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04-13-2008, 07:39 AM
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| Matt's Puppeh MONSTER@ Babeh Eater Faerie
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| Keep The Goodbyes - Sa13+ Tearing Up At Takeoff
Forrest green eyes filled with wet tears, so close to spilling over. Yet the young boy held his sorrows in. Queensland, Australia. His home state. The only place he could call home. Where his friends were. He had nothing now. No place to call home. "Say your goodbyes, luff." The mother spoke clearly, like chimes, and lost his place of thought. "Never," Kylator choked out, shaking his head as the tears spilled over now. Kylie raised one brow and placed a hand on her youngest son's shoulder. "Why, dear? The plane's about to take off." For A second, Kyler tore his eyes from the window just to glare at his mother. "I'll keep my goodbyes, 'cause I know i'll come back. I am not going to lose touch of this state, this country. Never." He ripped his shoulder from his mother's grip, and put his gaze back on what he could see left of Queensland, one small hand touching the cold glass window.
For A while, Kylie stared at her son intently. She expected some kind of reaction like this from him, but less dramatic. Derrek and Seth were staring; clearly they overheard the small argument. The father did not say a word, just simply ignored it all himself. But the oldest son? No. "Suck it up, baby." Seth blurted out, first glaring at the back of his brother's head, then rolled dim gray eyes to the ceiling of the plane.
Kyler stayed quiet, glaring at the corner of the seat when the plane took lift off. Kylator had a real hating for his brother. No matter what Kye did, Seth always had to bring up some rude comment. And now was not the time.
Memories were flashing through his head now. Some of muggle grade school, most of friends. Half were bad and the other good. And it all made Kyler wonder. Would his time down in Italy be the same, or the exact opposite? Would he ever make friends, and would he fit in? Italy might not be so bad after all, or it could be his worst nightmare. Eyelids drooped over bright forrest green eyes, and Kylator was fast asleep as the plane took a steady course to it's destination; Rome, Italy.
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04-14-2008, 07:48 PM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Bella Coulter Fifth Year | Woohoo!
It's up babeh. 
You know I shall be stalking this, yes?
*huggles* |
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04-14-2008, 07:59 PM
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| DD's Cleverness DA's #1 Helper avant-garde Griffin
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Cora-Blue Electra Latiffa Seventh Year Ministry RPG Name:
Shylo Marcez Magical Games & Sports | Oooh, I really like your writing style! Hehe, keep it up m'dear, it's great
Amy_x |
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04-14-2008, 08:22 PM
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| Matt's Puppeh MONSTER@ Babeh Eater Faerie
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| HUZZAH! Its up, fooz. X]. Quote:
Woohoo!
It's up babeh. 
You know I shall be stalking this, yes?
*huggles*
| *yacklesmahnikkiton*
Stalk all you want, luff. XD Quote:
Oooh, I really like your writing style! Hehe, keep it up m'dear, it's great 
Amy_x
| Tankyou, luff. ;D |
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04-15-2008, 04:05 AM
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| Matt's Puppeh MONSTER@ Babeh Eater Faerie
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| I Added A random chapter out of pure boredom  Cheat Thee was always A downside to airports; Crouding people. And you could never really tell who was A muggle and who was A Wizard. Stil, everyone was.. Crouded. "Question, Dad. How will we get to our new home, anyway?" Kyler spoke, tugging on his rain jacket. "In our car, Duh." Seth blurted ouy, yet again, in that 'you-are-so-retarded' tone. "Shush, you." Kylator sneered. "Actually, no Seth. We're taking A taxi."
"Ha, stupid. Our car's not here-"
"Yet." Kylie finished. Seth glared down at the marble before speaking. "Your stupid."
"Well, you're retarded."
"Shut up!"
Bite me-"
"STOP THAT NOW. We are in public!" Derrek sneered, pulling both sons by the hand to walk faster.
Eww. Muggle Taxi's. Reminder: Never ride in one again, They smell like old newspaper. The ride sucked, with all the traffic and winding roads. But, atleast the people weren't crazy drivers and got to the house safely. Kyler was the first to jump out from the taxi and run for the door, Seth tagging behind. It was A desterate matter, seeing which child was going to get the better room. And with A few kicks and shoves, Kylator made it through the doorway first. Now this sucked, where were the rooms? In A two-story house, they could either be on the top story, or bottom. Most likely top. Kyler made A dash for the stairs, running pass the living room space. But he wouldn't be fast enough knowing Seth was always faster. So he cheated, taking to his orange tabby cat form and jumped up the stairs. Kye was at the top now, eyeing the hallway with three open doors, one being the bathroom. But his consentration was ruined when A rather large foot stepped on his back paw. Kyler cried, hissed, and bit the foot's akle before running off again. "OW, YOU CHEAT." Seth roared from the hallway, but it was too late. Kye took A dive to the left, formed back, and kicked the door shut. "At least I know how to cheat." He layed, practically hugging the fluffy white carpet, gasping for breathe. |
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04-15-2008, 04:15 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Whigalima (Lima) Whiggmeister Fifth Year | Ooh, I didn't even know that you had your FF started yet Moni. O_O
Anyway, I lurves it so far.
And will stalk it.
Keep up the good work. ;D |
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04-15-2008, 04:27 AM
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| Matt's Puppeh MONSTER@ Babeh Eater Faerie
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| -gigglesatchu-
course, cause I didn't tell you lolz.
Tankchu, Whittieroo. X] |
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04-15-2008, 04:45 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Savannah Nicole Mae Fifth Year | Loooove it Monifer
Haha! Seth and Kyler have such...a brother like relationship.  |
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04-15-2008, 04:57 AM
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| Matt's Puppeh MONSTER@ Babeh Eater Faerie
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| -snickers-
Kye and Seth have always been like that. XD
Tankchu luff. ^__^ |
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04-15-2008, 05:43 AM
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| FC Mod/ FC Sponsor SoTS Staff ♥ DRFC Prez/Sirius Artist Edward's Bella Basilisk
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ella Chloe Stone Fifth Year | Wheeeeee! Mah puppeh have her own FF!!
Luffs the story-line and the brothers & their fights.  so natural
Keep it up hun<33  |
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04-15-2008, 05:49 AM
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| Dumbledore's Man Kappa
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Joseph S. Mae | Wow awesome writing Mon might catch me up on the history i've missed while I read up xD I can't wait to see were you go with it =) |
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04-15-2008, 01:49 PM
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| Matt's Puppeh MONSTER@ Babeh Eater Faerie
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04-16-2008, 01:44 AM
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| | Skrewt
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Liliana Hayman Magical Transportation | New Reader!
I love you're writting, its really good  And that they're from Queensland!
PAMS! |
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04-17-2008, 03:15 AM
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| RoR Mod Triwizard Champion Debate Buddy Shrake
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Samantha (Sam) Elise Edwards Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Santana Venezula Department of Mysteries | Mah Froggy has a FF?? 
And on inkle Kye-Kye??? 
Awesome!!!!
I love the brothers!! 
They make me laugh 
Nice job Moni!! 
*Steph* |
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04-29-2008, 02:58 AM
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| Matt's Puppeh MONSTER@ Babeh Eater Faerie
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| Gah, Sorry everyone. >.<
Im quite busy at the moment, trying to catch up on school work and what-not. But I promise the next chapter will be up SOON.  |
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06-06-2008, 03:11 AM
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Ariana Castior Sixth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Emily Castior Magical Creatures | Last update: 4/15/08 |
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