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Old 06-07-2008, 03:44 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hey everyone! It's me, Jemma (Sabrina_Snape) back with another fan fic, but I'll be writing this one with Evangeline (Evangeline Hermoine). We have both written fics before, and you can see them if you go to our profiles. This fic is about Parvati and Padma Patil. I'll be writing Parvati in red while Evangeline does Padma in blue. Hope you like it!!


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Parvati was spacing out again for the third time in Divinitation that day. It was slightly worrying as Divinitation was her favourite subject and she always payed attention to the teacher. "Miss Patil. Miss Patil!" she heard Professor Trewlany call her from a far off distance.

"What? Oh sorry Professor. What was the question?" she asked the woman. To be fair, she had a good reason to be dreamy. Nathan Lennon was sitting only two seats away from her and his presence was intoxicating. Nathan Lennon was hot, his tousled brown hair was always styled perfectly and his brown eyes seemed to sparkle whenever he looked at her; which he was doing right now.

"I was just wondering my dear," Professor Trewlany said as she pushed her glasses back onto her nose, "if you had seen into the future!" Parvati looked into her favourite teacher's wide eyes and expectant expression and nodded smiling.

"Yes Professor I think I just have," she replied truthfully. When Professor Trewlany made a motion for her to go on, she froze; she didn't want to tell everyone that she had been dreaming of her marrying Natahan. Thankfully the bell rang, "I'll tell you later Professor," she promised as she hurried out the classroom with Lavender following her.

"Did you really see the future?" Lavender asked her. They were going to the Great Hall to catch up with Padma before their next class that they all had together. Lavender was a great Divinitation believer like herself, which was one of the reasons why she was Parvati's best friend after her sister.

"I hope so," Parvati sighed as they found Padma sitting at the Ravenclaw table. "Don't ask," she said as her twin looked at her confused. "I saw into the future during Divinitation earlier."

"Oh," Padma replied and then all three of them got to work on their homework. Parvati kept trying to concentrate, but half of her mind always seemed to be on a certain brown haired, brown eyed boy.
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Awsome!!I wonder..is Dracey(Me)init???
I wish i could help....

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Old 06-08-2008, 02:55 PM   #4 (permalink)
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i love it

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what a fab idea? yeah?

hmm. in love are we?

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Hey guys, Im Evangeline and i will be writing about Padma. As Sabrina already told you. This is my third Fanfic(You can veiw ny others through my profile) I hope you like my chapter

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"Parvati, what do you think we're doing in Defense Againest the Dark Arts?" Padma asked her sister, who was sitting next to her doing some Divinitation homework.

"Parvati, Parvati, hello" She said waving a hand infront of her sister's face.

"Wha.....what. Oh I don't know"

"Ok so what's up?" Padme asked

"Nothing, I'm going to sit at my house table, I need to talk to someone," Pavarti stood and walked to her own house table, sitting no where near her usual set of Gryffindor friends.

Padma watched her go slightly confused
'It's not like her to do that,' she thought. 'Oh well I have to go to DADA now anyways. I hope Nathen's there!' Padma stood and walked out the great hall

5 minutes later Padma walked in her next class. She sat at the front and waited for everyone to come in. A couple of minutes later Nathen walked in with his friends and Padma followed him with her eyes
'He is sooo cute,' She thought 'He's the cutest boy I've ever met.'

Before she could do anything the teacher walked in
"Can everyone be quiet please," she said. "Take out your books and turn them to page...." Padma tuned out and started thinking about other things in the classroom.

"Miss Patil. Miss Patil!" Padma snapped back to earth. "Now if you have quite finished daydreaming," Her teacher said sternly.

"Sorry Miss," Padma replied, feeling very guilty.

The teacher looked at her for a while before moving her attention back to the class, "Now can anyone tell me what this is...."

"Padma," Her sister Parvati whispered, nudging her arm, "What was that all about?"

"I can ask you the same question. What was that all about at lunchtime?"

"Oh nothing" They both said together

Padma moved her attention back to the lesson, but not all; half her attention went back to a certain boy in her class.

Once class finished Padma grabbed her things before her teacher could call her back
'If only he would ask me out!' She thought as she hurried down the corridors to her next lesson.
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This is great!!! I love it soooo much!!

Great job both of you!

Cant wait for more! So subscribing!!!

hehe love you both!

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This is great!!! I love it soooo much!!

Great job both of you!

Cant wait for more! So subscribing!!!

hehe love you both!

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Well im glad you like it. Sabrina is posting next. I cant wait to read her chapter as much as you do. Lol!!!


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Woo. Yayy

Loved it. Hmm. Both of them loving him?

Lets make it everyone lieks him

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wow, I love this so much! It's awesome!

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Cinn's first to post!!! YAY!! *holds out hand* one cookie please!

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Woo. Yayy

Loved it. Hmm. Both of them loving him?

Lets make it everyone lieks him

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wow, I love this so much! It's awesome!

PAMS!
Thank you! Nice to have new readers!

Right I'll be posting either later tonight or tomorrow morning.
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Woo. Yayy

Loved it. Hmm. Both of them loving him?

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we could put it that everyone likes him but that would be going way off the plot, so lets keep it just them. Lol!!!

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P.S. I am going to point out the oblious Jemma is gonig to write soon. Ok random but im bored here onthis end of the internet. Lol!!! bieee

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im new to this story and am loving it but asking will there be a bit of action?
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Right... Sorry it's taken so long... exams are horrible!

Parvati was slightly concerned as she walked out of DADA with Lavender. Padma never dropped her concentration level in any subject, but then again until early neither had she. "I guess we both have boys on the brain," she told Lavender.

"I don't," Lavender said, her eyes not leaving the floor of the hallway. Parvati looked at her strangely, and when Lavender caught her eye quickly she shook her head. "Don't make me lose my concentration. Professor Trewlany told me that I had to watch where I was going otherwise I was going to end up- Umph!" Lavender fell over backwards, causing Parvati to fall over too.

"I think we've just found out why you were meant to be paying attention," Parvati told her as she picked herself up and dusted her robes. "I'm sorry," she said to whoever she had bumped into, as she started to pick up all of their books.

"No don't worry it was my fault. I should've been watching where I was going," a soft tenor voice said as he bent down to help.

Parvati looked up suddenly. She knew that voice, she had dreams about that voice, heck that voice was in half of her classes. It was Nathan. She, Parvati Patil, had just bumped into one of the cutest guys in school and had made a complete mess of things.

"It's Parvati right?" he asked as he stood up with some books.

"Yeah," she replied thinking how wonderful it was when he said her name. "Normally people get Padma and I mixed up, unless they're in our house I mean." She sighed, even the teachers got them mixed up sometimes, which was why the teachers was thankful that had to use last names.

"I would never mix you two up," Nathan said as he handed her one of her books back. "You're the prettier one." With that last comment, he gave both her and Lavender a smile and a wave then walked off with one of his friends.

"Oh my gosh!" Lavender exclaimed as Parvati just stood there, her mind replaying what Nathan had just said. "He likes you! He so totally likes you!"

"So you heard him call me pretty too right?" Parvati asked, turing to her friend. "You did hear him say that I was prettier then Padma." All she needed was to hear one word from Lavender and then she'd be the happiest girl in the world.

"Yes," Lavender replied. She laughed as Parvati let out a small squeak. "Come on, before Professor Snape comes and wonders why we're making so much racket." With that, Lavender grabbed Parvati's hand and they rushed back to their common room, getting ready to chat about what had just happened.
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ooo.
jemma me like it
he likes her
he likes her
he likes her
he likes her
he likes her
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Wow Jemma great chapter

I will post soon, i have to get writing, but i have some ideas. Lol!!!

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Naw Jemma I love it!
hehe he likes her!!! What is Padma going to say??

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WOW! This is great!
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Ok everyone sorry for the wait, I'm writing the draft up tonight, or during school, anyway, i will post sometime this weekend or next week. again sorry for the wait

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Sorry for the long wait, here is the next chapter

Chapter 4

Once class finished Padma grabbed her things and ran out of the class, way before anyone else, or so she thought. As she was making her way out of the class she nearly walked into someone
“Sorry” The person said. Padma recognized the voice, she looked up fast. She was looking at her crush Nathan
“Th….That’s ok” she said nervously
“You’re Padma, right. The prettiest one of the two” He said beaming
“Well bye then” He waved goodbye and walked down the corridor.
‘OMG!!!! He thinks I’m pretty’ she thought. He had just made her day.
Padma continued to walk down the corridor, in a daydream

Padma was day dreaming so much she didn’t notice her transfiguration teacher walking the other way, until she nearly walked into her
“Watch where you are going, Miss. Patil” Her Transfiguration teacher said sternly
“Sor…..Sorry professor” Padma replied guiltily coming back to earth
The professor frowned at her before walking away. Padma continued her daydreaming, while walking down the corridor.



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yayy
Evangaline its fantastic.
and nathan you evil pig. choose one not two :@
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Thanks Shannon, More soon written by Jemma

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