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07-20-2008, 11:03 AM
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#126 (permalink)
| | Jobberknoll
Location: Leicester, UK Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 488
Hogwarts RPG Name: Krysta Hedwig Sixth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kye Black Magical Creatures | Ah, yay! A new post! And it was brilliant! I really want to know what the Black family have been saying about the Potters. That doesn't sound good!
And poor Sirius! He thought he was free and his dreams were snuffed out 
PAMS PAMS PAMS |
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07-20-2008, 02:16 PM
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#127 (permalink)
| Tom's Quidditch robesDevilish Draco Bicorn
Location: Snape Manor. =] Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 1,905
Hogwarts RPG Name: Samantha Savvy Snape Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Shea Safari Snape Accidents & Catastrophes | aww poor sirius. kreacher is horrible.
pams. |
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07-20-2008, 03:27 PM
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#128 (permalink)
| | Imp
Location: zebraland Join Date: Jul 2008
Posts: 112
Hogwarts RPG Name: Emily Dodgeworth First Year Ministry RPG Name:
Bridget Hartzler | Hi new reader! This is great! Poor Sirius. He thought he was free but Kreacher and Mrs. Black are terrible! Keep it up!
<33 Abbe |
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08-04-2008, 11:05 PM
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#129 (permalink)
| A bit confused
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Location: I want you bleeders. Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 2,137
Hogwarts RPG Name: Maura Felicia Silvermoon Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Silvermoon Magical Creatures | pams pams pams!!!!! |
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08-05-2008, 02:39 PM
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#130 (permalink)
|  K.O. Trevor Potterwatch Sweetie Hippogriff
Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 3,400
Hogwarts RPG Name: Nigel Forbulus Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
Thomas Forbulus Accidents & Catastrophes | awesme new post! |
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08-05-2008, 04:00 PM
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#131 (permalink)
| Sgt. Gryffindor Perfect Premolars! Kappa
Location: *runs far away* Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 1,004
Hogwarts RPG Name: Alycya "Aly" Weasley Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
Edith "Edie" Griffiths Minister's Office | YAY!!! another postie!!! I love it! *huggles Sirius* It's okay ... Kreacher is just mean and horrible. But I love you so it's okay!
hehe Love it!
PAMS!
Love Jade xxxx |
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08-19-2008, 02:58 AM
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#132 (permalink)
| GWFC Prez/BWFC Promo Fred & George's Pranks Molar Master Troll
Location: In Ginny's Pocket!:D Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 4,713
Hogwarts RPG Name: Laylee Lynn Russell Fifth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cambell Anne Robinson Minister's Office | Hahaha, I like Sirius too!! Well, I like all of them!! And, the Kreacher thing, well I cant tell you that! lol
Love ya!!! Quote:
Originally Posted by hrmy_lvr_4evr You posted!
I agree with Sabrina, this was a brilliant post!!
Since you're gone for a week I hope you find plenty of time to write.
--Maura | Yeah, doesnt look like that happened!! But Im finally posting!!! lol
Miss ya! Hope your having fun on your trip! Quote:
Originally Posted by Alice Granger me three brilliant post.poor Sirius didn't get long to talk to james.that Kreacher is a nasty piece of work
PAMS
Alice | Yes he is!!! But I do love that they met!!!! YAY for them! Quote:
Originally Posted by Krysta Ah, yay! A new post! And it was brilliant! I really want to know what the Black family have been saying about the Potters. That doesn't sound good!
And poor Sirius! He thought he was free and his dreams were snuffed out 
PAMS PAMS PAMS |
Yeah! It was sad writing that bit, but those two together, Kreacher and Mrs Black, are horrid! lol Quote:
Originally Posted by draco*malfoy*lover aww poor sirius. kreacher is horrible.
pams. | Yes he is!! Quote:
Originally Posted by Poisonedbyyou Hi new reader! This is great! Poor Sirius. He thought he was free but Kreacher and Mrs. Black are terrible! Keep it up!
<33 Abbe | YAY! A new reader!! Welcome! Quote:
Originally Posted by hrmy_lvr_4evr pams pams pams!!!!! | Okay okay okay! lol Quote:
Originally Posted by mrsmile26 awesme new post! | Thanks! Quote:
Originally Posted by alyweasley YAY!!! another postie!!! I love it! *huggles Sirius* It's okay ... Kreacher is just mean and horrible. But I love you so it's okay!
hehe Love it!
PAMS!
Love Jade xxxx | Thanks for loving me!! lol I love ya too!! Hey guys! Im sorry Ive taken so long to post!! This chapter is really short (sorry again) and really random. Just bare with me! lol I didnt have much time to write it.
I love you guys!!!! A LOT!! Peter couldn’t believe what luck he had! His dad had been in such a good mood since that man had complimented him about his quidditch days, and the two had shopped together without complication. After more than 4 hours of roaming Diagon Alley the two were finished. Peter wished the day wouldn’t end, he was hardly ever treated this well by his father. But, the day was over and they headed home.
Peter dropped all of his new books and supplies on his bed and sat down on top of his pillow. He smiled dreaming about his upcoming year at Hogwarts.
He suddenly fell off his bed in a bundle on the floor as a young blonde girl barged in his room. “Ahhh Peter, your back! I've been waiting for you, your mum let me in! What are those?” The girl said quickly as she approached his bed.
“Br-Brittany, what are you-Don’t touch those!” Peter said frantically as he grabbed all of his new supplies and hid them in his drawer. Brittany was a neighborhood girl. She was only seven and always found a new way to bother Peter, though she thought she was just being nice. Peter turned back to Brittany and saw that she was holding his new wand. “Petie, your so messy. Sticks in your bedroom! That’s not good!” She said heading to the trash can.
“No!” Peter yelled as he tried to get his wand, but tripped over his own foot and fell to the ground. Peter stumbled to his feet and grabbed his wand from the young girl and threw it in the drawer. “What-Why are you here Brittany! Get-get out!” Peter said tripping yet again as he walked towards the door, but he caught himself on the doorknob before he fell.
“But… your mum said you could play with me today.” Brittany said, a frown on her little face.
“Well I-I cant. I have… stuff to do. May-maybe some other time.” Peter said, hoping that he could keep himself from her for the next week, then he would be at school and wouldn’t have to worry about her hanging around. Brittany and himself were the only children in the entire neighborhood, so Peter knew that she would probably be bored with him gone, but Peter would be around tons of kids his age that could do the things he could, like James. Brittany walked out of his room sadly and left. Peter collapsed on his bed and sighed with relief. There ya go, sorry about the randomness.
Last edited by Keysquah : 08-19-2008 at 05:48 PM.
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08-19-2008, 02:53 PM
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#133 (permalink)
|  K.O. Trevor Potterwatch Sweetie Hippogriff
Join Date: Dec 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nigel Forbulus Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
Thomas Forbulus Accidents & Catastrophes | yay for new posts! |
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08-19-2008, 07:18 PM
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#134 (permalink)
| | Jobberknoll
Location: Leicester, UK Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 488
Hogwarts RPG Name: Krysta Hedwig Sixth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kye Black Magical Creatures | That Brittany sounds like a pain! Imagine the only other kid in the neighbourhood being a 7-year-old girl. Poor Peter. And his Mother's stupid letting her go roaming about the house like that, especially as she's a Muggle! I was worried she was going to snap his wand for a minute there.
I'm so glad you postd more. I was worried someone may move this to the inactive fics!
phew. |
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08-20-2008, 03:10 AM
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#135 (permalink)
| Tom's Quidditch robesDevilish Draco Bicorn
Location: Snape Manor. =] Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Samantha Savvy Snape Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Shea Safari Snape Accidents & Catastrophes | Yay, Peter was happy. How cute!
And that darn Brittney, yeah, she's only 7 years old, but shouldn't be so nosy.
i loved it!
pams, when you can!
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08-21-2008, 10:26 AM
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#136 (permalink)
| | Imp
Join Date: Jun 2008
Posts: 116
| great post, brittney seems quiet nosey
can't wait for more
PAMS
Alice |
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08-26-2008, 08:29 AM
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#137 (permalink)
| | Hippocampus
Location: In Edwards arms Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 296
| Loved those last chapters. Not going to be able to read it for a while due to me going on holidays!! |
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08-27-2008, 04:29 PM
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#138 (permalink)
| A bit confused
 Crup
Location: I want you bleeders. Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 2,137
Hogwarts RPG Name: Maura Felicia Silvermoon Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Silvermoon Magical Creatures | Wow, brittany sems very nosy. But I loved that chapter! It was excellent! |
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09-05-2008, 03:56 PM
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#139 (permalink)
| GWFC Prez/BWFC Promo Fred & George's Pranks Molar Master Troll
Location: In Ginny's Pocket!:D Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 4,713
Hogwarts RPG Name: Laylee Lynn Russell Fifth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cambell Anne Robinson Minister's Office | Quote:
Originally Posted by mrsmile26 yay for new posts! | Quote:
Originally Posted by Krysta That Brittany sounds like a pain! Imagine the only other kid in the neighbourhood being a 7-year-old girl. Poor Peter. And his Mother's stupid letting her go roaming about the house like that, especially as she's a Muggle! I was worried she was going to snap his wand for a minute there.
I'm so glad you postd more. I was worried someone may move this to the inactive fics!
phew. | Hahaha, she is a bit of a turd! lol
(wow thats a fun word!)
I was pretty scared it was going to move to the inactive too, thats why I rushed to post such a sort chapter, that doesnt really match the story! lol
But I will get back on track! lol Quote:
Originally Posted by draco*malfoy*lover Yay, Peter was happy. How cute!
And that darn Brittney, yeah, she's only 7 years old, but shouldn't be so nosy.
i loved it!
pams, when you can!
--Prongs. | Yeps, there wasnt only ridicule and sadness is Peters life, though there was a LOT of it! lol Quote:
Originally Posted by Alice Granger great post, brittney seems quiet nosey
can't wait for more
PAMS
Alice | I cant wait for more either!! Quote:
Originally Posted by Harry Potter Freak 1 Loved those last chapters. Not going to be able to read it for a while due to me going on holidays!! | Well, have fun on the Holidays!!! I wish I had more chapter up for you to read when you got back... Quote:
Originally Posted by hrmy_lvr_4evr Wow, brittany sems very nosy. But I loved that chapter! It was excellent! | Thank ya loverly!
So, I know that its been taking me FOREVER to post! Im sorry!!! I hope to write a very nice sized chapter soon! Ive had a lot of schoolwork and things going on a church lately so that explains the non posting!! I also have not been sure how to switch from Diagon Alley to the train.... But I will figure it out soon!!
I love you all for reading!!!!!  |
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09-06-2008, 09:45 PM
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#140 (permalink)
| A bit confused
 Crup
Location: I want you bleeders. Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 2,137
Hogwarts RPG Name: Maura Felicia Silvermoon Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Silvermoon Magical Creatures | We love you too!  's back |
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09-18-2008, 11:48 PM
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#141 (permalink)
| GWFC Prez/BWFC Promo Fred & George's Pranks Molar Master Troll
Location: In Ginny's Pocket!:D Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 4,713
Hogwarts RPG Name: Laylee Lynn Russell Fifth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Cambell Anne Robinson Minister's Office | Alrighties loves! I FINALLY have a post!! Im sorry about the wait!
This time, the post is well thought out and betterly written! lol
And you wont have to wait so long for the next chapter, its already half written!
So, here ya go!! James and his family were sitting in the Leaky Cauldron with a round of butterbeer's talking endlessly about the day and about his future year at Hogwarts. It had been a good day, a great day. James had already made friends that were going to be in his year! He just hoped they would be in Gryffindor with him! James, of course, just knew he would be in Gryffindor so it never crossed his mind that he might be otherwise. He was always very confident.
“So, mum what else have we got to do?” He asked. His mother, the perfectionist, brought out her list of shops and supplies and checked a few things off, muttering to herself then she looked up at her son. “All you need is your cauldron and necessities such as parchment, quills, and ink.” She said setting the piece parchment back in her handbag.
“Then let’s go get them!” He said jumping from his seat and running to the door with his parents close behind him.
They crossed the crowded street at an annoyingly slow pace since there were so many people. You could tell that James and his father were getting irritated. Instead of quickly saying sorry to those they stumbled across, they were begging to gently shove people out of there way. There trail through the street was full of upset looking people muttering about rude young people.
The Potter’s finally found their way out of the crowd and went into the shop. James quickly grabbed the things he needed while his mother grabbed tons of unneeded extras. They bought the supplies and left, back in the busy street.
James walked a little in front of his parents, taking advantage of his small size and ducking through the crowd. James suddenly stopped and looked back at his parents to make sure they were still going in the same direction he was, and then for the second time that day felt himself being knocked down with a great force. “Hey, what’s the deal?!” James said, irritated beyond belief. “Watch it will ya!” James found his glasses and put them on as he stood and looked at the boy who had knocked him down. He was young looking, but tall. He had light blonde hair and very light skin. At first the look on the boys face was angry and annoyed, and then his face softened as he seemed to realize who the boy was. “I’m so sorry.” He said almost making a bow to him. “Potter, right?” He asked with an evil grin on his face. “The name is Malfoy. I didn’t mean to trip you; I’m in a bit of a hurry.” He said.
James, still angry looked to see that his parents were getting closer to him; he turned back on the boy. “You didn’t trip me, you knocked me over!” He said, he didn’t even wonder how he knew his name, most people in the wizarding world did; well they knew his fathers name, but James looked so much like his father.
“Well, I’m sorry.” James could tell that Malfoy was trying to be as polite as he could, but he couldn’t tell why. “I’m going to be a first year, aren’t you?” He asked.
“Yes, first year Gryffindor!” He said with pride. James noticed that Malfoy almost flinched.
“Well, you never know, you could be in Slytherin.” He said with a smirk.
“No, I would never be put in that house! I hate it too much.” James said simply.
Malfoy suddenly looked angry. “I'll have you know that Slytherin is the best house at Hogwarts and anyone would be lucky to join that house!” He almost yelled. “Oh, hello Mr. Potter sir.” Malfoy said looking passed James, his tone completely changed from anger to polite again.
James looked behind him frowning. “Lets go.” He said walking from the scene.
“Goodbye James, see you at school.” Malfoy said to his back, a smirk on his pale face.
Soon the Potters were back in Godricks Hollow unpacking their things. James told his parents about what had happened between himself and that Malfoy boy.
“I wouldn’t trust him if I was you!” Mrs. Potter said. “Now don’t take me wrong, not all Slytherin's are bad, I promise; but his mother and I… well, we didn’t like each other back in school.”
“Yeah, your mom was quite feisty when she was young! Never seen a girl throw such a torturous body bind curse in all my life. That’s half the reason I fell in love with her!” Mr. Potter said giving his wife a kiss.
James smiled, but his thoughts wondered. He already had an enemy. ‘Great fun!’ He thought with a smirk. They will be on the train soon!!! *squee* |
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09-19-2008, 12:21 AM
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#142 (permalink)
| Tom's Quidditch robesDevilish Draco Bicorn
Location: Snape Manor. =] Join Date: Mar 2006
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Samantha Savvy Snape Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Shea Safari Snape Accidents & Catastrophes | awesome!!! i loved it.
I'm soo happy you posted!
pams,
Prongs.
Last edited by draco*malfoy*lover : 09-21-2008 at 09:56 PM.
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09-20-2008, 03:40 PM
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#143 (permalink)
| | Jobberknoll
Location: Leicester, UK Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 488
Hogwarts RPG Name: Krysta Hedwig Sixth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kye Black Magical Creatures | YAAAAAAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!
She posted, she posted!
It was about time y'know Kyla!!!!
But what a great post! That little snake, Malfoy, grrr. Looks like the Potter-Malfoy feud goes back even further than we realised. I think it's great that it was the women that hated each other not the men. Everyone always writes about them, so it was nice to read something original.
Can't wait to see how this unfolds at school!
PAMS PAMS PAMS!!! |
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09-21-2008, 09:07 PM
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#144 (permalink)
| A bit confused
 Crup
Location: I want you bleeders. Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 2,137
Hogwarts RPG Name: Maura Felicia Silvermoon Second Year Ministry RPG Name:
Violet Silvermoon Magical Creatures | It is about time, Kyla! lol
Great post! YAY, they'll be on the train soon! And so will Maura and Laylee! *claps hands* PAMS, my friend!
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09-24-2008, 09:54 PM
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#145 (permalink)
|  K.O. Trevor Potterwatch Sweetie Hippogriff
Join Date: Dec 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Nigel Forbulus Third Year Ministry RPG Name:
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