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Hufflepuffyness · 03-09-2008, 04:29 PM

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Hi Peoples, my name is Gabrielle. Um.. Well, this is my first FF and I don't know if it will be any good. Let me know what you think. Heads up, I stink at spelling, so tell me if I spelt anything wrong or made any other mistakes. In the books, J.K. Rowling writes in Harry's point of view. well this is in Neville's point of view, what Neville is doing and thinking, so I hope you like it. Oh and there is somethings that will be differnt from the book, but alot of things will be the same.

A round faced boy with mousy brown hair and blue eyes was dragging a trunk behind him, as he ran to catch the train as it's whistle blew. He spotted a door that had been left open and ran quickly as the train started to move. He jumped and landed face first, with his trunk still in his hand and his feet hanging out of the train as it picked up speed and turned the corner. He stood up, wiped the dirt off himself, and checked his pocket to feel a lump in it. With a sigh of relief, he started to walk down the train's hall way, looking for a compartment. Near the back of the train, he found an empty compartment except for a girl with bushy brown hair readind the book, Hogwarts, a History. The boy opened the compartment and was about to say hello, when the girl spoke with a bit of a high voice,"Hi, I'm Hermione Granger". The boy looked at her for a moment, then said, "Hi Hermione, I'm Neville Longbottom, May I join you?" Hermione nodded and continued to read her book while Neville pushed his trunk under the seat opposite of Hermione's and sat down. He checked his pocker again, but this time, there was no lump. "Oh no, I lost Trever" moaned Neville as he got on his hands and knees, looking under the seat. "Who's Trever?" Hermione asked, "He's my toad!" Neville said in a worried voice.

Edit: I know that's really short, but that's just like.... I don't know, but all the other Chapters will be longer.

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Hufflepuffyness Grindylow Location: Forks,WA (I Wish!) Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 919 Hogwarts RPG Name: Leah Dorn First	Neville, Brave At Heart - Sa13+ *Awesomie Banner, made by MathI ^ ^ herself from ~The Lost Book Of Graphics~* Hi Peoples, my name is Gabrielle. Um.. Well, this is my first FF and I don't know if it will be any good. Let me know what you think. Heads up, I stink at spelling, so tell me if I spelt anything wrong or made any other mistakes. In the books, J.K. Rowling writes in Harry's point of view. well this is in Neville's point of view, what Neville is doing and thinking, so I hope you like it. Oh and there is somethings that will be differnt from the book, but alot of things will be the same. A round faced boy with mousy brown hair and blue eyes was dragging a trunk behind him, as he ran to catch the train as it's whistle blew. He spotted a door that had been left open and ran quickly as the train started to move. He jumped and landed face first, with his trunk still in his hand and his feet hanging out of the train as it picked up speed and turned the corner. He stood up, wiped the dirt off himself, and checked his pocket to feel a lump in it. With a sigh of relief, he started to walk down the train's hall way, looking for a compartment. Near the back of the train, he found an empty compartment except for a girl with bushy brown hair readind the book, Hogwarts, a History. The boy opened the compartment and was about to say hello, when the girl spoke with a bit of a high voice,"Hi, I'm Hermione Granger". The boy looked at her for a moment, then said, "Hi Hermione, I'm Neville Longbottom, May I join you?" Hermione nodded and continued to read her book while Neville pushed his trunk under the seat opposite of Hermione's and sat down. He checked his pocker again, but this time, there was no lump. "Oh no, I lost Trever" moaned Neville as he got on his hands and knees, looking under the seat. "Who's Trever?" Hermione asked, "He's my toad!" Neville said in a worried voice. Edit: I know that's really short, but that's just like.... I don't know, but all the other Chapters will be longer. Last edited by Hufflepuffyness : 04-16-2008 at 10:28 PM. Reason: The Awesomie Banner!