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alyweasley · 05-16-2008, 07:07 AM

Hi, My name is Jade. This is my first fan fic on SnitchSeeker. As it is my first attempt, please go easy on me!! This is a fic in the Marauder Era, it dosen't directly affect them throughout the entire story but hey.
The main character is a very Proud Slytherin, by the name of Kildara Snape, the undocumented older sister of our favourite bad guy, Severus Snape.

She is in the same year as Lucius Malfoy.

Well. Here goes.

Chapter One: The Mudblood

Kildara Snape walked slowly through the trees, listening to the voices ahead of her. She could hear her brother talking, noble and proud of his heritage but young and naive, and explaining everything to that stinking Muggle girl. Now that he’d finally plucked up the courage to speak, he found out she was just like him. Kildara walked up to the tree closest to the pair and stopped.
“Hogwarts is beautiful,” she heard Severus say.
“Have you even been there?” Lily asked, shyly.
“No. Not yet,” Severus hung his head. “But from what I’m told, it’s one of the most beautiful places on Earth. And we are going there Lily. Me and You.”
Kildara couldn’t believe her ears. Her brother sounded like he was in love with the silly Evans girl. She couldn’t let him. She would never allow her brother to lower himself to that.
“Severus. Oh my dear. I found you!” Kildara breathed, rounding the tree. Her 16 years of training finally coming in handy. “Where have you been? I have looked everywhere for you!”
Severus and Lily jumped at her voice. Lily looked almost afraid. So you should be. Kildara thought to herself. Severus looked over his shoulder and scowled.
Why couldn’t she just butt out? Why couldn’t she find her own friends? Severus thought to himself.
Kildara walked over to her brother, head held high, looking down on him and that Evans girl.
“My dear brother. We must be getting you home. And I’m sure Mr. and Mrs. Evans will be wondering where dear Lily is. I know Petunia is. I spoke to her while I was trying to find you. Now, now, up we get.”
When they were standing, Kildara turned on her heel, a smile on her face an started to walk towards the trees. Her mother had entrusted her to make sure Severus didn’t make friends with anyone outside Hogwarts. She’d done that. Now her only problem was Evans. She was now a Hogwarts friend.

Later on that night, Severus blasted his way into his sister’s immaculate, extravagant room.
“What is wrong with you?” he snarled. Angered more by his sister’s seeming indifference, he continued. “Why can’t you make your own friends? Why do you have to ruin everything that comes my way? Why do you have to be so jealous of me?” Kildara’s smile widened as she turned to her younger brother.
“Me? Jealous of you? Do you want to make me laugh? The only friend you have is that filthy Mudblood. Why would I be jealous of you? Answer me that!”
Severus just stood there, his mouth open. Kildara stood up, walked over to him, pushed her wand under his chin pushed his mouth closed. She sniffed.
“Go and take a shower, you dirty boy. You smell of Mudblood.” Turning away from him she said, “I won’t tell mother of this little … incident. But if you raise your voice at me again, mother will seem like a cute little puppy, compared to what you will face.”
Watching her walk through the door to her powder room, Severus shook his head. She had threatened him before, but never with torture. He snapped out of his daze and raced off to the bathroom, careful to note never to raise his voice again.

Kildara walked into her powder room and sat on the chair. What had come over her? She was turning more and more into her mother everyday. Her mother would get her way after all, Kildara was going the way she wanted. She heard the shower go. Well at least he listened to her. Then she heard a loud pop outside her door. The door opened slowly to reveal her mother’s formidable silhouette.
“Now dear, tell me what happened.”

Tell me what you think.

Love Jade
xxxxxxxxxx

05-16-2008, 07:07 AM	#1 (permalink)
alyweasley Sgt. Gryffindor Perfect Premolars! Kappa Location: runs far away Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 984 Hogwarts RPG Name: Alycya "Aly" Weasley Third Year Ministry RPG Name: Edith "Edie" Griffiths Minister's Office	A Proud Slytherin - Sa16+ Hi, My name is Jade. This is my first fan fic on SnitchSeeker. As it is my first attempt, please go easy on me!! This is a fic in the Marauder Era, it dosen't directly affect them throughout the entire story but hey. The main character is a very Proud Slytherin, by the name of Kildara Snape, the undocumented older sister of our favourite bad guy, Severus Snape. She is in the same year as Lucius Malfoy. Well. Here goes. Chapter One: The Mudblood Kildara Snape walked slowly through the trees, listening to the voices ahead of her. She could hear her brother talking, noble and proud of his heritage but young and naive, and explaining everything to that stinking Muggle girl. Now that he’d finally plucked up the courage to speak, he found out she was just like him. Kildara walked up to the tree closest to the pair and stopped. “Hogwarts is beautiful,” she heard Severus say. “Have you even been there?” Lily asked, shyly. “No. Not yet,” Severus hung his head. “But from what I’m told, it’s one of the most beautiful places on Earth. And we are going there Lily. Me and You.” Kildara couldn’t believe her ears. Her brother sounded like he was in love with the silly Evans girl. She couldn’t let him. She would never allow her brother to lower himself to that. “Severus. Oh my dear. I found you!” Kildara breathed, rounding the tree. Her 16 years of training finally coming in handy. “Where have you been? I have looked everywhere for you!” Severus and Lily jumped at her voice. Lily looked almost afraid. So you should be. Kildara thought to herself. Severus looked over his shoulder and scowled. Why couldn’t she just butt out? Why couldn’t she find her own friends? Severus thought to himself. Kildara walked over to her brother, head held high, looking down on him and that Evans girl. “My dear brother. We must be getting you home. And I’m sure Mr. and Mrs. Evans will be wondering where dear Lily is. I know Petunia is. I spoke to her while I was trying to find you. Now, now, up we get.” When they were standing, Kildara turned on her heel, a smile on her face an started to walk towards the trees. Her mother had entrusted her to make sure Severus didn’t make friends with anyone outside Hogwarts. She’d done that. Now her only problem was Evans. She was now a Hogwarts friend. Later on that night, Severus blasted his way into his sister’s immaculate, extravagant room. “What is wrong with you?” he snarled. Angered more by his sister’s seeming indifference, he continued. “Why can’t you make your own friends? Why do you have to ruin everything that comes my way? Why do you have to be so jealous of me?” Kildara’s smile widened as she turned to her younger brother. “Me? Jealous of you? Do you want to make me laugh? The only friend you have is that filthy Mudblood. Why would I be jealous of you? Answer me that!” Severus just stood there, his mouth open. Kildara stood up, walked over to him, pushed her wand under his chin pushed his mouth closed. She sniffed. “Go and take a shower, you dirty boy. You smell of Mudblood.” Turning away from him she said, “I won’t tell mother of this little … incident. But if you raise your voice at me again, mother will seem like a cute little puppy, compared to what you will face.” Watching her walk through the door to her powder room, Severus shook his head. She had threatened him before, but never with torture. He snapped out of his daze and raced off to the bathroom, careful to note never to raise his voice again. Kildara walked into her powder room and sat on the chair. What had come over her? She was turning more and more into her mother everyday. Her mother would get her way after all, Kildara was going the way she wanted. She heard the shower go. Well at least he listened to her. Then she heard a loud pop outside her door. The door opened slowly to reveal her mother’s formidable silhouette. “Now dear, tell me what happened.” Tell me what you think. Love Jade xxxxxxxxxx Last edited by alyweasley : 06-28-2008 at 04:28 PM. Reason: add banner!!