well i just started posting poems so enjoy. Im not a perfect poet but i love writing poetry so rell me if this is good for a first poem thanx.


My first poem
the first poem i'v writen
my words don't seem fittin'
some much work redone
working right under the sun
looking for inspiration
throwing work in the trash bin
i dont feel satisfied
the words dont seem to glide
after a long time of lurking
my words seem to be working
now that im proud with it done
poetry for now will be more fun


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i hopes its ok