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10-07-2007, 09:18 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily-ann Brooks Sixth Year | The Life Of Lily-Ann Brooks - Sa13+ This is my fifth Fanfic. Now obviously this is about a character. This charrie is my Hogwarts character. I never really Hogwarts RPG, so no one knows about Lily-ann and I thought of making a FanFic about her, so you can all know about her history/story/life. -=Chapter 1=- Sitting near the fire on a cold dark night in the winter of Winddle Way Road in the magical world, Carol Brooks drank her hot cocoa. Thinking of her thoughts.
Now Carol is a married 29 year old mother... well soon to be, since her child hasn't been born yet. She is a 5'7 young women, with light brown hair .She has bright green eyes and is not bad looking. She is a very beautiful women. Her mother is a pure and her father is a pure, so that made Carol a pure pure.
She sat in silence, staring at the fire crackling and blazing yellow, orange, red flames rise up high.
"Hmm.. alone in the living room. Why is my darling Mrs. Brooks alone in the warmth of our living room?" Asked Landon. The husband of Carol and the father of the baby who is soon to be called Lilly-Ann.
Landon was 32, with blond hair and brown eyes. He is 5'8 and also not bad looking. He was a very handsome man. Much as a surprise he is a half. His Farther is a wizard and his mother is muggle. So this all made Lily a half of different magical races. That made Lily-ann a pure muggle (of some sorts), and a pure all in one.
Carol heard her husband's voice and smiled as he wrapped his arms around her. "Nothing at all, just thinking..." Her voice trailed off in a daze.
Landon walked to the side of her. He keeled down and looked up his wife in a concern way. "Are you sure you want this baby?"
Carol turned her head down at him. She nodded saying, " Of course.. we did the process of having this baby." She said calmly.
Landon sighed. "Yeah, you're right." He then placed his hand on her stomach and smiled wide at Carol. "Amazing how we are going to be parents."
The 29 year old soon to be mother giggled at her husband. "Yes... but to think of it, it's scary that we made it to this point."
Landon's legs started to bother him so he got up, while saying, "Wow... yeah. Thats pretty weird." He sat down on the floor again, this time in front of his wife. He took her right foot and massaged it. "Do you even remember when we met.. I do." He asked her.
"I certainly do. It was our third year of Hogwarts. You were the one that transferred."
"And once I saw you. I knew it was love at first sight." Carol lightly giggled.
"What good times, Hon." She said staring down at her stomach and sighed. "We need to figure out what gender this baby is. I would like to know. I'm not going to be one of those mothers who wants to wait once their baby comes out."
"If you wish, my darling." Landon said getting up and kissing her on the lips gently. "Don't stay up too late." He told her softly, as his lips let go.
He left to sleep, leaving his wife sitting in the dark room, while the fire light half of the room.
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10-11-2007, 10:45 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katelyn Quillio Ministry RPG Name:
Klara Manssum Magical Creatures | ooo good beginning...i liked it, Lisa! i thinks its the best thing you've ever written...seriously. it was pretty good!
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10-11-2007, 09:46 PM
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| | Hippogriff
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily-ann Brooks Sixth Year | Yay my first reader. FINALLY!
Thanks you so much Kate for your comment and for reading.
I'll post when I can.
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10-12-2007, 10:42 AM
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| George's Missing Ear Crup
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Isla Pervell Fourth Year | Aw this is cute!
Keep it up 
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10-12-2007, 08:06 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily-ann Brooks Sixth Year | Thanks so much. 
Another reader! 
Think i'll being putting up a chapter today. not sure.
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10-13-2007, 01:04 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Heather Malfoy Seventh Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kahylee Ashford Magical Games & Sports | Hey lisa i really liked it cant wait for the next chapter.PAMS
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10-20-2007, 02:09 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily-ann Brooks Sixth Year | -=Chapter 2=- Carol woke up from her lovely sleep. She carried herself up and stretched As she turned her head to where her husband slept, she didn't see Landon there, The spot was empty.
Getting off the king sized bed, Carol made her way into the kitchen. Landon was cooking breakfast for her. "Good Morning, love! How was your nap?"
Carol rubbed her eyes as she walked to the table. "Fine, how-" She cut herself in with a great yawn and spoke again, "... h-how about yours?" She asked with bright tone in her voice.
"Wonderful. I slept like a baby." Landon flipped the pancake and scrabbled the eggs in another big pan.
The 29 year old women shivered and wrapped herself tight with her purple robe. "When is my appointment?"
"What appointment, Hon?" Said Landon, He was to busy with the food in pans and pots that he couldn't think.
"The one with the baby." Carol raised her eyebrow as she spoke. He stomach began to grumble.
"Oh, that one. I called once I got up and we leave at 2 o' clock." Once again a pancake was flipped and Landon then turned the bacon on it's other side.
Carol looked out the window and saw a huge pile of pure whit fluffy snow on the ground. She could see that white stuff from as far as she could. "Uhm.. do you think we can get through the snow? I don't think we can..."
"Don't worry we will. We are magical people, remember." Landon said with a smile.
"..Oh, right." Said Carol, feeling stupid. "I don't feel like a witch Landon.. I feel like a mood swinged pregnate muggle women, who eats her food in a irregularly eating way!!"
"Stop worrying. Just go take a shower and get ready." Landon said calmly and sweet.
Grumpy Carol got up form her seat and walked off tot he bathroom, while mumbling things.
Landon chuckled and went back to finishing the breakfast.
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10-21-2007, 10:19 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Heather Malfoy Seventh Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kahylee Ashford Magical Games & Sports | Good post Lisa I wish it was longer though im that bored.PAMS
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10-21-2007, 10:27 PM
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| | Erkling
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katelyn Quillio Ministry RPG Name:
Klara Manssum Magical Creatures | aw...cute couple. lol....i like em both...teehee...
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11-10-2007, 02:51 AM
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| | Hippogriff
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily-ann Brooks Sixth Year | -=Chapter 3=- A glaring light shined upon Mrs. Brooks, whom layed on a bed in room. Landon stood not far from his wife. He gave her a warm smile, like nothing was going to happen to her.
A young doctor came in the room and said, " 'Ello, Mrs and Mr. Brooks. I'm your doctor for today. You shall know me by doctor Linderway." She said nicely.
Carol took a deep breath and faced her husband with worry in her face.
Linderway chuckled as she look at her clipboard, "No need to worry, Mrs. Brooks." She began to say, once picking up a bottled potion from a cabinet. Doctor Linderway handed it to Carol and smiled.
"Please take this bottle and drink it for me so we can start the process." Asked the doctor.
Carol slowly took the potion and began to open it. From there the doctor left the room. Mrs. Brooks panicked and turned to Landon. "Why did she leave? Why must I take this? Landon I can't do this!?" She said, almost having a heart attack.
Landon walked forward to her and tried to calm her down. "Shh. Calm down Carol. Everything is alright. The doctor must of stepped out for something small. I don't know the reasons for the potion but it must have to do with seeing what gender our baby is." Landon told her smoothly.
Carol inhaled and then exhaled each time. "O... OK" Taking in bravery, she gulped down the bottled potion and waited for the doctor to come in. "There we go... no worries,hun." Landon rubbed her back and held her hand.
"Ah, you finished it all up." Linderway smiled, walking further in the room. Now.. lets ask you questions. Do you smoke or drink?"
Carol gave her look, like she was crazy. "Heaven no!" She yelped out.
"I was just asking, calm down, calm down.. Do you have any alergic reactions?"
"Yes..." Carol nodded.
"OK... have you had any problems with your pregnancy.. any mood swings? big cravings? Asked the doctor as she looked at her clip board.
"Uhm... no,yes a few, and yes... of course, why would you ask that? Don't all women go though that process?" Snapped Carol.
"Not all Mrs. Brooks. We ask this, because some could have actully have problems which could cause major problems witch your baby. Further or do.. we shall see you baby's gender." Doctor Linderway walked close next to Carol and placed her hand above her stomach. a blue-ish gren light appeared from Carol's stomach.
"Oh... lucky you. You have a girl." Linderway said with a smile.
Landon and Carol smiled with excitement to eachother. "We're having a baby girl.
"Congrats you two. Have you bothered to think of a name before this? even if you didn't know what the gender is?"
both parents shook their heads. "No, we haven't, but I think we'll have something soon." Landon told the doctor.
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11-13-2007, 02:58 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katelyn Quillio Ministry RPG Name:
Klara Manssum Magical Creatures | OOO...i liked it! i though it was CUTE! lol...
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11-13-2007, 11:09 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily-ann Brooks Sixth Year | Thanks so much Kate. 
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12-14-2007, 05:54 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Yvonne Ginevra Potter First | Quick post!!! can't wait
new reader...tink u noe me but anyway ill introduce myself....I'm Yvonne |
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12-15-2007, 12:40 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Heather Malfoy Seventh Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kahylee Ashford Magical Games & Sports | Hey Lisa
sorry i feel behind
high schol is so crazy
and its driving me mad
Great post.
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12-15-2007, 04:44 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily-ann Brooks Sixth Year | -=Chapter 4=- Three days later after the doctors, at home Landon and Carol relaxed in each of their areas. Carol was in the living room watching T.v. Landon was working on papers for work in his little office room.
Both of them knew of a trip to the muggle work, Mr. Brooks needed to go to soon. They tried to ignore it and not worry.
Carol had many thoughts about the baby as she watched her show. She got off her red comfy chair and slowly walked to her husbands room as best as she could.
"Sweetie? She asked in a soft voice, as she leaned on the side of the door. She sighed seeing how focused Landon was. She didn't like when he got to focus on his work.
Landon made no sound or movement. His wife rolled her eyes, "Landon Marcus Brooks!"
"Yeah? What is it hun?" He asked still eyeing his papers.
Carol was havening a urge to strangle her husband, but she didn't have much strength to do it. She tried to stay calm. "It's been three days after the doctors. You've been working on those papers once you got them. I was thinking about names those few days, and I think we shouldn't wait that long, be we can... if you want. I mean once she comes out." She asked softly adn calm.
"Uh-huh, yeah. Whats ever you'd like to do is fine with me, babe." Landon mumbled.
Carol couldn't take it anymore. "You can be such a hard headed person when your working." She walked off and went down to her bedroom. Making her way to her warm room she walked forward to her closet.
Reaching on the top of her closet she grabbed a big dusty box. Blowing the dust off, you could see it a gray box with some holes in it. Carol opened it and you'd see bunch of things in it.
She took a out a bunch of lettered envelopes. The first one wrote: Miss. Kenith
The Room on the Right Hall on the Left side
280 Tin Tope Ave
And so forth with seven other envelops. She looked deep into her box and found two potion bottles she kept in her third year. One was empty and the other one was three inches filled with purple liquid. She layed them on the side.
Smiling, she found her album. Carol almost began to cry. What was in this album was cherished with so many memories. The first page filled with pictures of her professors. Second pages was pictures of her and some of her friends and her. The book went on with many other things in her past years in Hogwarts.
The pregnate 29 year old mother hoped her daughter will too have many adventures and memories in Hogwarts just like she did. As well as learning, making friends, and much more as the years go by.
Putin back her things in the big box, Koober flew in on the window sill, flapping his brown wings. He would have hooted, but a letter was in his beak. The witch looked up adn then down at her box. She picked upa dn bright it back in it's place.
Carol turned to her owl and stepped forward to him. Taking the envelop she looked down at what was written on. Ministry of Magic
Mr. L. Brooks
25 Winddle Way Rd.
The Office Room
A huge sigh came out from Carols mouth. She knew something was bad. Walking out of the master bedroom. Feeling her heart beat fast she walked down the hall to her husband's office.
Stepping foot into the room she walked infront of him and handed it to him. "Take the letter and read it." Landon stared at her puzzled. He opened the envelope and took the letter out.
Dear Mr. L Brooks,
Sorry to say that we have moved the date of the trip on December 23. We know this is around the holidays and we know you know the trip will be months until we get back home. You can not cancel this trip or ask to go on another day. Paul D. Mankey
Landon's head hanged sadly. He couldn't believe his trip was changed. He didn't want to miss a Christmas year with his wife. And he surly did not want to miss the birth... of his darling daughter. Landon felt horrible. He sad on his chair slouching as he stared at the white written papers.
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12-15-2007, 07:25 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Heather Malfoy Seventh Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kahylee Ashford Magical Games & Sports | Thats so sad hes going away for the holidays and is going to miss the birth.Great post.PAMS
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Heather
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12-15-2007, 07:30 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Katelyn Quillio Ministry RPG Name:
Klara Manssum Magical Creatures | AW. THATS SAD. poor guy..poor guy...PAMS
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12-15-2007, 09:46 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily-ann Brooks Sixth Year | Thanks you guys. oh and Yvonne, thank you for reading. Post a next chapter soon. |
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01-29-2008, 12:43 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily-ann Brooks Sixth Year | Hey everyone!
Ok, so i've been busy with school and to be honest i kidna get lazy on the job(typing the chapter). But I will get it done this week.
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01-30-2008, 12:19 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily-ann Brooks Sixth Year | Here is the chapter you have all been waiting for! Enjoy. And for such a long wait, i'll post tomorrow. -=Chapter 5=- It had been weeks after the day Landon left Carol alone. She sat staring at the t.v, dazing into her mind. Carol was like this for awhile and when she snapped back into to reality she let out a huge sigh. Carol was shocked that for the first time being without Landon , it felt sad, empty, and weired all at the same time. The 29 year old pregnate witch thought back to that day. Carol was in the living room as always. Her husband came in with his hands full of his bags. He gave his wife a serious straight face, like he kept all his real emotions inside.Feeling hurt to see him leave her. She trembled and tears began rolled down her soft cheeks. "I-I don't want you to go!Don't leave me! Stay here and be with me. Be with me and our baby. You can't leave without seeing your daughter." She yelled out to him as she cried.She shook her head, pulling her hands up to her face.
Landon head hung in shame. He couldn't look at her. Not in those eyes. "Lily-ann...." was all he said.
Carol wiped her tears from her cheeks. She stared at him with a puzzled look. 'Pardon?"
Landon finally looked up. Right at her. "I want to name our child Lily-ann." He said firmly. Carol nodded while a smiled curled up from her mouth. Her eyes were still water. She wiped her tears again.
Landon dropped his luggage and walked slowly up to her. He gently held her, smelling a wonderful smell from her hair. He hugged her even tighter allowing all his love show much into the hug.
Carol cried once more. She put her arms around him, hugging him as well. She felt so hurt. She could understand why he had to go.
"I'm sorry this has to happen, Hon. I don't want to leave you, nor Lily. I want to stay with you, I really do," His arms let go for a bit and then tightened around her again. "... I can't though. They won't allow a cancellation, I have to go. I truly don't want to me her birth." He looked at her and a tear fell down slowly from his eye and down his cheek. Their foreheads were together and both cried. "I-I-I promise you I will c-come back as soon as I can to see my gorgeous girls. Promise when I get back, we will live a great life as a wonderful family.Carol.... I miss you deeply."
He let got of her. Picked up his luggage and walked up to
the door. Landon took one more look at his wife, who cried. "I love you so much, baby."
That was the end of him. Carol placed her hand on her stomach. She smiled widely, but inside she still felt hurt."What I'm I going to so." She asked herself.
All of a sudden, Dolly, Landon's tiny young barn owl flew in. She swept down onto the arm of the couch Carol was on. Dolly flapped her wings and moved a bit as if she was dancing. The 29 year old witch took the letter and opened it with a smile.
Dear Carol,
I'm glad to say I'm all right. The muggle world is an amazing place, but hard to understand some things, but people here are nice. We are still on the job of figure out about 'him'. We are close on finding him, but we can't exactly crack it. Anyway, everyday i'm thinking about you.. and Lily. Hows she doing? Is she out yet? Hows you? You ok, too? Love always,
Landon Marcus Brooks
Carol got up as quickly as she could. Looking around her house she finally found paper and a pen. She placed it down the closest tabel next to her and wrote as fast as she could.
Carol was happy to get a letter form him. She missed him like crazy. Most of all she was happy he was ok and enjoy his trip.
Dear Landon,
I'm so happy to hear from you. I'm glad you are ok. Please be careful on this dangerous task. You know he- who-must-not-be-named has powerful magic. None of your men ,nor you can take him. Just don't leave me to quick. Everything here is great, although it's a bit lonely without you, Hon. Lils hasn't come out yet. She still has time. Thank you so much for writing to me. I love you, babe. BE CAREFUL!!! Much Love,
Carol Gwen Kenith Brooks
She walked into the living room best she could. "Dolly, here girl." She called ot her. The owl flew on her arm and hooted. "Take this and bring back to Landon. Kay, sweetie?" The owl hooted again. "Good, now go!" Dolly flew off and away she went to Landon. Carol watched her with a smile.
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01-31-2008, 02:05 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Sylvannas Quickspeed Sixth | Nice post sissy! I didn't read the whole thing, but I like what I read! Brava! PAMS
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02-02-2008, 05:32 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Heather Malfoy Seventh Year Ministry RPG Name:
Kahylee Ashford Magical Games & Sports | Fantastic post lise.PAMS
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02-02-2008, 10:36 PM
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| | Hippogriff
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily-ann Brooks Sixth Year | Thanks so much for the comments!
I'll post soon! Sorry I didn't do it the last time.
FF Writer,
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02-06-2008, 12:11 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ravenclaw First Year | Lisa! I really like this! You should keep writing.I really want to know what happens! |
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02-06-2008, 08:53 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Lily-ann Brooks Sixth Year | Thanks so much for reading! Seriously! I haven't gotten much of new readers so I appreciate for coming on by and reading my FF. I've been busy with school, so i'll try my best to get another chapter done.
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