im not brilliant at poetry but Im giving it a try... i think my poetry is far too sad

heres two i made for the LLFC

In your eyes

I look up from the table
and look over by you
you sit alone reading
you do not seem to care
you look over at me
our eyes catch for a moment

As I look in your eyes
I see mine reflected in yours
I see the dreams
that float through your mind
I see the magic
that works deep inside

Your eyes look deep into mine
you see what im thinking
you see my mind
you look through and see me truly
you see the light and the dark
fighting through me

People look on you
through their eyes
they see someone different
someone not their kind
they see the outside
the shell that shields your soul

Then you turn around
and the moment is gone
your sat back at the table
singing your song
the lion roars
the serpent cries
the life within dies.

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She was called Luna

She was called Luna
Luna Lovegood they say
She dreampt of magic creatures
she lived by her own way

She always was the one
who was always true to herself
the opinions of others
never got her down

They said that she would fight
for what she belived in
the truth that she seeked
drew her to the light

And now Luna lives
she's lost her life
she lives all alone
alone in strife.