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05-06-2008, 06:44 PM
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Hi! I'm Kyla!
This is my second attemp at a FF. This story is about Lily, Snape, and the four Marauders... I know that thats more than 1 Character... but I thought the story fit best in this catagory. This FF is their entire lives from 1st year to 7th. There will be surprises and climaxes, romance and betrayal. I just wanted there to be a story about all of their school years together! What things happened to them to lead to what they are now in the Harry Potter books? I guess we'll find out!
Disclaimer: Every character that was created or inspired by the lovely JK belongs to her, not me!
I hope you like it! Here's the first part! Lily Evans walked back and forth across her room smiling at what had just happened to her:
A tall, stern woman had come to the Evans door step wearing a long red cloak; very odd attire for such a hot summer day. But Lily knew this day would come! Severus had told her so. This woman’s visit had told her that all the things she had discussed with Severus these passed months had been true!
The woman’s name was Miss McGonagall, or soon to be Professor McGonagall. She had come, just like Severus said she would, to explain to Lily and her parents that she was a witch and that she would be going to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Though, Lily and her family had already known she was witch and what the school was for quite some time. After the Professor had explained how to get to Diagon Alley, the place where she would get her school supplies, she gave her acceptance letter to her and there was a pop and she was gone, vanished.
Lily couldn’t wait to tell Severus! Oh… wait. The two weren’t speaking at the moment. He had done something horrible to Petunia! He had made a branch fall on her and then lied about it…
Well anyway, Lily could remember the first time she had ever done something so weird, it was like she was something else… like a witch.
When she was at her uncles 45th birthday party and her great Aunt Linda, a large, horrid woman with too much eye make-up, was screeching at her about her "bleak possibilities of being anything worth a dime" unless she stopped using her mind and started using her face. Lily hadn't even known what she meant really. But, any time that Aunt Linda spoke, there was a horrible sick feeling of pity and anger inside her. Well, she had somehow, from the frustration, turned completely red from anger. And not just a normal color red like the color that rises in your cheeks when you’re embarrassed, no, all of her skin was a bright, fire colored red.
She had somehow recovered from that, but was never sure how it happened. That had been her first weird incident. Her parents had, for some reason thought it was amazing. Though they decided early on that she shouldn’t use her powers outside of the house for her safety, they always told her that they knew she would be special.
But Lily was special!
She had learned to sort of control what things she did over time. She had even flown at the park that one day, so long ago, when she first met Severus, when he first told her she was a witch.
Petunia walked in her room with a sad expression on her face. “What about me?” She asked, but not really as a question. “I’m older than you… Shouldn’t I get to go?”
“Of course you should! Why didn’t you ask Miss McGonagall?” Lily asked putting a hand on her sister’s shoulders sadly.
“Well…. I don’t know… But, I bet it’s not all that great! It’s stupid!” Petunia said harshly.
“No it isn’t! It’s amazing! It’s wonderful!” Lily said!
“That Severus boy has filled your head with silly things! So what if you’re a witch! It’s still not right! It’s weird.” Petunia said.
“No… Petunia, it’s not weird it’s…” But Petunia didn’t let her finish, she walked out of the room and Lily heard her sister slam her door. Lily frowned sadly to herself, sad that her sister wasn’t going to get to come with her and that she was so beat up about it.
Lily shook it off and picked herself up from her bed and walked out of her room, down the stairs and into the kitchen.
“I’m going to see Severus.” Lily told her parents.
“Oh, good! Are you two talking again?” Mrs. Evans asked.
“No, but we will be!” Lily said smiling.
“Honey, wait just a moment.” Mr. Evans said, walking up to her and kneeling down in front of her. “I just want to say, that your mother and I are so proud of you and that we love you!” Mr. Evans said. He pulled her into a tight hug and kissed her forehead.
“Thanks dad!” Lily said hugging him back. “I’ll be back in about an hour! Bye!” EDIT: Okay, this post has been changed! Its much better now that it has the facts in it!! Yay for Cannon! lol
Sorry I messed up before!
Forgive me??
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05-06-2008, 08:27 PM
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Elizabeth Peterson Diagon Alley | First to Post!! Kyla that was a really good start! I can't wait to read more of this story! Don't worry about the title, it suits the story!
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05-06-2008, 08:32 PM
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Well I'll be posting the James and Sirius one next!
Thanks so much Jemma! And yeah, the title is weird... oh well! lol Hopefully people will still read it! |
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05-06-2008, 10:32 PM
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05-07-2008, 05:09 AM
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05-07-2008, 05:07 PM
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Originally Posted by mrsmile26 second reader! great story, i look forward to reading it! | Thanks! I don't think I can wait! I'll have to post it later today! Quote:
Originally Posted by Little Trooper Love the start to this. So can't wait for more. I love lily and Mauraders(sp) storys and also H/G R/Hr stories. | Thank you! I love all of those types of stories too!!! YAY for Harry Potter!! |
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05-07-2008, 10:29 PM
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05-08-2008, 02:54 PM
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05-08-2008, 10:10 PM
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great post
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P.O.S.T..T.H.E..J.A.M.E.S..S.I.R.I.U.S..O.N.E..N.O .W!
Yeah. Thats an OOORRRDDDEEERRRR!! | Hahahaha! Okay, I will! Sorry that I didnt get to it yesterday! Ill post it right after this!! Quote:
Originally Posted by draco*malfoy*lover new reader and i totally love it!
its wicked good!
i can't wait for the next post.
im soo excited! xD | Yay! Okay, well Im gunna post it next!!
I feel so much happiness for new readers!! Thanks a lot for reading!!
Here is the James and Sirius post! Hope you guys like it!! James Potter, a young wizard with round rimmed glasses and messy black hair woke up to high pitched screeching from a very unattractive owl sitting on his pillow. He got out of bed rubbing his throbbing eardrums trying to hear clearly.
After a moment of recuperation James smiled brightly and untied the letter from the screeching owl’s leg. He had been expecting this letter and knew exactly what it would say!
As he read about his acceptance to Hogwarts James smile just grew wider and wider. He ran down to the kitchen to find his parents looking tired but ready to go to work.
"Great news!" James exclaimed happily.
"You got the letter!" Mr. Potter said proudly.
James nodded enthusiastically as he entered further into the kitchen. "We should go get my supplies tomorrow!! School starts in less than two weeks!" James said running his free hand into his messy black hair, thinking about the great adventures to come at the school for young witches and wizards.
“I can’t wait to be there! I can’t wait to be in Gryffindor and I definitely can’t wait to play quidditch!” James said excitedly.
“Son son, slow down! You don’t even know if you’re going to get into Gryffindor! All the other houses are just as good! And you have to remember that they don’t ever accept first years to play quidditch.” Mrs. Potter said, putting some jam on her toast.
“Eleanor! Don’t be silly! Of course he’ll be in Gryffindor! Just like me, wont ya son!” Mr. Potter said proudly, pulling his boy into a tight side hug, rubbing his head, making his hair, if possible, even messier.
James smiled up at his dad and nodded. “Of course I will!” He said knowingly. “And mum, it is possible you know, to play quidditch in first year. It’s not against the rules or anything.” James said.
“Well, I know… Just, don’t get your hopes up son. Now, eat some breakfast.” Mrs. Potter said smiling at her excited son. “And don’t get into any trouble today young man or you won’t be coming with us to Diagon Alley tomorrow!” She said smiling.
“Okay okay! I won’t do anything.” James said, planning on waiting until after the trip to Diagon Alley to play that trick on the boy next door… "GET OUT REGULUS!" Sirius screamed. His younger brother had been extra annoying to him lately. He kept saying that Hogwarts would never take him. Though, it wasn’t a big deal or anything, Sirius knew his letter would be coming soon... But he was getting impatient and Regulus' remarks weren’t making his sanity any better.
He sat down at his desk trying to think about something else. He heard his brother complaining to their mom about Sirius hitting him or something. Sirius sighed, knowing that later he would get in trouble for that lie... though, now he wished he had hit him. He deserved it! Even if he was his younger brother.
Sirius heard some tapping on his window and without looking he smirked to himself. 'Its here.' He walked over to the window and opened it, letting the large black and brown owl enter his bedroom.
Sirius quickly untied the letter and read it aloud to himself. He actually jumped with happiness... he was finally getting away from this place! Maybe if he went to Hogwarts for a while, his parents would miss him...
Anyway, he ran out of his room and down the stairs of the Black mansion and made it to the fireplace in the living area.
“Hey, mum! I got my acceptance letter to Hogwarts!” Sirius said happily.
“Good. Well I hope you get into my house, Slytherin. Your father and I are depending on you.” His mother said with no hint of happiness for her son in her tone.
Sirius sighed. He had decided long ago that being in the Slytherin house was NOT something that Sirius wanted! He had seen the way his family did things… the way each generation had treated each other and that they seemed to get worse the younger they were. Well, it would end with Sirius… But he would never tell his mum that. He had made up his mind that he would please her until he was out of this retched place.
“Now, Sirius Black, about your brother, you hit him, did you not?” She asked
“No, I didn’t. He’s lying!” Sirius said, knowing this would do no good, She would never believe him.
“Don’t lie boy!” She said harshly.
“I’m not! I didn’t touch him.” Sirius said.
“Go to your room! We will discuss the proper punishment when you decide to tell the truth.” She said, pointing to the stairs with a long, painted finger.
Sirius dragged himself up to his room and collapsed on his bed. Why why was he put on earth with these people? So there ya go! Hope you like it!!
Its not really all that great, just info about them and their families! lol Oh well!
The next one is the Remus and Peters post!!
EDIT: Okay, Ive also changed these two! I hope you like them being changed! The reason I had to change them was because James and Sirius didnt know each other before Hogwarts! Sorry!
Last edited by Keysquah : 05-27-2008 at 02:48 AM.
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05-08-2008, 10:19 PM
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05-09-2008, 11:57 AM
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i loved it and can't wait for peter's and remus's!!!
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05-09-2008, 06:50 PM
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Elizabeth Peterson Diagon Alley | Kyla, I'm so sorry I haven't seen the new post!!
It was brilliant!!! Hate Regulus and his mother though! Stupid Blacks!
James and Sirius are so going to cause mischief aren't they!! And everyone wonders where Harry gets it from!
Can't wait for the next post!!! I'm subscribing to fic!!!
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05-09-2008, 06:55 PM
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05-09-2008, 06:58 PM
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Originally Posted by mrsmile26 yay for new posts! tyvm!
PAMS | Thanks for reading!! Quote:
Originally Posted by draco*malfoy*lover that was totally awesome!!!
i loved it and can't wait for peter's and remus's!!!
=] | Good! I hope you guus like it and dont get too bored! The beggining is kinda slow!! I LOVES all of you for reading! Oooo, thanks!! Yeah, I dont like them either! lol
And yes! They are going to cause some mischief!!!
It will be fun!! Quote:
Wonderful story M'dear. Can't wait till your next post. PAMS!
~Michelle~
| YAY! Your reading it! Thank you! 
Sorry about the slow beggining! I have an oppinion vote to ask.
Should I write about thier experiences in Diagon Alley or just write little things about their experiences on the train??
I cant deside!
And If anyone has something to say like... "That doesnt sound like them" or if I mess up on any of the facts about them, please let me know! lol I like my readers oppinions!!  |
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05-09-2008, 07:29 PM
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05-09-2008, 07:52 PM
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Originally Posted by Sabrina_Snape Personally, write about Diagon Alley because maybe the Mauraders met each other there and decided to become friends then and there. It would be fun to read truthfully!! 
Jemma
xxx | Yeah... but I dont know if I want them to meet so quickly... I dont know! I will decide when I start writting!! But thanks for your say! 's
Okay, so I thought I would post the first of three parts of the next post! Because I still want to poast I just dont want to go as quickly as I have been! lol
Here ya go! Remus Lupin was lying on his bed pretending he was asleep. He had small cuts and scraps all over his face and arms. There was also a very large gash on his back with a special potion medicating it. His mother was sitting in the corner of his room, crying quietly, like she always did the night after a full moon. She couldn’t believe that something so horrible had happened to her little boy. Mr. Lupin and she had realized a long time ago that Remus would never be a normal wizard. He wouldn’t be treated the same among his peers and he would never have proper jobs. They had also discussed the possibility of their boy somehow becoming an evil sort… like other werewolves in the wizarding world. But they knew Remus was much too sweet a boy to change in such a drastic way.
After about 10 more minutes Remus was able to sit up in his bed, painfully. His mother had finally retreated to her bedroom to try and get some sleep before it was morning and she had to fix breakfast.
Remus made it to his desk and sat down carefully, putting a pillow behind him to support his back. He sadly crossed off another day from his calendar sighing. He knew that young witches and wizards usually got their acceptance letters to Hogwarts within this month. He had been marking off each day as it passed, waiting. Remus knew everything there possibly was to know about Hogwarts. He had dreamed of going there since before he was bitten, but since then, it has been explained to him that there was a high possibility of him not getting accepted on account of his… “condition”.
Remus had almost completely lost hope. Almost all the excitement he had for life had drained out of him along with his normal childhood the day he got that horrible bite…
Remus made his way back to his bed and closed his eyes… He slowly drifted off to sleep. Theres ya go! Hope you like it!
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05-09-2008, 08:13 PM
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Poor Remus!!! I still love you!! 
*posts acceptant letter now* Now you can go to Hogwarts!! 
Jemma
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05-09-2008, 08:40 PM
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Isabella Longbottom Magical Games & Sports | Poor Remus. So sad. Evil werewolf. How dare you bite Remus and make him live like that. If I didn't have this wonderful story to stalk I would go hunt that werewolf down right now. lol, and of course I'm reading this FF dear. How could I not? Anyway PAMS!
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Originally Posted by eric_2007al_2006 Poor Remus. So sad. Evil werewolf. How dare you bite Remus and make him live like that. If I didn't have this wonderful story to stalk I would go hunt that werewolf down right now. lol, and of course I'm reading this FF dear. How could I not? Anyway PAMS!
~Michelle~ | Aww! You is so sweet!!! 
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05-09-2008, 11:53 PM
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Cambell Anne Robinson Minister's Office | OH NO!! Im so Upset! Im sorry everyone but I completely messed up this FF! I wanted it to be completely Cannon!! Okay! Im sorry, and you dont have to re-read, but Im going to change a few things in the Lily post and the James and Sirius post!! I promise they will be better and more cannon!
Lily's will be a lot different! Sorry!
Thanks for reading and dealing with my stupidity!!
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