Massive improvement from Fleur! For some reason, I don't like the Lonely Girl pic. She just looks so... well, anyway, I can't find any sympathy for her, which was what that pic was supposed to invoke. The expressions of the Harry/Draco pic were good, and you're right, you do need to work on the hair, but considering you've come so far, so fast, I've got a feeling you'll be able to do it.

What manga do you read anyway?