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Old 07-02-2008, 06:34 PM   #176 (permalink)
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Reese? Please, they might need you!! Alex might need you, Sabrina might need you, JEREMY might need you!!!!!!

*sigh* is there a way to persaude her to come?
*thinks*I don't think there is a way...

Do you know what is hard for me?I have to kill on of you and I don't know who,yet.See,if I kill Derek,Jay will hunt me down.If I kill Alex,you will come and kill me.And if I kill Sabrina...I don't want to know what Jemma would do to me.And I CAN'T kill Jeremy*hits head*
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"Okay,I guess we have it settled out.Reese is staying here and we are going to fight,"Sabrina said.

Jeremy walked over to Reese."Are you sure you don't want to come with us?"

Reese looked up at him."I'm sure."

"Okay,"Jeremy said."You be careful out here.Never know what's in the woods."He kissed her and looked at Sabrina."Ready to go?"

Sabrina nodded."I've been ready."She took out her wand with eevrybody else."Let's go."She headed for the castle entrance leaving Reese behind.

Reese watched everybody walk into the castle and looked around.It was pitch dark and no light.She took out her wand and said,"Lumos."A little light appeared at the end of her wand.Jeremy was right.She needed to be careful.She walked down the pathways until she got to the lake.She took of her shoes and stuck her feet in.The icy cold water felt good on her hot body.She sat there for a while just thinking to herself.

A while pasted and Reese was fixing to get out of the water.She started to pull her feet out when the water started to bubble.Not good.A hand came out of the surface and grabbed her foot.Reese screamed and tried to get away.That didn't work.She was dragged underwater.She turned around and saw a face.She couldn't make it out.But it had to be a death eater.She tried to get away from him,but his grip was too strong.She was running low on breath and needed air.She reached for her wand and finally got a grip on it.She yelled,"STUEFY!!!"A that came out of her mouth was bubbles,but the spell worked.A jet of red sparks came out of her wand and hit the man.He let go of her foot and Reese went above the water.She swam for shore as fast as she could.Who was he?She just knew it was a death eater.She pulled herself out of the lake and put her shoes back on.She looked into the water.She couldn't see him,anymore.She needed to get back to the castle.Staying out her...by herself...was NOT safe.

She started running up the pathways with her wand in her hand.She looked behind her to see if anybody was following.Nobody.She looked ahead and could see the castle lights.She ran faster up the pathways,but...Reese tumbled over a rock and fell.Her wand broke in half when it hit the ground."Oh,shoot!"SHe stood up and picked up her brotkern wand.Not GOOD!!!She looked down at her shoes.She forgot to tie them.She bent down and tied them up really quickly.Now,she was ready to run.She held the broken pieces of her wand in her hand and made her way up to the castle,again.

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oh no her wand now if she went to fight she can't without it being phsycal.
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*blink* kill....kill one of us?????? But...but why?????
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Noooooo none of us can die! malfoy can go and jump off a bridge, but none of us can die! Well Jackson can for what he did to Rina as well to be honest. Great post Cat!!! Hope Reese is okay (Told you she'd be safer with Rina)

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I think I know who I'm going to kill....*evilsmirk*
But they are surely going to KILL me...
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you know you know???? can you please tell me in a pm? pretty pretty please with LJ on top???? lol.
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Old 07-02-2008, 11:07 PM   #183 (permalink)
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LJ is the cherry

Okay,I'll PM it to you...
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Reese finally made it back up to the castle.Her heart was beating really fast and her breahthing increased.She ran threw the doors and to the Great Hall.She opened the doors that were closed.The room was empty.Where were the death eater?Where were her friends?

Somebody grabbed Reese from behind and she screamed.Whoever it was,there hands were wet.She pulled her wand out and spun around.It was Dustin."Why the heck are you wet?"

Dustin looked at her and said,"You should know."

Resse thought for a moment and said,"You were the death eater...no,sorry...you were the one in the lake."

"Yes,"Dustin said."The one you stunned."

"Sorry about that,"Reese said.

"It's okay.Come on,"Dustin said.

"Where are we going?"Reese asked.

"The Room of Requirement,"Dustin said.He took hold of Reese's hand and they went all the way up to the seventh floor.

"Can I ask you something?"Reese said as they started down the hallway to the empty wall.

"What?"Dustin said.

"How did you get in the lake if you went with Sabrina and the rest of the gang?"Reese said.

"When we got to the castle entrance,Sabrina said we needed you and for me to come and get you.So,I went all the way to the other end of the lake and got in.I swam up to you and dragged you in,"Dustin said.

"Well,Dustin,you offically scared me,"Reese said.

Dustin smiled and when they got up to the empty wall a door appeared."You go first."

Reese walked into the room with Dustin right behind her.
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Dustin you could of told Reese you were there but no you had to pull her in that was mean.aleast it was Dustin not a death eater.great chapter
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dude, you need to post again, like right now, lol just messing. At least Alex and Reese are still friends here right?
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AHHHH I thought this was a post Cat!!! Come on you can't leave me here hanging, pams pams PAMS!!!!
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Okay,guys.It's going to be another week or so until I post more.I'm having writer's block like Khris and Jay

So,please don't hunt me down because i haven't written anymore.PLEASE.
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*clenches fists and holds Sabrina back* Right... I'm trying to stop myself from trying to hunt you down, though not entirely sure how long I can do this. You must get over writers block soon... please!!!

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Okay,so I'm finally over my writer's block.So,here is more of the story:
(and thanks,Jemma,for not letting Sabrina come after me)Sorry this is short...


"REESE!!!"Sabrina yelled when she saw her friend walk into the room.She ran up to her and gave her a hug."I thought...."She looked up at Reese."I shouldn't have left you out there."

"Na,duh,"Reese said.She gave Sabrina a hug back and looked around the room.There was Alex.Dustin.Jeremy.Sabrina.And..."Where's Derek?"She looked back at Sabrina.

"Oh,Derek.When we got into the castle,death eaters surrounded us.They have Derek,Reese,"Sabrina cried out.

"T-they have D-derek?"Reese said."How did all you get away from them?"

"We all split up and met back up here,"Sabrina said.

Reese bit her lip and looked at Alex,who was crying her heart out."So,do you have a plan to get Derek back?"

"No.I was too worried they had to to make a plan,"Sabrina said."But now since your here,we can make a plan."

"Where do you think they are keeping Derek?"Reese asked.

"With Draco,"Sabrina said."Which means he is in the headmistress office."

Reese thought for a moment then said."I have a plan."
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*lifts head* plan? Right let's hear it, some of us, have to go and rescue Derek and the other people will kill draco. I dibs killing Draco! lol.

Dont' worry if it's short, I just want to read more!

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no poor derek is with the death eaters.you need to make a plan fast or we don't no what will happen to derek.great chapter.
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*lifts head* plan? Right let's hear it, some of us, have to go and rescue Derek and the other people will kill draco. I dibs killing Draco! lol.

Dont' worry if it's short, I just want to read more!

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Okay...*scribbles down something on paper*...Anybody want to go help Sabrina with Draco??*looks around*

NOBODY??

Guess your by yourself,Jemma.Everybody else wants to go save Derek.

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*looks around and crosses arms* fine then I'll go fight him myself *goes off to fight him*..... *comes back in sheepishly and looks at Cat* Could you sort of make it different in the actual story, otherwise it's very bad odds on Rina surviving. lol.

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*looks around and crosses arms* fine then I'll go fight him myself *goes off to fight him*..... *comes back in sheepishly and looks at Cat* Could you sort of make it different in the actual story, otherwise it's very bad odds on Rina surviving. lol.

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"What's the plan?"Sabrina asked.

"Okay,"Reese said."Dustin and Sabrina,you are going to go after Draco....kill him.Alex and Jeremy,you are going to distract the death eaters from the headmistress's office.Me,I'm going in after Derek.Everybody got it?"

"I have to go after Draco?"Dustin said."Why can't Alex and Sabrina go.I'll go with Jeremy to distract the death eaters."

"Actually I do like that better.You two could reall distract them,"Reese said."Okay.Alex, you go with Sabrina.Dustin,you go with Jeremy."She looked at Sabrina."Are you sure you can do this?"

"Positive,"Sabrina said.

Reese nodded."Let's get going."

"Wands out!"Sabrina said.

"Um.Sabrina?My wand broke,"Reese said."I fell on it."

Sabrina looked at Reese and shook her head."How are you going to fight?"

"Use my fist,"Reese said.

"Good luck with that,"Sabrina said.

"Thanks,"Reese said."Let's go."She walked out the door and waited for everybody."Sabrina,Alex,I think Draco is in the great hall.It's about lunchtime,so....you know."

"Okay,"Sabrina and Alex said.They ran down the hallway to the great hall.

"Jeremy,Dustin,you guys follow me,"Reese said.She headed down the staircase and to the ground floor.She stopped at the wall before you get to the headmistess's office."Distraction time."She looked at the office door and saw two death eaters.Perfect.

"I got this,"Dustin said.He walked out from behind the wall and faced the death eaters."Nanny,Nanny,boo,boo...."He started to say.The death eaters looked at him and smiled.They took out there wands and started running after Dustin.

"That actually worked?Wow,"Reese said.The death eaters ran past Jeremy and Reese."Okay,Jeremy,go after them."

"Okay,"Jeremy said.He ran after Dustin and the death eaters.Reese watched them turn the corner and ran up to the head mistress office.She swung the door open and saw Draco sitting in the desk.Derek right behind him on the floor....
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