You two ^ Thats fine. Its ok

But for now.. Im going to start..
Well start at the fiest,just after the sorting..

Hermione was sat with her best friends,Emily,Ron Harry and Ginny.Everyone had changed over the summer,espically Hermione.She was now quite tall,she had curves now,in all the right places and instead of having a bush on top of her head,there was now long brown curly locks,she had turned into a young lady over the summer.Everyone else seemed to have changed,Ginny had blossomed,Emily well she'd changed so much,with the new hair style she looked fantastic,Harry and Ron were as tall as ever,everything seemed to be going great for her and her friends.Though she wondered where everyone else was.