Hi! This is my first FF on Snitch Seeker. I have much more written, but I would like to know what you think of the story before I post more. I am open to constructive criticism and I'd like to know what I can improve.


It had been six years since that redheaded little girl had begged her father to let her go to Hogwarts early. The now much older Lily Potter was on The Hogwarts Express headed for her fourth year at school. At the moment she was having what she liked to call a "heated discussion", otherwise known as an argument, with her friend Lacey Elman.
"Oh, come off it Lace," pleaded fourteen year old Lily to her friend.
"I will not!" Lacey exclaimed furiously."Hugo back me up!" she demanded to Lily's cousin.
Hugo calmly replied," No. This is your problem and I don't want to get involved."

Like I said earlier, I have Six more pages ready so I will post again soon.

- Anna