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04-11-2008, 12:01 AM
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| Sirius Black's Second Chance - Sa13+ The Sweetest Thing Lissy De Vil Introduction: Some of you may remember this FanFic. I first posted it over 2 years ago. Two years! Sadly I got really busy in real life and lost inspiration here. Now I am pleased to say that Sirius is back. What you need to know first is that a lot of it was written pre Half-Blood Prince. So imagine picking up Sirius' story after the battle in the Department of Mysteries in OoTP. Second, there are some similarities to HBP that I wrote or (imagined) that are purely and coincidentally similar to what happened in the book! But now, having the series finished I will incorporate some actual events from that book. Maybe from Deathly Hallows too, we'll see. Finally remember - this Fic is completely alternate universe and my imagination (and a bit of love for Sirius), so don't expect perfect canon. So welcome to my new readers and welcome back to the old! Those of you who read before - please don't post spoilers! hehehe    Banner by Mikaela! Chapter Guide:
The Other Side of the Veil Emergency Transportation (Part 1) Emergency Transportation (Part 2) *** Sirius Black’s Second Chance The Other Side of the Veil
Sirius Black’s head was pounding. He felt as though he had been hit with something hard, repeatedly. Perhaps he’d just had one too many firewhiskeys. That wouldn’t be a first. Unfortunately, he felt like he should be remembering something. What? He raised his arm to cover his face. Something was blinding him, which did nothing for the state of his headache. He groaned and rolled over. It was at this point that he realized two things: one, that he was lying down and two, that he was getting wet. He sat up in surprise “What the…?” Then the rest came back to him: leaving Grimmauld Place, the Department of Mysteries, Harry… Harry! What happened to Harry? Sirius sprang to his feet, wand in hand. He braved the bright light and opened his eyes. And found himself… alone… outside.
Overhead, the sky was clear and sunny. It was a pleasant summer day by all observations, but how did he get here? Sirius could see the indentation in the grass where he had been lying and the early morning dew that had begun seeping through his clothing. There were, of course no signs of the struggle he had left behind… How long ago? There was no way to tell for sure. But it had been night time when he last knew what was going on. The last thing he could remember was his cousin. Bellatrix had hit him with something… The pain behind his eyes told him it was something powerful and that he was lucky to have survived. Now he was outside and apparently far away from the action. His eyes raked the landscape and could only see grass and rolling rocky hills that went on for miles. Nearby, at the top of one of such hills was an archway. A thin veil or curtain hung from it, fluttering in the breeze. Sirius recognized it instantly; he had just seen one in the Department of Mysteries. It must be a gateway of some kind, which meant he should be able to go back. He ran up the hill to the arch, but he needn’t have bothered. Just as he reached the stone archway, the veil fluttered one last time and disappeared. Recklessly, he tried to walk through the stone structure, only to come out the other side on the same rocky hill. The gateway, or whatever it was, had closed.
“Harry! No!” he shouted in anguish, not worrying who might hear. It was painfully evident that he was nowhere near any towns or dwellings. He reached out and placed his hands on the cold unforgiving stone and knew that he wasn’t going to get it to work again; he had no idea what kind magic enchanted it. He rested his face on his hands and tried to think. Well, he had no idea where he was for one thing, though his instincts told him that he was still in Great Britain, probably north, judging from the landscape. He would guess Scotland. He needed to find a town of some kind where he could discreetly contact the Order. He could try to apparate a few times until he got his bearing. It was dangerous for a wizard to apparate over long distances when he did not know where he was, but he'd have to try it. It was as good of a plan as any.
Sirius sighed and moved away from the arch and… went nowhere. He tried to disapparate again, with no result. Again. What was going on? He growled in frustration. Well, if he had to travel on foot, he would be faster on four legs then on two. This way, he could also approach any towns unnoticed. He attempted to adopt his animagus form of a great black dog. Unfortunately, once again, nothing happened. He looked at his hands in astonishment, they were still hands and not paws and he was clearly still standing on two legs! He couldn’t believe it! Was he bereft of all magical ability for some reason? What could this mean? He was slowly beginning to feel frantic. As a test, he raised his wand and tried a simple spell:
“ Wingardium Leviosa!” The stone he had been pointing at floated into the air obediently. Angrily he tossed it away and tried some different spells, and they too had the desired result. In frustration, he aimed a stunner at the ground and sent a large clump of dirt and dust into the air. Satisfied with that, he aimed a few more stunners out of sheer ire. Clearly he could do magic, but why couldn’t he disapparate or use his animagus form? Or do anything that would get him out of this ruddy place and closer to Harry?
He vented his anger to the sky once more, but knew it wasn’t getting him anywhere. He would have to walk, for now. He wasn’t worried about his ability to make his way in the wilderness, he had traveled and foraged for himself while on the run from the Ministry. He had just never been quite this pressed for time. Anything could be happening to Harry at this moment and Sirius was powerless to help him. He gritted his teeth and made a decision. He turned south and started to walk, with only his thoughts for company. How could he have failed his Godson so badly?
He traveled all day, the landscape not changing much. Nor was there any sign of human habitation, wizard or muggle. He would have to take a break. There was no help for it. It would do Harry no good if he pushed himself to exhaustion and not be able to go on. Nearby, there was a stream that he had recently begun to follow. He knelt down by it’s edge and splashed cool water onto his face. Perhaps after a drink and something to eat, he could continue to travel into the night. He leaned over and cupped his hands to get more water. The stream was a very slow moving one at this time of year and reflected his face like a mirror. What he saw caused him to recoil in fear and shout out in surprise…
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04-11-2008, 12:27 AM
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04-11-2008, 02:30 AM
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04-11-2008, 04:26 AM
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04-11-2008, 01:12 PM
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*diess*
Why oh why have I not been notified that this fic is up again? *ignores the fact that it was only up yesterday and pokes Lissy*I mean..ahemm..Yayyyyy! =D
I was so planning on quote replying it all over again..but...I practically memorized the first paragraph anyway so...I'll save your from the nonsense this time around.
Just..remember: This stalker loves Siry almost as much as she wubbs and misses you! =[ Keep posting, Lissy!
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04-11-2008, 03:37 PM
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| RobStruck I feel lucky that I've never read this before so it's all brand new to me. Weeeeee! |
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04-11-2008, 03:38 PM
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Samantha Rose Minister's Office | SS Featured Writer Lovely Lady Wow, I completely missed this one the first time around. Can't wait to read more, this one kept me on the edge of my seat! Very well done. |
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04-11-2008, 05:30 PM
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04-11-2008, 07:24 PM
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| The Black Widow Nikki's Werewolf PAMS! Need i say more?  .. im SOO happy its back lissylove you have no idea how much i loved to read this FF. And hopefully this time i get to read it with tina again instead of her nagging me that she read it first  hahaha *runs away*
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04-11-2008, 08:08 PM
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What has he seen? Please tell!!
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04-11-2008, 08:17 PM
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Sirius = Love. Forever. That so sums up everything I feel right now, hehe. =D
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04-11-2008, 08:35 PM
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Originally Posted by Mamushkaleontti PAMS! Need i say more?  .. im SOO happy its back lissylove you have no idea how much i loved to read this FF. And hopefully this time i get to read it with tina again instead of her nagging me that she read it first  hahaha *runs away*
PAMS! Pshewwwww. I have it all on file. Well, all that Lissy managed to write last time anyway..Bwahahha, I really do feel like a stalker now. X]
I was rummaging through my files because I remember when you had emailed me when your PC went nutso and you lost the fic...and so I had sent you my own version that I kept to read and re-read...I just opened it back up. X] It's like 40 pages on MS Word and I just finished reading it right now again. *started on One Ravenclaw's Pursuit of: Love, Friendship and a little Attention noww*
Aaaaak. Sooo, Rhea~> I did read it before you this time around too.  But, that's beside the point. I promise I won't be spamming like last time. *hides behind Rhea*
PAMS! :] *zooms out* Mrs. Black: I wuff you! *sprays you with hearts*
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04-12-2008, 03:58 AM
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04-12-2008, 05:56 PM
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04-13-2008, 08:15 AM
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I want to find out what Sirius saw when he looked into the pool!!!
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04-14-2008, 04:57 AM
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04-16-2008, 06:17 AM
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04-16-2008, 11:51 PM
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| The Sweetest Thing Lissy De Vil Omigosh thank you everyone for all your awesome posts. I love every one of them and when I can I will try to reply individually. If I don't it's due to lack of time and nothing else!
Thank you iheartdan for being first to post! *hugs*
Erin you are funny.  3rd chance for Sirius indeed. *shakes your hand and promises*
*loves on Tina for being forever loyal and sweet* This fic actually had a dedication to you. It's still yours sweetie.
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04-17-2008, 07:05 AM
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Sorry, needed to get that out of my system.
Sabrina has set up a tent and isn't going to move until the next post, so if you see a girl with hair that changes colour, just ignore her.
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04-17-2008, 02:54 PM
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| The Sweetest Thing Lissy De Vil Quote:
Originally Posted by Sabrina_Snape YAY!!!! New post coming!!! YAY!!!!
Sorry, needed to get that out of my system.
Sabrina has set up a tent and isn't going to move until the next post, so if you see a girl with hair that changes colour, just ignore her.
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04-17-2008, 02:59 PM
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| The Sweetest Thing Lissy De Vil Emergency Transportation Tentatively he leaned close to the water again. He raised one hand to his face. The reflection did the same. He rubbed his eyes and looked again. The face of a handsome young man, perhaps around age sixteen blinked back at him. Sirius was in total disbelief. He hadn’t seen this face in 20 years, yet he recognized it instantly. It was his own. But, gone were the lines of stress that he had accumulated over the years of hardship. His skin, which had become pale over months of being indoors was now flushed with the glow of youth and he no longer had that thin look he had acquired in prison and running from the Ministry. His features, which had become hollowed and haunted looking in Azkaban, had softened. His grey eyes, once dulled with unhappiness, now sparked with the mischief of better days. This was the way he was long ago, before the rise of Voldemort, before that dreadful night when Lily and James…
“Harry!” he said aloud. He had momentarily forgotten his godson, transfixed by the image in the water as he was. What did this mean for Harry? Sirius could only surmise that the veil in the stone archway had something to do with time. Was Harry at this moment fighting for his life, or had he not yet been born? Had he, Sirius, gone back in time to his youth? “James! He could see James again!” Sirius thought with joy. This time he could warn him. Have a chance to do things over and put things right. Maybe the war would never have to happen. He could at least see to it that his godson wasn’t left an orphan…
But he knew that terrible things could happen when one played with time. He had learned long ago in school about magical devices called time turners and how they should not be used lightly. He would need to be careful. If, as he was beginning to believe, he had gone back to his teen-age years, he would need to be careful not to encounter anyone who knew him. Not until he could get his bearings anyway. A wild thought occurred to him that he might even encounter himself! Or was he simply returned to his old body? This line of thought was beginning to bring back his headache. He needed to get help. Who to contact? That answer was simple. Dumbledore. Dumbledore would believe him. That was where he could start. Thus decided, Sirius was beginning to feel better. Glancing once more into the stream, he could see the old familiar smirk that he was known for reflecting back at him. He stood up and brushed the dirt from his robes. This he could get used to again.
The next task at hand was to figure out how to reach the Headmaster. There was still the problem of not knowing where he was and not having transportation. Sirius wracked his mind and remembered that there was a bus for just such needs. The Knight Bus, for the stranded witch or wizard. “This situation should qualify,” he thought wryly. He would have hesitated to use it before, since his face was well known on wanted posters, but he had never used it as a youth (preferring other modes of transportation ) and even in the future, no-one should recognize him like this.
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04-17-2008, 03:07 PM
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| The Sweetest Thing Lissy De Vil I cut that post in half, cus I'm mean and evil like that. I just noticed Rhea sitting there. She may have read the whole thing if she didn't refresh.  |
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04-17-2008, 05:36 PM
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Originally Posted by Lissydove Thank you iheartdan for being first to post! *hugs* No problem at all! I love it!
That was a great chapter! Cant Wait for the second half! PAMS! |
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