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hermione03 · 05-06-2008, 07:49 PM

Hey y'all! I've tried writing a few times but ultimately gave up so hopefully this one'll stay!

Chapter One-Introductions
Charlotte Gates awoke to the sudden drawback of her curtains. As she opened her eyes, reluctantly, the sun's bright morning beams flooded her room. She sat up and saw her twin brother Liam standing by the closest window with a mischevious grin on his face-- a trademark of his. "Well good morning, sleepyhead...you look pleasant. Still tired?" he greeted her with a hint of a sarcastic tone. "Yeah well after trekking around half of Ireland with you yesterday, I have a reason to be." she replied with a shake of her auburn hair. She yawned and stretched her arms towards the sky before pushing back her invitingly warm covers and sliding onto her cold bedroom floor. "Well I'm guessing you'd like some breakfast then?" Liam asked her as she searched the floor for her slippers. "No, I'm alright for now--" she said and he exclaimed, "That's great because I'd thought we'd go to our favorite hideout for the day...I've already packed a picnic basket in the kitchen." Charlotte was silent for a moment and then said, "I suppose that would be fun, let's just make sure we stay away from her or she'll make us do chores like last week." Charlotte was referring to her father's new wife Giselle LeBoeuf who had arrived in the town that they lived near with a special assignment for the Ministry of Magic and the two fell in love. Giselle hated children especially the twins and she did everything in her power to make their lives miserable. Thankfully, a short week from the present date, Charlotte and Liam would be shipped off to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. But until the time arrived, the two siblings tried to stay out of the house as much as possible, sometimes visiting the town close to their castle, other times explorting the vast miles of woods that were just in their backyard. Charlotte and Liam, finally ready to leave hurridly sneaked out the back door of their kitchen before Giselle realized they were awake.

Hope you enjoy it and please give any criticism!!
<3 Siobhan O'Toole.

05-06-2008, 07:49 PM	#1 (permalink)
hermione03 Tonks' Mood Crup Location: pokes shoulder hi! Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 2,065 Hogwarts RPG Name: Siobhan Elisabeth Murphy Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name: Siobhan Gates	The Unforgivable Truth - Sa13+ Hey y'all! I've tried writing a few times but ultimately gave up so hopefully this one'll stay! Chapter One-Introductions Charlotte Gates awoke to the sudden drawback of her curtains. As she opened her eyes, reluctantly, the sun's bright morning beams flooded her room. She sat up and saw her twin brother Liam standing by the closest window with a mischevious grin on his face-- a trademark of his. "Well good morning, sleepyhead...you look pleasant. Still tired?" he greeted her with a hint of a sarcastic tone. "Yeah well after trekking around half of Ireland with you yesterday, I have a reason to be." she replied with a shake of her auburn hair. She yawned and stretched her arms towards the sky before pushing back her invitingly warm covers and sliding onto her cold bedroom floor. "Well I'm guessing you'd like some breakfast then?" Liam asked her as she searched the floor for her slippers. "No, I'm alright for now--" she said and he exclaimed, "That's great because I'd thought we'd go to our favorite hideout for the day...I've already packed a picnic basket in the kitchen." Charlotte was silent for a moment and then said, "I suppose that would be fun, let's just make sure we stay away from her or she'll make us do chores like last week." Charlotte was referring to her father's new wife Giselle LeBoeuf who had arrived in the town that they lived near with a special assignment for the Ministry of Magic and the two fell in love. Giselle hated children especially the twins and she did everything in her power to make their lives miserable. Thankfully, a short week from the present date, Charlotte and Liam would be shipped off to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. But until the time arrived, the two siblings tried to stay out of the house as much as possible, sometimes visiting the town close to their castle, other times explorting the vast miles of woods that were just in their backyard. Charlotte and Liam, finally ready to leave hurridly sneaked out the back door of their kitchen before Giselle realized they were awake. Hope you enjoy it and please give any criticism!! <3 Siobhan O'Toole. Last edited by hermione03 : 06-02-2008 at 05:14 AM.