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Old 07-21-2006, 09:28 PM   #116 (permalink)
Mafia Leader B
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Cambri Mikaila Hale
Fourth Year

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Marti Adele Carter
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I totally LOVE IT! I'm reading more once you get offline and I have no one to talk to. But I did my dare and I read the first post. Now I need to go goose you!! See ya darling!!!

ok, I read it all, and it's so good. I have a LITTLE bit of advice:

You go back in time to before the beginning of Ginny's bit, to post Hermione's bit. So I just wanted to suggest that you chang the order to the propper cronology (tottally can't spell sorry).
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