Hello. I have written some poetry over the years and I'd like to know what you guys think.

Night

Like a blanket it covers the sky
As the hallow moon flies slowly by
And while I watch the sun say good-bye
I welcome the world of Night

It darkens the world and caresses the stars
As they shine so glamorous from the world above ours
And I think to myself that they’re farther than far
I welcome the world of Night

The cool breeze blows your way
As if to tempt you to stay out to play
Beyond even the precious Milky Way
I welcome the world of Night

For all the pain done when the sun’s in the sky
And there’s never a moment that passes you by
When you don’t feel that you’re about to cry
I welcome the world of Night

When the darkness arrives and you lay down your head
And you lie in your comfortable bed
And it’s the morning that you have come to dread
I welcome the world of Night