chapter 14 Chapter 15 Chapter 16 Chapter 17 Chapter 18 Chapter 19 Chapter 20 Chapter 21 Chapter 22 Chapter 23 Chapter 24 Chapter 25 Chapter 26 Chapter 27 Chapter 28 Chapter 29
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04-19-2008, 11:14 PM
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| | Bicorn
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aleda Delacroix Sixth | pretty good start so far.
And I think I have an idea who her cousin is. |
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04-20-2008, 06:40 AM
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| Urdu Mod ♥ SotS Head of Writers KasTan Snidget
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Shel Ambrose Seventh Year | Nice work, hun. = Quote:
Originally Posted by Evangeline Hermione I really wanted a banner for this story. It could beany picture you wanted, but i want it to say: Tinkerbell Evens....Her life story-Sa13+ by Evangeline(Evangeline Hermione). Cheers guys. I hope you like it. | SS has lots of people who could make that for you. You just have to let them know exactly what you want it to look like. You could request your banner here. Cheers.
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Also, if you have trouble with spellings, you could get someone to proof-read your updates before you post them. This should help.
Looking forward to more posts, here. I'm sure you could develop this diary to make it very, very interesting. Good luck. =] |
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04-20-2008, 08:12 AM
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| | Hinkypunk
Location: England Join Date: Dec 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tinkerbell(Bell) Sabrina Evens Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Lily-Anne Evans Magical Maintenance | Quote:
Originally Posted by Lightsoutxxnyc pretty good start so far.
And I think I have an idea who her cousin is. | Hehehe, well dont give anything away. Hehehe lol just kidding. you wont find out until a few chpters later sorry. Quote:
Originally Posted by SenoritaMaxie Nice work, hun. =
SS has lots of people who could make that for you. You just have to let them know exactly what you want it to look like. You could request your banner here. Cheers.
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Also, if you have trouble with spellings, you could get someone to proof-read your updates before you post them. This should help.
Looking forward to more posts, here. I'm sure you could develop this diary to make it very, very interesting. Good luck. =] | Thanks for the info I'll try them later. thanks for reading this
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04-20-2008, 08:22 AM
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| Urdu Mod ♥ SotS Head of Writers KasTan Snidget
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Shel Ambrose Seventh Year | ^ You're welcome. Keep posting. =]
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04-20-2008, 08:22 AM
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| | Hinkypunk
Location: England Join Date: Dec 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tinkerbell(Bell) Sabrina Evens Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Lily-Anne Evans Magical Maintenance | Chapter 2 Saturday Morning
I'm back, ok so after i had tea it was too late to write again so i went straight to bed. But i'm back now.
I had to stop when mum called me but i'll finish my sentence, My cousin is........Um.......... i can't remember, i mean i've only met him once or twice but we never really talk about him at home. I'll ask mum later.
Nothng really happened today, i had an argument with saffron, She Won!!!. more later, by then i should have his name.
Luv ya all
Tinkerbell
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Ive got to go to bed but i just thought i would post and say i asked mum the name, itz...... Ok for some reason my chapters just get shorter and shorter. Help!!!! hehehe.lol! dont worry the next chapter is LLLLooooooooonnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggggggggggggggggg gggeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. I promise
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04-20-2008, 05:23 PM
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| | Bicorn
Location: NY Join Date: Mar 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Aleda Delacroix Sixth | It's pretty good, but I think it could be better if you developed the entries more, added more feelings, more of went on. Like descriptions.
I'm liking the concept though. |
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04-20-2008, 07:07 PM
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|  NLFC Pressie/BLFC VP LV&DEFC Promo Beedle Bard Wannabe Abraxan
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lucas Zaire Greenwood First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Egypt Greenwood Magical Maintenance | yeah i think an 11 year old would be bursting with energy and descriptions
just develop the entries more  but she is such a cutie pie i love it
PAMS!!   |
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04-21-2008, 08:32 AM
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| | Hinkypunk
Location: England Join Date: Dec 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tinkerbell(Bell) Sabrina Evens Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Lily-Anne Evans Magical Maintenance | Quote:
Originally Posted by Lightsoutxxnyc It's pretty good, but I think it could be better if you developed the entries more, added more feelings, more of went on. Like descriptions.
I'm liking the concept though. | Thanks for the info. Im glad you like it soo far. Dont worry ill try to add fro feeling, add more to what went one etc.. Dont worry if your wondering im not mad, just glad, even if this reply may sound like im mad. Hehehe and i promise to develop the entries more. posting next chapter soon, just got to change it a bit. Lol!!!! Quote:
Originally Posted by Tomasina Riddle yeah i think an 11 year old would be bursting with energy and descriptions
just develop the entries more  but she is such a cutie pie i love it
PAMS!!   | Thanks for reading. Im glad you like it. Dont worry i promise ill develop my entries more. posting next chapter soon just got to change it. Im glad you like it another to stay Thanks to all you guys that read this FanFic. I luv ya all. Lol!!!
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04-21-2008, 10:22 AM
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|  Hebrew Lang. Mod FanFic Enthusiast Bicorn
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Jake Hatich First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Ministry? Not yet... ^_^ | Hey Evangeline!! Great start! I have no idea who her cousin is so I guess I'll have to wait and find out! So Please post more soon!!
-*~ Shirel ~*- |
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04-21-2008, 12:46 PM
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|  SBFC Activity Offic. LPFC Event Officer Neville's Patronus Faerie
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Elizabeth Peterson Diagon Alley | Evangeline!!! It's brilliant!!! Wondering if just by chance... Tinkerbell is related to... never mind... don't want to spoil it for anyone!!
Sabrina has noticed that Tinkerbell's middle name is the same as hers!!
Jemmz
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04-21-2008, 03:54 PM
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| | Hinkypunk
Location: England Join Date: Dec 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tinkerbell(Bell) Sabrina Evens Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Lily-Anne Evans Magical Maintenance | Quote:
Originally Posted by Sabrina_Snape Evangeline!!! It's brilliant!!! Wondering if just by chance... Tinkerbell is related to... never mind... don't want to spoil it for anyone!!
Sabrina has noticed that Tinkerbell's middle name is the same as hers!!
Jemmz
xxx | Hehe yes it is. your name Sabrina inspired me. i luv your name so i used it. Hope you dont mind.
Jemmz i have a feeling you may know who she is related to. If you want to PM me with your thought then im happy to recieve one. I just luv getting mail itz sooo fun. Lol!!!! Anywho i glad you loved my Fanfic and i know it may not be as good as my first one but i promise it will get there.
Luv ya
xXEvangelineXx Quote:
Originally Posted by shirelbb Hey Evangeline!! Great start! I have no idea who her cousin is so I guess I'll have to wait and find out! So Please post more soon!!
-*~ Shirel ~*- | Hey Shirel
thank you for the comment. I didn't think anyone would like this one coz itz not as good as my first Fanfic and plus noone well except for 4 or 5 people have read it. Oh well more may come when itz better. I hope. Anywho she'll find out who her cousin in the four chapter, just before she leaves for Hogwarts *Not saying anything else or I'll give away a secret*
Luv ya
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04-21-2008, 08:45 PM
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| | Bicorn
Location: uh... Join Date: Sep 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Kayden 'Kay' Noelle Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Delaney Riliegh International Cooperation | Oh! I think it's a cute start! Update as soon as possible! I'll love to read on. |
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04-22-2008, 08:21 AM
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| | Hinkypunk
Location: England Join Date: Dec 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tinkerbell(Bell) Sabrina Evens Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Lily-Anne Evans Magical Maintenance | Quote:
Originally Posted by PurpleJellyBean Oh! I think it's a cute start! Update as soon as possible! I'll love to read on. |
Thanks for reading I'll get the next post up soon, just waiting for a friend to help me update the chapter. Lol!!!!
i promise it be up soon
luv ya
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04-22-2008, 07:06 PM
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|  SBFC Activity Offic. LPFC Event Officer Neville's Patronus Faerie
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sabrina Dumbledore Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Elizabeth Peterson Diagon Alley | YAY!!! New post!!! *Sits in front of computer and starts bouncing up and down*
sorry, extremely hyper! Keep the story coming hunni! It's brilliant!!
Sabrina's excited as well
luv,
Jemmz
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04-26-2008, 06:56 PM
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| Wandering Regulus Hippogriff
Location: I'm home!!! Join Date: Dec 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: srimathi srivatsan | heheh!its was cool!!!
awesome!PMAS!!keep writing hun! |
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04-30-2008, 08:35 AM
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| | Hinkypunk
Location: England Join Date: Dec 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tinkerbell(Bell) Sabrina Evens Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Lily-Anne Evans Magical Maintenance | Ok to whoever reads this. I really want to post for you guys but i really need someone to re-read my chapters and make them better. So if anyone wants to help me then plz PM me. dont worry I'll mention you when i post. Lol!!!
thanks
luv ya all xXEvangelineXx Ok UPDATE: I have found a person to read through my story, The wonderful Sabrina Snape so never mind about that. What i really wanted to say is that i have changed my Hogwarts name to Tinkerbell Sabriona Evens which makes this her diary. Lol!!! I give credit to Sabrina Snape for the idea for this change and i hope she wont mind. Lol!!! The next post will be up soon, i know you all have been dieing for it(or have you???) but i need to talk with Sabrina and Jemmz about making it better.
luv ya all xXEvangeline and TinkerbellXx
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05-02-2008, 10:04 AM
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| | Hinkypunk
Location: England Join Date: Dec 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Tinkerbell(Bell) Sabrina Evens Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Lily-Anne Evans Magical Maintenance | Saturday Evening
I've go t to got to bed but i just thought i would post and say i asked mum the name, its...
Sunday
Sorry Saffron turned the light off without telling me she would. Arhh... I hate her. I am going to tell you you his name but it will have to wait because something weird happened today. Me and mum were eating our lunch(dad was at work, Jake was asleep and Saffron was out with friends). Anyway there was a knock at the door, mum answered it. She came back into the kitchen with this man following her. He had a long white beard, half-moon glasses(there is another term but i dont know what it is) and he had blue eyes(like mine)He smiled at me and bowed, i thought it was rather funny.
"Tinkerbell, he has come to talk to you" My mother had said sitting down in her seat.
"Hello Miss Evans," He had looked around the room, "May I sit down please?" He asked.
"You can have my seat" I said politly jumping up.
"No thank you Miss Evans, I'll have this one" He sat on the chair next to mum. "I'm sorry I have not introduced myself. I am Albus Dumdledore, Headmaster of Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry"
Mum and I were so taken aback; there are people that are witches and wizards? How cool!!! Anyways, I just gasped. "But I'm not a witch and don't go to that school so why do you want to talk to me?"
He had just smiled "Oh but you are." He pulled a letter from his.... well dress; it was addressed to me.
"Cool mummy I've got a letter" I said happly. My mum for some reason didn't answer, she was looking at the man with horror on her face(I think it was horror). It was scary.
I opened the letter(after studying the seal on the back) and read through it. Once finished the man spoke again nicely, "Now I will take you to Diagon Alley. I have some coins here for you, but you will have to get second hand stuff im afrad" He handed me a bag of coins,they weren't original coins, I mean I get this weird spending money just for being a witch! After that he left promising he would call tomorrow.
As soon as he left mum went strange, she kept
talking to herself. Weird! Dad and Saffron didn't take it so well either when mum told them. I don't get it I'm a witch shouldn't they be happy???
I can't wait till tomorrow but I'm sad...
Tinkerbellx Ok what do you think??? this may not be as good as my other story' The New Nightmare' but i think this is ok. Lol!!! Hope i get more new readers soon
luv ya all
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