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Old 05-23-2008, 03:00 AM   #51 (permalink)
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NO! that means he's even more of a punk! lol he's trying to hard to be funny and he dont wanna get annoying!! lol

just a hint lol

sorry.. ill shut up.. go on with your wonderful story!!!!!
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Old 05-23-2008, 03:04 AM   #52 (permalink)
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Thank god your going to shut up!!!!

Lol.Just kidding!!!

I Luff your advice!!!

PM me and tell me what you want Dustin to do,I don't want you to feel like he's a punk
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Aw man now I sound like some punk.... lol
yeah well I went from moody freak,, to a whimp that got beat up by a girl.....

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*rolls eyes*

A punk?I wouldn't say that.

Lol.

Next post I make,Dustin will do somthing to Reese.Will that make you feel better??
could derek be any bigger a Idiot *sigh*

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NO! that means he's even more of a punk! lol he's trying to hard to be funny and he dont wanna get annoying!! lol

just a hint lol

sorry.. ill shut up.. go on with your wonderful story!!!!!
I'll trade you be te idiot I'll be the pnk

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Thank god your going to shut up!!!!

Lol.Just kidding!!!

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Old 05-23-2008, 07:33 AM   #54 (permalink)
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Reese, you can't stop Derek being the idiot... he's so good at it. I didn't say anything.

Please PAMS!!! and I'm sorry I didn't see the last chapter, it was brilliant!!!

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Old 05-23-2008, 09:50 PM   #55 (permalink)
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I'm too lazy to quote right now.So,here are my replies...

I know Derek is so good at being an idiot,Jemma
Jay,I could make Derek a bigger idiot,so you better watch out

Okay here's more of the story...


Jeremy walked over to the Slytherin Table and sat down."Sorry,I slept in.I was really sleepy last night."

"No prob,"Reese said.She gave Jeremy a kiss and put her attention on Derek."Don't get mad at Dustin.He's trying to act funny,he's not trying to be mean."

"Dustin?Mean?"A voice said.

Reese turned around and saw Sabrina."Hey."

"Hey,Res,"Sabrina said."Now tell me what happened.I need details."She sat down next to Jeremy.

Reese told Sabrina everything from the diary accedient to what happened to Derek.

Sabrina looked at Derek."Don't worry,Derek.Alex isn't a normal girl,she's very strong.Unlike me and Reese."She smiled.

"Thanks,"Derek mumbled."That makes me feel a lot better."

"Welcome,"Sabrina said.She looked at Alex."Why are you so quiet?"

Alex looked up at Sabrina."Tired."She yawned."And guess what?We have double potions today.We better get going."She finishe dhe rlast drink of pumpkin juice and stood up.

"I don't won't to go to potions,"Reese said."I think that's my first class I"m going to ditch."

Alex shook her head."Will you ever learn?"

"Nope,"Reese said.SHe stod up form her seat and looked at Derek."Want to go to the lake?"

Derek nodded."Love to."He stood up form his seat and looked at Reese.

Reese looked at Sabrina."What class do you have?"

"Herbology,"Sabrina said."So I'm going to ditch,too."She sttod up next to Reese."Let's go."

Reese looked at Jeremy."Want to ditch?"

"Can't,"Jeremy said."Remember?I got N.E.W.T.S this year.So I need to study."

"Okay,"Reese said."Talk to you later."She gave him another kiss and walked out of the Great Hall with Sabrina and Derek right behind her.

Sorry this one is so short
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Old 05-23-2008, 09:54 PM   #56 (permalink)
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Please PAMS!!!!

Sorry, but I want to see Sabrina get caught ditching, so I can laugh at her!!

Alex probably is stronger than her, but Sabrina is eviller (is that a word?) and better with jinxes!! I'm betting she's even better than Derek!!

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Old 05-23-2008, 10:05 PM   #57 (permalink)
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This one is just for Jemma...
Reese sta down in a patch of clovers and looked at Sabrina and Derek."Like old times,"she said.She watched the water sway back and forth.

"It is,"Derek said.He sat down next to Reese and watched hte flow of the water.It was relaxing.

"I feel like somebody is watching us,"Sabrina said."But oh well."She sat down on the other side of Reese."This is very relaxing."

Reese nodded.She sat down on her back and closed her eyes.She drifted into her dreams...

"Reese?"A voice said.

Reese turned around and saw...no...he brother,Ryan.It couldnt be.He was dad.

"Ryan?"Reese said.

Ryan smiled.He walked up to Reese and hugged her."I missed you so much."

Reese hugged her brother."You don't know how much I missed you."

Ryan let go of Reese."Be careful this year,Res.Dangers lie ahead."His figure started to disappear.

"RYAN!!!"Reese said."NO!!!"

***********

"Ms.Northway,"A voice said.

Reese opened her eyes and saw the headmistress Mae standing in front of her."Hey,Professor Mae."

"Up,"She said.

Reese stood up and saw Sabrina and Derek right behind her.SHe looked down at her feet.

"What are you doind out here?"Professor Mae said.

Reese didn't respond.

"Ms.Northway,"Professor Mae."Answer me."

Reese looked up at Professor Mae."I was ditching class."

"Very well,"Prosfessor Mae said."To my office.All three of you."She looked at Derek and Sabrina.

Reese nodded and started towards the castle.

"Who do you think told on us?"Sabrina whispered.

"I have an idea,"Reese said.
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Old 05-23-2008, 10:10 PM   #58 (permalink)
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"Now look what you've done!"

sorry Rina! I swear, I didn't tell! But I think I know who did, *points fingers at Alex* she did it!!!

I wonder what that dream is about.... hm... must continue reading!!

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P.S. LOVED IT!!!
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Old 05-23-2008, 10:12 PM   #59 (permalink)
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You catch on so fast,Jemma

Lol.

Will Post More Soon,Promise
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Old 05-24-2008, 01:21 AM   #60 (permalink)
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:pouts: we got caught ditching DOUBLE POTIONS argh man * kicks rock near the lake* we shoulda got away with THAT one.

EVILER is a word in my dictionary. lol but i think the proper term would be more evil
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Old 05-24-2008, 11:04 PM   #61 (permalink)
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Eviler is in my dictionary,too.Lol.
Okay here's more guys...


After getting detention,Reese,Alex,and Derek walked back to there common room.

"Bye,Sabrina,"Reese said."And I'm sorry about getting caught."

"It's okay,"Sabrina said.She smiled and walked to the 7th floor.

Reese looked at Derek."I can't believe Alex."

"How do you know Alex did it?"Derek asked.

"I just know,"Reese said."Come on."They walked down to the Slytherin Common Room.She walked throught the door and saw Alex and Jeremy sitting on the sofa near the fire.

"Reese!"Derek said.She pulled on her arm and dragged her to the corner of the room.

"Derek!"Reese said."I need to talk to Alex.NOW!!"

Derek shook his head."You don't know if Alex did it or not,Reese.What if she didn't?"

"If she didn't,I will hunt down whoever did do it,"Reese said."And that's a promise."

"Let me ask Alex if she did it,"Derek said."I won't yell at her.And I'll come back and let you know the answer."

"Okay,"Reese told him.

Derek let go of Reese's arm and walked over to the sofa."Alex?Can I talk to you?"

Alex looked up at Derek and said,"sure."She stood up and walked around the sofa and in front of Derek.

"Did you tell on us?"Derek asked.

"Why do you want to know?"Alex said.

"You did,didn't you,"Derek said in astonishment.

"I did,"Alex said.

"Why?"Derek asked."I thought friends don't tell on other friends."

"Derek,"Alex said."Reese needs some brains,if you get what I mean."

Derek smiled."I do get what you mean."

"So,"Alex said."She needs to attend classes."

Derek signed."I guess your right."

Alex hugged Derek."Now don't let Reese know I told on you three.Okay?"

"Okay,"Derek said.He walked back to Reese and muttered,"she didn't do it."

"Then who did?"Reese said.

"Don't know,"Derek said.

Reese shook her head."I can't believe we got detention.And the weekend we go to Hogsmeade.I hate myself."

"It's okay,"Derek said."We have other weekends we can go to Hogsmeade."

"You're right,"Reese said.She looked up at the clock on the wall."I better go find Dustin.He had to tell me somethign at 3 O'Clock."

Derek nodded."Be careful.You know how sneaky Dustin can be."He smiled.

"I'll be careful,"Reese said.She walked out of the common room without even glancing at Alex.
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Alex got me a detention on a Hogsmede weekend!!! Now she's in trouble!!!

Oh well, I'll get over it... eventually! Well done Reese, it was really good! Please keep going, I want to know more!

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Just a reader! Loved it!
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Reese wandered down to the third corridor and stopped.Where was Dustin?She turned around and saw Dustin with a water gun.Oh,no."Dustin?Why do you have a water gun?"

Dustin smiled."You've been so up tight the whole time we've been in Hogwarts.You need to chill..."He smiled.

"Don't tell me that water is cold?"Reese said.She looked down at the gun and back up at Dustin.Why did it have to be water??

"I don't know.How about you tell me if it's cold,"Dustin said.He pulled the trigger and sprayed Reese down with water.

"DUSTIN!!!"Reese said."This water is..."She stopped and smiled."You want to play a game with me?"

Dustin smiled."I would love to."

Reese ran over to Dustin and jumped on his back and brought him to the ground.Dustin dropped the water gun and Reese grabbed it.She stood up and pointed the gun at Dustin."Now what do you have to say?"

"Shoot,"Dustin said.He laughed.

Reese pulled the trigger,but nothing came out."It's empty,"she said."Uh-oh."She dropped the gun and ran out of the corridor.

Dustin ran after her.He finally cauht up with her and brought her down to the ground."Dustin,"she muttered.Dustin found her ticklish spot and started to tickle her.

Reese couldn't stop laughed."D-Dustin S-Stop,"she said.She pushed herself away from Dustin and sat up."I think I'm chilled now."She smiled.

"Now,"Dustin said."Will you stop being a pain and start being Reese and have fun."

Reese nodded."I will."Dustin smiled and helped Reese up.

"Now I'm tired,"Dustin said.

"Im cold,"Reese said.She hugged Dustin and whispered."Jeremy is not going to be too happy that you soaked me in freezing water."

"He'll get over it,"Dustin said.he smiled."I better get going."

"Me too,"Reese said."Bye."She wrapped her arms around herself and headed back to the dungeons.She opened the door and walked into the common room.

"What happened?"Derek said.He got up from his chair and walked over to Reese.

"Dustin sprayed me with some cold water,"Reese said.

"He did what?"Jeremy said.He walked over to Reese and handed her a towel.

"Thanks,"Reese mutered.She dried off her wet hair."And,yes,Dustin sprayed me with some cold water."

Jeremy smiled."he hasn't changed a bit over summerHas he?"

"Nope,"Reese said.

Hope this isnt too short for you guys...I wanted to wait a little bit b4 adding more to this...
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Paces with arms crossed mumbling "Derek is not an idiot " * sticks tongue out at reese and to answer your question MAYYYYBe!!!!!!!!!! it is. lol

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*Walks over to Jay*
You can keep saying Derek is not an idiot,but we all know he is...
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*gasp & pouts* is not okay Fine but Reese is EVILLLLLL-ER * sticks out toungue.*
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Reese is NOT evil,you are making her evil!!!!

What has Reese ever done to you to make her evil???

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Keep on writing!
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