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EmmaRiddle · 04-04-2005, 10:48 AM

A section of it can be read here.

It seems very good to me apart from perhaps the over use of Hermione. But you have to remember that at this point in the story, Ron & Harry aren't speaking to each other.

I especially love the way Rita, Krum and the twins are woven in. & I love the way the champions are described within the tent.

What do you think of it?

04-04-2005, 10:48 AM	#1 (permalink)
EmmaRiddle Kaplinski Rival NOT Strange or Evil Inspirational Bugbear Location: Cardiff, Wales, UK Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 12,282 Hogwarts RPG Name: Marcella Riddle Graduated	Part of the GoF script A section of it can be read here. It seems very good to me apart from perhaps the over use of Hermione. But you have to remember that at this point in the story, Ron & Harry aren't speaking to each other. I especially love the way Rita, Krum and the twins are woven in. & I love the way the champions are described within the tent. What do you think of it?