That was sooooooooo cute! Awesome job! At first I was trying to figure who you were writing there, early conclusion was Percy reading and a twin carrying Ginny around. This was so much better especially since it captures a young Albus in a endearing moment. Well done!

I sense this quote becoming a classic...

“Miscreants! Blood traitors!” The screeching voice echoed around the nearly empty house. “Get out of here!”

“I’m going. I’m going,” the mumbles from down the darkened corridor reached the portrait, and she quieted for a moment.

“Idiot of the world! How dare you,” Mrs. Black started up again, her voice reaching piercing levels. She seemed to be pacing the frame, and it was obviously driving her crazy that she couldn’t see. “Get out of here.”

“Said I was going,” Mundungus appeared out of nowhere and shook a stuffed sack at her. “Yell all you want. I got everything I needed.”


How about Mudungus trying to lift everything from the black residence with Mrs Black's portrait screaming at him?

Well done. I can totally picture it being like this. I feel like she deserves it for the way she is - all her prized possessions getting taken from under her nose and not being able to stop it. But in terms of Sirius and Harry it's sad, though I am certain Sirius couldn't care about some of those things. Anyway, great job!