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therock_sorceress · 04-16-2008, 02:41 PM

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Originally Posted by Saint Oscar

Awesome !! You really need to keep this story going since it's uber awesome.

Thankies darling.

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Originally Posted by TriwizardChamp12

oooooohhhh secrets
i dont ussually like stories
about characters not in the book
but this is good

p.s how do u pronounce her name?

Thankies to you too. I choose to not write stories about the characters because everyone else is doing it. Not trying to be mean or anything ~~to those who do that~~, but I want to be original and not follow the fad. Again, not trying to be mean. If you are offended, I'm so sorry This is how you pronounce Ofelia: O-fell-ia, does that help?

Okay, heres the continuation of chapter 2.

Ever ate with someone who's rude enough to chew with his/or her mouth open? I had for 7 years. Ever since my first year, in Hogwarts, I've sat through Napoleon not chewing with his mouth close. You'd think all the girls, he's dated and dumped, would teach him some table manners. I hope Ofelia teaches him manners because I can't stand seeing pieces of (badly) chewed mash-potatoes flying all over the place. For my sake, I hope to see some improvement. Why hasn't his parents thought to teach him some manners?...

"YO! Napoleon! Please close your mouth!" Charlie's my new hero...Unfortunately, Napoleon wasn't listen. I looked over to Ofelia and waited for her to say something, but she didn't say anything. She kept her head down and she ate, silently, without even acknowledging Charlie's plead. Say something...For the love of god! Anything!..."SPATS!"

"What's up with you Baudelaire?" he cried, making badly chew mash potatoes fly over to my plate.

"I know how you like to give a show to your friends, but please could you not give anymore shows?" Charlie said, in his own language (of wise choice of words).

Now, Napoleon didn't understand a word he said, because he has the IQ of 14 and he doesn't understand Charlie-latin. "Show? What show? I'm not giving a show."

I decided to jump in and save my friend from having to speak dumb-dumb. "He means close your mouth!"

"What if I don't want to?"

Oh my god! Someone please shoot him!..."Then prepare to lose points-

"Charlie! Don't! It's only the first two hours of our last year, don't screw it up." Not that I care for how many points Slythie loses, but I know Charlie doesn't want to beat the socks out of him. I looked over to Ofelia again, but only to find that she's gone. When she leave? Why didn't I notice her? How did she do that?...

"Your friend's wise," Napoleon stated to Charlie. "I'd listen to him if I were you."

I noticed he actually swallowed his food, which made me grin a little. I looked over to Charlie, only to find he's walking away from the table. Weird...

That's it for now, enjoy.
-Wednesday