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Ozzy · 07-26-2005, 03:52 AM

I don't know if i'm allowed to do this but i had a spur of the moment poem that i'd like to share. oh and i don't really have a fovorite poem or poet i like what ever stikes a deep truth or a feeling.

so here is my poem...
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~*Abyss of Life and Love of Thee*~
*~*
As I sit here I’ve come to see that
Life’s an illusion and live is a dream
When you’re gone you’ll know what it means
*~*
Blood is a life form we all need
When it drains your as dead as can be
If you haven’t a heart you’ve not a soul
Without both your nothing more
*~*
If Life’s an illusion
We cease to live
If loves a dream
We fall to nothingness
*~*
As I lay here writing this poem I realize
I’ve slipped into an abyss.
*~*
I have gone forever love
I’ll give thee one last kiss…
*~*
Slowly but surely I have faded to black…
Once an innocent loving child, eyes of pure azure,
Golden hair as fair as the gleaming sun.
*~*
I stand strong and tall before you
Armed with my guard held high
My black garments wrapped about my shoulders
As that of a soldier.
A mirror of a woman long since past,
The soul of which I privately beckon back.
*~*
My eyes iced over, as that of a crystal ball,
Chilling your delicate soul
You fall to your knees and beg back for the child,
That had once been me, who has long since gone, never to return.
*~*
I sit upon my throne, for which I have yet to adjourn
I gather my forces, all of which are an image of me
And watch in silence as all of you whom I had loved
Shred them of the life… yet to be.
*~*
A single tear recoils my restrained self control
It lingers and gleams a moment more, then
Falls to the floor… just as before.
I can’t even fathom how this began
But here and now it comes to an end.
*~*
As I have come to see that I had gotten it wrong
Love’s the illusion and life is the dream
Live every day as it were your last
~*Or be smited by my wrath!*~
*~*
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So what did you guy's think???
I just thought I'd throw it out there and see if anyone liked it.
Well anyway. Psst. no stealing *cackles* hehehehe

07-26-2005, 03:52 AM	#27 (permalink)
Ozzy FF & P. 9¾ Mod Kitty Momma Rachel's Brain Twin Acromantula Location: Within my skull. =P Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 10,201 Hogwarts RPG Name: Cynder Mortiferus Nightgale (AKA: Magnus)	I don't know if i'm allowed to do this but i had a spur of the moment poem that i'd like to share. oh and i don't really have a fovorite poem or poet i like what ever stikes a deep truth or a feeling. so here is my poem... __________________________________________________ ____________ **~Abyss of Life and Love of Thee~ ~ As I sit here I’ve come to see that Life’s an illusion and live is a dream When you’re gone you’ll know what it means ~ Blood is a life form we all need When it drains your as dead as can be If you haven’t a heart you’ve not a soul Without both your nothing more ~ If Life’s an illusion We cease to live If loves a dream We fall to nothingness ~ As I lay here writing this poem I realize I’ve slipped into an abyss. ~ I have gone forever love I’ll give thee one last kiss… ~ Slowly but surely I have faded to black… Once an innocent loving child, eyes of pure azure, Golden hair as fair as the gleaming sun. ~ I stand strong and tall before you Armed with my guard held high My black garments wrapped about my shoulders As that of a soldier. A mirror of a woman long since past, The soul of which I privately beckon back. ~ My eyes iced over, as that of a crystal ball, Chilling your delicate soul You fall to your knees and beg back for the child, That had once been me, who has long since gone, never to return. ~ I sit upon my throne, for which I have yet to adjourn I gather my forces, all of which are an image of me And watch in silence as all of you whom I had loved Shred them of the life… yet to be. ~ A single tear recoils my restrained self control It lingers and gleams a moment more, then Falls to the floor… just as before. I can’t even fathom how this began But here and now it comes to an end. ~** As I have come to see that I had gotten it wrong Love’s the illusion and life is the dream Live every day as it were your last ~Or be smited by my wrath!~ *~* _______________________________ So what did you guy's think??? I just thought I'd throw it out there and see if anyone liked it. *Well anyway. Psst. no stealing cackles* hehehehe** Last edited by Ozzy : 12-18-2005 at 11:47 PM. Reason: Changed the poem... its 10 times as better though...