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Old 08-31-2008, 10:13 PM   #176 (permalink)
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LMAO at Ron...he can be an idiot sometimes cant he??
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That is werid that you can't find the other story. hmmm anyways


Evil cliffy. You so half to post more. Love this story. Oh whats going to happen. So in suspense.
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Old 09-19-2008, 08:28 AM   #178 (permalink)
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I'm a new reader who is loving your story loads!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I cant wait till the next post. I will wait here eating potato chips. Here have one with me. Well i hope no one dies. Please tell me no one dies!!!!
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Evil cliffy. You so half to post more. Love this story. Oh whats going to happen. So in suspense.
Haha, thanks Amy
I hate to leave you in suspense for too long, so...

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*eats a potato chip* Thanks! And thanks for the comments about my story too Umm, *zips lips*

Here's chapter 23! It's kinda like "whoa!" but I hope it's okay....

Chapter 23.

My eyes widened in horror as Harry stepped fully into the room, followed by Ron, then Hermione. Voldemort’s however, widened in…sickening, ugly joy.

“Why thank you for the visit, Potter.” He sneered. I caught Harry’s eye and smiled slightly. Even though it was a horrible time, I felt happy to see him. Looking at him after months of not, it felt like eating chocolate for the first time. Or like winning the Quidditch house cup…only much, much better than that.

“Ginny!” he exclaimed, running forward to hug me. I hugged him back as he planted a kiss in my hair.

“Well, well, well. That was a cozy little reunion, wasn’t it?” Voldemort jeered. Harry turned his head, his arms still around me.

“Well, we’ll just be going…” I muttered, trying to back away to where Hermione and my brother were standing frozen.

“Oh, no, Little Miss Weasley, you won’t.” The threat came from Lucius Malfoy. Harry glared at him, most likely for calling me ‘Little Miss Weasley’.

“Yes, we are!” he yelled. Lucius and a masked Death Eater raised their wands. I winced, but Harry reached for one of Hermione’s hand (the other one was gripping Ron’s) and turned.

I knew we were Disapperating. I felt the suffocating blackness pressing on me. Then, as soon as it was there, it was gone.

As my feet touched ground I fell over, landing on my backside. Harry released my hand as I fell, and I couldn’t help but laugh at my own un-gracefulness.

“Where are we?” Ron asked, looking around. I followed suit and realized we weren’t in Hogsmeade, where I thought we’d be. Instead we were on another deserted town street.

“Umm, First Street, London.” Harry murmured. Recognition clicked in Hermione and Ron’s expressions.

I, on the other hand, wasn’t caring about where we were; I was caring about what was going on with Voldemort. I knew it wasn’t over yet. There was no way that we were safe. None at all.

“Harry?” I asked, getting up, “why didn’t you take us to Hogsmeade? That would’ve been easier, right?” Harry shook his head.

“Gin, I…” he shook it again, this time to himself. “We have to go. now.” As he said this he turned to Hermione and Ron.

“Is it…?” Hermione asked, cutting off her sentence. I didn’t understand, but Harry did.

“Yeah, somewhere around here…” he murmured. I bit my lip. He didn’t seem like he was happy about finding whatever it was he was looking for.

“But Ginny-?” started Ron.

“I know; that’s what I’m thinking about!”

“We can’t,”

“Of course not, Ronald!” Hermione exclaimed. I looked at her, surprised, and then raised my voice so it could be heard.

“You know, I could probably help find it, whatever it is…”

“Gin, you couldn’t I’m sorry.” Harry told me quietly. I should’ve let this blow over, but instead, being me, I let it get me annoyed.

“I am every bit as good at magic as you three!” I challenged, not sure why I was yelling at Harry instead of telling him over and over that I loved him.

“Ginny, that’s not what he meant,” Hermione reasoned. I ignored her and kept my eyes locked with Harry’s.

“I was in Dumbledore’s Army with you! I was at the Ministry with you! I fought with you at Hogwarts last year!”

Harry shook his head with no sign of a rising temper. “Gin, I’m sorry. You can’t. It has nothing to do with skill. If it did, you’d be the first person we’d talk to,” he said it just to get me to stop talking, I could tell.

“Gin, please, stay here, we’ll be back.” Harry’s pleading voice was genuine. I finally figured out that he was talking the truth.

“Dumbledore, right?” I asked simply. Hermione looked relieved, Ron looked a bit frightened, but Harry looked like he would rather be doing anything but this.

“Yeah, Dumbledore. I promise, Gin, if it wasn’t, I’d let you help. But it has to be us three. I’m sorry.” He looked it too.

“Alright,” I sighed, “but where am I suppose to go? I’m not going back to Hogwarts without you. I’ve already missed two months, another day won’t make a difference,” Ron grimaced, and Hermione shook her head slowly.

“Ginny, it’s been four. Today is April eighteenth.” Hermione whispered. I had no idea how on Earth I’d gotten that far off on my counting.

“Anyway, it doesn’t matter. What is she going to do while we go get it?” Harry asked. I could hear the strain in his voice, he obviously wasn’t happy with leaving me here alone in this strange place.

“Umm, perhaps that alley way there?” I asked, pointing a ways down the empty street. Harry grimaced.

“I don’t know, Gin…” he started. Ron cut in.

“She’ll only be there for a few minutes. That’ll do.” Harry shook his head again, but sighed in defeat.

“Alright. There. But I want every protection possible around you, and I don’t want you to be wandering off, and-”

“Harry? I’m sixteen,” I whispered, “I really can take care of myself,” he looked at me curiously, but nodded.

“Alright, alright, whatever gets us done faster. Come on Ron, Hermione.” He looked at me once more, and gave me a hug.

“We’ll be right back,” he promised as they took off down the street at a run.


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Sweet post! I think I waited for ages to see this.

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Loved that post loads. aaaa they are back together again unlike humpty dumpty when he fell off that wall. It is so nice that they are together again.
* opens another bag of potato chips to eat while waiting for next post*
Yummy Pringles. Well i hope they live happily ever after at the end.

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Old 10-11-2008, 08:47 AM   #182 (permalink)
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Sydnie!!!!I missed you so much!!!!!

I SO SO SORRY for missing so many posts!

It was great!!!PAMS PAMS PAMS!!!!

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omg I'm a new reader and I just want to say that I really love your story and cant wait for the next post!
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Old 10-13-2008, 02:03 AM   #184 (permalink)
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ok..I definitley read this like the day you posted it...so where is my comment?
IDK...so I will just say it again!
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!
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oh my gosh i lve it. harry should let ginny come. hope everything gose good. post more soon
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Sweet post! I think I waited for ages to see this.

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GREAT CHAPTER!!!!
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Thanks so much!

Okay, so I actually like this chapter quite a bit.... I just hope you guys do too!
Oh, and the story is slowly but surely coming to an end just thought I'd let you guys know....

Chapter 24


Hiding in an alley way for an hour isn’t exactly how I’d recommend anyone spend their free time. Especially when they’re using that hour to think about what they’re brother, best friend, and boyfriend are doing.
I came to a conclusion though. Here it is: They’re doing something dangerous, and it involves Voldemort.
I sat with the Invisibility Cloak over me (Harry had insisted on it, ignoring my attempts to give it back to him) and every single protection spell the four of us knew around me.
I looked up from studying my hands as I heard a voice. Well, I heard a crash as a garbage bin tipped, and then I heard a voice.
“Ginny? Are you there?” I pulled off the cloak and stood up.
“Yes Ron, I’m right here!” with a swish of my wand the protective enchantments were gone.
I ran up to Harry and he opened his arms for me.
“Did you get it?” I asked. He seemed reasonably happier then he had been as he gave me a nod.
I smiled and turned to Hermione, who I realized was holding a sword.
“Is that it?” I asked. Hermione nodded, looking down at the weapon as if she thought it would turn on her.
“Well, should we get going?” I asked. The others looked at one another, clearly having a silent conversation.
“I don’t know, Ginny,” Ron answered finally, “We all know Voldemort hasn’t finished with his plan, and he won’t until he absolutely has to. That is-”
“-When either I’m dead or he’s dead.” Harry cut in. I bit the inside of my cheek.
“Umm, so….what are we doing?” I asked cautiously. I didn’t like where this was going.
“I think we’re going back to Hogwarts. And we’re going to fight.” Hermione whispered. Not willing my voice to speak, I just nodded once.
“Now?” Ron questioned.
“Yea, I think we should go now.” Harry answered. I saw his eyes traveling to the sword Hermione was still holding.
“What is that?” I asked, nodding my head toward the sword.
“A sword, Ginny,” Ron replied in all seriousness.
“No, really?” my voice was thick with sarcasm.
“Yea, did you not know that?”
“I’ll tell you what I know-” I threatened.
“Stop it, both of you,” Harry ordered, “We need to figure out what we’re going to do now. And if you two are going to fight, Hermione and I’ll do it ourselves!”
I continued to glare at my brother for no reason as the others discussed whatever it was that they were worried about.
“Alright!” Harry said loudly. I looked up from my bare feet. “We’re going back. We’re going to find a way to destroy this thing,” he pointed quickly to the sword, “And we’re going to live happily ever after, okay?”
Hermione and Ron looked hopeful, but I bet my face looked skeptical. There was most likely not going to be a happily ever after for us. Not completely at least. Something bad was bound to happen.
“So, we just magically show up at Hogwarts- me, after being gone four months- and then we destroy that,” I made a motion to the sword, “and it’s all over?” I asked sarcastically. Harry shook his head cautiously.
“We’re expecting a battle.”
I stared blankly at him. He was expecting a battle, and yet he wanted to go back to Hogwarts anyway? That was so unlike him!
“Harry…?” I asked slowly.
“I know what you’re thinking Gin, but it’s got to be done. Unless we can find a way to be just me and him...” He paused, “But, then again, I can just pop back up in the Malfoy Manor…”
“No!” Ron, Hermione and I all protested at the same time.
“Besides,” Hermione reasoned, “we still have to get rid of this,” she looked down at the sword.
“And how are we supposed to do that?” Ron asked skeptically.
“What is it?” I asked.
“It’s…nothing Gin.
“It is too something!”
“Listen, you don’t need to-”
“It’s a Horcrux.” Harry answered, cutting off Ron mid-sentence.
I narrowed my eyes. “A what?”
“The thing has a piece of Voldemort’s soul in it.”
I stared at the sword, and then took a few steps away from Hermione, who was still holding it.
“How are you suppose to destroy it?” I asked, still eyeing the sword, like it was going to attack me at any moment.
“That’s a good question.” Harry replied.
“How did Dumbledore destroy the ring?” Ron asked. Harry held his index fingers to his temples, concentrating.
“Basilisk venom…he said something about Basilisk venom.” He said finally. Ron looked at him skeptically.
“Well that’s ironic,”
Hermione hit him on the head.
“This isn’t a time for jokes!” she scolded.
“Who said I was joking?!” Ron asked, rubbing his head with his hand.
“So…where are we going to get it?” Harry asked exasperated.
“Jokes?”
“No, Ronald! Basilisk venom!”
“The Chamber of Secrets, of course!” I interrupted. Harry looked at me as if I’d grown another head.
I raised an eyebrow at him. “It’s obvious, isn’t it? I’m sure the dead Basilisk is still there, pull out a few fangs and stab the thing-” I motioned to the sword “-with one.”
“That actually makes sense.”
“Of course it does, Ron!”
“To Hogwarts, then?”
Harry took a deep breath.
“To Hogwarts.”


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Great Post Sydnie. that its comimg to an end i've really njoyed this story.
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