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06-20-2008, 02:33 PM
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|  EtherealCrup
Location: Wonderland. Join Date: Nov 2007
Posts: 2,156
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kiera Aurélie Everard
Fourth Year |  A Personal Journal belonging to the Other Half - Sa13+
A Personal Journal belonging to
the Other Half
Hii, I'm Jayde & this is my second FF. It's quite different to my other one, which is There's Something About You.
I don't know where I'm going with this one, & I don't know how well I'll go with it either.
I don't even know if it'll work out. But, here's hoping. :]
Sunday, May 10th, 11:55pm
Love. Grief. Fate.
These three words are often taken out of context, often misused, misplaced.
I know of love. I know of grief. And I know of fate.
There are many versions of love.
One of them, interpersonal love, is the love between human beings.
This love exists between family, friends, couples.
I love my family, in a way words cannot explain.
For it is a love so pure, and so true, that nothing could ever break it.
In a way, it’s the same love that I feel towards my friends.
Often the words "I love you" are taken for granted.
Grief is the feeling of loss and anguish for the death of a loved one.
A pain that my family, my friends, and I know all to well.
For in a short period of time, we lost the ones that we loved.
We lost family members, and we lost our friends.
& fate, fate's the hardest to pinpoint of all.
Fate is used in regard to the finality of events that have worked themselves out.
Yet, how is it decided? In what way does it "work itself out"?
Somehow it was, and somehow it did.
And somehow the ones we love were taken from us by fate.
I miss my bother, I miss him immensely.
I miss the way we used to finish each others sentences.
The way our jokes seemed to always fall in line with each others thoughts.
People say that their "soul mate" is their other half.
Well, my other half was my brother,
Fred Weasley, whom we lost too soon.
I distinctly remember the pain that I felt as soon as my eyes hit Fred.
He was laying there, just laying there, peacefully, a smile etched upon his face.
I ran towards him, and time seemed to stop around me.
I kneeled down beside him, and layed my head upon his chest.
"Wake up," I yelled, shaking him violently, hot tears prickling at my face.
His smile didn't waver, I knew that that was it, that he was gone.
I am lost without him, a piece of myself has been torn away, a piece I will never get back.
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06-21-2008, 01:51 AM
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|  K.A. & Gallery Mod
Shipper Queen
Debate BuddySnidget
Location: Question mark Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 13,880
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Samantha "Sam" Elise Edwards
Fifth Year
Ministry RPG Name:
Santana Venezula
Department of Mysteries |
Wow!!!!
That was deep! My mind is blown away!!
Three words...man that was a brilliant way to start this. It was great!!
Was this a Oneshot? Or a FF?
Either way this was very well written! 
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06-21-2008, 10:10 AM
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| | Hippogriff
Location: look around. : ) Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 3,457
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Tamzin Lianne Wood
Fourth Year |
my gawsh. you can write aswell as RP.
now thats an achievement 
lol. that was a great way to start. its just magnificent. 
shannon x | 
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06-21-2008, 01:48 PM
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| RP Queen Bicorn
Location: In a blackhole :) Join Date: Mar 2008
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Rogue Katherine Narcissa Black
Second Year
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Magical Creatures |
love it!
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06-22-2008, 12:54 PM
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FIERCE!!!
Mrs Nick Jonas <33Acromantula
Location: places...*shifty* Join Date: Feb 2008
Posts: 10,428
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Alexandra (Allie) Johnson
Second Year
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Rebecca (Becca) Malison
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OMG!! LOVE IT!!
I am suscribing right now!
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06-22-2008, 01:08 PM
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| | Crup
Location: Sydney, Australia Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 2,186
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Nicoletta Malfoy
Sixth Year
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Elizabeth Summers
Magical Games & Sports |
OMG I love it!
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06-22-2008, 09:20 PM
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|  SBFC's 100th MemberStalking JamesAcromantula
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Starling Boomer
Third Year
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Wow. I just started tearing up. That was beautiful.
Fred dying was one of the saddest things to me in the book.
Can't wait to read more of your work. XD | |
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06-23-2008, 01:05 PM
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| Ethereal Crup
Location: Wonderland. Join Date: Nov 2007
Posts: 2,156
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kiera Aurélie Everard
Fourth Year |
Quote:
Originally Posted by MUSTANG SALLY  Wow!!!!
That was deep! My mind is blown away!!
Three words...man that was a brilliant way to start this. It was great!!
Was this a Oneshot? Or a FF?
Either way this was very well written!
*Steph* | First readerrr.
Thank-youu! :]
Um, I'm not entirely sure. I thought I'd just see how I went.
& I'm posting another bit, but, I don't know if I should or shouldn't.
But thank-you. :]
- Jayde. Quote:
Originally Posted by xshannonx my gawsh. you can write aswell as RP.
now thats an achievement
lol. that was a great way to start. its just magnificent.
shannon x | Haha.
Aww, thanks. :]
-Jayde. Quote:
Originally Posted by supercodi95 love it!
~*Codi*~ | I'm glad you do!
- Jayde. Quote:
Originally Posted by HPobsession33 OMG!! LOVE IT!!
I am suscribing right now!
~Becca~ | Yay, first subscriberr! 
- Jayde. Quote:
Originally Posted by Ms.Malfoy OMG I love it!
Isabel. | I'm gladd. :]
- Jayde. Quote:
Originally Posted by obsession8888 Wow. I just started tearing up. That was beautiful.
Fred dying was one of the saddest things to me in the book.
Can't wait to read more of your work. XD | Aww, thanks darl.
Oh, me too. I cried!
- Jayde. ------------------------------------------ Thanks again for the feedbackk. :]
Here is another bitt. I actually wasn't going to post this but.. I did.
& here's something I would like to clear up, just incase you were wondering.
This isn't supposed to be funny, & it's supposed to reflect the transition George is going through,
so that's why George doesn't sound like how he is in the book.
Alrighty, now I've got that out of the way, here it iss.
Oh & it's in a different format, because the first format was just for the beginning.
Hope you like it & such. :] Tuesday, May 12th, 9:15pm
I remember clearly, every detail of what happened at Fred's funeral. I remember what happened after the household had awoken, and before it had even started. We gathered in the living room, and pulled each other into a long embrace, I held back my tears as we stayed in that embrace. We had to prepare ourselves for the day ahead, for that day was one of the hardest days of our lives. We held Fred's funeral on Hogwarts grounds, where Albus Dumbledore's had once also been held. The grass was green, and crisp, dew still sparkling in the sun. No clouds were in the sky, the way he liked it. They had all come, our family, his and my friends, other students who looked up to him. Angelina Johnson walked up to my family, and gave us her condolences. I pulled her into a long hug, knowing how much she would miss Fred, and the tears began to fall down both of our faces. She sat behind us while we, Fred's family, sat in the front row. I sat there, still as a bean pole, not even twitching as I listened to a beautiful speech made by Minerva McGonagall. Soon it was my turn to speak, to say the speech that I had memorised. I slowly made my way up to the podium. I scanned the crowd, and acknowledged the grief written on all their faces, which made it that much harder.
"Fred was and always will be, my brother, my twin, my best friend, my other half.
Nothing could've prepared me for today, for today we are burying not only my brother, but a piece of me along with him. The smile which is upon Fred's face will stay in my mind forever, for that is what is going to get me through this. I saw his smile every single day, we laughed together, we joked together, we did everything together. I will cherish the memories that I hold of him for the rest of my life, and the picture of him in my mind will never fade.I can imagine Fred looking down on us thinking, 'I wish they'd bloody cheer up, I want a proper send off, this isn't doing me justice'." A joke, I had tried to make a joke, and what came of it? Nothing. It was such a pathetic attempt, but it was all I could muster. "And so, I leave you with this."
Then I threw a black ball into the sky, fireworks that Fred had made previously for me, one that could be seen even in the sunshine. He never told me what it was, but I thought I'd throw it anyway. It was a portrait, him and I, standing together laughing at the hole in the side of my head, where my ear had once belonged. Above us were the words, "Holey George" with a halo shining above my portraits head. That made me smile, at least we were able to joke about one of the things that had happened that year. As soon as I stood down, I walked over to my brothers opened coffin, glancing at his pale face, at that smile, the one we both shared. I lent inside, and kissed him on the forehead. Then I whispered in his ear, as though if I did he'd be able to hear me. "I wish that I had been taken with you, because with you is where I belong." Hot tears began to fall, sliding upon the tracks that had already appeared on my face. I made my way back to my seat with my head down. Once his funeral had finished, and he had been buried, his tombstone behind his grave. We went back to the Burrow, silent for the rest of the day, lost in our own thoughts and memories of Fred. My mother was with my father, Bill with Fleur, Charlie in his room, Ron with Hermione, Ginny with Harry, and I? I sat alone outside, where Fred and I had once played numerous pranks, and numerous games of Quidditch.
So much has changed. The silence in the apartment which we had shared is so incredibly loud, it seers my eardrums. The words that are missing, play through my mind. The shop below us now feels that much empty with him gone, yet I can't gain up the courage to put up a sign that reads, "Partner needed", because that will mean that he is never coming back. Angelina has been coming over regularly since his funeral, and a pang of guilt always nags at my head. He should be the one spending time with her, not me.
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06-23-2008, 02:54 PM
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FIERCE!!!
Mrs Nick Jonas <33Acromantula
Location: places...*shifty* Join Date: Feb 2008
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Alexandra (Allie) Johnson
Second Year
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Rebecca (Becca) Malison
Accidents & Catastrophes |
aww...that was so sad.
I ♥ Fred and George
~Becca~ | |
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06-23-2008, 03:34 PM
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| | Hippogriff
Location: look around. : ) Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 3,457
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Tamzin Lianne Wood
Fourth Year |
aww. i loved it. 
made me cry though.
i always cry at funerals. how sad.
i cried when i wrote his funeral for my one shot.
keep writing youre fantastic
and i subscribed 
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07-01-2008, 01:17 AM
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MoniBunni!♥ Demiguise
Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 5,235
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Kylator Riley Greyson
Sixth Year |
Oh, wow loverly. o.o
I Am surprised I didn't find this before, Lol.
Anyway, you are A lovely writer, and i'm going to tell you,
she should keep it up. ;]
The plotting is gorgeous, lol.
I'll be keeping track of this.
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07-25-2008, 05:58 AM
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Shipper Queen
Debate Buddy Snidget
Location: Question mark Join Date: Jan 2007
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Samantha "Sam" Elise Edwards
Fifth Year
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Santana Venezula
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Ohh wow
So Sad! This is really good! You put a lot of feeling in this! That is really good
Keep writing! This is beautiful!
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08-07-2008, 02:20 AM
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|  MakeWearyTimeWearyHippogriff
Location: Birmingham =) Join Date: Jun 2007
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Daniel Sychev
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Jayde !
This is great, your a really good writer. That was so sad, but really well written. Well done you
Dan | |
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09-26-2008, 09:53 PM
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