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Leeness · 03-25-2005, 09:39 AM

i love it and i love the technique with the last line being the same in each verse. One thing i don't liek is a three way rhyme (three lines ryhming) its lengthens the poem and makes it boring, well for me. But it was good and a good use of words etc.

03-25-2005, 09:39 AM	#3 (permalink)
Leeness Formerly: Fizzing Leebee Touzlee's Lee Leprechaun Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 19,351 Hogwarts RPG Name: Flynn Docherty First Year Ministry RPG Name: Crystal Zitsburg Department of Mysteries	i love it and i love the technique with the last line being the same in each verse. One thing i don't liek is a three way rhyme (three lines ryhming) its lengthens the poem and makes it boring, well for me. But it was good and a good use of words etc.