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Zoom · 02-03-2010, 03:47 PM

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Hey guys!!

Welcome to Why it Rains by me, luna_severus_26. I've rated it sa13+, so be aware of that. I hope you guys enjoy my poetry. Feel free to make comments on my work.

Alrighty then, I think that's about it! My first poem's below this, Enjoy!!!

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Beneath The Walls

Have you ever wondered,
What lies beneath the walls?
Screaming, lusting, dreaming
And waits until you fall?
What scares you most and lives in hiding.
What only shows, to do its bidding.
It scares your insides,
makes you scream,
But turns your nightmares into dreams.
What I'm describing you want to know,
And Ridikkulus will help you so.
It'll make you laugh and chase it away,
and won't be back 'till another day.
The boggart's defeated,
and you have won.
Put it away,
and you'll be done.
Good luck.

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okay that was my first poem!

it was a bit abstract but I hope you liked it. Hopefully they'll get better as I go. Feel free to comment.
- luna_severus_26

02-03-2010, 03:47 PM	#1 (permalink)
Zoom Formerly: luna_severus_26 Abraxan Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: the iceberg. Posts: 6,173 Hogwarts RPG Name: Bradley Tristan Bryant Second Year	Why it Rains - Sa13+ irregular triangles & & the work in progress Banner by ImAGrape (and will be back once I get it fixed) Hey guys!! Welcome to Why it Rains by me, luna_severus_26. I've rated it sa13+, so be aware of that. I hope you guys enjoy my poetry. Feel free to make comments on my work. Alrighty then, I think that's about it! My first poem's below this, Enjoy!!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Beneath The Walls* Have you ever wondered, What lies beneath the walls? Screaming, lusting, dreaming And waits until you fall? What scares you most and lives in hiding. What only shows, to do its bidding. It scares your insides, makes you scream, But turns your nightmares into dreams. What I'm describing you want to know, And Ridikkulus will help you so. It'll make you laugh and chase it away, and won't be back 'till another day. The boggart's defeated, and you have won. Put it away, and you'll be done. Good luck. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ okay that was my first poem! it was a bit abstract but I hope you liked it. Hopefully they'll get better as I go. Feel free to comment. - luna_severus_26 __________________ I am my mother's only one. It's enough... only love is all maroon, ____________ ____gluey feathers on a flume... sky is womb and she's the moon. ♦ ♦ Last edited by Zoom; 02-13-2010 at 07:49 PM.