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Old 05-19-2008, 06:19 PM   #26 (permalink)

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"Why on earth would you do this to me Miles??!"
Mles and Vince were in the living room, Vince yelling at Miles as if he were in the next village.
"Do what? What's happened?!" Miles tried to shout over him.
"You .." Vince started to pacing back and forth. ".. and that muggle you work with!" He pointed out the window.
"Who? Cassie?"
"Yes, her."
What about her! She's just a person I work with." Vince shook his head.
"No. Much more than that!" Vince said, sighing. "I don't understand, why a muggle? Why not a pureblood?"
"Dad, it's a muggle village, I can't be picky where I work! I needed a job."
"I'm not on about the stupid job!!" His father yelled. "Cathy, or whatever her name is."
"Cassie."
"Yes, she's a muggle!"
"Sooo .. it's a muugle village" Mles said, sounding a bit stupid.
"Don't think I don't know! You're dating a filthy muggle! How dare you! AND, sources tell me you brought her into our house!" Vince Parker was fuming, he looked out the window and waved his finger at Miles.
"Sources?" Miles said, realizing.
"You EVER go near her again, You will NEVER return to Hogwarts! Do you understand??!"
"I'm not da.."
"Get out of my sight!" His father interrupted.
"but da.."
"OUT!" Vince sat down on the chiar and rubbed his forehead. "Why.." He started mumbling to himself at how disgusting muggles are, and how could his only son date one. Mlies trudged up to his room and lay on his bed. He wasn't dating Cassie! Why would he think that? She may like him .. oh wait. Miles bagan to think. He had said he liked her too. Oh merlin Why?
And who was sources? Who was the one who had ruined his life and made his dad so unhappy?
Sylvia peered behind the door, she looked upset too. It all came flooding back to Miles. The owl that Sylvia sent out of his window, it was to his dad. Sylvia kept locking the door, to not let Cassie in. Miles knew that Sylvia knew their dad would be unhappy if a muggle came into the Parker household, and Miles let her in, and Sylvia saw.
"..Sylvia." Miles mumbled. Sylvia looked quite scared, yet she shuffled in and closed the door. "I don't understand." He said, feeling very emotional. "I've just been yelled at all because you don't like Cassie..." Sylvia shook her head and sniffed. "It's true. You're jealous because I hang out with her more. You're so selfish!" Miles said and walked out of his room and left her there. Sylvia looked at the floor and then out of Miles' window. She could see Lacock. She ran out of Miles' room and down the stairs, opened the door and walked to the village.

Sylvia had no clue where she was going, she just didn't want to be with him, stupid older sibling who doesn't understand anything. Miles thought he was so much more clever than her. But he was wrong, and Sylvia knew he was wrong, and stupid, and an idiot. Sylvia went though all the horrible insults that she could think of about Miles, things like chessebum, and sister hater. Sylvia had been walking for hours and she was starting to get tired. She had walked around the village a few times now, surely her father would be worried, after all, she was the favourite. But she didn't care. She hated being a Parker, she wished that she wasn't herself. A silly little girl who refused to speak.
Sylvia walked along a very small road, which had two houses either side. And at the bottom of the road was a small river, it was a hot day, and the cold air coming off the river attracted Syliva. But there was another house. One with tables outside and a piece of card saying 'Plants for sale' Sylvia's face lit up, and she walked towards it. There was a few elderly people there, trying to choose which flowers would be lovely for their gardens, since they had nothing better to do. Sylvia knew that if she went over there, they would be like grnadmother's, they would cuddle her and squeeze her cheeks and want to take her home. So she waited until they left.
The first plant that Sylvia noticed, was the small roses in a black tray, tiny little rose bushes that Sylvia could put in her room.
"You like Roses?" She heard a voice from beind the table. Sylvia jumped slightly, then nodded.
"Me too." Said the lady. The lady had blonde hair and was sitting at the table. "Are you lost?" She said, walking around the table towards Sylvia. Sylvia shook her head. After a few minutes, Sylvia smiled wildley and hugged the woman. "Oh. Umm .. are you sure you're not lost?" Sylvia shook her head again.
"Where's you're mother?" Sylvia shrugged, and then looked up at the woman. "Do you have a mum?" Sylvia nodded.
"Do you know where she is?" Sylvia shook her head and walked back over to the roses. The lady felt puzzled, she stared at the little girl for a bit. She then giggled.
"I used to have a daughter called Rose." Said the lady. Sylvia nodded. The lady picked up the roses and gave some to Sylvia.
"I'm lia." The lady smiled. "What's your name?"
Sylvia thought of this as a problem. She didn't want to speak, so instead, she picked up a pen from the table and the carboard sign and wrote Sylvia.
"Sylvia?" Lia said. Sylvia smirked.
"I think you should come in, Sylvia." Sylvia follwed lia into her little house.
Sylvia knew she would be fine, she'd rather be with this lady, whom she knew very well ...

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"SYLVIA!"
Vince was running around the house for his precious little girl. "SYLVIA! Don't listen to Miles! You're not selfish! I know you were trying to help Miles and not let that muggle in!"
Miles sat in the living room. He had told his dad that he had yelled at Sylvia, for the first time in his life. He felt terrible. Sylvia had ran away, the roses outside were as brown as ever, and Slyvia's teddy bear was in the same spot on her bed where Miles had put it weeks ago. He was such an idiot. Why did he yell at this eight year old who was never misbehaving? She didn't deserve it. Miles thought about this. She was protecting him from their dad by locking the door. But she couldn't of, she brought him here by telling him. Miles had no idea what was going, but today was Sunday, and he was meeting Cassie at the park, whether is dad and Sylvia liked it or not.
"Dad, I'm going to look for Sylvia at the park, I'll be back soon."
"Don't you think about going anywhere else, I'm warning, it's your fault this has happened, don't make it worse." Vince pointed his finger at his son.
"Yes ok." Miles walked out of the door and towards the park. He hadn't been to the park for ages, he took Sylvia there a lot. There was a big lake there, and lots of trees. Miles saw Cassie, sat under one, waiting for him.
"Hey." He said, when he finally reached her. She beamed up at him and gestured him to sit with her. This all seemed to familiar.
"I thought you weren't going to come." She said.
"Family problems." Miles mumbled.
"Your dad?"
"Both, my dad and my sister." He sighed. "She's gone missing."
"Missing? Oh! Well, shouldn't you be looking for her?" Cassie sounded a little worried.
"I'm the reason she's gone. I yelled at her."
"Why?"
Miles looked at Cassie and then back at the floor. "Because she locked you out. Trying to make me stay away from you, then she told my dad and he got angry."
Cassie felt a little bit out of place. "But I don't understand. Why is your dad angry that you hang out with me?"
"That's what I thought, but Sylvie told him that we were dating."
"Oh." Cassie's face went slightly red. "Why is your dad angry about that?" Miles couldn't say it was because she was a muggle, he tried to think of something else.
"I didn't tell him. He probobly feels like I don't trust him with stuff, or that I might be keeping other secrets from him."
"Are you?"
"N...." Miles began to say no, but then he thought. He was. But, he couldn't bring himself to remember, he knew it was something about Hogwarts.
"I am." He finally said.
"But what?"
"I actually don't know." He sighed. "I wish I knew."
"It's ok." Cassie smiled, "You still have me." she held his hand. Miles smiled slightly back at her. She was making him feel better. Cassie leaned in and kissed him lightly. She smiled at him with her eyes still closed, by the looks of it, she was loving this. But after a bit, he wasn't.
Miles felt even worse. This wasn't helping. All he wanted was Hogwarts and Sylvia back. He did like Cassie, but his mixed feelings for her and his unhappiness was making his emotions all over the place. Why did summer have to be so difficult? And this secret that he was keeping from his dad, it was killing him, because he had no idea what it was. He felt so annoyed with himself until ...
"Haha." Cassie giggled. "That cloud looks like a shoe."
Miles lifted his face up and stared at her. Cassie looked back at him. ".... What did you say?"
Cassie stared at him oddly as if thinking why he thought this was so important.
"Umm .. I said that cloud looks like a shoe." She pointed at it. "Why?"
"A cloud, that looks like a shoe." He repeated. Cassie giggled. "Well done." She said, leaning in to kiss him again, but he moved away.
"Miles, what's wro.."
"Hold on a second Cass." He said, thinking. Cassie felt a little rejected, but she let this pass and waited for him to finish.
"Cloud, shoe, lake, tree..." Miles started to say keywords.
"Miles, you're scaring me." Cassie said worriedly. "Can you please stop."
"But it's on the tip of my tounge!" He said to her. Miles grinned wildly at her. "The secret! I'm remembering!" He smiled, which made her smile back.
"The secret from your dad?"
"Yes!" Cassie laughed and kept hold of his hand. "Do you want me to help." Miles put his fingers to his lips. "Sssh. Hold on." He said to her.

Miles could feel his face getting hotter, he staered in front of him at the Lake. He could feel her eyes on her.
"Thanks." He said.


"Wow. That was weird." Miles said, after his little flashback. He couldn't see anything, just the lake, himself, and a tree.
"What did you see?" Asked Cassie.
"I was talking to someone. I said 'Thanks' to them."

"Well, I want to." Miles said, smiling at her. He really liked her, and this was a perfect moment to do so. He leaned in and kissed her softly on the lips. When he pulled away they were both blushing.

After his flashback again, Miles noticed that he was kissing Cassie. He pulled away.
"Sorry." He said. "How long have we been doing that?"
"3 minutes." She blushed. "You're pretty good at kissing."
"Thanks." He smiled oddly. He was remembering, but not enough. He needed to know more. And Cassie could help ... somehow.
"Cass." He said. Cassie smiled like a little girl. "Yes?" Miles pulled her into a kiss. Quite a long kiss, longer than the 3 minute one. When he finally pulled away he apologized again.
"You don't need to apologize. We are sort of .. dating now, since we both like each other."
"I've got really bad Deja Vu." Miles said, rubbing his forehead and ignoring what she said about the whole 'dating' thing. they were NOT dating.
"Well, why don't we go to the sweet shop. Maybe sweets will make you feel better?"
Miles chuckled. "Ok then." They both stood up and walked towards Lacock. Cassie kept trying to hold Miles hand, but he was still thinking.

They were nearly there, and Miles' head hurt, the heat and the pain of his head were horrible mixed together. Cassie tried to calm him down, she was finally able to grab his hand.
"It'll come to you soon." She smiled. "What sweets are you having?"
Miles sighed. "I dunno. You can choose for me."
"Ok, then. Liqourice. That's my favourite."
Miles scowled. "Ugh. I hate Liqourice." Miles stopped, his eye wide and he could feel his heart beating faster. Cassie started to panic.
"What's wrong Miles?" She said, standing infront of him. He slowly looked down at her.
"I know." He breathed. "I know it!"
"Know what?..."
"I have to go." Miles said quickly, kissed her on the cheek and ran home.
"DAD!" He shouted when he arived through the door. Vince rand down the stairs and shook his son. "Have you found her!?!?"
"No, but I know why she's gone, and I can bring her back, I may not know where she's hiding, but she will come back when I tell her."
Vince stood there. "That doesn't make any sense boy! You idiot! Where have you been all this time?!"
"Looking for her, but I've figured it out!" He ran back out the door again before his dad could say anything else. Miles ran all the way to Lacock.
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Miles felt like and idiot. The summer job really did take his mind off things, even that he had a girlfriend! Miles wanted to hit himself repeatedly with a brick.
"Stupid. Stupid." He kept mumbling to himself. He would never tell Vannie of this, she wouldn't understand. It was so confusing for him too. The annoyance of knowing that he had fogotten his own girlfriend. He felt like the worst boyfriend in the world. He blamed his job, it was so rushed and took up most of his time.
Miles had circled Lacock a few times now, and still no sign of her. He reached a small flower stall, it reminded him of Sylvia, the small roses in a little pot. Miles noticed the sign for the stall a bit lopsided, so he straightened it a bit. Where was the stall owner? Leaving the flowers and money box here.
Then he noticed it. Childish hand writing on the sign saying 'Sylvia'. Could it be obvious than that? "Sylvia?" He knocked on the door. "Are you there? It's me Miles."

The door opened and the little blonde girl appeared from behind the door. She stayed inside the house and staed up at him.
"Sylvie, I understand know, I need to speak to you. Outside?" He asked her. He understood. Sylvia felt pleased. She stepped outside and closed the door.
They walked down to the stream that Sylvia had seen earlier on and sat on the bank.
"Listen, I've got it all figured out, except one little thing which I don't understand. But anyway ..." Miles took a deep breath and carried on.
"Being here, at home and having a busy summer job. It made me forget about my girlfriend, Vanessa Corbette. I don't know how but you knew that, and tried to stop Cassie from telling me she liked me, because you knew I liked her in some sort of way. But not as much as Vannie. I love her so much and you sort of ... saved me." He took a breather and stared at Sylvia to see her reaction. She nodded.
"I'm right??" Miles was astounded. Finally, something right in his life. Sylvia nodded again and giggled.
"But ... " Miles trailed off, he still couldn't believe it. "How did you know who Vannie was? I haven't talked about her." Sylvia stared at him, she didn't want him to find out, not yet. She picked up his hand and smiled.
Holding his hand reminded him of Vannie, how he missed her. Sylvia stood up and made him do so too. She pulled him to the house where she was before.
"Sylvie? Why are we here?"
Sylvia smirked to herself and knocked on the door. She knew what was coming, but she bet Miles had absoloutley NO IDEA.
"Coming" They heard the voice of the woman inside the house. She opened the door and said "Oh Sylvie! I thought I'd lost you again, I wondered where you'd ..." Lia stopped and stared at Miles.
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8


Miles, who was clinging to Sylvia, was sat on Lia's sofa. Sylvia was smiling up at both of them, enjoying the whole thing where as Miles was frozen like someone had just put him in the freezer for a few hours. They were both staring at Lia, who was sat opposite the two in an armchair.
"Well, Sylvia found me." Lia tried to lighten up the mood, but it wasn't working. Miles was slowly getting angrier and angrier at this woman. Sylvia giggled and tried to get out of Miles' grip, but he didn't let her.
"Why are you in Lacock? Why didn't you bother come visit us?" Miles asked, not moving, apart from his lips when speaking. Ophelia sighed and looked at the ground. "I'm not here usually, when..." She stopped for a second and took a deep breath. "...I left, I moved quite far away, But I love the village, and I didn't want to be to far away from you."
"To be honest..." Miles started. "I don't know how you could live in a village where your family, that you abandoned live just up the road." He said angrily. He wasn't going to cry, or grovel for her to come back. At the moment, he hated her. All the trouble that she caused, making his dad depressed and making Sylvia refuse to speak. Ophelia felt her eyes starting to well up, she tried her best not to cry.
"Miles, you have to understand that me and your dad were not getting on and I couldn't take it anymore."
"Why didn't you take us with you?"
"I was stressed. I couldn't handle a 3 year old and an 8 year old." She sighed, wiping her eyes.
"It doesn't matter!" Miles was standing up now, he had let go of Sylvia. "If you loved your children enough you would take them with you!" He shouted. Sylvia was still on the sofa. She curled her legs up to herself and pressed her nose against her knees. She wasn't expecting Miles to shout.
"You'd just left me and Sylvia with dad who is is angry all the time and doesn't care about us!"
"Rose."
Miles calmed down a bit and looked puzzled. "What?"
"Rose. She's not called Sylvia, she's called Rose." Ophelia sniffed and wiped another tear. Miles sat back down and stared at his mother.
"No. She's called Sylvia, she's always been called that." He said really quietly. Sylvia leaned in so she could listen better. Her name was Rose? This was great.
"She's called Rose Sylvia Ophelia Parker. I presume your father changed it when I left and swapped the two names around."
"Why though?" Miles asked, Sylvia ... or Rose was very interested by this. But she understood why her father changed the names, it reminded him of mum.
"I don't know. He's always preffered the name Sylvia to Rose, where as I prefer the name Rose. Maybe he thought, now that I had gone, he could change it."
Miles didn't understand this at all. Both of his parents weren't good enough to look after him and Sylvia. One dealt with her problems by running away, and the other by yelling at his eldest child.
"Can you come back?" Said ... Sylvia?! She spoke so quietly it had to be a silent room for you to hear her. Both Mrs Parker and Miles looked at her in shock.
"You spoke." Miles said just as quietly as Sylvia spoke. Sylvia curled up in her ball again and pretended to not hear him. Miles turned back to his mum and folded his arms. "Are you going to answer that?"
"I can't. Your father hates me." She looked at the floor. "He's always hated me." She said, her eyes still fixed on the floor. Miles felt upset and angry, h