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05-10-2008, 02:32 AM
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Originally Posted by eric_2007al_2006  Hey its totally fine and your not stupid. oh and btw dare done. | Thank you very much!! 
Just telling everyone that the Lily, James, and Siruis posts have been changed to be cannon! Im so sorry that I even made the mistake in the first place! Please forgive me!
Remus's post hasnt been changed because his is good! Nothing is wrong with the facts! Okay! I hope you guys read the changes! I acctually think there quite good, and better than before! It wont happen again!! Promise! Thanks for not killing me! 
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05-10-2008, 08:05 AM
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The posts are great!! Well done! It does sound more fitting now that they are in cannon, but they were also great before! 
Now all I have to do is wait for Peter and Sev's p.o.v.s!
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05-10-2008, 08:12 AM
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Originally Posted by Sabrina_Snape The posts are great!! Well done! It does sound more fitting now that they are in cannon, but they were also great before!
Now all I have to do is wait for Peter and Sev's p.o.v.s!
Jemma
xxx | Thanks so much for being patient and reading! Very happy to have you as a reader!!
Just for you, I'll post Peters!!
Here ya go!  A short chubby boy with mousy blonde hair and beady eyes named Peter Pettigrew walked out of the kitchen with a bran muffin. His mom had had him on a diet for about a month, scared that one day he would be bigger than his late Uncle Eddie and now only kept healthy food in the house. Peter took a bite and winced. He couldn’t stand its taste.
Even though Peter was eating a horrible tasting muffin he was happier than he had been ever since before his new “diet”; just a few moments before he had received his acceptance letter to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. To be honest, he didn’t think he would get in. His father was practically a legend at Hogwarts. He had helped the Hufflepuff house win the Quidditch House Cup two years in a row and was going to go professional before he injured his leg permanently right before his first match. Now his father was just a big moody cursing man who seemed to be unsatisfied with his son most of the time. But, there were those rare moments, like, getting accepted to Hogwarts, that made him happy for his boy. Peter’s parents were beginning to wonder if he could possibly be a squib…
Peter sat down opposite his father in the living room, wanting to be around him and soak up all the pride he had for him before it vanished.
“Ay Peter! Your mom and me and you o-course are goin' up to Diagon Alley tomorrow to get yer supplies.” He said proudly.
“Okay. Great!” Peter said with a broad grin.
Mr. Pettigrew smiled at his boy and let his mind wonder over all that Peter could do, and have, and be! Qudditch, spells, friends, and girls! It’ll be just like his own experience, only better! I know that it sounds a lot like Dudley. But, I always sort of thought of Peter like he was a lot like Duds, only different, you know! lol
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05-10-2008, 08:24 AM
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Luv it!!!
I agree, Peter had always sounded like Dudley and also in a way like Crabbe and Goyle. He always follows someone else around as he doesn't want to do his own thing!!!
Thank you!!
Jemma
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05-11-2008, 05:05 AM
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Wow...the story is awesome!!! I just love it...really!!!
Way to go!!! | 
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05-11-2008, 11:49 AM
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i like it
sounds really intruiging, keep it up | |
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05-11-2008, 11:27 PM
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Yep yep! He's like a mix! But... I do feel bad for the poor guy! *pets him* Quote:
Originally Posted by Luna Delacour Wow...the story is awesome!!! I just love it...really!!!
Way to go!!! | YAY! A new reader!! Thanks for the positiveness!! Quote:
Originally Posted by ZodiacGirl i like it
sounds really intruiging, keep it up | Happiness! Another new reader! * 's for joy* Okay readers, heres another chapter! Hope you like!! Remus Lupin woke up a couple hours later to his mom’s voice, calling him down for breakfast. He lifted himself from his bed and looked at the window sadly. No owls today.
”Remus! Get down here! We have some news for you!” Mrs. Lupin yelled. She sounded like she was trying hard to hide her excitement about something. Remus opened his door and looked down the stairs into the kitchen.
“Good morning mum. Dad.” He said, starting to make his way, slowly, and painfully down the stairs. “What’s the big news?” He asked with almost no excitement.
His parents were both smiling and looking at him like his and their dreams had both come true. Remus was confused. He finally made it to the dining table and grabbed a tasty looking waffle, then looked at them both, waiting for them to explain.
“Well, we have something to discuss with you! You’ve been accepted to Hogwarts!” Mr. Lupin said.
“WHAT!?! When? How? Wha… How could this be? When?” Remus said, having nearly spit out his pumpkin juice. He was so happy; it was like all his worries disappeared! He couldn’t believe it!
“The headmaster, Dumbledore, sent us a letter along with your acceptance, explaining why and how.” Mr. Lupin began. “He has arranged for you to be safe during the full moon, and tells us he believes you should have a regular wizarding childhood!” He said smiling. He got up and pulled his boy into a tight hug.
“Wow! Ouch…dad.” He said, feeling intense pressure on his injury.
“Oh, sorry.” He said.
“Oh, honey! I’m so happy for you!!” Mrs. Lupin said.
“But, how can he keep me away from other students on the full moon? How could they possibly be safe with me on the grounds?” Remus asked, suddenly feeling a little let down with reality. He definitely didn’t want to hurt anyone.
“He’s going to explain it all to you when you get there!” Mr. Lupin replied. “Be happy son! Something great has happened!” He said.
“Yeah. It… really is great!” Remus said smiling, unable to believe his happiness. Theres ya go!! Please post a reply if you read! I want to know your there!
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05-11-2008, 11:42 PM
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Oh...wow...I am so glad for Remus!!!
Amazing!!!! incredibly good!!!
keep it up!!! | |
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05-12-2008, 12:44 AM
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Amazing!!!! incredibly good!!!
keep it up!!! | Aww! Thanks so much! Your so sweet!
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05-12-2008, 07:28 AM
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Once again, you've done brilliantly! Well done!
Yay, Remus gets to go to Hogwarts!!! :cheer: Well le duh, course he does! 
Jemma
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05-12-2008, 01:43 PM
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aww. i absolutely love it.
can't wait for the next chapter!!! keep it coming!!
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05-12-2008, 10:18 PM
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Hahaha! Thanks! And yesh... it was kinda obvious that he would go to school seeing as we already knew that! Quote:
Originally Posted by draco*malfoy*lover aww. i absolutely love it.
can't wait for the next chapter!!! keep it coming!!
xD | Well you dont have to wait any longer! lol
Heres the next chapter!! Severus Snape, a small boney boy with long greasy hair and raggedy clothes walked down the road towards the always deserted park. He smiled to himself as he thought about the events that had happened to him that morning. He had received his acceptance letter from a small grey owl just after he woke up. Severus couldn’t wait to get to Hogwarts! He had thought of nothing else ever since his mom had told him about it when he was 5. Since then he hadn’t had a good conversation with his mother or his father. The two were always busy fighting; they yelled and screamed at each other all the time. Severus never had a moment of peace or quite, so he had started taking retreats to the small deserted park just a short walk from his house.
One day, when he was alone on the swings he heard two girls talking, heading his way. Severus had quickly hid himself behind some bushes. One of the voices belonged to a girl that was too tall and skinny for her age. She was wearing a grandma like sweater with flowers all over it and the other voice belonged to a girl that looked about his age. She had pale skin and stunning long red hair. She was wearing a dark green sweater and jeans. Severus remembered smiling just at the sight of her. She was so beautiful.
After that day he had made that trip to the park everyday and would wait there until she showed up, which was quite frequently. But, one day, he noticed that she had began doing things… things that weren’t normal… things that only witches could do. After that day Severus watched her closely… wondering what she would do next.
Severus remembered the first time he talked to her… the first time she spoke to him. He remembered the first time Petunia talked to him, more like insulted him. He really didn’t like her very much!
Severus finally made it to his destination and he took a seat on the swing. It squeaked as he went back and forth, back and forth. He thought back to all the discussions Lily and he had shared. He told her all about the wizarding world and everything she would need to know… and some things she didn’t need to know… such as being muggleborn. It did matter… to some people, but he didn’t have the heart to tell her so. The very first Sevy post! Hope you guys like it!!
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05-12-2008, 10:35 PM
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Wow...amazing...I kinda imagined it...lol...so amzing... | |
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05-12-2008, 10:38 PM
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You are a genius!
Loved Sev's character!!!
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05-12-2008, 10:38 PM
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05-12-2008, 11:09 PM
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Originally Posted by Sabrina_Snape You are a genius!
Loved Sev's character!!!
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05-13-2008, 01:04 PM
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loved it!!
and sev's character is soo cute!!
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05-14-2008, 10:23 AM
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Hi chica!
I don't know why you put this down so much, I think it's really good. You understand the characters so well, I love the way you write them. I like the title, acually. It fits the stories!
I agree that you should write about Diagon Alley. When James and Sirius got on the train they seemed to know each other a little, but it wasn't specified where they actually met. You have the artistic license to do it your way. This is your story.
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Originally Posted by draco*malfoy*lover loved it!!
and sev's character is soo cute!!
yay! PAMS! | Thanks! I like him too!!! Quote:
Originally Posted by Krysta Hi chica!
I don't know why you put this down so much, I think it's really good. You understand the characters so well, I love the way you write them. I like the title, acually. It fits the stories!
I agree that you should write about Diagon Alley. When James and Sirius got on the train they seemed to know each other a little, but it wasn't specified where they actually met. You have the artistic license to do it your way. This is your story.
PAMS PAMS PAMS | Aww! Thanks!! Ive got to get reading your story!! Ug, Im so behind, sorry! lol
Yeah, I agree! I started writing it! Plus, theres only a few things that happen in first year that they experience that they'll never experience for the first time again! So I decided it was important!!
Thank you so much for reading!!
I LOVE all my AWEsome readers! *'s everyone like WHOA*
Okay, I thought Id put up another chapter! Hope eveyone likes it!!
Enjoy! Moments later, he heard footsteps. Severus smiled to himself and looked up to see Lily headed his way.
“Did, did you get your letter? Did someone come, like I said?” Severus asked, still rocking back and forth as she got closer.
“I did.” Lily said shortly. She walked over to him and sat in the swing next to him.
“I got mine too. My parents were thrilled.” Severus said, smiling.
Lily smiled. “No they weren’t. Did you even tell them?” She asked.
“No. But I will.” Severus said. “I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have done that to your sister…. And I shouldn’t have lied abou | |
