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therock_sorceress · 01-27-2008, 08:43 PM

Ello and hola to everyone. I'll be writing some poems relating to my RP character, her brothers, or about the Wizarding World. Here's the first one:

Wednesday: Outside vs. The Magical Place

I never wanted to go,
I wanted to stay at
that magical place.
Sure...
I had mostly bad times
and some good times,
but it was better than the outside.

The outside will never be
friendly,
or caring,
or as sweet
as my that magical castle.
The outside was and always
will be nothing but danger.
At the outside,
my only safe place is
that dark corner I hide in.

Nothing will never be the same
once you step outside.
Once you step outside,
there's no turning back.
Once I step outside...
I'll start wishing to
go back to Hogwarts.

Well that's it. Please be gentle on the criticism.

01-27-2008, 08:43 PM	#1 (permalink)
therock_sorceress Mocking Malfoy Fred's Wardrobe Hippogriff Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Going crazy! Posts: 3,357 Hogwarts RPG Name: Janice Artemis November Addams Fourth Year Ministry RPG Name: Sylvia Elisabeth Potts-Addams Magical Creatures	The Poetry of Wednesday - Sa13+ Ello and hola to everyone. I'll be writing some poems relating to my RP character, her brothers, or about the Wizarding World. Here's the first one: Wednesday: Outside vs. The Magical Place I never wanted to go, I wanted to stay at that magical place. Sure... I had mostly bad times and some good times, but it was better than the outside. The outside will never be friendly, or caring, or as sweet as my that magical castle. The outside was and always will be nothing but danger. At the outside, my only safe place is that dark corner I hide in. Nothing will never be the same once you step outside. Once you step outside, there's no turning back. Once I step outside... I'll start wishing to go back to Hogwarts. Well that's it. Please be gentle on the criticism. __________________ Let me take you down cause I'm going to Strawberry fields...Nothing is real And nothing to get hung about Strawberry fields forever! Last edited by therock_sorceress; 02-29-2008 at 05:41 AM.